UNIT 11 主题写作——阐述观点-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册五维课堂教师用书word（北师大版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语议论文写作核心知识点，系统构建“引入话题—呈现双方观点—阐述个人观点”的写作框架。通过思路点拨明确体裁、人称与时态要求，以遣词造句模块（词汇填空、语法运用、句式升级）为支架，引导学生从基础表达过渡到复杂句式运用，最终通过连句成篇与范文示例完成完整篇章构建。 该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过“课外辅导班讨论”“网络交友利弊分析”等真实话题，引导学生辩证分析正反观点，提升逻辑表达能力。提供的常用表达句式与句式升级练习（如现在分词作状语、倒装句）助力语言准确性与多样性，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后帮助学生自主查漏补缺，培养终身学习能力。

主题写作——阐述观点 英语课上，同学们就学生是否应该参加课外辅导班(after­school classes)展开讨论，请就此写一篇短文。要点如下： 赞同 反对 1.弥补校内缺漏的功课，更快提高成绩； 2.有利于帮助自控能力差的学生养成好的学习习惯。 1.增加学习负担(burden)，容易导致学生厌学； 2.既浪费金钱，又占用了发展特长、爱好的时间。 你的观点：？ 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Today in our English class, a discussion was held about ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ●思路点拨 主题 就学生是否应该参加课外辅导班发表看法 体裁 议论文 人称 第一、三人称 时态 以一般现在时为主 布局 第一段：引入话题； 第二段：介绍双方的观点； 第三段：阐述自己的观点。 ●遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1．　________　 v．投票；表决 2．　________　 n．自制力；自我控制 3.　________________　 对……有帮助 答案：1.vote　2.self­control　3.be beneficial to Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1．完成句子 (1)Some students are for attending after­school classes and think that 　________________________________　 to make up for the missing lessons at school so that they can improve their grades more quickly. 一些学生赞同参加课外辅导班，认为这是弥补在学校遗漏的课程的更好的方式，这样他们可以更快地提高自己的成绩。 (2)They also 　________________________　. 他们还持有这个观点。 (3)It 　________________________　 students with the poor self­control ability and helps them develop good study habits. 这对自控能力差的学生是有益的，有助于他们养成良好的学习习惯。 (4)Attending after­school classes 　________________________________________　money. 参加课外辅导班浪费了大量的金钱。 (5)Attending after­school classes also 　________________________________________　 of developing hobbies. 参加课外辅导班还占用了发展业余爱好的时间。 (6)We should 　________________________　 it. 我们应该为此腾出时间。 (7)Do 　________________________________________________　 to make study more interesting. 做我们感兴趣的事情以使学习更有趣。 答案：(1)it's a better way　(2)hold the opinion (3)is beneficial to　(4)wastes a lot of (5)takes up the time　(6)make time for (7)what we're interested in 2．句式升级 (8)用现在分词短语作状语和think的复合结构改写句(1)。 (9)把句(2)和句(3)合并为含有名词性从句的主从复合句。 (10)用not only...but also...合并句(4)与句(5)并使之构成倒装句。 (11)把句(6)与句(7)合并为含有名词性从句的主从复合句。 答案：(8) Some students are for attending after­school classes, thinking it a better way to make up for the missing lessons at school so that they can improve their grades more quickly. (9)They also hold the opinion that it is beneficial to students with the poor self­control ability and helps them develop good study habits. (10)Not only does attending after­school classes waste a lot of money, but it also takes up the time of developing hobbies. (11)We should make time for what we are interested in to make study more interesting. ●连句成篇 Today in our English class, a discussion was held about ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Today_in_our_English_class,_a_discussion_was_held_about_　 whether we students should attend after­school classes, and we voted on it. Some students are for attending after­school classes, thinking it a better way to make up for the missing lessons at school so that they can improve their grades more quickly.They also hold the opinion that it is beneficial to students with the poor self­control ability and helps them develop good study habits.However, the others think it may increase their burden and lead to learning­weariness.Besides, not only does attending after­school classes waste a lot of money, but it also takes up the time of developing hobbies. In my opinion, moderate after­school classes contribute to better school performance.But we should make time for what we are interested in to make study more interesting. 近来，网络交友话题深受你校同学关注。请你以“Should we click for friends？”为题，给你校广播站英语栏目写一篇广播稿。内容包括： 1．网络交友的利弊； 2．你的观点。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Should we click for friends? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Should we click for friends? Nowadays, the arrival of the digital age brings people increasing ease in surfing the Internet, enabling us to make friends online more easily.However, whether we should click for friends has gradually been brought into focus. On the one hand, the Internet provides us with a platform where we can easily get acquainted with people who share our interests.Besides, social media tools make us aware of what our friends are occupied with and help maintain friendship.On the other hand, making friends online might expose us to the risk of being cheated and privacy leaks. We cannot throw the baby out with the bathwater.Just be careful when making friends, both in virtual reality and reality. [附]话题常用表达句式 ◆开头 1．When it comes to...，some consider/think/believe...当提及……时，有人认为…… 2．One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is...许多人目前讨论的最热门的话题之一就是…… 3．Recently the issue/problem of...has been brought into focus.近来，……的问题已经成为焦点。 4．Nowadays, it is commonly/widely/generally believed/thought/considered that...，but I doubt that...如今，人们普遍认为……，但是我怀疑…… ◆中间 1．On the one hand...，on the other hand... 一方面……，另一方面…… 2．Despite the fact that most of them like...I would like to choose... 尽管他们中大部分人喜欢……，我还是想要选择…… 3．Different people have different opinions/views/ideas about...Some people take it for granted that...On the contrary, some other people think...对于……的观点因人而异。有些人想当然地认为……相反，一些其他的人则认为…… 4．People differ greatly on their attitudes towards this problem.Some maintain that...Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that...Personally, I stand on the side of...人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有些人坚持……与此相反，其他人则持有……的观点。就我个人而言，我站在……这一边。 ◆结尾 1．As mentioned above...综上所述…… 2．In summary/conclusion/a word/All in all... 总之…… 3．Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conculusion that...因此，不难得出……的结论。 4.Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that... 考虑到所有的这些因素，我们可以得出……的结论。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $