Unit 7 写作专项训练：An Article About a Chinese Astronaut 2025-2026学年沪教版八年级英语下册

沪教（牛津）八下英语 Unit 7 写作专项训练 An Article About a Chinese Astronaut 一、写作目标 结合本单元“太空探索”主题及“过去进行时”核心语法，能写一篇介绍中国航天员的文章，清晰说明其成长经历、航天任务及荣誉，语言生动且信息完整。 1. 能正确使用过去进行时（含while引导的并列动作）描述航天员的过往经历； 2. 能运用航天类词汇（如spaceflight programme、spacewalk、space station）介绍任务细节； 3. 能遵循“成长经历-航天任务-荣誉评价”的结构逻辑，贴合“中国太空探索成就”的主题。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：人物介绍类说明文，要求介绍中国航天员，契合本单元“中国太空探索努力”的写作主题。 2. 人称：以第三人称（he/she）客观介绍航天员，结合直接引语呈现航天员的话语，增强真实感。 3. 时态：以一般过去时描述关键事件（如入选、执行任务），用过去进行时（含while）描述同期发生的动作，融入本单元重点语法。 4. 核心要求 内容：包含航天员的成长梦想、航天任务经历、获得的荣誉； 结构：标题+成长经历+航天任务+荣誉总结； 字数：80-120词，融入至少2处过去进行时结构。 三、典型例题 请以“Wang Yaping: China’s First Female Space Lecturer”为题，写一篇介绍王亚平的文章，内容包括： 1. 成长经历：小时候热爱科学，常阅读航天书籍、观看发射视频； 2. 航天任务：2013年乘神舟十号太空授课，2021年驻留天宫空间站； 3. 荣誉：成为青少年航天梦的榜样。 四、思路点拨 1. 标题+成长经历：用过去进行时描述“小时候的梦想”，搭配while体现同期动作； 2. 航天任务：分年份介绍关键任务，用过去进行时描述任务中的核心动作； 3. 荣誉总结：说明其对青少年的影响，呼应单元主题。 五、写作模板（分板块拆解，贴合单元目标） 标题+成长经历 写作目的：引入航天员，用过去进行时描述童年梦想。 基础句式：[标题] When [航天员] was a child, she was loving (过去进行时) science. While other kids were playing (过去进行时，本单元语法), she was reading space books and watching launches. 示例：Wang Yaping: China’s First Female Space Lecturer When Wang Yaping was a child, she was loving science. While other kids were playing outside, she was reading space books and watching rocket launch videos. 航天任务 · 写作目的：介绍关键任务，用过去进行时描述任务中的动作。 · 基础句式：In [年份], she was taking part in (过去进行时) Shenzhou-[X] and was giving (过去进行时，本单元语法) a space lecture. In [年份], she was working in Tiangong Space Station for months. · 示例：In 2013, she was taking part in Shenzhou-10 and was giving China’s first space lecture. In 2021, she was living and working in Tiangong Space Station for 6 months. 荣誉总结 写作目的：说明航天员的影响，总结其贡献。 基础句式：She is called “a space role model”. Her story encourages teens to chase space dreams. 示例：She is called “a space role model”. Her experience encourages more girls to follow their space dreams. 六、范文 英文 Wang Yaping: China’s First Female Space Lecturer When Wang Yaping was a child, she was loving science deeply. While other kids were playing outside (过去进行时+while，本单元语法), she was reading space books and watching rocket launch videos. In 2013, she was taking part in the Shenzhou-10 mission and was giving China’s first space lecture to students (过去进行时，本单元语法). In 2021, she was living and working in Tiangong Space Station for 6 months, even doing a short spacewalk. She is called “a space role model” for her courage. Her story encourages more young people, especially girls, to chase their space dreams. 中文翻译 王亚平：中国首位女性太空讲师 王亚平小时候就深深热爱科学。当其他孩子在户外玩耍时，她正在读航天书籍、观看火箭发射视频。 2013年，她参与了神舟十号任务，同时给学生们带来了中国首次太空授课。2021年，她在天宫空间站生活工作了6个月，还完成了一次短时间的太空行走。 她因勇气被称为“太空榜样”，她的故事鼓励更多年轻人，尤其是女孩，追寻自己的航天梦想。 七、素材积累 短语 1. spaceflight programme — 航天计划 2. space lecture — 太空授课 3. Tiangong Space Station — 天宫空间站 4. spacewalk — 太空行走 5. rocket launch — 火箭发射 6. chase space dreams — 追寻航天梦想 7. space role model — 太空榜样 基础句型（含本单元语法） 基础句型 仿写句子 While other kids were playing, she was reading space books. While the team was preparing, he was checking equipment. She was giving a space lecture in 2013. He was performing a spacewalk in 2021. 好句集锦 1. Her space lecture opened a door for teens to explore the universe.（她的太空授课为青少年打开了探索宇宙的大门。） 2. She proves that hard work can make space dreams come true.（她证明了努力能让航天梦想成真。） 3. Her courage and persistence inspire millions of young people.（她的勇气和坚持激励着数百万年轻人。） 谚语 1. Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 [航天员姓名]: A Space Hero When [航天员姓名] was a child, he/she was loving _______ (兴趣，如space science) deeply. While other kids were playing _______ (活动，如outside), he/she was reading _______ (物品，如space books) and watching rocket launches. In [年份], he/she was taking part in the _______ (任务，如Shenzhou-10) mission and was _______ (动作，如giving) a space lecture. In [年份], he/she was working in _______ (地点，如Tiangong Space Station) for months. He/she is called “_______ (称号，如a space role model)” for courage. His/her story encourages more people to _______ (动作，如chase space dreams). ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $