内容正文:
Unit 9 From Here to There 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“出行与旅行”主题,写一篇分享旅行经历的短文或描述如何前往某地的指路短文,阐述旅行中的见闻、行程安排或出行路线、交通方式,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“出行与旅行”相关核心词汇(如trip、travel、journey、hotel、museum、map、direction、traffic、route、camp、tent等)及短语(get to、go along、turn left/right、cross the bridge、look for、set up、get lost、ask for help、follow the map、take the underground、by bus等);
2.能熟练运用一般过去时叙述旅行经历,掌握介词(in/on/at/along/across等)表示位置与方向,正确使用“Go along.../Turn.../It’s on your...”等指路句型及“There be...”句型描述地点;
3.能按“主题引入→核心细节(经历/路线)→感悟与总结”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“安全出行,快乐旅行”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:旅行经历类记叙文或指路类应用文,兼具纪实性与实用性;
2.人称:第一人称(分享旅行经历)或第二人称(提供指路信息)为主;
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1个核心主题(旅行经历/指路目的地)、2-3个关键细节(行程安排/交通方式/路线要点/旅行见闻)、1个感悟或温馨提示”3个要点;
○ 字数:60–80词,描述真实生动或路线清晰准确,语言符合七年级学生水平,体现安全出行意识与清晰表达能力。
思路点拨
1.开头:明确引入核心主题(一次难忘的旅行或某地点的指路需求),用简洁句式点明主题核心(如“去年暑假的露营旅行让我难忘” “从学校到博物馆的路线很简单”),用引导性语言引出下文具体描述;
2.中间:若分享旅行经历,按“行程顺序”展开,描述旅行的出发方式、途中见闻、目的地活动(如搭建帐篷、寻找水源、欣赏风景),结合一般过去时和介词补充细节,可加入小插曲(如迷路后按地图找到方向);若提供指路信息,聚焦“路线步骤”,按“出发地→关键地标→目的地”的逻辑,用清晰的方位介词和祈使句说明路线,补充交通方式和距离提示;
3.结尾:分享旅行感悟(如“旅行让我学会独立解决问题”)或指路总结(如“按照路线走15分钟就能到达”),呼应单元“From Here to There”的核心主题,传递安全出行、乐于分享的态度。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
模板一:分享一次露营旅行经历
第一段:旅行引入与背景
基础句式:Last ________ (时间,如summer holiday/weekend), I went camping with ________ (人物,如my family/my classmates) in ________ (地点,如a forest park/a mountain). It was an unforgettable trip full of fun.
示例:Last weekend, I went camping with my parents in Green Forest Park. We prepared a tent, some food and a map. I was so excited because it was my first time camping.
第二段:旅行过程与细节
基础句式:First, we ________ (行动1,如drove to the park and set up the tent) in the morning. Then, we ________ (行动2,如went to look for fresh water) nearby. Suddenly, we ________ (小插曲,如got lost), but my dad took out the map and we ________ (解决方式,如followed the directions to find our way back). In the evening, we ________ (行动3,如built a fire and shared stories).
示例:First, we drove to the park and set up the tent by the lake. Then, we went hiking and picked some wild flowers. On our way back, we got lost. My dad took out the map and pointed to the mountains: “We need to go along this path and cross the small bridge.” We followed his instructions and found our tent soon. In the evening, we built a fire and ate barbecued food.
第三段:旅行感悟与收获
基础句式:This trip taught me that ________ (感悟1,如it’s important to take a map when traveling). I also learned to ________ (收获,如solve problems calmly). I really enjoyed the time with ________ (人物). It was a wonderful trip I will never forget!
示例:This camping trip was amazing. It taught me that preparation is key for traveling—we wouldn’t have found our way without the map. I also learned to stay calm when facing difficulties. I loved the fresh air and beautiful scenery in the park. It was a great experience that brought our family closer.
模板二:给朋友指去图书馆的路线
第一段:指路引入与核心信息
基础句式:Hi ________ (朋友姓名)! To get to the city library from your school, it’s easy. You can take ________ (交通方式,如the bus/underground) or walk. Let me tell you the simplest way.
示例:Hi Lingling! To get to the City Library from your school, the bus route is the most convenient. It only takes 20 minutes. Let me share the details with you.
第二段:具体路线与步骤
基础句式:First, walk out of your school gate and ________ (步骤1,如turn right onto Xinhua Road). Then, go along the road for about 5 minutes until you ________ (步骤2,如see a bus stop). Take Bus No. ________ (数字) and get off at ________ (站点名,如the Science Museum Station). After getting off, ________ (步骤3,如turn left and walk along Park Street). You will see the library on your ________ (方向,如right) — it’s a big white building next to the park.
示例:First, walk out of your school gate and turn left onto Zhongshan Road. Go along the road for 3 minutes until you reach the bus stop near the bookstore. Take Bus No. 18 and get off at the Library Station. After getting off, cross the street and go straight. You will see a big white building with a red sign— that’s the City Library. It’s just 2 minutes’ walk from the bus stop.
第三段:温馨提示与总结
基础句式:The library is open from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. Don’t forget to ________ (提示,如take your student ID card). If you get lost, you can ________ (求助方式,如ask a policeman for help). Hope you have a good time reading!
示例:The library is open from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. Don’t forget to take your student ID card to borrow books. If you can’t find the way, just call me or ask passers-by— everyone knows the City Library. Enjoy your reading time there!
范文
My Unforgettable Camping Trip
Last summer holiday, I went camping with my classmates in the countryside. We took a bus there early in the morning, and it took us two hours.
When we arrived, we first set up our tents. Then, we went to a nearby river to get fresh water. In the afternoon, we played games and flew kites on the grass. Suddenly, it started to rain, but we stayed calm and put our things into the tents quickly. In the evening, the rain stopped. We built a fire, cooked noodles and shared interesting stories.
This trip was unforgettable. It taught me how to work with others and face difficulties bravely. I also enjoyed the beautiful nature and fresh air. I hope to go camping again with my classmates next year!
范文中文翻译
我难忘的露营旅行
去年暑假,我和同学们一起去乡下露营。我们一大早坐公交车出发,花了两个小时到达那里。
到达后,我们首先搭起了帐篷。然后,我们去附近的河边取淡水。下午,我们在草地上玩游戏、放风筝。突然下起了雨,但我们保持冷静,迅速把东西搬进了帐篷。晚上,雨停了。我们生起了火,煮了面条,还分享了有趣的故事。
这次旅行令人难忘。它教会我如何与他人合作,勇敢面对困难。我也很喜欢那里美丽的自然风光和新鲜空气。希望明年还能和同学们一起去露营!
素材积累
核心短语
get to 到达
go along 沿着……走
turn left/right 向左/右转
cross the bridge 过桥
look for 寻找
set up 搭建;建立
get lost 迷路
ask for help 求助
follow the map 按照地图走
take the underground 乘地铁
by bus 乘公交车
by bike 骑自行车
on foot 步行
stay calm 保持冷静
share stories 分享故事
fresh water 淡水
wild flowers 野花
build a fire 生火
play games 玩游戏
fly kites 放风筝
next to 在……旁边
walk out of 走出
get off 下车
go straight 直行
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
I went ________ with ________ last ________.
I went traveling with my friends last month.
To get to ________, you can ________.
To get to the museum, you can take Bus No. 5.
Go along ________ and turn ________ at ________.
Go along Renmin Road and turn right at the first crossing.
We ________, but then we ________.
We got lost, but then we asked a policeman for help.
There is a ________ on your ________.
There is a bank on your left.
It took us ________ to get to ________.
It took us an hour to get to the mountain.
好句集锦
1.Traveling not only lets us see beautiful scenery but also teaches us valuable life lessons.
2.Clear directions and a map can help us avoid getting lost during the trip.
3.The best part of the trip is not the destination, but the fun along the way.
4.When asking for directions, being polite can help you get better help.
谚语
1.A map without a compass is just a paper.(没有指南针的地图只是一张纸——强调出行准备的重要性)
2.Every journey begins with a single step.(千里之行,始于足下)
3.When in doubt, ask.(犹豫不决时,就去问——适用于出行中求助)
学生写作填空练习版
版本一:分享一次旅行经历
Last ________ (时间), I went ________ (旅行方式,如camping/traveling) with ________ (人物) in ________ (地点). We prepared ________ (物品,如a tent/a map/some food) and set off early.
First, we ________ (行动1,如took a bus/set up the tent). Then, we ________ (行动2,如went hiking/played games). Suddenly, we ________ (小插曲,如got lost/met a rainstorm), but we ________ (解决方式,如followed the map/stayed calm). In the evening, we ________ (行动3,如built a fire/shared stories).
This trip taught me ________ (感悟). I really enjoyed the time with ________ (人物). I hope to ________ (愿望,如go there again/have more trips) in the future!
版本二:给朋友指去某地的路线
Hi ________ (朋友姓名)! To get to ________ (目的地,如the park/the bookstore) from your home, it’s easy. Let me tell you the way.
First, ________ (步骤1,如walk out of your home and turn right). Then, go along ________ (道路名) for ________ (时间,如10 minutes) until you ________ (步骤2,如see a supermarket). Take Bus No. ________ (数字) and get off at ________ (站点名). After getting off, ________ (步骤3,如turn left and walk straight). You will see ________ (目的地) on your ________ (方向,如left/right).
Don’t forget to ________ (提示,如take your phone/bring an umbrella). If you have any trouble, ________ (求助方式,如call me/ask for help). Hope you have a good time!
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