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Unit 3 All about me 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“关于我自己”主题,写一篇介绍自己的短文或设计一份个人名片,描述外貌特征、兴趣爱好及个人感受,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“自我描述”相关核心词汇(如body、hair、eye、height、hobby、like、love、enjoy、creative、happy、active等)及短语(look like、play sports、read books、listen to music、have fun、make friends等);
2.能熟练运用动词be(am/is/are)和have/has的正确形式,掌握形容词描述外貌与感受的用法,用一般现在时介绍个人常态情况;
3.能按“基本信息→外貌特征→兴趣爱好→个人感悟”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“认识自我,接纳自我,展现自我”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:自我介绍类记叙文或个人名片设计说明,兼具纪实性与展示性;
2.人称:第一人称(介绍自己的情况、表达个人感受)为主;
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1个核心对象(自己)、2-3个关键细节(外貌特征、兴趣爱好、性格特点)、1个个人感悟或自我期许”3个要点;
○ 字数:60–80词,描述真实具体,语言符合七年级学生水平,体现对自我的认知与接纳。
思路点拨
1.开头:明确引入核心对象(自己),用简洁句式点明姓名、年龄、年级等基本信息,用动词be介绍核心身份,引出下文具体描述;
2.中间:按“外貌特征→兴趣爱好”展开,用have/has描述外貌(如“有黑色短发” “大眼睛”),用like/enjoy等动词介绍爱好(如“喜欢读书” “热爱运动”),结合单元核心短语补充细节(如“课后和朋友打乒乓球” “周末听音乐”),可适当加入性格描述(如“开朗” “乐于助人”);
3.结尾:分享个人感悟(如“爱好让我快乐成长” “接纳自己的与众不同”)或自我期许(如“希望结交更多朋友” “继续坚持爱好”),呼应单元“认识自我、热爱生活”的核心主题,传递积极自信的人生态度。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
模板一:自我介绍短文
第一段:基本信息与整体印象
基础句式:Hello! My name is ________. I am ________ years old. I am in Grade 7, Class ________. I am a ________ (性格,如happy/active) boy/girl. I like to make friends with people.
示例:Hello! My name is Li Hua. I am twelve years old. I am in Grade 7, Class 4. I am an outgoing girl. I am always friendly to others, so I have many good friends.
第二段:外貌特征与兴趣爱好
基础句式:I am of average height. I have ________ (外貌1,如short black hair) and ________ (外貌2,如big black eyes). My favourite hobby is ________ (爱好1,如playing Chinese chess). I often ________ (相关活动,如play it with my grandpa on weekends). I also like ________ (爱好2,如reading books) because it makes me ________ (感受,如smart and happy).
示例:I am not very tall but I am strong. I have short black hair and round face. My favourite hobby is playing basketball. I play it with my classmates after school every day. I also like listening to music. When I feel tired, music helps me relax. I think these hobbies make my life colourful.
第三段:个人感悟与期许
基础句式:I think I am a ________ (性格,如kind/creative) person. I love my life and enjoy doing the things I like. I hope to ________ (期许,如make more friends and learn new things) in the new school year.
示例:I am glad to be myself—different but special. My hobbies teach me to be persistent and creative. I love my happy life. I hope to make more friends who share the same hobbies with me and have a wonderful school year.
模板二:个人名片设计说明
第一段:名片核心信息
基础句式:This is my about-me card. My name is ________. I am ________ years old and I am from ________ (地方,如China). I am in Grade 7, Class ________.
示例:This is my about-me card. My name is Jenny. I am twelve years old and I am from Canada. I am in Grade 7, Class 2. I want to share something about myself with you.
第二段:外貌、爱好与性格
基础句式:I have ________ (外貌,如blond hair and blue eyes). I am ________ (性格,如kind and smart). My favourite subject is ________ (学科,如PE) because I like ________ (相关活动,如playing sports). In my free time, I often ________ (爱好活动,如read storybooks and draw pictures). These activities make me ________ (感受,如happy and active).
示例:I have long brown hair and big blue eyes. My classmates say I am kind and helpful. My favourite subject is art because I like drawing. In my free time, I often draw animals and flowers. I also like reading comic books. They make me feel relaxed and happy.
第三段:梦想与结语
基础句式:My dream is to be a ________ (梦想职业,如writer/artist) one day. I will keep my hobbies and work hard for my dream. I am glad to share my about-me card with you!
示例:My dream is to be an artist. I will keep practicing drawing and reading more art books. This about-me card shows the real me. I hope to make friends with you and share our hobbies together!
范文
Introduce Myself
Hello! My name is Wang Tao. I am thirteen years old. I am in Grade 7, Class 5. I am a tall boy with short black hair and big eyes.
I have many hobbies. My favourite one is playing Chinese chess. I often play it with my grandpa on weekends. We always discuss chess skills and have a lot of fun. I also like playing football. It makes me strong and teaches me teamwork. After school, I often play football with my friends on the playground.
I am a friendly and persistent boy. I love my hobbies because they make my life meaningful. I hope to make more friends who like sports and chess. I will keep practicing and become better. This is me—an active boy who loves life!
范文中文翻译
自我介绍
大家好!我叫王涛,今年十三岁,在七年级五班。我是一个高个子男孩,有着黑色短发和大大的眼睛。
我有很多爱好,最喜欢的是下中国象棋。我经常在周末和爷爷一起下棋,我们总会讨论棋艺,玩得很开心。我还喜欢踢足球,它让我变得强壮,也教会我团队合作。放学后,我经常和朋友们在操场踢足球。
我是一个友善且执着的男孩。我热爱我的爱好,因为它们让我的生活变得有意义。我希望结交更多喜欢运动和象棋的朋友。我会坚持练习,变得更优秀。这就是我——一个热爱生活的活跃男孩!
素材积累
核心短语
look like 看起来像
play sports 做运动
read books 读书
listen to music 听音乐
play Chinese chess 下中国象棋
draw pictures 画画
make friends 交朋友
after school 放学后
on weekends 在周末
in free time 在空闲时间
share with 与……分享
work hard 努力
teamwork 团队合作
colorful life 丰富多彩的生活
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
My name is ________. I am ________ years old.
My name is Lucy. I am twelve years old.
I have ________ and ________.
I have long hair and small eyes.
I am ________ (性格) because I like ________.
I am active because I like playing sports.
My favourite hobby is ________. I often ________.
My favourite hobby is reading. I often read novels on weekends.
________ makes me ________.
Reading makes me smart and happy.
好句集锦
1.Being myself is the best thing in the world—we are all different but special.
2.Hobbies are like stars in my life, making my days bright and interesting.
3.I am proud of who I am. My appearance and hobbies make me unique.
谚语
1.Every man is the master of his own fortune.(每个人都是自己命运的主人——适用于表达自我认同)
2.Interest is the best teacher.(兴趣是最好的老师——适用于描述爱好的意义)
3.Unity is strength.(团结就是力量——适用于描述团队类运动爱好)
学生写作填空练习版
版本一:自我介绍短文
Hello! My name is ________. I am ________ years old. I am in Grade 7, Class ________. I am a ________ (性格,如happy/kind) boy/girl.
I have ________ (外貌1,如long hair) and ________ (外貌2,如big eyes). I like ________ (爱好1,如playing ping-pong) very much. I often ________ (相关活动,如play it with my friends after school). I also enjoy ________ (爱好2,如reading storybooks) because it makes me ________ (感受,如relaxed).
I love my life. I hope to ________ (期许,如learn more skills and make more friends). I am glad to be myself and enjoy every day!
版本二:个人名片设计说明
This is my about-me card. My name is ________. I am ________ years old and I am from ________ (地方). I am in Grade 7, Class ________.
I have ________ (外貌,如short brown hair). I am ________ (性格,如smart and helpful). My favourite hobby is ________ (爱好,如drawing). In my free time, I often ________ (相关活动,如draw pictures of animals). It makes me ________ (感受,如creative and happy).
My dream is to be a ________ (梦想职业,如painter) one day. I will keep my hobby and work hard. I hope you like my about-me card!
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