Unit 8 Surprise endings 写作专项学案- 2025-2026学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

该初中英语学案以“欧·亨利短篇小说与意外结局”为主题，围绕“最珍贵的礼物”写作任务，设定词汇运用、语法结构、逻辑表达三维目标。通过写作目标解析、思路点拨、模板拆解、范文示范到填空练习的递进设计，构建“目标-解析-实践-迁移”的完整学习路径，体现知识建构的系统性。 亮点在于“文学主题与生活体验融合”的探究设计，学生可选择“最珍贵的礼物”记叙文或欧·亨利故事评论，通过核心词汇运用、情节细节分析等任务，培养语言能力和思维品质。素材积累与分层练习（如模板仿写、填空创作）支持深度学习，为教师实施单元写作教学提供从目标到评价的全流程指导。

Unit 8 Surprise endings 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“欧·亨利短篇小说与意外结局”主题，写一篇关于“最珍贵的礼物”的短文或赏析欧·亨利式意外结局的评论，描述礼物的由来、意义或故事的情节转折与主题内涵，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“礼物与文学”相关核心词汇（如gift、precious、possession、sacrifice、surprise、ending、valuable、treasure、afford、search等）及短语（look for、at last、fix...on、hold out、take out、search through、give up、be proud of等）； 2.能熟练运用形容词、名词、动词后接介词的语法结构，正确使用礼貌表达不同观点的句式，用一般过去时叙述故事或经历，用一般现在时表达对文学作品的评价； 3.能按“礼物/故事引入→核心细节（经历/情节）→感悟与升华”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“真挚情感藏于细节，意外结局彰显深意”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：生活感悟类记叙文或文学评论类短文，兼具情感性与思辨性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享个人礼物经历）或第三人称（赏析文学作品）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1件珍贵礼物/1篇欧·亨利式故事、2-3个关键细节（礼物背景/情节转折、情感体现、意外之处）、1个深层感悟（礼物意义/故事主题）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，描述真挚自然或分析有条理，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对情感价值或文学内涵的理解。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心对象（参考课本《The gifts》《The last leaf》等案例），用简洁句式点明礼物的名称、赠送者或故事的核心特征（如“充满意外转折” “蕴含无私奉献”），用情感化语言引出下文具体描述； 2.中间：若写礼物类短文，按“礼物的由来→与礼物相关的经历→礼物的特殊意义”展开，描述收到礼物时的场景、礼物背后的故事，用单元核心短语强化情感细节；若写文学评论，聚焦欧·亨利故事的“铺垫→转折→意外结局”，分析结局的巧妙之处及主题（如“牺牲与爱” “人性美好”），用介词搭配精准表达观点； 3.结尾：提炼礼物的深层价值（如“情感的寄托” “成长的鼓励”）或故事的启示（如“平凡中的伟大” “意外结局的力量”），呼应单元“真挚的情感与巧妙的构思让故事与礼物更具价值”的核心主题，传递对情感与文学的珍视。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：最珍贵的礼物（记叙文） 第一段：礼物引入与背景 基础句式：The most valuable gift I have ever received is ________ (礼物名称) from ________ (赠送者，如my grandma/my best friend). It may not be expensive, but it carries deep love and precious memories. I received it on ________ (时间，如my 15th birthday/a special festival). 示例：The most valuable gift I have ever received is a hand-knitted scarf from my grandma. It is made of soft wool in light blue, and it may not be fancy, but it holds my grandma’s deep love for me. I got it on a cold winter morning before I left for a school trip. 第二段：礼物的由来与经历 基础句式：My grandma spent ________ (时间，如a whole month) making it for me. She told me that ________ (礼物背后的心意，如she hoped it could keep me warm in the cold weather). When I first saw it, I ________ (感受与行动，如was deeply moved and gave her a big hug). Every time I wear it, I feel ________ (体验，如her love around me). 示例：My grandma is not in good health, but she spent three weeks knitting the scarf. She sat by the window every afternoon, carefully choosing wool and knitting stitch by stitch. She said she wanted to make sure it was warm enough for the cold days at school. When I unpacked the gift, I found a small note inside: “My dear child, stay warm and take care of yourself.” I couldn’t help crying. 第三段：礼物的意义与感悟 基础句式：This gift is more than just ________ (礼物本身) to me. It is a symbol of ________ (意义，如my grandma’s love/my friend’s care). It teaches me to ________ (感悟，如cherish the people who love me). I will keep it forever and pass on this kind of love. 示例：This scarf is more than a piece of clothing to me. It is a symbol of my grandma’s selfless love. Whenever I feel tired or lonely at school, wearing it makes me feel safe and warm. It teaches me to cherish the simple and sincere love around me. I know that the most valuable gifts are not about money, but about the feelings behind them. 模板二：欧·亨利故事评论（文学类） 第一段：故事引入与核心特征 基础句式：O. Henry’s short stories are famous for their surprise endings, and ________ (故事名称，如“The last leaf”) is one of my favourites. It tells a touching story about ________ (核心主题，如sacrifice and hope), and the unexpected ending makes the story more meaningful. 示例：O. Henry is a master of surprise endings, and his story “The last leaf” deeply touches me. It tells a story of friendship and sacrifice between two young artists and an old painter, with an unexpected ending that reveals the beauty of human nature. 第二段：情节分析与结局妙处 基础句式：At first, ________ (故事铺垫，如Johnsy, a sick artist, thinks she will die when the last ivy leaf falls). The old painter Behrman seems to be a grumpy man, but he ________ (转折情节，如secretly paints a leaf on the wall at night). The surprise ending is that ________ (意外结局，如the last leaf never falls because it’s Behrman’s painting, and he dies from cold after finishing it). 示例：Johnsy, a young artist, gets seriously ill and believes she will die when the last ivy leaf outside her window falls. Her friend Sue is worried, but the old painter Behrman, who lives downstairs, laughs at Johnsy’s idea. However, on a cold rainy night, Behrman climbs up the wall and paints a realistic ivy leaf. The next morning, Johnsy sees the leaf and regains the will to live. The surprise is that Behrman catches a cold and dies, and the leaf he painted becomes a symbol of hope. 第三段：主题感悟与评价 基础句式：This surprise ending shows that ________ (主题，如ordinary people can do great things through sacrifice). O. Henry’s stories teach us that ________ (启示，如there is kindness and love in the world). The clever plot and deep theme make his stories unforgettable. 示例：This unexpected ending makes the story moving and powerful. It shows that Behrman, who seems grumpy, has a kind and selfless heart. O. Henry uses the surprise ending to tell us that true love and sacrifice can give people hope to live. His stories not only entertain us but also make us think about the beauty of human nature. 范文 The Most Precious Gift from My Mom The most valuable gift I have ever received is a simple notebook from my mom. It is not expensive, but it is full of warm words and precious memories that I will cherish forever. I received it on the first day of junior high school, when I was nervous about making new friends and facing new challenges. When I opened the notebook, I found a letter from my mom. She wrote that no matter what difficulties I met, she would always support me. She also asked me to write down my joys and sorrows in the notebook. Over the years, I have filled many pages with my stories. Whenever I feel down, I read my mom’s words and feel encouraged. This notebook is more than a gift to me. It is a bridge between my mom and me, carrying her deep love and care. It teaches me to be brave and positive when facing difficulties. I know that the most valuable things in life are not material possessions, but the sincere feelings from our loved ones. I will keep this notebook forever as a treasure. 范文中文翻译 妈妈送我的最珍贵礼物 我收到过最珍贵的礼物是妈妈送我的一个普通笔记本。它并不昂贵，但里面装满了温暖的话语和珍贵的回忆，我会永远珍藏。 我在初中开学第一天收到了它，那时我对结交新朋友、面对新挑战感到紧张。当我打开笔记本时，发现了妈妈写的一封信。她写道，无论我遇到什么困难，她都会一直支持我。她还让我把自己的喜怒哀乐都写在笔记本里。这些年来，我已经用我的故事填满了许多页。每当我情绪低落时，读妈妈的话就会感到鼓舞。 这个笔记本对我来说不仅仅是一份礼物。它是我和妈妈之间的桥梁，承载着她深深的爱与关怀。它教会我在面对困难时要勇敢、积极。我知道，生活中最珍贵的东西不是物质财富，而是亲人给予的真挚情感。我会把这个笔记本当作珍宝永远保存。 素材积累 核心短语 look for 寻找 at last 终于；最终 fix...on 集中（目光、注意力等）于 hold out 递出；伸出 take out 拿出；取出 search through 仔细搜寻 give up 放弃 be proud of 为……感到骄傲 hand-knitted scarf 手工编织的围巾 precious memories 珍贵的回忆 deep love 深深的爱 selfless sacrifice 无私的奉献 surprise ending 意外结局 human nature 人性 sincere feelings 真挚的情感 material possessions 物质财富 will to live 求生的意志 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The most valuable gift I have ever received is ________. The most valuable gift I have ever received is a book from my teacher. ________ carries deep love and ________. This handmade card carries deep love and best wishes. O. Henry’s story ________ is famous for ________. O. Henry’s story “The gifts” is famous for its touching plot and surprise ending. The surprise ending shows that ________. The surprise ending shows that love is more valuable than any possessions. This gift teaches me to ________. This gift teaches me to cherish the people who care about me. 好句集锦 1.The value of a gift lies not in its price, but in the love and thoughtfulness behind it. 2.O. Henry’s surprise endings are not just clever tricks—they reveal the true beauty of human nature. 3.Precious gifts are like bright stars in life, lighting up our hearts and reminding us of the love around us. 谚语 1.Love is the greatest gift of all.（爱是最珍贵的礼物） 2.It is not the gift, but the thought that counts.（礼轻情意重） 3.Kindness is a language that the deaf can hear and the blind can see.（善良是一种聋人能听见、盲人能看见的语言） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：最珍贵的礼物（记叙文） The most valuable gift I have ever received is ________ (礼物名称) from ________ (赠送者). It may not be expensive, but it is very special to me. I got it when ________ (场景/时间). ________ (赠送者) spent ________ (时间/精力) on this gift. He/She told me that ________ (礼物背后的心意). When I first saw it, I ________ (感受，如was deeply moved/couldn’t help crying). Every time I look at it or use it, I ________ (体验，如think of him/her/feel warm). This gift is more than just an object to me. It represents ________ (意义，如his/her love/my unforgettable memory). It teaches me to ________ (感悟，如cherish friendship/be grateful). I will keep it forever and treasure the feelings behind it. 版本二：欧·亨利故事评论（文学类） O. Henry’s short stories are well-known for their surprise endings, and ________ (故事名称) is my favourite. It tells a story about ________ (核心人物/主题), which touches my heart deeply. In the story, ________ (情节铺垫，如the main character faces a difficult problem/people have misunderstandings). Just when we think ________ (预期发展), there is a surprise: ________ (意外结局). This ending is clever because ________ (分析妙处，如it reveals the truth/showcases human kindness). This story teaches us that ________ (启示，如love is selfless/ordinary people can be great). O. Henry’s way of writing makes the story unforgettable. I admire his ability to create such wonderful surprise endings. It also makes me realize that ________ (深层感悟，如there is always beauty in life). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $