Unit 4 Problems and advice 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（2012）英语九年级上册

Unit 4 Problems and advice 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“青少年常见问题与建议”主题,写一封求助邮件或一篇问题分析短文,描述生活或学习中的具体问题、内心感受及对建议的需求,达成以下目标: 1.能正确使用本单元“问题与建议”相关核心词汇(如problem、advice、regret、ashamed、embarrassed、suggest、annoying、mess、diet、braces等)及短语(be on a diet、laugh at、feel ashamed of、drive sb. mad、make a mess、look for、hear from、none of one’s business等); 2.能熟练掌握句子成分(主语、谓语、宾语、补语、状语)的用法,正确使用邮件格式,用一般现在时陈述问题现状,用一般过去时描述问题发生过程; 3.能按“问题引入 细节描述 求助/建议”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“直面问题,理性求助,积极解决”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁:求助类邮件或问题分析类短文,兼具抒情性与实用性; 2.人称:第一人称(分享个人问题、表达感受)为主; 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容:覆盖“1个具体问题(外貌、人际、家庭、学习等)、2-3个关键细节(问题表现、影响、尝试过的解决方式)、1个明确的求助方向或建议需求”3个要点; ￮ 字数:80–100词,问题描述真实具体,情感真挚,语言符合九年级学生水平,体现对问题的理性认知与积极解决的态度。 思路点拨 1.开头:明确引入核心问题(参考课本安娜、彼得、西蒙、朱莉的网络求助案例),用简洁句式点明问题类型(如“朋友过度节食” “被朋友嘲笑” “与家人相处困扰”),表达自己的核心感受(如“担心” “羞愧” “烦恼”),引出下文具体描述; 2.中间:按“问题细节 带来的影响 已尝试的做法”展开,描述问题的具体表现(如“朋友不吃饭体重下降” “戴牙箍被同学取笑”),说明问题对自己或他人的影响(如“影响健康” “感到自卑” “无法专心学习”),补充自己已尝试的解决方式及效果,用单元核心短语强化细节; 3.结尾:明确表达求助需求(如“希望得到具体建议” “想知道如何帮助朋友”)或提出合理建议,呼应单元“求助不可怕,积极解决才重要”的核心主题,传递直面问题、主动寻求帮助的积极态度。 写作模板(逐段拆解) 模板一:求助邮件(朋友过度节食问题) 第一段:问候与问题引入 基础句式:Dear Aunt Linda, I hope you are well. Your advice is always helpful, so I’m writing to ask for your help with a problem about my friend. I’m really worried about her and don’t know what to do. 示例:Dear Aunt Linda, How are you? I’ve been reading your advice page for a long time and I trust your suggestions. Now I’m facing a problem with my best friend, and I need your help urgently. I’m so worried that I can’t focus on my study. 第二段:问题细节与影响 基础句式:My friend _ (姓名) wants to be a model, so she thinks she’s fat and is always on a diet. She eats very little every day, and she’s getting thinner and thinner. I’ve tried to talk to her about it, but she gets angry every time. I’m afraid her unhealthy diet will hurt her health. 示例:My friend Lily dreams of being a model. Although she’s already thin, she thinks she needs to lose weight. She’s been on a strict diet for a month—she only eats a small bowl of salad for each meal. Now she looks pale and tired, and she can’t even run in PE class. I’ve tried to persuade her to eat more, but she gets mad and says I don’t understand her. 第三段:求助需求与结尾 基础句式:Could you please give me some advice on how to help her? I want her to realize that health is more important than being thin. Thank you for reading my email. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, _ (你的名字) 示例:I don’t want Lily to damage her health because of wrong beauty standards. Could you tell me how to make her understand that being healthy is the most beautiful? Or should I ask our teacher for help together? Thank you so much for your guidance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Amy 模板二:问题分析短文(与家人相处困扰) 第一段:问题引入与核心感受 基础句式:In daily life, many teenagers have trouble getting along with their family members. I’m one of them—I often feel annoyed with my _ (家人,如younger sister/elder brother) because of some small things. It makes our family atmosphere tense sometimes. 示例:Getting along with my seven-year-old sister is really a challenge for me. She’s cute, but her habits often drive me mad. I love her, but I don’t know how to deal with the conflicts between us. 第二段:问题细节与影响 基础句式:My sister always _ (问题行为1,如plays the piano when I’m studying) and takes my things without telling me. I try my best to keep our room tidy, but she always makes a mess. Last week, she even broke my favorite pen, which made me very angry. These things make it hard for me to concentrate on my homework. 示例:Every time I’m studying for exams, she plays the piano loudly in our shared room. She also likes to borrow my books and stationery without asking, and sometimes she forgets to return them. Last Friday, she spilled juice on my homework notebook, and I had to rewrite it all night. I feel frustrated because I can’t find a quiet place to study at home. 第三段:解决思路与感悟 基础句式:After thinking carefully, I realize that communication is the key. I plan to _ (解决方式1,如talk to her calmly) and set some simple rules with her. I think if we understand each other better, we can live happily together. Family harmony is important for everyone. 示例:I know my sister doesn’t do these things on purpose—she just wants my attention. So I decide to spend more time with her after school, playing games or reading stories. I’ll also talk to her gently and ask her to play the piano when I’m not studying. I believe that with patience and understanding, we can become closer and enjoy our time together. 范文 An Email to Aunt Linda for Help Dear Aunt Linda, I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to ask for your advice because I’m worried about my friend Simon. Your suggestions are always practical, so I really need your help. Simon has just started wearing braces to straighten his teeth. But his classmates often laugh at him and call him “metal mouth”. He feels embarrassed to smile or talk in class, and he even refuses to eat with us at lunchtime. The braces also hurt his teeth sometimes, which makes it hard for him to eat. He told me he regrets wearing braces and wants to take them off, but his dentist said it’s necessary. I want to help Simon get through this difficult time. Could you please tell me how to encourage him? Or how to make his classmates stop laughing at him? Thank you for your kindness. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Tom 范文中文翻译 给琳达阿姨的求助邮件 亲爱的琳达阿姨: 希望你一切安好。我写这封邮件是想向你寻求建议,因为我很担心我的朋友西蒙。你的建议总是很实用,所以我真的需要你的帮助。 西蒙刚开始戴牙箍矫正牙齿。但他的同学经常嘲笑他,还叫他“金属嘴”。他在课堂上不好意思微笑或说话,甚至拒绝和我们一起吃午饭。牙箍有时还会伤到他的牙齿,让他很难进食。他告诉我他后悔戴牙箍,想把它摘掉,但他的牙医说这是必要的。 我想帮助西蒙度过这段困难的时期。你能告诉我如何鼓励他吗?或者怎样让他的同学不再嘲笑他?谢谢你的善意。期待你的回复。 此致, 汤姆 素材积累 核心短语 be on a diet 节食 laugh at 嘲笑 feel ashamed of 为……感到羞愧 drive sb. mad 让某人受不了 make a mess 搞得一塌糊涂 look for 寻找 hear from 收到……的来信 none of one’s business 与某人无关 straighten one’s teeth 矫正牙齿 focus on 专注于 get along with 与……相处 deal with 处理;应对 communication is the key 沟通是关键 health is more important than appearance 健康比外貌更重要 wrong beauty standards 错误的审美标准 基础句型(含本单元重点) 基础句型 仿写句子 I’m worried about my friend because _. I’m worried about my friend because she’s been on a diet for a month and looks very weak. My _ always _, which makes me _. My brother always plays video games loudly, which makes me can’t study. I’ve tried to _, but _. I’ve tried to talk to her about the problem, but she refuses to listen. Could you give me some advice on how to _? Could you give me some advice on how to get along with my younger sister? I realize that _ is important for solving the problem. I realize that understanding each other is important for solving the problem. 好句集锦 1.Everyone may face problems in life; the key is to face them bravely and seek help when necessary. 2.True beauty comes from health and confidence, not from being extremely thin or having perfect appearance. 3.Communication and understanding can bridge the gap between people, whether it’s between friends or family members. 谚语 1.A problem shared is a problem halved.(分享一个问题,问题就解决了一半) 2.Health is wealth.(健康是最大的财富) 3.Patience is the key to success in dealing with relationships.(耐心是处理人际关系成功的关键) 学生写作填空练习版 版本一:求助邮件 Dear Aunt Linda, I hope you are well. I’m writing to ask for your advice about my _ (问题相关对象,如friend/family member). I’m really _ (感受,如worried/annoyed) and don’t know what to do. My _ (对象) has a problem: _ (具体问题描述). He/She often _ (问题行为), which _ (带来的影响). I’ve tried to _ (已尝试的做法), but it didn’t work. I’m afraid that _ (担心的结果). Could you please tell me how to _ (求助需求,如help him/her/solve the problem)? I would be very grateful for your advice. Thank you for reading my email. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, _ (你的名字) 版本二:问题分析短文 Many teenagers have trouble with _ (问题类型,如friendship/family relationships) in daily life. I also have such a problem, and it makes me feel _ (感受,如frustrated/unhappy). My problem is that _ (具体问题描述). For example, last week _ (具体事例). This problem affects me a lot: _ (对自己的影响). I’ve tried _ (已尝试的做法), but it didn’t help. After thinking, I think the best way to solve it is _ (解决思路). I believe that if I _ (具体行动), the problem will be solved. Everyone may meet problems, but as long as we face them actively, we can overcome them! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $