Unit 3 The seasons 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级上册

Unit 3 The seasons 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“四季特征与生活”主题，写一篇介绍四季或喜爱季节的短文，描述四季的天气、动植物变化、人们的活动，或聚焦某一季节分享喜爱的原因与相关体验，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“季节与自然”相关核心词汇（如season、spring、summer、autumn、winter、weather、temperature、plant、flower、leaf、harvest、snow、rain等）及短语（have picnics、take a trip、work one’s land、play in the snow、fly kites、go swimming等）； 2.能熟练运用形容词描述天气与季节特征，用一般现在时陈述四季的常态特征与活动，用“It is + adj. + to do sth.”表达对季节活动的感受，正确使用连词（and、but、so、because）衔接句子； 3.能按“四季总述→分季描述”或“喜爱季节引入→特征与活动→喜爱原因”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“感受四季之美，热爱自然生活”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：说明类记叙文，兼具描述性与抒情性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享个人感受）或第三人称（客观介绍四季）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“四季的核心特征（天气、动植物、活动）”或“1个喜爱的季节+2-3个核心亮点（天气、活动、意义）”2个方向，突出季节的独特性； ￮ 字数：80–100词，描述具体生动，语言符合七年级学生水平，体现对四季与生活关联的理解。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确写作方向（介绍四季或单一喜爱的季节），用简洁句式总述四季的多样性或喜爱季节的整体印象（如“四季各有特色” “夏天是我最爱的季节”），引出下文具体描述； 2.中间：若介绍四季，按“春→夏→秋→冬”顺序，分别描述每个季节的天气、动植物变化及人们的典型活动，用单元核心形容词精准修饰；若聚焦单一季节，详细说明其天气特征（如“hot and sunny” “cool and dry”）、特色动植物、自己喜爱的活动（如“游泳、野餐、堆雪人”），结合具体场景增强画面感； 3.结尾：总结四季的美好或重申喜爱某季节的原因，分享季节带来的感受（如“快乐、放松、有收获”），呼应单元“感受自然节律，享受季节生活”的核心主题。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：介绍四季 第一段：总述四季多样性 基础句式：There are four seasons in a year—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has its own special features, and they bring us different joys. I love every season because they make our life colorful. 示例：There are four seasons in a year—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season has unique weather, plants and activities. They make nature changeable and our life interesting. 第二段：分述四季特征与活动 基础句式：Spring is warm and rainy. Plants start to grow, and flowers bloom. People like to fly kites or have picnics in parks. Summer is hot, so many people go swimming or eat ice cream. Autumn is cool and dry; leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy with harvest. Winter is cold and snowy, and children enjoy playing in the snow. 示例：Spring is warm with soft rain. Trees turn green, and birds come back from the south. My family often takes a trip to the countryside. Summer is hot and sunny; we go swimming in the river and eat fresh fruit. Autumn brings cool wind—leaves fall like butterflies, and we pick fruits with farmers. Winter is cold; it sometimes snows, and we make snowmen happily. 第三段：总结四季的意义 基础句式：Each season is wonderful. They show us the beauty of nature and let us experience different activities. I feel lucky to enjoy the changing seasons and love the life with nature. 示例：Every season has its charm. Spring brings new life, summer gives us joy, autumn brings harvest, and winter brings peace. Experiencing the four seasons helps me understand nature better. I really love the beautiful seasons! 模板二：介绍喜爱的季节 第一段：引入喜爱的季节 基础句式：My favorite season is ________ (季节名称). It comes after ________ (前一个季节) and before ________ (后一个季节). The weather is usually ________ (天气描述), and everything looks beautiful. 示例：My favorite season is summer. It comes after spring and before autumn. The weather is hot and sunny, and the world is full of energy. 第二段：描述季节特征与活动 基础句式：In this season, ________ (动植物特征，如trees have thick green leaves/flowers bloom brightly). I love to ________ (活动1，如go swimming with my friends) in the afternoon. My family also likes to ________ (活动2，如have picnics in the park) on weekends. It is ________ (adj., 如exciting/nice) to ________ (活动感受，如play in the cool water/eat fresh watermelons). 示例：In summer, trees have thick green leaves, and colorful flowers bloom everywhere. I love to go swimming in the community pool with my classmates after school—it’s so cool! On weekends, my family often goes to the beach. We build sandcastles and enjoy the sea breeze. Eating sweet ice cream on hot days is my favorite thing. 第三段：说明喜爱的原因 基础句式：I like ________ (季节名称) best because ________ (原因1，如it has a long holiday/I can do many fun activities). It makes me feel ________ (感受，如happy/relaxed) and lets me enjoy the beauty of nature. It is really a wonderful season! 示例：I like summer best because it has a long holiday and many fun activities. I can relax and do what I like. The bright sunshine and happy moments with family and friends make summer unforgettable. It is truly the most wonderful season for me! 范文 My Favorite Season—Autumn My favorite season is autumn. It is a beautiful and meaningful season that comes in September. The weather is cool and dry, with comfortable temperature and clear blue sky. In autumn, the leaves turn red, yellow and brown, like colorful butterflies falling from the trees. Squirrels gather food for winter, and farmers are busy with the harvest—rice, fruits and vegetables are all ripe. I love to go on family outings on weekends. We walk in the park, pick apples in the orchard and have delicious picnics. It is nice to feel the cool wind and enjoy the colorful scenery. I like autumn because it is not too hot or too cold. It brings harvest and joy, and lets me spend happy time with my family. Autumn teaches me to cherish the beautiful moments in life. It is really a perfect season! 范文中文翻译 我最喜欢的季节——秋天 我最喜欢的季节是秋天。它是一个美丽而有意义的季节，在九月份到来。天气凉爽干燥，气温舒适，天空湛蓝。 秋天里，树叶变成红色、黄色和棕色，像五颜六色的蝴蝶从树上飘落。松鼠忙着为冬天收集食物，农民们也忙于收获——水稻、水果和蔬菜都成熟了。我喜欢周末和家人一起去郊游。我们在公园里散步，在果园里摘苹果，还能享受美味的野餐。感受着凉爽的风，欣赏着多彩的景色，真是太惬意了。 我喜欢秋天，因为它既不太热也不太冷。它带来了收获和喜悦，还让我能和家人共度欢乐时光。秋天教会我珍惜生活中的美好瞬间，真是一个完美的季节！ 素材积累 核心短语 have picnics 野餐 take a trip 去旅行 work one’s land 耕种土地 play in the snow 在雪地里玩耍 fly kites 放风筝 go swimming 去游泳 build sandcastles 堆沙堡 pick fruits 摘水果 busy with harvest 忙于收获 fall from the trees 从树上落下 bloom brightly 盛开 fresh fruit 新鲜水果 sea breeze 海风 cool wind 凉风 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 In ________ (季节), the weather is usually ________ (adj.). In spring, the weather is usually warm and rainy. People like to ________ (活动) in ________ (季节). People like to play in the snow in winter. It is ________ (adj.) to ________ (活动) in this season. It is exciting to fly kites in spring. ________ (季节) is my favorite because ________. Winter is my favorite because I can make snowmen. In this season, ________ (动植物变化) and ________ (人们活动). In autumn, leaves turn yellow and people go on outings. 好句集锦 1.Spring is a season of new life—everything wakes up and grows happily. 2.Summer is bright and lively, with sunshine, beaches and lots of fun activities. 3.Autumn is full of colors and harvest, bringing people joy and satisfaction. 4.Winter is peaceful and white, making the world look like a fairy tale. 谚语 1.One season brings forth another.（四季更替，生生不息） 2.Spring rain is as precious as oil.（春雨贵如油） 3.Autumn harvest depends on spring sowing.（春播秋收） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：介绍四季 There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter. Each season is special and brings us different fun. Spring is ________ (天气). ________ (动植物变化). People often ________ (活动1) and ________ (活动2). Summer is ________ (天气); we like to ________ (活动) to keep cool. Autumn is ________ (天气); ________ (收获场景) and leaves ________ (状态). Winter is ________ (天气); children love to ________ (活动). I love all the seasons because they make nature beautiful and our life colorful. Experiencing the changing seasons is really a wonderful thing! 版本二：介绍喜爱的季节 My favorite season is ________ (季节). The weather is usually ________ (天气描述), and the world is ________ (整体印象). In this season, ________ (动植物特征). I often ________ (活动1) with my friends. My family also likes to ________ (活动2) on weekends. It is ________ (感受) to ________ (活动细节). I also love ________ (季节特色，如the fresh fruit/the beautiful flowers). I like this season best because ________ (原因). It makes me feel ________ (感受) and lets me enjoy the beauty of nature. It is the most wonderful season for me! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $