内容正文:
译林版八下Unit 6 写作专项
A Letter to Call for Help
写作目标
结合本单元“帮助他人、运用It is + 形容词 + (of/for...) + to-infinitive”的核心目标,能写一封呼吁信号召他人帮助有需要的人,达成以下目标:
能正确使用It is + 形容词 + for sb to do(说明行为对某人的必要性)和It is + 形容词 + of sb to do(评价某人的行为);
能运用本单元与“帮助他人”相关的词汇(如volunteer, raise money, suffer from)撰写呼吁信;
能遵循呼吁信的结构,清晰说明求助原因、所需帮助及行动方案。
题目解析
体裁:应用文(呼吁信),要求号召他人帮助有需要的人,契合本单元“关爱他人”的主题。
人称:以第一人称(we)为主,代表发起方呼吁;以第三人称(he/she)介绍求助者情况,符合书信的人称规范。
时态:以一般现在时为主介绍现状,用一般将来时说明计划,难度适配八年级学生水平。
核心要求
○ 内容:写清求助者的情况、所需帮助及具体行动方案,体现本单元“互助”的目标。
○ 格式:包含称呼、正文(情况说明+求助内容+行动方案)、结尾(呼吁+落款),符合书信格式。
○ 字数:80-120词,句子以简单句和复合句为主,合理运用连接词。
典型例题
学校有一位同学遇到了困难,需要大家的帮助。请你以学生会的名义写一封呼吁信,号召同学们伸出援手。
要点:
这位同学遇到了什么困难?
他/她需要什么样的帮助?
大家可以通过什么方式提供帮助?
思路点拨
开头:称呼读者,点明求助者的情况(困难),用It is + 形容词 + for sb to do说明帮助的必要性。
正文:说明所需帮助的具体内容,介绍计划的行动方案(如筹款活动)。
结尾:呼吁大家参与,用It is + 形容词 + of sb to do评价他人的善举,加上落款。
写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
第一段:求助者情况
• 写作目的:介绍求助者的困难,说明帮助的必要性。
• 必写要素:求助者身份 + 困难
• 基础句式:Dear all, A _______ (身份,如Grade 7 student) in our school needs our help. He/She suffers from _______ (困难,如a serious illness). It is necessary for us to give him/her a hand (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do,单元语法).
• 示例:Dear all, A Grade 7 student in our school needs our help. She suffers from a bad leg injury. It is necessary for us to give her a hand.
第二段:所需帮助与行动方案
• 写作目的:说明所需帮助及具体行动。
• 必写要素:所需帮助 + 行动方案
• 基础句式:She needs _______ (帮助,如money for treatment). We are planning _______ (行动,如a charity sale) next Friday. It is easy for everyone to take part (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do,单元语法)—just bring your old books or toys to sell.
• 示例:She needs money for treatment. We are planning a charity sale next Friday. It is easy for everyone to take part—just bring your old books or toys to sell.
第三段:呼吁与落款
• 写作目的:呼吁参与,评价善举。
• 必写要素:呼吁 + 落款
• 基础句式:It is kind of you to join us (It is + 形容词 + of sb to do,单元语法). Let’s help her together! The Students’ Union.
• 示例:It is kind of you to join us. Let’s help her together! The Students’ Union.
范文
英文
A Letter to Call for Help
Dear all,
A Grade 7 student in our school needs our help. She suffers from a bad leg injury and can’t walk. It is necessary for us to support her (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do,单元语法).
She needs money to buy a wheelchair. We are planning a charity sale next Friday in the playground. It is easy for everyone to take part (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do,单元语法)—just bring old things to sell.
It is kind of you to give a helping hand (It is + 形容词 + of sb to do,单元语法). Let’s help her stand up again!
The Students’ Union
中文翻译
一封求助呼吁信
亲爱的各位同学:
我们学校一名七年级的同学需要大家的帮助。她腿部受了重伤,无法行走。我们有必要向她伸出援手。
她需要钱买轮椅。我们计划下周五在操场举办一场慈善义卖。每个人都很容易参与——只需带来旧物品售卖即可。
你们能伸出援手真是太善良了。让我们一起帮她重新站起来!
学生会
素材积累
短语
call for help — 呼吁帮助
suffer from — 遭受(疾病/困难)
give a helping hand — 伸出援手
charity sale — 慈善义卖
take part — 参与
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
It is + 形容词 + for sb to do
It is important for us to raise money for him.
It is + 形容词 + of sb to do
It is nice of you to help the old man.
We are planning _______ to _______.
We are planning a book fair to collect money.
好句集锦
It is meaningful for us to help people in need (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do)—small acts can make a big difference.(帮助有需要的人对我们来说很有意义——小举动能带来大改变。)
It is generous of you to donate your things (It is + 形容词 + of sb to do) to the charity sale.(你们能把物品捐赠给慈善义卖,真是太慷慨了。)
谚语
Many hands make light work.(众人拾柴火焰高。)
学生写作填空练习版
A Letter to Call for Help
Dear all,
A _______ (身份,如Grade 8 student) in our school needs our help. He/She suffers from _______ (困难,如poor eyesight). It is _______ for us to help him/her (形容词,如important) (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do).
He/She needs _______ (帮助,如glasses). We are planning _______ (行动,如a donation activity) next Wednesday. It is _______ for everyone to join (形容词,如easy) (It is + 形容词 + for sb to do).
It is _______ of you to take part (形容词,如kind) (It is + 形容词 + of sb to do). Let’s help him/her!
The Students’ Union
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