Unit 1 写作专项：Great Changes in My Hometown 2025-2026学年译林版英语八年级下册

译林版八下Unit 1 写作专项 Great Changes in My Hometown 写作目标 结合本单元“描述家乡变化、运用现在完成时”的核心目标,能写一篇短文描述家乡这些年发生的巨大变化,内容包括:家乡过去与现在在居住、交通、环境等方面的差异,以及变化带来的影响。 1. 能正确使用现在完成时描述从过去持续到现在的变化(本单元核心语法); 2. 能运用本单元与家乡、变化相关的词汇(如take place, modern, narrow, wide, improve)撰写短文; 3. 能遵循短文的基本结构,语言流畅、逻辑清晰,贴合“介绍家乡变化”的日常写作场景。 题目解析 1. 体裁:说明文(短文),要求描述家乡的变化,需遵循“总-分-总”结构,契合本单元“运用现在完成时描述变化”的写作要求。 2. 人称:以第三人称(it, my hometown, people)为主,客观描述家乡变化;适当使用第一人称(I, we)表达个人感受,符合短文的人称使用规范。 3. 时态:核心用现在完成时描述从过去持续到现在的变化;用一般过去时描述家乡过去的状态,难度适配八年级学生水平。 4. 核心要求 ￮ 内容:写清家乡过去与现在在居住、交通、环境等方面的差异,说明变化带来的积极影响,体现本单元“关注家乡发展”的目标。 ￮ 格式:包含开头总起、正文分述、结尾总结,无需书信格式,贴合短文写作规范。 ￮ 字数:80-120词,句子以简单句和复合句为主,合理运用连接词。 典型例题 我们的家乡在过去几年里发生了巨大的变化,无论是居住条件、交通方式,还是周围的环境,都有了明显的改善。请你以Great Changes in My Hometown为题,写一篇短文,描述家乡的变化。 要点: 1. 家乡过去的居住条件、交通方式或环境是怎样的? 2. 家乡现在有哪些具体的变化? 3. 这些变化给人们的生活带来了什么影响? 4. 你对家乡的变化有什么感受或期待? 思路点拨 1. 开篇总起:首先总述家乡在过去几年里发生了巨大变化,开门见山点明写作主题,呼应本单元“描述家乡变化”的目标。 2. 正文分述:接着分角度对比家乡过去与现在的差异,可选择居住、交通、环境中的2-3个方面,运用现在完成时体现变化,用连接词使逻辑更清晰。 3. 结尾总结:然后说明这些变化给人们生活带来的积极影响,表达自己对家乡变化的自豪之情。 4. 升华期待:最后简单表达对家乡未来的美好祝愿,让短文结构更完整、情感更饱满。 写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标) 第一段:开篇总起 • 写作目的:总述家乡发生的巨大变化,点明写作主题,呼应本单元核心目标。 • 必写要素:总起句 + 变化的时间范围 • 基础句式:Many great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. • 示例:Many great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 10 years. It has become more and more beautiful. 第二段:正文分述 • 写作目的:对比家乡过去与现在的差异,运用现在完成时和一般过去时,运用本单元核心语法。 • 必写要素:过去的状态 + 现在的变化 + 连接词 • 基础句式:In the past, people lived in _(过去的居住条件). The streets were _(过去的环境). Now, most people live in _(现在的居住条件). The streets are _(现在的环境). • 示例:In the past, people lived in old and small houses. The streets were narrow and dirty. Now, most people live in new and tall buildings. The streets are wide and clean with many green trees. 第三段:结尾总结与期待 • 写作目的:说明变化的影响,表达个人感受和对家乡未来的期待,让短文结构完整。 • 必写要素:变化的影响 + 个人感受 + 美好祝愿 • 基础句式:These changes have made our life better. I love my hometown and I hope it will become better and better. • 示例:These changes have made our life more convenient and comfortable. I am proud of my hometown and hope it will have a brighter future. 范文 英文 Great Changes in My Hometown Many great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 10 years.(现在完成时,本单元语法) In the past, people lived in old and small houses. The streets were narrow and dirty, and there were few trees. Now, most people live in new and tall buildings. The streets are wide and clean with many green trees and beautiful flowers. Years ago, people usually went out by bike or on foot, but now we can take buses easily and many families have their own cars.(对比过去与现在,运用连接词) These changes have made our life more convenient and comfortable.(现在完成时,说明变化的影响)I love my hometown and I am proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better in the future. 中文翻译 我家乡的巨大变化 在过去的10年里,我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 过去,人们住在又旧又小的房子里。街道又窄又脏,而且几乎没有树。现在,大多数人住在新的高楼里。街道宽阔干净,种满了绿树和美丽的鲜花。多年前,人们通常骑自行车或步行出门,但现在我们可以轻松地乘坐公交车,很多家庭都有了自己的汽车。 这些变化让我们的生活变得更加便捷和舒适。我爱我的家乡,我为它的变化感到自豪。我希望它在未来会变得越来越好。 素材积累 短语 1. take place — 发生 2. over the past few years — 在过去的几年里 3. old and small houses — 又旧又小的房子 4. new and tall buildings — 新的高楼 5. narrow and dirty — 又窄又脏 6. wide and clean — 宽阔干净 7. by bike or on foot — 骑自行车或步行 8. make life better — 让生活更美好 9. be proud of — 为……感到自豪 10. brighter future — 更美好的未来 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 Many great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. Many great changes have taken place in our school over the past few years. In the past, people lived in old houses. Now, they live in new buildings. In the past, we studied in small classrooms. Now, we study in big and bright classrooms. I am proud of my hometown and hope it will become better and better. I am proud of my school and hope it will become more and more beautiful. 好句集锦 1. With the development of society, my hometown has changed greatly in many ways.(随着社会的发展,我的家乡在很多方面都发生了巨大的变化。) 2. The environment in my hometown has become much better, and people are living a happier life now.(我家乡的环境变得越来越好,人们现在过着更幸福的生活。) 3. From old houses to new buildings, from narrow streets to wide roads, every change shows the progress of my hometown.(从旧房子到新房子,从窄街道到宽马路,每一个变化都展现了家乡的进步。) 4. These great changes not only improve our living conditions but also make us love our hometown more deeply.(这些巨大的变化不仅改善了我们的居住条件,也让我们更深深地爱着自己的家乡。) 谚语 1. East or west, home is best.(金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。) 2. A tree grows from a seed, and a strong hometown comes from small changes.(树从种子长起,富强的家乡源于点滴变化。) 学生写作填空练习版 Great Changes in My Hometown Many great changes have _(发生,如taken place) in my hometown over the past 10 years. In the past, people lived in _(过去的居住条件,如old and small houses). The streets were _(过去的环境,如narrow and dirty). Now, most people live in _(现在的居住条件,如new and tall buildings). The streets are _(现在的环境,如wide and clean) with many green trees. Years ago, people usually went out by _(过去的交通方式,如bike or on foot), but now we can take _(现在的交通方式,如buses) easily. These changes have made our life _(变化的影响,如more convenient). I love my hometown and I am _(个人感受,如proud of) its changes. I hope it will become _(美好祝愿,如better and better) in the future. ( 1 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $