Unit 4 写作专项学案：Growing up Writing Special Study Guide 2025-2026学年译林版英语九年级上册

Unit 4 写作专项学案：Growing up Writing Special Study Guide 写作目标 结合本单元“成长”主题，写一篇班级分享稿，介绍对自己影响最深的人、具体事例及成长收获，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“成长与影响”相关核心词汇（如influence、grow up、courage、perseverance、achieve、overcome、devote、respect、inspire、challenge等）及短语（never give up、take notice of、succeed in、take part in、deal with、grow through等）； 2.能熟练运用before/after/when/while/since等连词引导时间状语从句，用现在完成时描述持续影响，用一般过去时叙述具体事例； 3.能按“人物介绍→影响事例→成长感悟”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“坚持与榜样助力成长”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：叙事类分享稿，兼具纪实性与感悟性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享个人成长经历与感悟）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1位影响最深的人（家人/老师/名人等）、1-2个具体影响事例、1-2个成长收获（品质/技能/认知）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，时态运用准确，事例具体生动，情感真挚，体现成长的积极变化。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确介绍对自己影响最深的人（参考课本Spud Webb坚持追梦、Anne Frank勇敢面对困境等案例），用简洁语言概括人物的核心品质及对自己的整体影响； 2.中间：结合具体事例展开叙述（如榜样的坚持故事、他人的帮助场景），用时间状语从句衔接事件逻辑，用细节描写（动作/语言/场景）增强画面感，体现人物如何影响自己； 3.结尾：分享成长收获（如学会坚持、变得勇敢、懂得感恩），呼应单元“成长路上，榜样与坚持缺一不可”的核心主题，表达对人物的感激与持续成长的决心。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 第一段：人物介绍与整体影响 基础句式：The person who has influenced me most is ________. He/She is ________ (身份) and has always been ________ (核心品质，如hard-working/brave/perseverant). Since I first met him/her, he/she has taught me the importance of ________, which has guided me a lot in my growth. 示例：The person who has influenced me most is my uncle. He is a former basketball player and has always been perseverant. Since I was a child, he has taught me the importance of never giving up, which has guided me a lot in my growth. 第二段：具体影响事例 基础句式：I still remember when ________ (场景). At that time, I ________ (遇到的困难/状态). He/She ________ (人物的行为/鼓励), and after that, I ________ (自己的改变/行动). While I was struggling, his/her words "________" kept me going. Finally, I succeeded in ________ (成果). 示例：I still remember when I tried out for the school basketball team. At that time, I was too short and was refused at first. He practiced with me every evening, taught me skills and told me "Size doesn’t matter if you work hard enough". While I was about to give up, his patience and encouragement kept me going. Finally, I succeeded in joining the team a year later. 第三段：成长感悟与感恩 基础句式：This experience made me realize that ________ (成长感悟1). I not only learned to ________ (技能/品质) but also understood that ________ (成长感悟2). I will always respect and thank him/her. In the future, I will keep his/her teachings in mind and face any challenges bravely—growing up with his/her influence is the greatest gift for me! 示例：This experience made me realize that perseverance can overcome any difficulties. I not only learned to play basketball well but also understood that success comes from continuous effort. I will always respect and thank my uncle. In the future, I will keep his teachings in mind and face any challenges bravely—growing up with his influence is the greatest gift for me! 范文 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb, the shortest player in the NBA. He was born with a small figure but held a big dream of playing basketball. His story of never giving up has deeply inspired me since I read about him. When I was in Grade 8, I wanted to learn to play the piano but gave up quickly because it was too difficult. Then I learned that Spud was refused many times for his height but never lost heart—he practiced harder and finally succeeded in entering the NBA. After knowing his story, I decided to try again. While I struggled with difficult pieces, I always thought of his perseverance. I practiced every day, and half a year later, I could play my favorite song smoothly. Spud Webb taught me that dreams are not limited by conditions. I learned to be persistent and brave in the face of failures. His story tells me that as long as we never give up, we can achieve almost anything. I will carry this spirit in my growth and keep chasing my dreams! 范文中文翻译 对我影响最深的人 对我影响最深的人是斯巴德·韦伯，NBA历史上最矮的球员。他天生身材矮小，却怀揣着打篮球的远大梦想。自从读到他的故事，他永不放弃的精神就深深鼓舞了我。 八年级时，我想学钢琴，但因为太难很快就放弃了。后来我了解到，斯巴德因为身高多次被拒绝，却从未灰心——他更加刻苦地训练，最终成功进入了NBA。了解他的故事后，我决定重新尝试。当我为难度大的曲子发愁时，总会想到他的坚持。我每天坚持练习，半年后，我终于能流畅地弹奏我最爱的曲子了。 斯巴德·韦伯让我明白，梦想不受条件限制。我学会了坚持不懈，在失败面前勇敢前行。他的故事告诉我，只要永不放弃，几乎没有什么做不到的事。我会在成长路上带着这种精神，继续追逐自己的梦想！ 素材积累 核心短语 never give up 永不放弃 take part in 参加 succeed in 成功做到 face challenges 面对挑战 overcome difficulties 克服困难 keep going 坚持下去 inspire sb deeply 深深鼓舞某人 continuous effort 持续努力 chase dreams 追逐梦想 guided by 受……指引 struggle with 与……抗争 practice hard 刻苦练习 grow through 从……中成长 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 The person who has influenced me most is ________ because ________. The person who has influenced me most is my teacher because she always encourages me. Since I ________, he/she has taught me to ________. Since I was a pupil, she has taught me to be kind to others. While I was ________, he/she ________ which helped me ________. While I was feeling hopeless, he gave me advice which helped me cheer up. After ________, I realized that ________. After overcoming the difficulty, I realized that perseverance is important. I will keep ________ in mind and ________. I will keep his words in mind and work hard for my goals. 好句集锦 1.Growth is a journey full of challenges, and a good influence is like a light that guides us forward. 2.The greatest gift from a role model is not just their achievements, but the spirit that inspires us to become better. 3.Every difficulty we overcome with courage is a step closer to maturity—this is the true meaning of growing up. 谚语 1.Where there’s a will, there’s a way.（有志者事竟成） 2.Perseverance prevails where force fails.（毅力胜蛮力） 学生写作填空练习版 The Person Who Shaped My Growth The person who has influenced me most is ________. He/She is ________ and has always been ________. Since I ________, he/she has been a great guide in my life. I still remember when ________. At that time, I ________ and wanted to give up. He/She ________ and said to me, "________". While I was ________, his/her support gave me strength. Finally, I ________. This experience made me learn ________. I not only became ________ but also understood that ________. I am very grateful to him/her. In the future, I will ________ and face all difficulties bravely. Growing up with his/her influence makes me a better person! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $