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Unit 5 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“野生动物”主题,写一篇班级分享稿,介绍一种野生动物、其生存现状及保护措施,达成以下目标: 1.能正确使用本单元“野生动物与保护”相关核心词汇(如wild animal、survive、danger、protect、reserve、habitat、pollution、harm、species、conservation等)及短语; 2.能熟练运用动词不定式(表目的/宾语/宾补),用后缀-ing/-ness/-ion构成名词丰富表达,用一般现在时描述动物特征与现状; 3.能按“动物介绍 生存困境 保护行动”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“人与自然和谐共生”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁:说明类分享稿,兼具纪实性与呼吁性; 2.人称:第一人称复数(强调集体责任)与第三人称(描述动物)结合; 3.核心要求 ○ 内容:覆盖“1种野生动物(如大熊猫、北极熊、丹顶鹤等)、2-3个生存困境、1-2个具体保护措施”3个要点; ○ 字数:80–100词,时态运用准确,细节真实具体,情感真挚,体现对野生动物保护的重视。 思路点拨 1.开头:明确介绍的野生动物名称及基本特征(外形、习性、栖息地,参考课本大熊猫、北极熊等案例),用简洁语言概括其整体生存状况; 2.中间:结合课本核心知识点,分析动物面临的生存困境(如栖息地减少、污染、捕猎等),用动词不定式表达保护目的,用具体数据或场景增强说服力; 3.结尾:分享已采取的保护行动及个人可参与的方式,呼应单元“人类与动物是同一片天空下的家人”的核心主题,呼吁共同守护野生动物。 写作模板(逐段拆解) 第一段:动物介绍 基础句式:One of the most lovely wild animals in the world is _. They mainly live in _ and feed on _. With _ (外形特征), they look very cute. However, these lovely animals are now in great danger. 示例:One of the most lovely wild animals in the world is the giant panda. They mainly live in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces of China and feed on bamboo. With round faces and black-and-white fur, they look very cute. However, these lovely animals are now in great danger. 第二段:生存困境 基础句式:There are many reasons for their danger. First, _ (困境1, 如habitat loss). Second, _ (困境2, 如pollution). What’s worse, some people _ (困境3, 如hunt them). As a result, the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller. 示例:There are many reasons for their danger. First, their bamboo habitats are getting smaller because of human activities. Second, water pollution makes their living environment worse. What’s worse, illegal hunting once hurt their population. As a result, the number of them is still very small. 第三段:保护行动与呼吁 基础句式:Luckily, people have taken action to protect them. The government has set up _ (保护措施1, 如nature reserves) and made laws to _ (保护措施2). We can also help by _ (个人行动). It’s our duty to protect wild animals—they are our friends! 示例:Luckily, people have taken action to protect them. The government has set up many nature reserves and made laws to stop hunting. We can also help by not buying products made from wild animals and spreading protection knowledge. It’s our duty to protect wild animals—they are our friends! 范文 Protect Giant Pandas—Our National Treasure Giant pandas are China’s national treasures and loved by people all over the world. They live in the mountainous areas of southwest China and mainly feed on bamboo. With their fluffy black-and-white fur and round black eyes, they look like living toys. However, giant pandas face serious survival problems. Their bamboo forests are shrinking as humans take more land for farming and building. It’s also difficult for them to have babies, and baby pandas are easy to get sick. Pollution also harms their living environment. At one point, their number dropped to less than 1,000 in the wild. Thanks to great efforts, things are getting better. The government has built over 60 nature reserves for pandas, and scientists help female pandas have more healthy babies. We can do our part by saving paper to protect bamboo forests and telling others about panda protection. Let’s work together to make sure giant pandas never disappear! 范文中文翻译 保护大熊猫——我们的国宝 大熊猫是中国的国宝,深受全世界人民的喜爱。它们生活在中国西南部的山区,主要以竹子为食。蓬松的黑白皮毛和圆圆的黑眼睛,让它们看起来就像活的玩具。 然而,大熊猫面临着严重的生存问题。随着人类占用更多土地用于耕种和建设,它们的竹林正在不断缩小。它们繁殖后代也很困难,熊猫宝宝还容易生病。污染也破坏了它们的生存环境。曾有一段时间,它们的野外数量不足1000只。 多亏了各方的巨大努力,情况正在好转。政府已经为大熊猫建立了60多个自然保护区,科学家们也在帮助雌性大熊猫孕育更多健康的宝宝。我们也可以尽一份力:节约用纸以保护竹林,向他人宣传熊猫保护知识。让我们携手合作,确保大熊猫永远不会消失! 素材积累 核心短语 national treasure 国宝 nature reserve 自然保护区 living environment 生存环境 illegal hunting 非法捕猎 bamboo forest 竹林 shrinking habitat 不断缩小的栖息地 wild population 野外种群 spread protection knowledge 宣传保护知识 take action 采取行动 set up 建立 feed on 以……为食 in great danger 处于极大危险中 human activity 人类活动 基础句型(含本单元重点) 基础句型 仿写句子 _ are one of the most _ wild animals in the world. Polar bears are one of the most amazing wild animals in the world. They mainly live in _ and feed on _. They mainly live in the Arctic and feed on seals. The number of _ is becoming _. The number of red-crowned cranes is becoming larger. We should _ to protect _. We should plant more trees to protect birds habitats. The government has made laws to _. The government has made laws to stop harming wild animals. 好句集锦 1.Wild animals are an important part of nature—losing them means losing part of our world. 2.Every small action to protect wild animals counts—saving one animal may save an entire species. 3.Protecting wild animals is not just a duty, but a way to protect our own living environment. 谚语 1.Humans and animals are family under the same sky.(人类与动物是同一片天空下的家人) 2.Where there is Xiwang, there is hope.(熊猫在,希望在) 学生写作填空练习版 Protect Our Wild Animal Friends One of the most precious wild animals is _. They mainly live in _ and feed on _. With _, they are very special and lovely. But now they are in great danger. The main problems they face are _ and _. Humans’ activities make their _ smaller and smaller. Some people even _ them for _. As a result, their number is dropping quickly. To save these animals, the government has _ and _. We can also help by _ and _. Protecting wild animals is everyone’s duty. Let’s take action now to _ them and make the world a better place for all living things! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $