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Unit 5 Wild animals 写作篇(野生动物保护)
【话题解读】
本单元的话题是“野生动物”。Reading中的“Xiwang in safe hands”,话题为“野生动物保护”,体裁为夹叙夹议文。短文具体围绕大熊猫的生存状况展开,既包含人工养育下熊猫的成长细节,也涉及野生大熊猫的生存困境及保护措施。Word power中的“a letterfrom the Wild Animals Club”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”,体裁为应用文的倡议书(信),以野生动物俱乐部的名义向大众发出公开信,围绕 “捕猎导致野生动物濒危,呼吁人类参与保护”展开,强调野生动物与人类的友好关系及保护的必要性。Integration中的“Protecting wild animals”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”,体裁为说明文(夹有呼吁的意味)。文章以第一人称“我们(两种野生动物)”的视角,客观说明了“我们”的生存环境、习性及面临的威胁,同时隐含对自身生存状况的担忧。Integration中的另一篇“Amy wrote a letter on behalf of an Indian rhino.”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”。体裁为应用文的书信(求助信)。该文以印度犀牛“莉拉”的口吻给人类写了一封求助信,信中用第一人称叙述自身遭遇和诉求(野生印度犀牛的生存困境及保护诉求),具有较强的情感表达和呼吁性。
从以上分析,不难看出,围绕“野生动物保护”的话题从体裁上来说:可以是记叙文、说明文以及应用文的书信和倡议书等等。范文“Amy wrote a letter on behalf of an Indian rhino.”为我们的话题写作提供了一个很好的范例,典型的三段论:说明你是什么动物,住在哪里,吃什么,以及为什么写这封信;描述“你”正面临什么问题以及这些问题是由什么引起的;描述人类已经为帮助“你”做了些什么,以及“你”还希望人类做些什么。
【常用素材】
以下选自本单元的素材
dolphin eagle fox
rhino shark whale
wolf zebra horn
blue whale giant panda meat-eater
polar bear
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drop hunt increase
melt
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action birth effort
government growth illness
pollution protection reason
risk result
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giant sick serious
satisfying tiny wild
easily mainly
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in the wild in danger at risk
natural disasters weather events as a result
may not have enough food to eat
travel a long way to find food
take more land for their own use
make things like bags and shoes from the fur or skin of wild animals
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how to protect wild animals
ask for one’s help/ask sb. (not) to do sth.
take action/make laws to protect ...
against the law to do sth.
nature reserve
more nature reserves for animals to live in
give sb. round-the-clock care
stop sb. from doing sth.
China’s efforts to protect giant pandas
work hard to help .../manage to do sth./try to do sth.
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understand the importance of protecting animals
under the same sky
on the planet/all over the world
among the smartest animals on earth
for many reasons
nothing more satisfying than seeing
以下选自各地试题书面表达参考答案中的素材
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野生动物面临的问题及原因
1. However, animals are facing serious problems now because their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. 然而,动物们现在正面临严重的问题,因为它们的栖息地变得越来越小。
2. In addition, natural disasters happen often because of the changeable weather. As a result, animals have nowhere to live or food to eat.此外,由于多变的天气,自然灾害频繁发生。结果,动物们无处可住,无食可吃。
3. Also, some people catch them for fun.而且,一些人捕捉它们取乐。
4. I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas.
我认为世界上有许多濒危动物,比如老虎和熊猫。
5. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt.
当农民砍伐树木时,老虎再也无法隐藏和捕猎。
6. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.
许多老虎被想卖它们的皮毛赚钱的人杀死。
7. And there are few places where pandas can live.而且熊猫能居住的地方很少。
8. But today some wild animals are facing serious problems.但如今一些野生动物正面临严重的问题。
9. Many rivers are polluted by factories.许多河流被工厂所污染。
10. Sadly, African elephants are in danger now.遗憾的是,非洲象现在处于危险之中。
11. People hunt them for their ivory.人们为了它们的象牙而捕猎它们。
12. Also, their homes are being destroyed.而且,它们的家园正在被破坏。
13. However, many of them are in danger now.然而,它们中的许多现在处于危险之中。
14. They are losing their homes because people cut down a lot of forests, and they get sick from dirty air and water. 它们正在失去家园,因为人们砍伐了大量森林,它们还因污浊的空气和水而生病。
15. Many wild animals don’t have enough places to live.许多野生动物没有足够的地方居住。
16. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings.
人们不断侵占它们的栖息地,为农场和建筑腾出更多空间。
17. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their body.
人们为了它们的皮毛、骨头或身体的其他部位而捕猎野生动物。
18. Sadly, tigers are in danger.遗憾的是,老虎处于危险之中。
19. The main reasons are habitat loss from deforestation, pollution, and illegal hunting.
主要原因是森林砍伐导致的栖息地丧失、污染和非法捕猎。
20. Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones.
现在老虎处于危险之中,因为猎人正在为了它们的皮毛和骨头而捕猎它们。
21. Nowadays, many wild animals are endangered. Some are even dying out.
如今,许多野生动物濒临灭绝。有些甚至正在消失。
22. First, people cut down forests, so animals lose their homes.首先,人们砍伐森林,所以动物失去了家园。
23. Second, some hunt animals for fur or food.其次,一些人为了皮毛或食物而捕猎动物。
24. Francois’ langurs are becoming fewer and fewer.黑叶猴的数量越来越少。
25. They are in great danger.它们处于极大的危险之中。
26. Many animals, such as orangutans, are listed as critically endangered due to human activities like hunting, deforestation, and environmental pollution.许多动物,如红毛猩猩,由于捕猎、森林砍伐和环境污染等人类活动而被列为极度濒危物种。
27. But now, golden monkeys are one of the animals in danger. Some people kill them for their fur. Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of deforestation.但现在,金丝猴是濒危动物之一。一些人为了它们的皮毛而猎杀它们。由于森林砍伐,它们的栖息地越来越少。
28. But because their living places were lost and people hunted them too much, they sadly disappeared during the Ming and Qing Dynasties.但由于它们的栖息地丧失以及人们过度猎杀,它们在明清时期不幸消失了。
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保护野生动物的重要性
1. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us.
没有周围的动植物,我们人类无法生存。
2. So protecting wildlife animals is very important.所以保护野生动物非常重要。
3. We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature.我们保护野生动物,不仅因为野生动物是我们的朋友,还因为野生动物有助于维持人类与自然之间的平衡。
4. As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them.
在我看来,动物是人类最好的朋友。保护它们对我们来说非常重要。
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保护野生动物的措施(个人与社会)
1. I will ask my mother not to buy clothes made of animals’ fur any more.
我会让妈妈再也不买动物皮毛做的衣服。
2. I plan to write to the government to ask them to make laws to protect the environment.
我计划给政府写信,要求他们制定法律来保护环境。
3. To protect them, I participate in tree planting activities, volunteer at local animal shelters, and promote wildlife protection through social media and public events.为了保护它们,我参加植树活动,在当地动物收容所做志愿者,并通过社交媒体和公共活动宣传野生动物保护。
4. I plan to organize educational activities at schools and communities to raise awareness about the importance of wildlife conservation. 我计划在学校和社区组织教育活动,提高人们对野生动物保护重要性的认识。
5. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed.
我们必须采取措施防止植物被破坏,阻止动物被杀害。
6. We should actively do volunteer activities and distribute posters telling people to love wild animals.
我们应该积极参加志愿活动,分发海报告诉人们要爱护野生动物。
7. We should also do more research to protect them and build more reserves for them.
我们也应该做更多的研究来保护它们,为它们建立更多的保护区。
8. To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and protect their living areas.
为了保护它们,我们应该停止非法捕猎,保护它们的栖息地。
9. First, save paper by using both sides. This helps protect animals’ home-forests.
首先,双面用纸来节约纸张。这有助于保护动物的家园——森林。
10. Second, never buy things like animal fur or tiger bones.其次,绝不购买动物皮毛或虎骨之类的东西。
11. To help them live safely, we need to create better homes for them.
为了帮助它们安全生活,我们需要为它们创造更好的家园。
12. First, we shouldn’t buy fur coats any more.首先,我们不应该再买皮草大衣了。
13. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice.其次,我们可以给政府写信并提出一些建议。
14. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
我们可以制作一些海报,让其他人知道保护它们的重要性。
15. Firstly, we should plant more trees, reduce pollution, and stop buying wildlife products like ivory.
首先,我们应该多种树,减少污染,停止购买象牙等野生动物制品。
16. Finally, the government should make some laws on wild animal protection.
最后,政府应该制定一些野生动物保护的法律。
17. We should make some nature reserves for them.我们应该为它们建立一些自然保护区。
18. We should not wear tiger furs or use their bones for medicine.
我们不应该穿虎皮,也不应该用它们的骨头做药材。
19. We should build more nature reserves to protect habitats.我们应该建立更多的自然保护区来保护栖息地。
20. Also, never buy products made from endangered animals.而且,绝不购买濒危动物制成的产品。
21. We should take action to protect them.我们应该采取行动保护它们。
22. To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution.
为了保护这些动物,政府应该制定严格的法律来防止捕猎和减少污染。
23. Our government should make strict laws to stop deforestation and hunting.
我们的政府应该制定严格的法律来阻止森林砍伐和猎杀行为。
24. At the same time, we should tell more people about the importance of protecting golden monkeys and call on them to take action.同时,我们应该告诉更多人保护金丝猴的重要性,并呼吁他们采取行动。
25. Under the state protection, including special care and safe living areas, their number has been growing every year.在国家保护下,包括特殊的照料和安全的栖息地,它们的数量每年都在增长。
【写作通式】一
_________(动物名)are very _________(动物体形特征的描述:cute/lovely/strong/with ... hair/fur/feathers). Their _________(身体的若干部位的描述:tails/legs/necks/eyes)are _________<特征描述>). They _________ (生活习性描述:居住地点、活动方式、喜欢吃的东西等).
But now, _________(生存现状的描述:one of the animals in danger). Some people kill them for their _________(诱因1) . Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of _________(诱因2) .
As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them. Our government should _________(改善动物生存举措1). At the same time, we should _________(改善动物生存举措2).
I wish _________(动物名称)can live happily and their numbers will become larger and larger.
【范文示例】
5月22日是世界野生动物保护日,某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国宝级保护动物金丝猴也被列为濒危动物,请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
名称:金丝猴(golden monkey)
居住地:中国西南地区
外貌:身体瘦长,尾巴与体长相当,毛灰黄色。
生活习性:群居;吃昆虫(insects)、鸟,树叶、水果等
濒危原因:由于滥伐森林(deforestation),它们的居住地遭到破坏;人类猎杀获取它们的毛皮(fur),数量减少。
要求:1. 内容应包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【写作通式】二
_________(动物名)is a _________(动物特征:rare/common/unique)animal with a long history. Long ago, it _________(过去的情况:was very common/lived widely in.../was seen in many places...)across/all over the country/world. But because _________(导致不好变化的原因:their living environment was destroyed/people killed them for...), it _________(过去的不好结果:became fewer and fewer/almost disappeared...).
Luckily, _________(情形的转变:was brought back from ... to .../people started to protect it/it was taken to... for protection). Unde the state protection/Under the protection of the government/With the help of the government, _________(保护措施). _________(现在的情况:its number is increasing/it has a better life...). Now, _________(现在的具体状况).
I hope _________(自己的希望).
【范文示例】
根据提示写一篇有关麋鹿的英语短文向你校英文报投稿。
提示:
麋鹿(Milu deer)
过去
麋鹿是一种珍稀动物,很久以前在中国很常见,但消失于明、清朝(dynasty)。
现在
●1985年第一头麋鹿从英国到了南海子麋鹿园,受到政府的保护,麋鹿数量日益增多;
●全国现在有三个麋鹿园:一个在四川,一个在北京附近,一个在江苏。
未来
它们能再次生活在自然环境中……
要求:1. 内容应包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100。
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【写作通式】三
As we know, wild animals are our good friends, but now many of them are in great danger/in a dangerous situation/at risk.
There are some natural reasons like ilnesses and natural disasters, but human activities are the biggest reason.
When people _________(人类具体行为 1。如:take land for their own use, wild animals may lose thie homes).
People _________(人类具体行为 2。如:hunt many of them for their ...). As a result, _________(后果1。如:not have a place to live or enough food to eat)._________(后果2。如:The number of them ...)
或者:There are several reasons for this. On one hand, some _________(自然因素:natural disasters/serious diseases)make their lives hard. On the other hand, _________(人类活动:human activities) are more harmful. People _________(具体人类行为 1。如:cut down too many trees and take away their living land), so wild animals lose their homes. What’s worse, some people _________(人类具体行为 2。如:hunt many of them for their fur/meat/sell them for money). As a result, the number of wild animals is _________(数量变化。如:getting smaller and smaller/decreasing quickly).
As students, we should take action to save wild animals. First, we should _________(措施1。如:stop buying products made from wild animals). Second, we don’t _________(措施2。如:do bad things to their living space). Last but at least, we should _________(措施3。如:call on everybody to know the importance of protecting wild animals).
或者:It’s time for us to save wild animals. First, we should _________(措施 1。如:stop buying things made from wild animals). Second, we can _________(措施2。如:plant more trees to build more homes for them). Besides, we need to _________(措施3。如:make people be more aware of the importance of protecting wild animals).
【范文示例】
人和动物共同生活在这个地球上,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以“Saving wild animals”为主题的征文活动,现请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇英语短文,发出倡议,呼吁人们热爱野生动物、保护野生动物。
提示:1. 野生动物面临哪些危险?(至少2点)
2. 作为学生,我们可以采取哪些行动保护野生动物?(至少3点)
要求: 1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所提示的信息,并适当发挥;
3. 字数100左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Saving wild animals
Dear fellows,
As we all know, humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the animals are in danger.
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Unit 5 Wild animals 写作篇(野生动物保护)
【实践演练】1
假定你是李辉,是一名野生动物俱乐部的学生。你校即将举行有关野生动物的演讲比赛,请你结合下图信息,用英语写一篇有关黑叶猴(Francois’ langur)的短文,并分享你的感受。
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Francois’ langurs are becoming fewer and fewer. ______________________________________________
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【实践演练】2
阳光中学英语俱乐部发布一则公告,假如你是李华,请根据公告内容用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
Notice
Good news for you. Our club is working with Sunshine Zoo now. It needs some volunteers to introduce its wild animals in English. You can choose one of them to describe. The article should include the animal’s name, looks, living habits, the danger it may face and the action we take and so on.
We hope all of you can join us.
Sunshine Middle School English Club
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 字数100左右。
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【实践演练】3
北京时间4月27日16时26分,23岁的旅美归国大熊猫“丫丫”抵达上海浦东国际机场。据了解,中美开展大熊猫合作研究二十年来,为促进濒危物种保护研究发挥了积极作用。保护野生动物这一话题再次走进人们的视野。那么我们应该如何保护野生动物,尤其是濒危动物(endangered animals) 呢?
假设你是李华,请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇倡议书,呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物,内容可适当发挥。
动物现状及被捕杀原因
被捕杀,失去家园,濒临灭绝……
1. 被肉食
2. 为了得到皮毛……
保护措施
1. 不杀害濒危动物
2. 不砍伐森林
3. 不污染环境……
呼吁
……
注意:1. 短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数80—100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
Animals are good friends to human beings, but __________________________________________________
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Thank you!
Li Hua
【实践演练】4
你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?”为题,写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容:1. 为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中?
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要?
3. 我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物?
写作要求:1. 不得照抄原文;不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 条理清晰,意思连贯,词数70个左右。
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?
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【实践演练】5
话题延申
假如你是李华,你对野生动物很感兴趣。寒假中,你将邀请Henry在一起研究你最喜欢的一种野生动物,请根据下图完成电子邮件。
注意事项:1. 邮件须包括所给提示内容,可作适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于90,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件不使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
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I will be very happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【实践演练】6
话题延申
镇江野生动物保护协会招募志愿者。假如你是镇江的一名学生李明,想要参加协会为保护动物尽一份力。请你根据提示信息完成一封申请信,介绍自己的情况并说明申请理由。
要求:1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,需适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。
2. 词数:90词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Zhenjiang Wildlife Protection Society. My name is Li Ming. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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Unit 5 Wild animals 写作篇(野生动物保护)
【实践演练】1
假定你是李辉,是一名野生动物俱乐部的学生。你校即将举行有关野生动物的演讲比赛,请你结合下图信息,用英语写一篇有关黑叶猴(Francois’ langur)的短文,并分享你的感受。
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Francois’ langurs are becoming fewer and fewer. ______________________________________________
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【答案】
Francois’ langurs are becoming fewer and fewer. They live in some areas in Guizhou and Guangxi. Though the adult monkeys are black, their babies are golden at birth. Later their hair will gradually turn black. Adult monkeys are about 50 to 60cm in length and 8 to 10kg in weight.
They are not only good at climbing, but also good at jumping. They mainly feed on leaves and fruit. At night, they sleep in caves instead of trees. They are first-class protected wild animals in China. They are in great danger. We should take action to protect them.
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏各个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,首先介绍黑叶猴的分布区域和外形特征;
第二步,具体介绍黑叶猴的生活习性;
第三步,呼吁大家保护黑叶猴。
【亮点词汇】
①at birth出生时
②in length长度上
③in weight重量上
④feed on以……为食
⑤instead of代替
【高分句型】
①Though the adult monkeys are black, their babies are golden at birth.(though引导让步状语从句)
②They are not only good at climbing, but also good at jumping. (not only ... but also ...句型)
套用通式一【答案】
Francois’ langurs are very lovely. Their bodies are 50-60 cm long when adult, and they weigh 8-10 kg. They have golden fur when born, which turns black gradually. They are good at climbing and jumping, living in Guizhou and Guangxi, and mainly eat leaves and fruits.
But now, they are one of the animals in danger. Some people kill them for their fur. Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of deforestation.
As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them. Our government should make strict laws to stop hunting. At the same time, we should tell others the importance of protecting them.
I wish Francois’ langurs can live happily and their numbers will become larger and larger.
【实践演练】2
阳光中学英语俱乐部发布一则公告,假如你是李华,请根据公告内容用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
Notice
Good news for you. Our club is working with Sunshine Zoo now. It needs some volunteers to introduce its wild animals in English. You can choose one of them to describe. The article should include the animal’s name, looks, living habits, the danger it may face and the action we take and so on.
We hope all of you can join us.
Sunshine Middle School English Club
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 字数100左右。
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【答案】
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. I will introduce you a wild animal today.
The animal I choose is the African elephant. It is the largest land animal in the world. It has big ears, long trunks and strong legs. African elephants usually live in the grasslands of Africa. They move in groups and eat plants, grass and fruit. Sadly, African elephants are in danger now. People hunt them for their ivory. Also, their homes are being destroyed.
To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and protect their living areas. We can also tell more people to care for wild animals. Let’s work together to save African elephants!
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,点明主题,介绍动物名称;
第二步,描述动物外貌和生活习性,说明动物面临的危险;
第四步,提出保护动物的措施,总结呼吁保护动物。
【亮点词汇】
①in danger处于危险之中
②hunt…for…为了某物而捕猎……
③care for 关心
【高分句型】
①The animal I choose is the African elephant.(定语从句)
②To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and protect their living areas.(不定式作目的状语)
③Let’s work together to save African elephants!(祈使句)
套用通式二【答案】
Tigers are very strong. Their tails are long and their fur has black stripes. They live in forests and like eating meat, usually hunting other animals.
But now, tigers are one of the animals in danger. Some people kill them for their fur. Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of deforestation.
As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them. Our government should make strict laws to stop hunting. At the same time, we should plant more trees to build homes for them.
I wish tigers can live happily and their numbers will become larger and larger.
【实践演练】3
北京时间4月27日16时26分,23岁的旅美归国大熊猫“丫丫”抵达上海浦东国际机场。据了解,中美开展大熊猫合作研究二十年来,为促进濒危物种保护研究发挥了积极作用。保护野生动物这一话题再次走进人们的视野。那么我们应该如何保护野生动物,尤其是濒危动物(endangered animals) 呢?
假设你是李华,请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇倡议书,呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物,内容可适当发挥。
动物现状及被捕杀原因
被捕杀,失去家园,濒临灭绝……
1. 被肉食
2. 为了得到皮毛……
保护措施
1. 不杀害濒危动物
2. 不砍伐森林
3. 不污染环境……
呼吁
……
注意:1. 短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数80—100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
Animals are good friends to human beings, but __________________________________________________
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Thank you!
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
Animals are good friends to human beings, but people kill too many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Animals have no place to live. So they are becoming fewer and fewer. It is not right to kill animals. So people should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo. Besides, people should stop polluting the environment. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.
Small actions can make a great difference to the earth. Let’s take action immediately.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,内容可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步,整体说明动物现状及被捕杀原因;
第二步,具体给出保护措施;
第三步,最后呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物。
【亮点词汇】
①cut down砍倒
②stop doing sth停止做某事
③in order to为了
④make a great difference产生巨大的影响
【高分句型】
①Animals are good friends to human beings, but people kill too many of them for their meat or fur.
(but连接的并列句,表示转折关系)
②In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo.
(动词不定式作目的状语,含有情态动词的被动语态)
套用通式三【答案】
As we know, wild animals are our good friends, but now many of them are in great danger.
There are some natural reasons like illnesses and natural disasters, but human activities are the biggest reason. When people cut down forests to build houses, wild animals may lose their homes. People kill tigers for their meat and fur. As a result, they don’t have a place to live or enough food to eat. The number of them is getting smaller and smaller.
As students, we should take action to save wild animals. First, we should never kill endangered animals. Second, we don’t cut down forests where they live. Last but not least, we should tell others not to pollute their living environment.
I hope more people will join us to protect wild animals.
【实践演练】4
你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?”为题,写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容:1. 为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中?
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要?
3. 我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物?
写作要求:1. 不得照抄原文;不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 条理清晰,意思连贯,词数70个左右。
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?
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【答案】
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals?
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图,举例说明现在有很多动物濒临灭绝;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容;
第三步,书写结语表达“希望大家都能行动起来”的愿望。
【亮点词汇】
①such as例如
②no longer不再
③take measures采取措施
【高分句型】
①Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.(who引导的定语从句)
②If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful.(if引导条件状语从句)
【实践演练】5
话题延申
假如你是李华,你对野生动物很感兴趣。寒假中,你将邀请Henry在一起研究你最喜欢的一种野生动物,请根据下图完成电子邮件。
注意事项:1. 邮件须包括所给提示内容,可作适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于90,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件不使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
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I will be very happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in North-east China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don’t forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly.
Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be very happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么及原因、它们的栖息地及特征等;
第三步,介绍进行研究活动需要带的物品及原因;
第四步,介绍它们的现状以及应该采取的保护措施并书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①live alone独自生活
②forget to do sth.忘记做某事
③in danger处于危险之中
④look forward to期待
【高分句型】
①I like tigers because they are big and strong.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I will be very happy if you can join me.(if引导条件状语从句)
【实践演练】6
话题延申
镇江野生动物保护协会招募志愿者。假如你是镇江的一名学生李明,想要参加协会为保护动物尽一份力。请你根据提示信息完成一封申请信,介绍自己的情况并说明申请理由。
要求:1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,需适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。
2. 词数:90词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Zhenjiang Wildlife Protection Society. My name is Li Ming. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Zhenjiang Wildlife Protection Society. My name is Li Ming.
I’m in Class One Grade Eight. I’m a kind boy and I once saved a cat from a snowstorm. I like animals and pandas are my favorite. They are so cute and can make my heart full of warmth.
However, animals are facing serious problems now because their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. In addition, natural disasters happen often because of the changeable weather. As a result, animals have nowhere to live or food to eat. Also, some people catch them for fun. What a shame!
It’s time for us to do something more for them now. I will ask my mother not to buy clothes made of animals’ fur any more. I plan to write to the government to ask them to make laws to protect the environment. As a student, I can also make some posters to let others know the importance of nature. I’ll be very happy if I can be a member of the society. You can call me on 0511-8823678 or email me at liming@zhenjiang.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍自己的个人信息;
第二步,写出几条动物需要保护的原因;
第三步,列出几条保护动物的计划,并留下自己的联系方式。
【亮点词汇】
①in addition另外
②because of因为
③as a result结果
④ask sb to do要求某人做某事
【高分句型】
②I’ll be very happy if I can be a member of the society.(if引导的条件状语从句)
①It’s time for us to do something more for them now.(it’s time for sb. to do sth.句型)
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Unit 5 Wild animals 写作篇(野生动物保护)
【话题解读】
本单元的话题是“野生动物”。Reading中的“Xiwang in safe hands”,话题为“野生动物保护”,体裁为夹叙夹议文。短文具体围绕大熊猫的生存状况展开,既包含人工养育下熊猫的成长细节,也涉及野生大熊猫的生存困境及保护措施。Word power中的“a letterfrom the Wild Animals Club”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”,体裁为应用文的倡议书(信),以野生动物俱乐部的名义向大众发出公开信,围绕 “捕猎导致野生动物濒危,呼吁人类参与保护”展开,强调野生动物与人类的友好关系及保护的必要性。Integration中的“Protecting wild animals”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”,体裁为说明文(夹有呼吁的意味)。文章以第一人称“我们(两种野生动物)”的视角,客观说明了“我们”的生存环境、习性及面临的威胁,同时隐含对自身生存状况的担忧。Integration中的另一篇“Amy wrote a letter on behalf of an Indian rhino.”,话题仍为“野生动物保护”。体裁为应用文的书信(求助信)。该文以印度犀牛“莉拉”的口吻给人类写了一封求助信,信中用第一人称叙述自身遭遇和诉求(野生印度犀牛的生存困境及保护诉求),具有较强的情感表达和呼吁性。
从以上分析,不难看出,围绕“野生动物保护”的话题从体裁上来说:可以是记叙文、说明文以及应用文的书信和倡议书等等。范文“Amy wrote a letter on behalf of an Indian rhino.”为我们的话题写作提供了一个很好的范例,典型的三段论:说明你是什么动物,住在哪里,吃什么,以及为什么写这封信;描述“你”正面临什么问题以及这些问题是由什么引起的;描述人类已经为帮助“你”做了些什么,以及“你”还希望人类做些什么。
【常用素材】
以下选自本单元的素材
dolphin n.海豚 eagle n.鹰 fox n.狐狸
rhino n.犀牛 shark n.鲨鱼 whale n.鲸
wolf n.狼 zebra n.斑马 horn n.角
blue whale蓝鲸 giant panda大熊猫 meat-eater n.肉食动物
polar bear北极熊
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drop vi.& vt.(使)降低;扔下;掉下 hunt vt.& vi.猎杀 increase vi.& vt.增加
melt vi.& vt.(使) 融化
★★★★★★
action n.行动 birth n.出生 effort n.努力
government n.政府 growth n.生长,发育,成长 illness n.疾病,病
pollution n.污染 protection n.保护 reason n.理由,原因
risk n.危险,风险 result n.结果,后果
★★★★★★
giant adj.特大的,巨大的 sick adj.生病的 serious adj.严重的
satisfying adj.令人满意的 tiny adj.极小的 wild adj.野生的
easily adv.很可能;容易地 mainly adv.主要地
★★★★★★
in the wild在野外 in danger处于危险中 at risk有危险
natural disasters自然灾害 weather events天灾 as a result结果
may not have enough food to eat也许没有足够的食物吃
travel a long way to find food 长途跋涉寻找食物
take more land for their own use占领更多的土地为他们自己所用
make things like bags and shoes from the fur or skin of wild animals
用野生动物的皮毛或者皮肤制造像袋子和鞋子那样的东西
★★★★★★
how to protect wild animals如何保护野生动物
ask for one’s help寻求某人的帮助/ask sb. (not) to do sth.叫某人(不要)做某事
take action采取行动/make laws to protect ...制定法律/立法保护……
against the law to do sth.违法做某事
nature reserve自然保护区
more nature reserves for animals to live in更多的供动物居住的自然保护区
give sb. round-the-clock care给某人全天候的照顾
stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
China’s efforts to protect giant pandas中国为保护大熊猫所做的努力
work hard to help ...努力帮助……/manage to do sth.设法做成某事/try to do sth.努力做某事
★★★★★★
understand the importance of protecting animals明白保护动物的重要性
under the same sky在同一片天空下
on the planet在星球上/all over the world全世界
among the smartest animals on earth在地球上最聪明的动物中
for many reasons由于多种原因
nothing more satisfying than seeing 没有什么比看到他更让人满足的了
以下选自各地试题书面表达参考答案中的素材
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野生动物面临的问题及原因
1. However, animals are facing serious problems now because their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. 然而,动物们现在正面临严重的问题,因为它们的栖息地变得越来越小。
2. In addition, natural disasters happen often because of the changeable weather. As a result, animals have nowhere to live or food to eat.此外,由于多变的天气,自然灾害频繁发生。结果,动物们无处可住,无食可吃。
3. Also, some people catch them for fun.而且,一些人捕捉它们取乐。
4. I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas.
我认为世界上有许多濒危动物,比如老虎和熊猫。
5. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt.
当农民砍伐树木时,老虎再也无法隐藏和捕猎。
6. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.
许多老虎被想卖它们的皮毛赚钱的人杀死。
7. And there are few places where pandas can live.而且熊猫能居住的地方很少。
8. But today some wild animals are facing serious problems.但如今一些野生动物正面临严重的问题。
9. Many rivers are polluted by factories.许多河流被工厂所污染。
10. Sadly, African elephants are in danger now.遗憾的是,非洲象现在处于危险之中。
11. People hunt them for their ivory.人们为了它们的象牙而捕猎它们。
12. Also, their homes are being destroyed.而且,它们的家园正在被破坏。
13. However, many of them are in danger now.然而,它们中的许多现在处于危险之中。
14. They are losing their homes because people cut down a lot of forests, and they get sick from dirty air and water. 它们正在失去家园,因为人们砍伐了大量森林,它们还因污浊的空气和水而生病。
15. Many wild animals don’t have enough places to live.许多野生动物没有足够的地方居住。
16. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings.
人们不断侵占它们的栖息地,为农场和建筑腾出更多空间。
17. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their body.
人们为了它们的皮毛、骨头或身体的其他部位而捕猎野生动物。
18. Sadly, tigers are in danger.遗憾的是,老虎处于危险之中。
19. The main reasons are habitat loss from deforestation, pollution, and illegal hunting.
主要原因是森林砍伐导致的栖息地丧失、污染和非法捕猎。
20. Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones.
现在老虎处于危险之中,因为猎人正在为了它们的皮毛和骨头而捕猎它们。
21. Nowadays, many wild animals are endangered. Some are even dying out.
如今,许多野生动物濒临灭绝。有些甚至正在消失。
22. First, people cut down forests, so animals lose their homes.首先,人们砍伐森林,所以动物失去了家园。
23. Second, some hunt animals for fur or food.其次,一些人为了皮毛或食物而捕猎动物。
24. Francois’ langurs are becoming fewer and fewer.黑叶猴的数量越来越少。
25. They are in great danger.它们处于极大的危险之中。
26. Many animals, such as orangutans, are listed as critically endangered due to human activities like hunting, deforestation, and environmental pollution.许多动物,如红毛猩猩,由于捕猎、森林砍伐和环境污染等人类活动而被列为极度濒危物种。
27. But now, golden monkeys are one of the animals in danger. Some people kill them for their fur. Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of deforestation.但现在,金丝猴是濒危动物之一。一些人为了它们的皮毛而猎杀它们。由于森林砍伐,它们的栖息地越来越少。
28. But because their living places were lost and people hunted them too much, they sadly disappeared during the Ming and Qing Dynasties.但由于它们的栖息地丧失以及人们过度猎杀,它们在明清时期不幸消失了。
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保护野生动物的重要性
1. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us.
没有周围的动植物,我们人类无法生存。
2. So protecting wildlife animals is very important.所以保护野生动物非常重要。
3. We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature.我们保护野生动物,不仅因为野生动物是我们的朋友,还因为野生动物有助于维持人类与自然之间的平衡。
4. As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them.
在我看来,动物是人类最好的朋友。保护它们对我们来说非常重要。
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保护野生动物的措施(个人与社会)
1. I will ask my mother not to buy clothes made of animals’ fur any more.
我会让妈妈再也不买动物皮毛做的衣服。
2. I plan to write to the government to ask them to make laws to protect the environment.
我计划给政府写信,要求他们制定法律来保护环境。
3. To protect them, I participate in tree planting activities, volunteer at local animal shelters, and promote wildlife protection through social media and public events.为了保护它们,我参加植树活动,在当地动物收容所做志愿者,并通过社交媒体和公共活动宣传野生动物保护。
4. I plan to organize educational activities at schools and communities to raise awareness about the importance of wildlife conservation. 我计划在学校和社区组织教育活动,提高人们对野生动物保护重要性的认识。
5. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed.
我们必须采取措施防止植物被破坏,阻止动物被杀害。
6. We should actively do volunteer activities and distribute posters telling people to love wild animals.
我们应该积极参加志愿活动,分发海报告诉人们要爱护野生动物。
7. We should also do more research to protect them and build more reserves for them.
我们也应该做更多的研究来保护它们,为它们建立更多的保护区。
8. To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and protect their living areas.
为了保护它们,我们应该停止非法捕猎,保护它们的栖息地。
9. First, save paper by using both sides. This helps protect animals’ home-forests.
首先,双面用纸来节约纸张。这有助于保护动物的家园——森林。
10. Second, never buy things like animal fur or tiger bones.其次,绝不购买动物皮毛或虎骨之类的东西。
11. To help them live safely, we need to create better homes for them.
为了帮助它们安全生活,我们需要为它们创造更好的家园。
12. First, we shouldn’t buy fur coats any more.首先,我们不应该再买皮草大衣了。
13. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice.其次,我们可以给政府写信并提出一些建议。
14. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
我们可以制作一些海报,让其他人知道保护它们的重要性。
15. Firstly, we should plant more trees, reduce pollution, and stop buying wildlife products like ivory.
首先,我们应该多种树,减少污染,停止购买象牙等野生动物制品。
16. Finally, the government should make some laws on wild animal protection.
最后,政府应该制定一些野生动物保护的法律。
17. We should make some nature reserves for them.我们应该为它们建立一些自然保护区。
18. We should not wear tiger furs or use their bones for medicine.
我们不应该穿虎皮,也不应该用它们的骨头做药材。
19. We should build more nature reserves to protect habitats.我们应该建立更多的自然保护区来保护栖息地。
20. Also, never buy products made from endangered animals.而且,绝不购买濒危动物制成的产品。
21. We should take action to protect them.我们应该采取行动保护它们。
22. To protect these animals, governments should establish strict laws to prevent hunting and reduce pollution.
为了保护这些动物,政府应该制定严格的法律来防止捕猎和减少污染。
23. Our government should make strict laws to stop deforestation and hunting.
我们的政府应该制定严格的法律来阻止森林砍伐和猎杀行为。
24. At the same time, we should tell more people about the importance of protecting golden monkeys and call on them to take action.同时,我们应该告诉更多人保护金丝猴的重要性,并呼吁他们采取行动。
25. Under the state protection, including special care and safe living areas, their number has been growing every year.在国家保护下,包括特殊的照料和安全的栖息地,它们的数量每年都在增长。
【写作通式】一
_________(动物名)are very _________(动物体形特征的描述:cute/lovely/strong/with ... hair/fur/feathers). Their _________(身体的若干部位的描述:tails/legs/necks/eyes)are _________<特征描述>). They _________ (生活习性描述:居住地点、活动方式、喜欢吃的东西等).
But now, _________(生存现状的描述:one of the animals in danger). Some people kill them for their _________(诱因1) . Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of _________(诱因2) .
As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them. Our government should _________(改善动物生存举措1). At the same time, we should _________(改善动物生存举措2).
I wish _________(动物名称)can live happily and their numbers will become larger and larger.
【范文示例】
5月22日是世界野生动物保护日,某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国宝级保护动物金丝猴也被列为濒危动物,请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
名称:金丝猴(golden monkey)
居住地:中国西南地区
外貌:身体瘦长,尾巴与体长相当,毛灰黄色。
生活习性:群居;吃昆虫(insects)、鸟,树叶、水果等
濒危原因:由于滥伐森林(deforestation),它们的居住地遭到破坏;人类猎杀获取它们的毛皮(fur),数量减少。
要求:1. 内容应包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】
Golden monkeys are very lovely. Their bodies are thin and long, and their tails are as long as their bodies. They have grayish-yellow fur, which looks quite unique. They live in groups in the southwest of China. Their diet is varied, including insects, birds, leaves, fruits and so on.
But now, golden monkeys are one of the animals in danger. Some people kill them for their fur. Their living places are getting fewer and fewer because of deforestation.
As far as I am concerned, animals are human beings’ best friends. It’s really important for us to protect them. Our government should make strict laws to stop deforestation and hunting. At the same time, we should tell more people about the importance of protecting golden monkeys and call on them to take action.
I wish golden monkeys can live happily and their numbers will become larger and larger.
【写作通式】二
_________(动物名)is a _________(动物特征:rare/common/unique)animal with a long history. Long ago, it _________(过去的情况:was very common/lived widely in.../was seen in many places...)across/all over the country/world. But because _________(导致不好变化的原因:their living environment was destroyed/people killed them for...), it _________(过去的不好结果:became fewer and fewer/almost disappeared...).
Luckily, _________(情形的转变:was brought back from ... to .../people started to protect it/it was taken to... for protection). Unde the state protection/Under the protection of the government/With the help of the government, _________(保护措施). _________(现在的情况:its number is increasing/it has a better life...). Now, _________(现在的具体状况).
I hope _________(自己的希望).
【范文示例】
根据提示写一篇有关麋鹿的英语短文向你校英文报投稿。
提示:
麋鹿(Milu deer)
过去
麋鹿是一种珍稀动物,很久以前在中国很常见,但消失于明、清朝(dynasty)。
现在
●1985年第一头麋鹿从英国到了南海子麋鹿园,受到政府的保护,麋鹿数量日益增多;
●全国现在有三个麋鹿园:一个在四川,一个在北京附近,一个在江苏。
未来
它们能再次生活在自然环境中……
要求:1. 内容应包含提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数不少于100。
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【答案】
The Milu deer is a rare animal with a long history in China. Long ago, it was very common across the country. But because their living places were lost and people hunted them too much, they sadly disappeared during the Ming and Qing Dynasties.
Luckily, the first Milu deer was brought back from Britain to the Nanhaizi Milu Park in 1985. Under the state
protection, including special care and safe living areas, their number has been growing every year. Now, there are three Milu Parks in China: one in Sichuan, one near Beijing, and one in Jiangsu, giving them good homes.
I hope one day these beautiful animals can leave the parks and live happily in the wild again.
【写作通式】三
As we know, wild animals are our good friends, but now many of them are in great danger/in a dangerous situation/at risk.
There are some natural reasons like ilnesses and natural disasters, but human activities are the biggest reason.
When people _________(人类具体行为 1。如:take land for their own use, wild animals may lose thie homes).
People _________(人类具体行为 2。如:hunt many of them for their ...). As a result, _________(后果1。如:not have a place to live or enough food to eat)._________(后果2。如:The number of them ...)
或者:There are several reasons for this. On one hand, some _________(自然因素:natural disasters/serious diseases)make their lives hard. On the other hand, _________(人类活动:human activities) are more harmful. People _________(具体人类行为 1。如:cut down too many trees and take away their living land), so wild animals lose their homes. What’s worse, some people _________(人类具体行为 2。如:hunt many of them for their fur/meat/sell them for money). As a result, the number of wild animals is _________(数量变化。如:getting smaller and smaller/decreasing quickly).
As students, we should take action to save wild animals. First, we should _________(措施1。如:stop buying products made from wild animals). Second, we don’t _________(措施2。如:do bad things to their living space). Last but at least, we should _________(措施3。如:call on everybody to know the importance of protecting wild animals).
或者:It’s time for us to save wild animals. First, we should _________(措施 1。如:stop buying things made from wild animals). Second, we can _________(措施2。如:plant more trees to build more homes for them). Besides, we need to _________(措施3。如:make people be more aware of the importance of protecting wild animals).
【范文示例】
人和动物共同生活在这个地球上,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以“Saving wild animals”为主题的征文活动,现请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇英语短文,发出倡议,呼吁人们热爱野生动物、保护野生动物。
提示:1. 野生动物面临哪些危险?(至少2点)
2. 作为学生,我们可以采取哪些行动保护野生动物?(至少3点)
要求: 1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所提示的信息,并适当发挥;
3. 字数100左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Saving wild animals
Dear fellows,
As we all know, humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the animals are in danger.
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【答案】
Saving wild animals
As we all know, humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the animals are in danger.
There are some natural reasons like ilnesses and natural disasters, but human activities are the biggest reason. When people take land for their own use, wild animals may lose thie homes. People hunt many of them for their meat, fur, bones and other parts of the body. As a result, wild animals may not have a place to live or enough food to eat. The number of them is becoming smaller and smaller.
As students, we should take action to save wild animals. First, make sure we stop buying products made from wild animals. Second, we don’t do bad things to their living space. Last but at least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of protecting wild animals.
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