Unit 3 The world at one click 记叙文（网上旅游）（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级下册

本讲义聚焦译林版八年级下册“介绍网上旅游经历”核心写作任务，系统梳理写作框架（开头点明目的地及缘由、中间描述过程与所见、结尾总结优势与感受），提供话题词汇、句型模板、参考范文等学习支架，帮助学生构建“总—分—总”写作逻辑与语言表达能力。 该资料突出语言能力与思维品质培养，通过核心词汇（如online tour、virtual visit）和时态运用指导提升表达准确性，借助审题步骤和连接词运用培养逻辑条理。结合中考考情分析与变式训练，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后助力学生迁移应用，查漏补缺，符合新课标对八年级学生写作能力的发展要求。

Unit 3 The world at one click 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍一次网上旅游经历（可涵盖网上参观博物馆、景点、主题公园等场景），阐述网上旅游的目的地、出发缘由、所见所感及独特优势，展现数字化旅游的魅力。 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般过去时描述网上旅游的过程与经历，一般现在时介绍目的地的基本信息；② 条理清晰，至少从3个维度展开（如旅游缘由、网上所见、体验感受等）；③ 语言通顺，恰当使用连接词与固定搭配，逻辑连贯；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合八年级同步写作常规要求）。 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“经历类记叙文”，是中考热门拓展话题之一，常以“一次特别的旅游经历”“网上旅游的乐趣”“推荐一种新的旅游方式”等形式命题，核心考查学生的事件描述能力、时态运用能力及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕“网上旅游”这一核心主题，结合网上参观卢浮宫博物馆的实例，详细描述一次个人网上旅游经历，说明旅游的目的地、选择该目的地的原因、网上所见的核心内容以及独特的体验感受，展现网上旅游的便捷性与趣味性。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是网上旅游，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为“我的第一次网上旅游”“推荐一处适合网上参观的景点”“网上旅游vs传统旅游”等。命题内容以经历描述为主，要求根据提示或自身体验，有条理地记叙网上旅游的全过程。写作时应注意事件逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的真实性与细节性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. Which place did you visit online?（你网上参观了哪个地方？） 2. Why did you choose to visit it online?（你为什么选择网上参观它？） 3. What did you see or learn during the online tour?（网上旅游期间你看到了什么或学到了什么？） 4. What are the advantages of this online tour?（这次网上旅游有哪些优势？） 5. How did you feel about the online travel experience?（你对这次网上旅游体验的感受如何？） 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，点明网上旅游的目的地及选择该目的地的缘由，快速引出话题。 ◆ 步骤二：正文详细描述网上旅游的过程，包括所见的核心内容、平台提供的特色功能（如视频导览、细节放大等），恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结网上旅游的优势，表达个人对这次体验的感受与评价，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出网上旅游话题，说明目的地及选择缘由 一般过去时 I learnt about...from...; I got interested and decided to...; As I was curious about..., I chose to... 中间（分述） 描述网上旅游过程：① 目的地基本信息；② 网上所见所闻；③ 平台特色功能 一般过去时（经历）；一般现在时（基本信息） During the online tour,...; I saw...; There were...; What’s more,...; Besides,...; I could... 结尾（总结） 总结网上旅游的优势，表达个人感受与评价 一般过去时（感受）；一般现在时（优势总结） I felt like...; Moreover,...; What’s great about it is...; In short,...; It was a(n)...experience. ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心话题词汇（网上旅游相关）：online tour（网上旅游）、virtual visit（虚拟参观）、digital travel（数字化旅游）、video tour（视频导览）、zoom in（放大）、online platform（网上平台）、free of charge（免费）、no crowds（无拥挤） 2. 目的地相关词汇：museum（博物馆）、scenic spot（景点）、theme park（主题公园）、artwork（艺术品）、painting（绘画）、sculpture（雕塑）、exhibit（展品）、historical relic（历史遗迹） 3. 动作短语：learn about（了解到）、decide to do（决定做）、explore online（网上探索）、see fantastic works of art（欣赏精彩艺术品）、read introductions（阅读介绍）、take photos（拍照）、feel like being there（感觉身临其境） 4. 时态标志词：in my Art lesson（在我的美术课上，一般过去时）、decided to（决定，一般过去时）、became（成为，一般过去时）、now（现在，一般现在时）、during the tour（旅游期间，一般过去时） 5. 逻辑连接词：what’s more（此外）、besides（另外）、moreover（而且）、in addition（再者）、as a result（因此）、in short（总之） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式： ① I learnt about the Louvre Museum in my Art lesson and got so interested that I decided to take an online tour of it. ② As I have always been curious about the Forbidden City, I chose to explore it online during my winter holiday. ③ Having heard a lot about the Great Barrier Reef, I decided to experience a virtual visit to this amazing natural wonder. 2. 中间描述句式： ① The place lies in...and used to be..., now it is famous for... ② During the online tour, I visited every part of the...and saw a large number of fantastic... ③ I could zoom in on the exhibits to see every detail, which helped me learn more about them. ④ There were interesting introductions to the artworks/scenic spots, making the tour both fun and educational. 3. 结尾总结句式： ① Online travel is a great way to visit places because it is free, convenient and free of crowds. ② I felt like I was actually there in person, and it was such an amazing experience. ③ In short, this online tour not only satisfied my curiosity but also broadened my horizons. ( 谚语名句 ) 1. Travel far, learn more.（行万里路，知天下事。）—— 可用于开头引出网上旅游也能增长见识的话题 2. Technology brings the world to your fingertips.（科技让世界触手可及。）—— 可用于结尾升华网上旅游的意义 3. Curiosity is the key to discovery.（好奇心是探索的钥匙。）—— 可用于开头说明选择网上旅游的缘由 ( 写作模板 ) I learnt about ____ (name of the place) from ____ (source, like class/book/Internet) and got very interested in it. So I decided to take an online tour of it during my free time. ____ (name of the place) lies in ____ (location). It used to be ____ (historical background) and is now famous for ____ (core feature, like artworks/scenic beauty). During the online tour, I ____ (what you did, like visited every floor/explored different areas) and saw many ____ (what you saw, like fantastic works of art/amazing natural scenery). I could ____ (platform function, like zoom in on details/watch video tours) and there were interesting introductions, which helped me learn a lot. What’s great about the online tour is that ____ (advantages, like no crowds/completely free/convenient). I felt like I was there in person and really enjoyed the experience. In short, online travel is a wonderful way to visit places, and I look forward to exploring more places online. ( 参考范文 ) My Online Tour of the Palace Museum I learnt about the Palace Museum in my history class and was deeply attracted by its long history and rich culture. So I decided to take an online tour of it last weekend. The Palace Museum, located in Beijing, used to be the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties. Now it is one of the most famous museums in China, known for its large collection of ancient relics. During the online tour, I visited many halls, including the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw beautiful porcelain, exquisite jade carvings and ancient paintings. The online platform offered excellent video tours and detailed introductions to each relic, and I could zoom in to see the fine patterns on the artworks. What I loved most about this online tour was that there were no crowds and it was completely free. I could visit at my own pace without feeling rushed. I felt like I was walking around the palace in person, and it was such an amazing and educational experience. Online travel really brings famous places closer to us! 【范文说明】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“网上旅游”主题，以网上参观故宫博物院为例，详细描述了旅游的缘由、过程、所见所感及网上旅游的优势，符合“总—分—总”结构要求，涵盖核心信息。 2. 写作指导：人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般过去时为主，描述目的地基本信息时用一般现在时，准确运用连接词“so, during, what’s more”增强逻辑连贯性。写作中融入素材宝库中的核心词汇（online tour, ancient relics, video tours, zoom in）和高级句型（located in..., known for..., what I loved most was that...），语言流畅生动，符合八年级同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 徐州 为安徒生诞辰220周年写纪念活动方案（含活动形式、内容、目的、预期效果） 提示类+活动方案格式（给定活动目标框架，需补充细节） 淮安 以"Friendship Lights Up My Life"为题写征文（含朋友信息、帮助事例、对友谊的理解） 提示类+征文格式（校刊投稿要求，聚焦人际关系） 盐城 以"A Meaningful Trip"为题写记叙（含旅行地点、活动内容、意义） 提示类+记叙文格式（开放细节补充，侧重个人感悟） 2024年 徐州 以"A famous person in the history of Xuzhou"为题写征文，介绍苏轼（含苏轼在徐事迹、百姓反响、历史意义） 提示类+征文格式（限定地方文化主题，需结合史实） 淮安 给社区图书馆写志愿者自荐信（含个人优势、工作设想、志愿目的） 提示类+自荐信格式（给定个人优势框架，需补充工作设想） 盐城 以"Live a Colourful Life"为题写短文参赛（含如何让生活丰富多彩、具体做法、意义） 提示类+命题作文格式（给定生活态度主题，需结合个人做法） 2023年 徐州 给交换生Simon写回信，介绍校园科技周（含时间、活动内容、意义、建议） 提示类+书信格式（给定核心要点，需补充活动细节） 淮安 以"Better Exercise, Better Life"为题写演讲稿（含日常锻炼方式、时长、益处、给同学的建议） 提示类+演讲稿格式（给定健康主题要点，需补充建议） 盐城 给英国朋友Peter写回信，介绍暑假计划（含计划内容、选择理由、期待） 提示类+书信格式（给定假期安排框架，需补充理由） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏泰州·期中】阳光中学八（1）班就同学们喜欢的旅游方式进行了调查，并将调查结果形成一张表格。请根据表格内容，向你的美国朋友介绍近年来同学们旅游方式的变化。 In the past At present Main ways Offline (线下) Travel Online Travel Reasons —Touch things with hands; —Talk with others; —Smell flowers in spring. … —Go anywhere; —Take less time and cost little money. —Enjoy digital (电子的) museums; … 要求： 1．短文应包含表格中所列要点； 2．结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于120词； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏苏州·期中】随着网络和人工智能（AI）的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游Online tours”和“亲历In-person travel”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”，则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，那你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）； 2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行； 3. 谈谈你的感悟。 注意事项： 1. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 My Way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 【24-25八年级下·河南周口·期中】网络旅游逐渐变得流行，有人认为它更安全便捷，也有人认为它无法替代真实旅行。你班本周即将开展主题为“Are online tours better than real tours?”的辩论赛,请你选择一方观点（网络旅游更好/真实旅行更好），根据下面的要点和写作要求，结合自身经历用英文写一篇短文。 online tours are better real tours are better ·It saves money and time. ·We can use all five senses during real tours. ·It is safer. ·It helps us make friends. 写作要求：1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 【24-25八年级下·全国·课后作业】米莉曾在线参观过大英博物馆，请根据下内容，以米莉的口吻，为自己的参观经历写一篇文章。 Which place I visited The British Museum Why I visited it Be interested in history What I saw The Rosetta Stone(罗塞塔石碑) and Egyptian Mummies(埃及木乃伊) How I felt Amazing, convenient 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数80左右。 My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·月考】在英语线上学习中，你将对全班同学介绍一下你对悉尼的在线之旅。请根据以下内容要点，写一篇90词左右的英语发言稿。 注意事项： 2. 发言稿必须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 3. 请展开合理想象，对...部分作适当发挥； 4. 使用正确时态，适当加上过渡语； 5. 保持卷面整洁，不涂改，卷面分5分 Last week I took an online tour of Sydney, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world at one click 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍一次网上旅游经历（可涵盖网上参观博物馆、景点、主题公园等场景），阐述网上旅游的目的地、出发缘由、所见所感及独特优势，展现数字化旅游的魅力。 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般过去时描述网上旅游的过程与经历，一般现在时介绍目的地的基本信息；② 条理清晰，至少从3个维度展开（如旅游缘由、网上所见、体验感受等）；③ 语言通顺，恰当使用连接词与固定搭配，逻辑连贯；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合八年级同步写作常规要求）。 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“经历类记叙文”，是中考热门拓展话题之一，常以“一次特别的旅游经历”“网上旅游的乐趣”“推荐一种新的旅游方式”等形式命题，核心考查学生的事件描述能力、时态运用能力及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕“网上旅游”这一核心主题，结合网上参观卢浮宫博物馆的实例，详细描述一次个人网上旅游经历，说明旅游的目的地、选择该目的地的原因、网上所见的核心内容以及独特的体验感受，展现网上旅游的便捷性与趣味性。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是网上旅游，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为“我的第一次网上旅游”“推荐一处适合网上参观的景点”“网上旅游vs传统旅游”等。命题内容以经历描述为主，要求根据提示或自身体验，有条理地记叙网上旅游的全过程。写作时应注意事件逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的真实性与细节性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： 1. Which place did you visit online?（你网上参观了哪个地方？） 2. Why did you choose to visit it online?（你为什么选择网上参观它？） 3. What did you see or learn during the online tour?（网上旅游期间你看到了什么或学到了什么？） 4. What are the advantages of this online tour?（这次网上旅游有哪些优势？） 5. How did you feel about the online travel experience?（你对这次网上旅游体验的感受如何？） 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，点明网上旅游的目的地及选择该目的地的缘由，快速引出话题。 ◆ 步骤二：正文详细描述网上旅游的过程，包括所见的核心内容、平台提供的特色功能（如视频导览、细节放大等），恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结网上旅游的优势，表达个人对这次体验的感受与评价，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出网上旅游话题，说明目的地及选择缘由 一般过去时 I learnt about...from...; I got interested and decided to...; As I was curious about..., I chose to... 中间（分述） 描述网上旅游过程：① 目的地基本信息；② 网上所见所闻；③ 平台特色功能 一般过去时（经历）；一般现在时（基本信息） During the online tour,...; I saw...; There were...; What’s more,...; Besides,...; I could... 结尾（总结） 总结网上旅游的优势，表达个人感受与评价 一般过去时（感受）；一般现在时（优势总结） I felt like...; Moreover,...; What’s great about it is...; In short,...; It was a(n)...experience. ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心话题词汇（网上旅游相关）：online tour（网上旅游）、virtual visit（虚拟参观）、digital travel（数字化旅游）、video tour（视频导览）、zoom in（放大）、online platform（网上平台）、free of charge（免费）、no crowds（无拥挤） 2. 目的地相关词汇：museum（博物馆）、scenic spot（景点）、theme park（主题公园）、artwork（艺术品）、painting（绘画）、sculpture（雕塑）、exhibit（展品）、historical relic（历史遗迹） 3. 动作短语：learn about（了解到）、decide to do（决定做）、explore online（网上探索）、see fantastic works of art（欣赏精彩艺术品）、read introductions（阅读介绍）、take photos（拍照）、feel like being there（感觉身临其境） 4. 时态标志词：in my Art lesson（在我的美术课上，一般过去时）、decided to（决定，一般过去时）、became（成为，一般过去时）、now（现在，一般现在时）、during the tour（旅游期间，一般过去时） 5. 逻辑连接词：what’s more（此外）、besides（另外）、moreover（而且）、in addition（再者）、as a result（因此）、in short（总之） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式： ① I learnt about the Louvre Museum in my Art lesson and got so interested that I decided to take an online tour of it. ② As I have always been curious about the Forbidden City, I chose to explore it online during my winter holiday. ③ Having heard a lot about the Great Barrier Reef, I decided to experience a virtual visit to this amazing natural wonder. 2. 中间描述句式： ① The place lies in...and used to be..., now it is famous for... ② During the online tour, I visited every part of the...and saw a large number of fantastic... ③ I could zoom in on the exhibits to see every detail, which helped me learn more about them. ④ There were interesting introductions to the artworks/scenic spots, making the tour both fun and educational. 3. 结尾总结句式： ① Online travel is a great way to visit places because it is free, convenient and free of crowds. ② I felt like I was actually there in person, and it was such an amazing experience. ③ In short, this online tour not only satisfied my curiosity but also broadened my horizons. ( 谚语名句 ) 1. Travel far, learn more.（行万里路，知天下事。）—— 可用于开头引出网上旅游也能增长见识的话题 2. Technology brings the world to your fingertips.（科技让世界触手可及。）—— 可用于结尾升华网上旅游的意义 3. Curiosity is the key to discovery.（好奇心是探索的钥匙。）—— 可用于开头说明选择网上旅游的缘由 ( 写作模板 ) I learnt about ____ (name of the place) from ____ (source, like class/book/Internet) and got very interested in it. So I decided to take an online tour of it during my free time. ____ (name of the place) lies in ____ (location). It used to be ____ (historical background) and is now famous for ____ (core feature, like artworks/scenic beauty). During the online tour, I ____ (what you did, like visited every floor/explored different areas) and saw many ____ (what you saw, like fantastic works of art/amazing natural scenery). I could ____ (platform function, like zoom in on details/watch video tours) and there were interesting introductions, which helped me learn a lot. What’s great about the online tour is that ____ (advantages, like no crowds/completely free/convenient). I felt like I was there in person and really enjoyed the experience. In short, online travel is a wonderful way to visit places, and I look forward to exploring more places online. ( 参考范文 ) My Online Tour of the Palace Museum I learnt about the Palace Museum in my history class and was deeply attracted by its long history and rich culture. So I decided to take an online tour of it last weekend. The Palace Museum, located in Beijing, used to be the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties. Now it is one of the most famous museums in China, known for its large collection of ancient relics. During the online tour, I visited many halls, including the Hall of Supreme Harmony and the Palace of Heavenly Purity. I saw beautiful porcelain, exquisite jade carvings and ancient paintings. The online platform offered excellent video tours and detailed introductions to each relic, and I could zoom in to see the fine patterns on the artworks. What I loved most about this online tour was that there were no crowds and it was completely free. I could visit at my own pace without feeling rushed. I felt like I was walking around the palace in person, and it was such an amazing and educational experience. Online travel really brings famous places closer to us! 【范文说明】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“网上旅游”主题，以网上参观故宫博物院为例，详细描述了旅游的缘由、过程、所见所感及网上旅游的优势，符合“总—分—总”结构要求，涵盖核心信息。 2. 写作指导：人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般过去时为主，描述目的地基本信息时用一般现在时，准确运用连接词“so, during, what’s more”增强逻辑连贯性。写作中融入素材宝库中的核心词汇（online tour, ancient relics, video tours, zoom in）和高级句型（located in..., known for..., what I loved most was that...），语言流畅生动，符合八年级同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 徐州 为安徒生诞辰220周年写纪念活动方案（含活动形式、内容、目的、预期效果） 提示类+活动方案格式（给定活动目标框架，需补充细节） 淮安 以"Friendship Lights Up My Life"为题写征文（含朋友信息、帮助事例、对友谊的理解） 提示类+征文格式（校刊投稿要求，聚焦人际关系） 盐城 以"A Meaningful Trip"为题写记叙（含旅行地点、活动内容、意义） 提示类+记叙文格式（开放细节补充，侧重个人感悟） 2024年 徐州 以"A famous person in the history of Xuzhou"为题写征文，介绍苏轼（含苏轼在徐事迹、百姓反响、历史意义） 提示类+征文格式（限定地方文化主题，需结合史实） 淮安 给社区图书馆写志愿者自荐信（含个人优势、工作设想、志愿目的） 提示类+自荐信格式（给定个人优势框架，需补充工作设想） 盐城 以"Live a Colourful Life"为题写短文参赛（含如何让生活丰富多彩、具体做法、意义） 提示类+命题作文格式（给定生活态度主题，需结合个人做法） 2023年 徐州 给交换生Simon写回信，介绍校园科技周（含时间、活动内容、意义、建议） 提示类+书信格式（给定核心要点，需补充活动细节） 淮安 以"Better Exercise, Better Life"为题写演讲稿（含日常锻炼方式、时长、益处、给同学的建议） 提示类+演讲稿格式（给定健康主题要点，需补充建议） 盐城 给英国朋友Peter写回信，介绍暑假计划（含计划内容、选择理由、期待） 提示类+书信格式（给定假期安排框架，需补充理由） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏泰州·期中】阳光中学八（1）班就同学们喜欢的旅游方式进行了调查，并将调查结果形成一张表格。请根据表格内容，向你的美国朋友介绍近年来同学们旅游方式的变化。 In the past At present Main ways Offline (线下) Travel Online Travel Reasons —Touch things with hands; —Talk with others; —Smell flowers in spring. … —Go anywhere; —Take less time and cost little money. —Enjoy digital (电子的) museums; … 要求： 1．短文应包含表格中所列要点； 2．结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于120词； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in Students’ Travel Ways in Yangguang Middle School     Recently, a survey about students’ favorite travel ways was carried out in Class 1, Grade 8 of Yangguang Middle School. Great changes have taken place over the years.   In the past, offline travel was the main choice. Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, have face-to-face talks with others, and smell flowers in spring. It made them feel the real world directly.    But now, online travel is becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons. First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time. Also, it costs little money. What’s more, they can enjoy digital museums, getting knowledge in a new and interesting way.    These changes show that students’ travel habits are adapting to the development of the times.   【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格内容介绍同学们旅游方式的变化。要结构完整、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于120词 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，对比现在与过去旅游方式的变化； 第三步，书写结语，总结变化的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②more and more popular越来越受欢迎 ③saves a lot of time节省了很多时间 [高分句型] ①Students loved it because they could touch things with their hands, have face-to-face talks with others, and smell flowers in spring.（because引导原因状语从句） ②First, it allows students to “go” anywhere they want, which saves a lot of time.（which引导非限制性定语从句） （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏苏州·期中】随着网络和人工智能（AI）的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游Online tours”和“亲历In-person travel”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”，则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，那你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）； 2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行； 3. 谈谈你的感悟。 注意事项： 1. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 My Way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories. First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it’s a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views. Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it’s about living the moment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，说明倾向“亲历旅行”； 第二步，结合北京之旅的经历说明做出这样选择的原因； 第三步，总结感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ②in person亲自 ③for example例如 [高分句型] ①I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure.（although引导的让步状语从句） （3） 【24-25八年级下·河南周口·期中】网络旅游逐渐变得流行，有人认为它更安全便捷，也有人认为它无法替代真实旅行。你班本周即将开展主题为“Are online tours better than real tours?”的辩论赛,请你选择一方观点（网络旅游更好/真实旅行更好），根据下面的要点和写作要求，结合自身经历用英文写一篇短文。 online tours are better real tours are better ·It saves money and time. ·We can use all five senses during real tours. ·It is safer. ·It helps us make friends. 写作要求：1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In my view, there’s no doubt that real tours are far superior to online tours. During real tours, we can immerse ourselves in the surroundings using all five senses. Once I went to the countryside. I could see the lush green fields, hear the chirping of birds, smell the fragrance of wildflowers, touch the rough bark of trees, and even taste the fresh fruits picked from the orchard. This kind of full-sensory experience is impossible with online tours. Also, real tours help us make friends. On a group tour to a museum, I met people with similar interests. We exchanged ideas and became friends. So, real tours offer unforgettable memories and rich experiences that online tours can't replace. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，直接阐述自己支持的观点。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容，依照提示信息的要点，分别说明真实旅行能让人运用五感体验以及有助于交友这两个优势，并结合自身经历进行说明。 第三步：书写结语，总结真实旅行能带来难忘回忆和丰富体验，强调其不可替代性。 [亮点词汇] ①in my view在我看来 ②immerse oneself in沉浸在……中 ③unforgettable memories难忘的回忆 [高分句型] In my view, there’s no doubt that real tours are far superior to online tours. (there’s no doubt that...句型) （4） 【24-25八年级下·全国·课后作业】米莉曾在线参观过大英博物馆，请根据下内容，以米莉的口吻，为自己的参观经历写一篇文章。 Which place I visited The British Museum Why I visited it Be interested in history What I saw The Rosetta Stone(罗塞塔石碑) and Egyptian Mummies(埃及木乃伊) How I felt Amazing, convenient 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数80左右。 My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My online tour of the British Museum I learnt about the British Museum in my history lesson. I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website. Located in London, it’s famous for its collection of historical artifacts. Through the virtual tour, I saw amazing exhibits like the Rosetta Stone and Egyptian Mummies. I could zoom in to see details clearly and read interesting descriptions. The experience was both educational and amazing. It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时（叙述探索古代文明的经历）和一般现在时（描述网站及展品特点）； ③提示：讲述自己对古代文明产生兴趣后，通过伦敦某机构官网在线探索的经历，包括该机构因历史文物收藏闻名，在线虚拟游览看到罗塞塔石碑、埃及木乃伊等展品，能放大看细节、读介绍，以及这次经历有教育意义、很棒且方便。   [写作步骤] 第一步：说明自己对古代文明产生兴趣，决定通过其官网在线探索； 第二步：介绍该机构位于伦敦、以历史文物收藏闻名，描述在线虚拟游览看到的展品及体验（放大看细节、读介绍）； 第三步：评价这次经历（有教育意义、很棒、方便，像亲临现场）。   [亮点词汇] ①ancient civilizations古代文明 ②explore探索 ③artifact文物 ④virtual虚拟的 ⑤convenient方便的   [高分句型] ①I became very interested in ancient civilizations, so I decided to explore it online through its official website.（“so”连接兴趣与行动，逻辑清晰地引出事件起因） ②It felt almost like being there in person, and best of all, it was convenient!（“and best of all”突出最显著的优点，表达简洁且强调重点） （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏无锡·月考】在英语线上学习中，你将对全班同学介绍一下你对悉尼的在线之旅。请根据以下内容要点，写一篇90词左右的英语发言稿。 注意事项： 2. 发言稿必须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 3. 请展开合理想象，对...部分作适当发挥； 4. 使用正确时态，适当加上过渡语； 5. 保持卷面整洁，不涂改，卷面分5分 Last week I took an online tour of Sydney, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week I took an online tour of Sydney, the biggest city in Australia. It’s on the southeast coast of Australia. I saw the photos of the famous Sydney Opera House. It looks like a ship with many sails. We can enjoy wonderful shows in it. I also visited the Harbour Bridge. It is really high. It takes three hours to climb it. Australian seasons are the opposite of ours. In April, it is autumn in Australia, so the best time to travel there is November and December. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中图片的提示内容介绍自己的悉尼在线之旅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍悉尼的基本信息； 第二步，介绍自己的线上悉尼之旅； 第三步，介绍去澳大利亚旅行的最好时机。 [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像 ②the opposite of与……相反 [高分句型] ①It takes three hours to climb it.(it的固定句型) ②In April, it is autumn in Australia, so the best time to travel there is November and December.(so引导的并列句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $