Unit 10 World in the Cloud（单元写作精练）英语新教材仁爱科普版八年级下册

Unit 10 World in the Cloud 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：描述网络经历与明智使用网络的建议 本单元围绕“互联网与世界”展开，重点探讨互联网在日常生活中的作用、使用方式及其潜在风险。写作旨在引导学生结合自身经历或所学知识，描述互联网给自己带来的便利或问题，并提出合理使用网络的建议。写作中需注意结构清晰、逻辑连贯，并能运用本单元所学词汇、句型与表达。 本单元核心写作句型与词汇： 1. 开头引入： - The internet has become an important part of our lives. - I’d like to share my experience of using the internet. 2. 描述网络活动： - I often use the internet to search for information. - I like watching videos and chatting with friends online. 3. 表达网络优缺点： - The internet makes our life easier and more convenient. - However, spending too much time online is harmful to our health. - We should protect our personal information from strangers. 4. 提出建议： - We should set a time limit for using the internet every day. - It’s important to check the safety of a website before clicking. - Never share your password or ID number online. 5. 结尾总结： - In short, the internet is useful if we use it wisely. - Let’s make the most of the internet while staying safe。 真题示例 （2025·江苏·中考模拟）学校英语社团正在举办题为“My Internet Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. 你经常用互联网做什么？ 2. 互联网给你带来了哪些好处或问题？ 3. 你是如何合理使用互联网的？ 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名； 3. 词数100左右。 My Internet Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题型通关 练 1．（2025·安徽芜湖·中考模拟）假定你是中学生李辉。某中学生英文杂志正在举办题为“The Internet Has Influenced Our Lives”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向该杂志社投稿。 内容包括： （1）因特网对我们学习的影响。 （2）因特网对我们生活的影响。 注意： 1.词数80—100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.短文题目与句首已为你写好，不计入总词数。 The Internet Has Influenced Our Lives Since the Internet was invented, it has been influencing our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·甘肃酒泉·中考模拟）你们班上周五举行了一场“Should Wifi be used at school?”为主题的班会。请根据下面的一些观点，以及你自己的看法，写一篇英语短文。 支持方：1.能够获取更多知识，拓宽视野，自己解决问题； 2.能够促使老师创造更多的有趣课堂，帮助我们更好地学习； 3.…… 反对方：1.会让我们对网络和手机上瘾，沉迷于玩游戏； 2.会让我们关注网上不健康内容； 3.…… 参考词汇： get/gain 获取； broaden 拓宽； addict 上瘾 要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，上下文连贯，书写工整； 2.必须包括要点提示所有的相关信息，并适当发挥，至少给出你的两点建议； 3.词数：80词左右；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Should Wifi be used at school? Last Friday, we had a class meeting about “Should WiFi be used at school?” Here are some different opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（22-23八年级下·陕西咸阳·期末）随着科技的发展，互联网给我们带来了很多便利和好处，但沉溺网络也带来很多不良影响。某英文网站正在开展以“The Internet and Me”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇英文投稿，谈谈你每天的上网时长，你上网都做些什么以及你对互联网的看法。 提示： 1. How long do you surf the Internet every day?   2. What do you often do on the Internet?   3. What do you think of the Internet?   参考词汇：spend, search for, chat, convenient, be bad for, properly, depend on 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 （开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·甘肃兰州·中考模拟）你校英文报就“ 网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。 要求： 1. 80 词左右； 2. 须全面反映图文信息； 3. 文中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Stay Safe Online The Internet environment isn’t safe any longer and we teenagers are possibly be in great danger. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26八年级上·山东聊城·月考）科技已经改变了我们的生活，在互联网上，我们可以与朋友取得联系并且分享一些有趣的事。我们也可以用手机支付。科技让我们的生活更加便利。但它也带来了一些新的风险。我们需要遵守一些规则来保持网络安全。根据提示，写一篇不少于85词的作文。 1.我们应该避免在网上发布个人信息，这包括你的全名、地址和身份证号。 2.使用强度大且长的密码很重要。不要使用容易猜到的词，比如你的生日。 3.如果你发现自己陷入麻烦，你可以向你的父母，老师或其他信任的成人求助。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2025·山东潍坊·中考模拟）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人在上面发帖。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的生活或学习经历，用英语跟帖。 注意：1.不要出现考生本人信息； 2.80—100词。 Teens Around the World Subject: Network safety Hello! I have some questions here. With the development of the Internet, it’s much easier for us to get information online. But there are also some hidden dangers. How can we protect ourselves? How to stay safe online? Please give us some advice. Tina, America Dear Tina, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 10 World in the Cloud 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：描述网络经历与明智使用网络的建议 本单元围绕“互联网与世界”展开，重点探讨互联网在日常生活中的作用、使用方式及其潜在风险。写作旨在引导学生结合自身经历或所学知识，描述互联网给自己带来的便利或问题，并提出合理使用网络的建议。写作中需注意结构清晰、逻辑连贯，并能运用本单元所学词汇、句型与表达。 本单元核心写作句型与词汇： 1. 开头引入： - The internet has become an important part of our lives. - I’d like to share my experience of using the internet. 2. 描述网络活动： - I often use the internet to search for information. - I like watching videos and chatting with friends online. 3. 表达网络优缺点： - The internet makes our life easier and more convenient. - However, spending too much time online is harmful to our health. - We should protect our personal information from strangers. 4. 提出建议： - We should set a time limit for using the internet every day. - It’s important to check the safety of a website before clicking. - Never share your password or ID number online. 5. 结尾总结： - In short, the internet is useful if we use it wisely. - Let’s make the most of the internet while staying safe。 真题示例 （2025·江苏·中考模拟）学校英语社团正在举办题为“My Internet Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. 你经常用互联网做什么？ 2. 互联网给你带来了哪些好处或问题？ 3. 你是如何合理使用互联网的？ 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名； 3. 词数100左右。 My Internet Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Internet Life The internet has become an important part of my daily life. I often use it to search for information for my homework, watch educational videos, and chat with my friends through social media apps. The internet brings me many benefits. It makes studying much easier because I can find answers quickly. I also enjoy learning English by watching videos and talking to friends from other countries online. However, sometimes I spend too much time watching funny videos, which is not good for my eyes or my study time. To use the internet wisely, I set a time limit for myself—only one hour on school days. I never share my personal information like my home address or phone number with strangers online. Also, I always ask my parents if a website is safe before I click on a link. In short, the internet is very useful if we use it in the right way. Let’s enjoy its benefits while staying safe and healthy. 写作指导 总体框架 1. 题材：记叙文或议论文，结合个人经历与观点。 2. 时态：一般现在时（描述习惯与事实），一般过去时（叙述经历）。 3. 结构建议： (1)开头：引入话题，说明互联网的重要性。 (2)主体：描述自己的网络活动、互联网的利弊、自己的使用习惯。 (3)结尾：提出合理使用网络的建议或感悟。 写作步骤 1. 简要说明自己使用互联网的频率和主要用途。 2. 具体描述互联网带来的便利或遇到的问题。 3. 说明自己如何控制上网时间、保护个人信息等。 4. 总结互联网的正确使用方式。 亮点词汇： 1. search for information（搜索信息） 2. download pictures/videos（下载图片/视频） 3. video chat（视频聊天） 4. online safety（网络安全） 5. personal information（个人信息） 6. computer virus（电脑病毒） 7. screen time（屏幕使用时间） 8. harmful messages（有害信息） 高分句型 1. I find it very convenient to... 2. Although the internet is helpful, we should not... 3. It is important to remember that... 4. From my experience, I have learned that... 题型通关 练 1．（2025·安徽芜湖·中考模拟）假定你是中学生李辉。某中学生英文杂志正在举办题为“The Internet Has Influenced Our Lives”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向该杂志社投稿。 内容包括： （1）因特网对我们学习的影响。 （2）因特网对我们生活的影响。 注意： 1.词数80—100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.短文题目与句首已为你写好，不计入总词数。 The Internet Has Influenced Our Lives Since the Internet was invented, it has been influencing our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Internet Has Influenced Our Lives Since the Internet was invented, it has been influencing our lives. It has made a big difference to our daily studies and our daily lives. As for our studies, online educational platforms offer wonderful courses, making learning more lively and enjoyable. If we meet with some difficulties while finishing our school projects, we can search for information and pictures online. Moreover, in our daily lives, it offers us a good way of communicating with friends by sending messages, pictures or videos. Sometimes, I watch interesting videos and favorite films online. The Internet also allows us to shop for things we need without leaving home. In conclusion, it’s really a useful tool that brings fun and convenience to our daily activities. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，探讨互联网对生活和学习的影响； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，从学习和生活两方面展开，结尾总结互联网的便利性，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题：开篇点明互联网的广泛影响； 第二步，具体介绍互联网在学习、生活方面的影响； 第三步，书写结语，总结互联网的实用性。 [亮点词汇] ①educational platforms 教育平台 ②search for搜寻 ③communicate with friends 与朋友交流 ④without leaving home 足不出户 [高分句型] ①If we meet with some difficulties while finishing our school projects, we can search for information and pictures online.（If引导的条件状语从句） ②it’s really a useful tool that brings fun and convenience to our daily activities.（定语从句） 2．（2024·甘肃酒泉·中考模拟）你们班上周五举行了一场“Should Wifi be used at school?”为主题的班会。请根据下面的一些观点，以及你自己的看法，写一篇英语短文。 支持方：1.能够获取更多知识，拓宽视野，自己解决问题； 2.能够促使老师创造更多的有趣课堂，帮助我们更好地学习； 3.…… 反对方：1.会让我们对网络和手机上瘾，沉迷于玩游戏； 2.会让我们关注网上不健康内容； 3.…… 参考词汇： get/gain 获取； broaden 拓宽； addict 上瘾 要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，上下文连贯，书写工整； 2.必须包括要点提示所有的相关信息，并适当发挥，至少给出你的两点建议； 3.词数：80词左右；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Should Wifi be used at school? Last Friday, we had a class meeting about “Should WiFi be used at school?” Here are some different opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last Friday, we had a class meeting about “Should Wifi be used at school?” Here are some different opinions. Some of us agree. It will be helpful to our study. With the help of the Internet, we can gain much knowledge and solve problems on our own. (We can also surf the Internet to read news and open up our eyes.) With the help of WiFi, teachers could create more interesting classes and work with students better. Others think it’s not a good idea. As middle school students, we lack self-control. We may be addicted to the Internet and the mobile phones and get into the habit of playing games. In my opinion, I agree with the rule. We can keep in touch with our parents, friends and teachers through WeChat and other tools. And it will be good for us to hold school events and activities. (I disagree with the rule. We may pay too much attention to the bad information on the Internet and it will take us too much time to find useful information.) 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给出的材料及思维导图中的关键信息，写短文就“Should Wifi be used at school?”这个话题谈谈正反方的观点及自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍支持方和反对方的观点； 第三步，谈谈自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of 在……的帮助下 ②be addicted to 对……上瘾 ③get into the habit of 养成……的习惯 ④agree/disagree with 同意/不同意 [高分句型] ①Others think it’s not a good idea.（省略that的宾语从句） ②And it will be good for us to hold school events and activities.（it固定句式） 3.（22-23八年级下·陕西咸阳·期末）随着科技的发展，互联网给我们带来了很多便利和好处，但沉溺网络也带来很多不良影响。某英文网站正在开展以“The Internet and Me”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇英文投稿，谈谈你每天的上网时长，你上网都做些什么以及你对互联网的看法。 提示： 1. How long do you surf the Internet every day?   2. What do you often do on the Internet?   3. What do you think of the Internet?   参考词汇：spend, search for, chat, convenient, be bad for, properly, depend on 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 （开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend an hour surfing the Internet every day. I often search for some information on the Internet. I also listen to music and chat with my friends on WeChat. Sometimes I buy books online. In my opinion, the Internet is very convenient. We can do a lot of things online and we could have online classes during pandemic. But don’t spend too much time online. Our eyes get tired easily. And it’s bad for our health. So we should use the Internet properly. We can make use of Internet to do necessary things. We mustn’t depend too much on it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己每天上网的时长； 第二步，介绍自己在网上经常做的事情； 第三步，阐述自己对互联网的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ②search for搜索 ③chat with sb.与某人聊天 ④convenient便利的 ⑤pandemic流行病 ⑥make use of利用 [高分句型] But don’t spend too much time online.(祈使句) 4．（2024·甘肃兰州·中考模拟）你校英文报就“ 网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。 要求： 1. 80 词左右； 2. 须全面反映图文信息； 3. 文中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Stay Safe Online The Internet environment isn’t safe any longer and we teenagers are possibly be in great danger. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                                                    Stay Safe Online The Internet environment isn’t safe any longer and we teenagers are possibly be in great danger. There are also hidden dangers that we can’t see through. Then what should we do to stay safe online? First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give away your personal information like name or address. Second, don’t click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss. Third, never see strangers you meet online. Finally, always be polite in the virtual world. Try not to be a target for a cyberbully. Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出我们面对的安全问题； 第二步，对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待。 [亮点词汇] give away泄露 harmonious和谐的 click on点击 [高分句型] ① Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world. (倒装句) 5．（25-26八年级上·山东聊城·月考）科技已经改变了我们的生活，在互联网上，我们可以与朋友取得联系并且分享一些有趣的事。我们也可以用手机支付。科技让我们的生活更加便利。但它也带来了一些新的风险。我们需要遵守一些规则来保持网络安全。根据提示，写一篇不少于85词的作文。 1.我们应该避免在网上发布个人信息，这包括你的全名、地址和身份证号。 2.使用强度大且长的密码很重要。不要使用容易猜到的词，比如你的生日。 3.如果你发现自己陷入麻烦，你可以向你的父母，老师或其他信任的成人求助。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The technology has changed our lives. On the Internet, we can get in touch with friends and share something interesting. We can also pay with our smartphone. The technology lets us live a more convenient life, but it also brings new risks. In order to stay safe online, we need to follow some rules. First, we should avoid posting personal information online. This includes your full name, address, and ID number. Second, it is important to use a strong and long password. Don’t use words that are easy to guess, like your birthday. Finally, if you find yourself in trouble, you should ask your parents, teachers or other trusted adults for help. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据材料内容，围绕科技便利（如联系朋友、手机支付）和风险展开，重点介绍三个网络安全规则：避免发布个人信息、使用强密码、求助成人。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明文章主旨：科技改变生活，带来便利的同时也有风险，需遵守网络安全规则； 第二步：详细阐述3条网络安全规则（避免泄露个人信息、使用安全密码、遇困求助）； 第三步：无额外总结，通过规则阐述自然收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient方便的 ②get in touch with与……取得联系 ③avoid doing sth.避免做某事 ④ask...for help向……求助 ⑤personal information个人信息 [高分句型] ①The technology lets us live a more convenient life, but it also brings new risks. （并列句） ②Don’t use words that are easy to guess, like your birthday.（定语从句） 6．（2025·山东潍坊·中考模拟）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人在上面发帖。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的生活或学习经历，用英语跟帖。 注意：1.不要出现考生本人信息； 2.80—100词。 Teens Around the World Subject: Network safety Hello! I have some questions here. With the development of the Internet, it’s much easier for us to get information online. But there are also some hidden dangers. How can we protect ourselves? How to stay safe online? Please give us some advice. Tina, America Dear Tina, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 【答案】例文 Dear Tina, With the rapid development of the Internet, it’s much easier for us to get information online. Meanwhile, there are also some hidden dangers that we can’t see through. Sometimes we may see some negative and harmful information which is bad for our mental needs. To stay safe online, I’d like to suggest several ways. First, protect our private information, which means we can’t give out our private addresses or phone numbers. Then, don’t visit unknown websites or click the unknown e-mails. It can help keep us away from dangers. Never meet online friends alone or give our real names, telephone numbers to anyone online. Tell our parents who we are in touch with online. Call the police for help when we are in danger. Let’s work together to create a safer online environment. Li Hua, China 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：结合自己的生活或学习经历，围绕“网络安全”进行写作，需适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从网络的利弊引入主题； 第二步，分点列举确保网上安全的建议； 第三步，总结全文，呼吁共建安全网络环境。 [亮点词汇] ①keep sb. away from让某人远离…… ②be in touch with与……保持联系 ③in danger处于危险中 [高分句型] ①Sometimes we may see some negative and harmful information which is bad for our mental needs.（which引导的定语从句） ②First, protect our private information, which means we can’t give out our private addresses or phone numbers.（祈使句；定语从句） ③Call the police for help when we are in danger.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $