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Starter Unit 3 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“庭院与农场”主题,写一篇班级分享稿,介绍一处熟悉的自然场景(庭院/农场)、其中的动植物及游玩乐趣,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“自然与动植物”相关核心词汇(如yard、farm、animal、plant、rabbit、tomato、flower、count、feed等)及短语;
2.能熟练运用指示代词(this/that/these/those)区分单复数事物,用How many询问数量,用一般现在时描述场景特征;
3.能按“场景介绍→动植物描述→游玩乐趣”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“感受自然之美”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:描述类说明文,兼具画面感与趣味性;
2.人称:第一人称(分享个人所见所感);
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1处自然场景、3种以上动植物、1-2个游玩活动”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,时态以一般现在时为主,描述生动具体,情感真切。
思路点拨
1.开头:点明场景名称(如爷爷的庭院、叔叔的农场,参考课本Fu Xing爷爷的庭院、Han Lin叔叔的农场案例),概括场景整体特征(如热闹、美丽、充满生机等);
2.中间:结合课本核心知识点,用指示代词介绍场景中的动植物,用How many询问并描述数量,搭配颜色、形态等形容词增强细节;
3.结尾:分享在场景中的游玩乐趣或感受,呼应单元“自然场景带来快乐”的核心主题。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:场景介绍
基础句式:My favourite natural place is ________. It’s ________ my home. There are many interesting plants and animals there. I love going there to play and explore.
示例:My favourite natural place is my grandpa’s yard. It’s behind my home. There are many interesting plants and animals there. I love going there to play and explore.
第二段:动植物描述
基础句式:Look! What’s that? It’s a ________. It’s ________. What are these? They’re ________. There are ________ of them. I often ________ with them.
示例:Look! What’s that? It’s a white rabbit. It’s very cute. What are these? They’re tomato plants. There are ten of them. I often water the plants and feed the rabbit with my grandpa.
第三段:游玩乐趣
基础句式:There are so many fun things to do in ________. I can ________, and I can also ________. It’s a wonderful place to feel nature. I always have a great time there!
示例:There are so many fun things to do in my grandpa’s yard. I can count the ducks in the small lake, and I can also pick fresh flowers. It’s a wonderful place to feel nature. I always have a great time there!
范文
My Grandpa’s Happy Yard
My favourite place is my grandpa’s yard. It’s a small but lively place in front of his house. There are all kinds of plants and animals, making it full of life.
Look at those plants! These are carrot plants with green leaves, and those are pink flowers near the wall. What’s that under the apple tree? It’s a little dog. It likes to run around the yard. There are also twelve cute rabbits—eight white ones and four black ones. I often count them with my friends. Near the gate, there are some tomato plants. The tomatoes are red and juicy.
I love playing in the yard. I can help grandpa water the plants, feed the rabbits, and even pick apples from the tree in autumn. It’s not just a yard; it’s a place full of joy. Being close to nature here makes me happy every time!
范文中文翻译
爷爷的快乐庭院
我最喜欢的地方是爷爷的庭院。它是爷爷家门前一处不大但充满生机的地方,有各种各样的动植物,让这里处处是活力。
看看那些植物!这些是长着绿叶的胡萝卜苗,墙边那些是粉色的花。苹果树下那个是什么?是一只小狗,它喜欢在院子里跑来跑去。院子里还有十二只可爱的兔子——八只白色的和四只黑色的。我经常和朋友们一起数它们。大门旁边有几株西红柿苗,结出的西红柿又红又多汁。
我喜欢在庭院里玩耍。我可以帮爷爷浇花、喂兔子,秋天还能从树上摘苹果。这里不只是一处庭院,更是充满欢乐的地方。每次亲近这里的自然,我都特别开心!
素材积累
核心短语
natural place 自然场景
apple tree 苹果树
tomato plant 西红柿苗
carrot plant 胡萝卜苗
feed the rabbit 喂兔子
water the plants 浇植物
pick flowers 摘花
count the ducks 数鸭子
small lake 小湖
full of life 充满生机
fresh and juicy 新鲜多汁
run around 跑来跑去
close to nature 亲近自然
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
What’s this / that? It’s a + 动物/植物.
What’s that? It’s a duck.
What are these / those? They’re + 动物/植物复数.
What are these? They’re flower plants.
How many + 复数名词 + can you see? I can see + 数字.
How many rabbits can you see? I can see nine.
There are + 数字 + + 复数名词 + in the + 场景.
There are five chicken in the yard.
I often + 动作 + in the + 场景.
I often play with the dog in the farm.
好句集锦
1.Nature is the best playground—every plant and animal has a story to tell.
2.The yard/farm is like a treasure box, full of interesting things to discover.
3.Playing with animals and watching plants grow makes life colorful and happy.
谚语
1.Nature is the art of God.(自然是上帝的艺术品)
2.Plants and animals are our good friends.(动植物是我们的好朋友)
学生写作填空练习版
My Favourite Natural Place
My favourite natural place is ________. It’s ________ my home. There are many plants and animals there, and it’s very beautiful.
What’s that? It’s a ________. It’s ________. What are these? They’re ________. How many ________ can you see? I can see ________. I often ________ with them.
I love this place because I can ________ and ________. It’s full of fun and joy. Being here makes me feel close to nature. I always have a great time when I come here!
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