Unit3写作专项：What Makes a Great Team -2025-2026学年外研版英语八年级下册

外研英语八下Unit3写作专项 What Makes a Great Team 写作目标 结合本单元“优秀团队的特质”的核心目标，能写一篇短文描述一支优秀团队及其实践经历，内容包括：团队的基本信息、核心成就、协作过程，以及团队优秀的关键原因。 1. 能正确使用情态动词should/have to（本单元核心语法）描述团队协作的建议与成员责任； 2. 能运用本单元与团队、协作相关的词汇（如teamwork、effort、support、achieve、share tasks）撰写短文； 3. 能遵循记叙文的基本格式，语言流畅、逻辑清晰，贴合“团队协作创造价值”的日常写作场景。 题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（故事类短文），要求描述一支优秀团队及其实践经历，需遵循记叙文“团队介绍—协作过程—特质总结”的格式规范，契合本单元“探讨优秀团队特质”的写作要求。 2. 人称：以第三人称（they/it）为主，客观介绍团队的相关信息；涉及个人视角时可简要用第一人称（I），符合短文的人称使用规范。 3. 时态：核心用一般过去时描述团队的协作过程、取得的成就（本单元核心时态）；用一般现在时说明优秀团队的特质，结合情态动词should/have to表达建议与责任（本单元重点语法），难度适配八年级学生水平。 4. 核心要求 内容：写清团队的名称、核心成就、协作过程（时间、地点、关键行动），说明团队优秀的关键原因，体现本单元“团队协作创造价值”的目标。 格式：包含开头引入、正文描述（团队+协作过程）、结尾总结（优秀特质）三部分。 词数：80-120词，句子以简单句和复合句为主。 典型例题 优秀的团队往往通过默契协作实现共同目标，每一支优秀团队都有其独特的特质。请你以“A Great Team I Know”为题，写一篇短文，内容需说明这支团队的基本信息、协作经历、核心成就，以及它之所以优秀的原因。 要点： 1. 你了解的优秀团队是什么？它的名称和核心目标是什么？ 2. 这支团队为实现目标付出了怎样的协作努力？（时间、地点、关键行动） 3. 他们取得了什么核心成就？ 4. 结合情态动词should/have to，说明这支团队优秀的关键原因。 思路点拨 1. 开头引入：首先简洁点明优秀团队的核心意义，引出自己了解的一支具体优秀团队，开门见山，呼应本单元主题。 2. 正文描述：接着详细说明团队的基本信息（名称、目标），用一般过去时描述团队的协作过程（时间、地点、分工行动），以及最终取得的核心成就，让读者清晰了解团队的实践经历。 3. 结尾总结：最后结合情态动词should/have to，总结这支团队优秀的关键特质，呼应“什么造就优秀团队”的主题，让短文结构完整、立意明确。 写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 第一段：开头引入 写作目的：点明优秀团队的意义，引出个人了解的具体优秀团队，呼应本单元主题。 必写要素：主题点题 + 引出具体团队 基础句式：A great team can achieve more through teamwork. I know a wonderful team called _______(团队名) that has done something amazing. 示例：A great team can achieve more through teamwork. I know a wonderful team called “Eco Cleaners” that has done something amazing for our city. 第二段：正文描述（团队+协作过程+成就） 写作目的：用一般过去时描述团队的协作过程、分工行动，说明核心成就，运用本单元核心词汇。 必写要素：团队目标 + 协作过程 + 核心成就 基础句式：Their goal was to _______(团队目标). Last _______(时间), they gathered at _______(地点) and divided the tasks clearly. Some _______(行动1), others _______(行动2). Finally, they _______(核心成就) successfully. 示例：Their goal was to make our city park cleaner. Last Sunday, they gathered at the city park and divided the tasks clearly. Some picked up litter in the grass, others sorted the waste into recycling bins. Finally, they cleaned 50kg of waste successfully. 第三段：结尾总结（优秀特质） 写作目的：结合情态动词should/have to，总结团队优秀的关键特质，升华主题，呼应单元核心问题。 必写要素：核心特质 + 主题呼应 基础句式：This team is great because members _______(特质). They show that a great team should _______ and have to _______. 示例：This team is great because members support each other and work hard. They show that a great team should share tasks and have to work together. 范文 英文 A Great Team I Know A great team can achieve more through teamwork. I know a wonderful team called “Eco Cleaners” that has done something amazing for our city.（开头引入，点出主题） Their goal was to make our city park cleaner. Last Sunday, they gathered at the city park and divided the tasks clearly. Some picked up litter in the grass, others sorted the waste into recycling bins. Finally, they cleaned 50kg of waste successfully.（团队+协作过程+成就） This team is great because members support each other and work hard. They show that a great team should share tasks and have to work together.（结尾总结，用情态动词点明优秀特质） 中文翻译 我了解的一支优秀团队 一支优秀的团队通过协作能取得更多成就。我知道一支名为“环保清洁队”的出色团队，他们为我们的城市做了一件了不起的事。 他们的目标是让我们的城市公园变得更干净。上周日，他们在城市公园集合，清晰地分配了任务。一些人清理草地上的垃圾，另一些人将垃圾分类放进回收箱。最后，他们成功清理了50公斤的垃圾。 这支团队之所以优秀，是因为成员们互相支持、努力工作。他们向我们展示，一支优秀的团队应该分担任务，并且必须共同努力。 素材积累 短语 1. through teamwork — 通过团队协作 2. divide the tasks — 分配任务 3. gather at — 在……集合 4. pick up litter — 捡拾垃圾 5. sort waste — 分类垃圾 6. support each other — 互相支持 7. share tasks — 分担任务 8. work together — 共同努力 9. achieve a goal — 实现目标 10. make efforts — 付出努力 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 Team members should support each other. Classmates should help each other in group work. They have to divide tasks clearly to save time. We have to make a plan first to finish the work well. A great team can achieve more through teamwork. A good group can solve problems easily through cooperation. 好句集锦 1. Teamwork is the key to a great team—no one can achieve success alone.（团队协作是优秀团队的关键——没有人能独自取得成功。） 2. Clear division of tasks and mutual support make a team stronger and more efficient.（清晰的分工和互相支持让团队更强大、更高效。） 3. Every member of a great team should shoulder their responsibilities and work hard for the common goal.（优秀团队的每一位成员都应该承担责任，为共同的目标努力。） 4. Through joint efforts, even difficult tasks can be finished easily by a great team.（通过共同努力，优秀的团队甚至能轻松完成困难的任务。） 谚语 1. Unity is strength.（团结就是力量。） 2. Two heads are better than one.（三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。） 学生写作填空练习版 A Great Team I Know A great team can achieve more through teamwork. I know a wonderful team called _______(1) (如“Eco Cleaners”) that has done something amazing for _______(2) (如our city). Their goal was to _______(3) (如make our city park cleaner). Last _______(4) (如Sunday), they gathered at _______(5) (如the city park) and divided the tasks clearly. Some _______(6) (如picked up litter), others _______(7) (如sorted the waste). Finally, they _______(8) (如cleaned 50kg of waste) successfully. This team is great because members _______(9) (如support each other). They show that a great team should _______(10) (如share tasks) and have to _______(11) (如work together). 填空答案 1. “Eco Cleaners” 2. our city 3. make our city park cleaner 4. Sunday 5. the city park 6. picked up litter 7. sorted the waste 8. cleaned 50kg of waste 9. support each other and work hard 10. share tasks 11. work together ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $