Unit 4 课时6 Section B 3a-3c 含交互动画（课件) 英语新教材人教版八年级下册

null Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature Section B 课型：写作课 主讲人：XXX 3a-3c 通过听、读、看等方式，获取并正确认读关于自然景观、旅行体验等主题词汇（如 amazing, natural, largest, alive, clear, colourful 等），感知描述性形容词和数词的用法。（学习理解） 01 通过阅读分析，获取文本中关于大堡礁、青海湖等自然景观的关键信息，归纳并内化描述地点特征、表达游玩建议的常用表达（如 Located on/in...; It is one of the...; It takes up an area of...; If..., you can...）（应用实践） 02 通过讨论和写作练习，理解描述自然景观的词汇在实际语境中的运用，能够主动用所学词汇介绍一处自己喜爱的自然景观，并认同保护自然奇观的重要性。（迁移创新） 03 学习目标 01 Lead in What do you know about the Great Barrier Reef? Lead in 02 Pre-writing Read for content Read the title and the first two sentences. What kind of text is this? a story a news report an advertisement What is the purpose of an advertisement like this? To attract readers' interest, provide key information, and encourage them to visit. Read for content Read and complete the mind map. The Great Barrier Reef An advertisement Beginning Ending Do you love....? ...visiting...dream of a lifetime! 吸引读者 呼吁行动 Key information location: What’s special? size: What you can do/see? northeastern coast of Australia the most amazing places the biggest coral reef alive the largest living structure 345,000 square kilometres swim or dive in the clear water see coral, plants and colourful fish even see large fish, turtles and sharks Read again. Circle the numbers and underline the adjectives used to describe the Great Barrier Reef. Read for language 3a Why does the writer use so many adjectives and numbers? Adjectives make descriptions more vivid(更生动). Numbers make information more specific.(更具体). They make advertisements more attractive and persuasive(更具吸引力和说服力) Read again and find the structure. Read for structure Hook 用问句吸引读者，引出主题 Details 介绍位置、规模、基本特色 Experience 描述旅游活动与独特景观 Call to action 用感叹句强化吸引力，鼓励前往 03 While-writing 3b Read notes on Qinghai Lake. Rewrite them in full sentences. Qinghai Lake What: a salt lake Where: Qinghai Province, China Special fact: the largest lake in China (4,340 km2) Things to do: photograph wildlife (fish and birds), visit islands, ride a bike or horse 1. Qinghai Lake is a _____________in ________________________. 2. Qinghai Lake is_____________________in China. 3. It is ______________________________in size. 4. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can _______________________________ _________________________. salt lake Qinghai Province, China the largest lake 4,340 square kilometres photograph wildlife, visit islands, ride a bike or horse Write sentences the Great Barrier Reef the Qinghai Lake 原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit. 模仿: 原句：It is the biggest coral reef in the world. 模仿： 原句：If you dive deeper, you might even see large fish, turtles, and sharks. 模仿： 1 2 3 Located in Qinghai Province, the northwestern of China, the Qinghai Lake is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the latgest salt lake in China. If you walk along the lake, you might even see beautiful birds and colourful flowers. Write sentences the Qinghai Lake 用“if”引导的条件句和形容词比较级/最高级，描述青海湖的其他特色。 Qinghai Lake is more beautiful in summer. If you visit in July, you can see many birds and fields of blooming rape flowers(油菜花). Group work to make some new sentences. For example: If you stand by the lake and look to the distance, you will see the clearest blue water stretching to the sky. Part 1 Hook 用问句吸引读者，引出主题 Details 介绍位置、规模、基本特色 Experience 描述旅游活动与独特景观 Call to action 用感叹句强化吸引力，鼓励前往 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Qinghai Lake: An Amazing Highland Wonder 3c Write an advertisement for Qinghai Lake . Try to make your advertisement as persuasive as possible. Do you love quiet lakes and amazing wildlife? Then visit Qinghai Lake! Located in Qinghai Province, it is the largest salt lake in China, covering 4,340 square kilometres. ... If you ... you can .../ you can see... Come to Qinghai Lake and make your dream come true! Title Writng time Write an advertisement for Qinghai Lake. Example: Qinghai Lake: An Amazing Highland Wonder Do you love quiet lakes and amazing wildlife? Then visit Qinghai Lake! Located in Qinghai Province, the northwestern of China, the Qinghai Lake is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the largest salt lake in China, covering 4,340 square kilometres. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can photograph wildlife, visit islands, ride a bike or horse. Qinghai Lake is more beautiful in summer. If you visit in July, you can see many beautiful birds and fields of blooming rape flowers. Walk along the lake and enjoy the clear blue water stretching to the sky—every view is a wonderful surprise. Come to Qinghai Lake and make your dream come true! 04 Post-writing Pair work to evaluate your writing. Evaluation content 1. 包含青海湖核心信息（咸水湖、位置、面积、中国最大湖） 2. 列出至少2项可体验活动 3. 突出独特卖点，有说服力 language 1. 正确使用形容词、数据和描述性词汇 2. 句式多样，无明显语法错误 3. 拼写准确，用词恰当 structure 1. 开头吸引人，结尾有号召力 2. 段落清晰，过渡自然 Evaluate your writing 也可以在豆包搜索智能体“英语作文批改助手” 拍照上传你的作文进行修改。 Correct your writing 点击下面的网页查看作文批改： 点击下面的网页输入你的作文在线批改： 05 Summary Writing travel advertisement Beginning Body (key information) Ending 用问句吸引读者，引出主题 Do you love...? Do you want to visit...? 位置：Located in/on/at... northeastern 规模：It takes up an area of 345,000 square kilometres. 特色：biggest, largest, longest... 体验：If you visit... you can do/see colourful... 用感叹句强化吸引力，号召前往 For people who love ..., visiting ... is the dream of a lifetime! Summary 06 Language Points 词 讲 练 include /ɪnˈkluːd/ v. 包含；包括 1.The price of the tour includes ________ (visit) the museum. 2.Everyone _________ (include) in the meeting should arrive on time. Language points 用法：不用于进行时。其后可接名词、代词或动词-ing 作宾语，不可接动词不定式。例句：Students should master one or two life skills every year. These skills can include cooking, washing their own clothes and tidying their rooms. visiting included 单词 词性 含义 用法 including 介词 包括……在内 后跟名词或代词作宾语。 included 形容词 包括在内的 只能位于名词或代词后，作后置定语。 语境串记：The whole family will tour some big cities, including Beijing and Shanghai. So everyone is very happy, me included. 全家人将去包括北京和上海在内的一些大城市旅游。因此大家非常开心，包括我在内。 词 讲 练 alive /əˈlaɪv/ adj. 活着；在世；有活力 Language points 单词 词性 词义 用法说明 alive 形容词 活着的 表语形容词，不直接修饰名词，be alive 活着 lively 形容词 活泼的 可作定语/表语，a lively child 活泼的孩子 常用搭配：come alive 热闹起来；有精神起来 bring sth. alive 使……有趣；变得有生气 例句：Love your parents well while they are alive. Don’t wait until it is too late. She comes alive when she sits down at the piano. 1.The fish is still _________ in the water.（alive/lively） 2.We had a _________ time at the party.（alive/lively） alive lively 07 Exercise Exercise 假设你是张明，你的澳大利亚朋友 Alex 计划来中国体验自然景观。请你写一封邮件，向他推荐你喜爱的自然景观——桂林山水(Guilin's landscape)。 内容提示：1. 景观位置与基本概况 2. 独特之处（至少两点） 3. 游玩建议（如乘船、徒步等） 要求：1.包括全部内容提示，语言流畅，语法正确 2.100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数 参考词汇：广西壮族自治区 the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region；漓江 the Lijiang River；乘坐竹筏 take a bamboo-raft ride Dear Alex, I strongly recommend Guilin's landscape to you. ____________________________ Yours, Zhang Ming Exercise Dear Alex, I strongly recommend Guilin's landscape to you. Yours, Guilin is in the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, famous for its beautiful mountains and clean water. The most special things are the strange-shaped mountains and the clear Lijiang River. The water is so clear that you can see the fish swimming. Also, the mountains look like different animals from different angles, which is really amazing. For fun, you can take a bamboo-raft ride down the Lijiang River to enjoy the views. You can also hike up the mountains for a bird's-eye view. I'm sure you'll have a great time here. Yours, Zhang Ming Example: 08 Homework Homework 基础作业 拓展作业 实践作业 重新誊写修改好的青海湖旅游广告英文写作。 仿写广告：模仿大堡礁的广告，选你喜欢的一处自然奇观，写一篇80词左右的英文广告，尽量用到本节课学的词汇和句型。 用英语向家人或朋友介绍你最想去的一处自然景观，并通过调查了解该自然景观目前面临的环境问题，并提出1条保护建议，最后录成一段宣讲视频，时长1-2分钟。 Thank you for listening 英语作文批改报告 Qinghai Lake: An Amazing Highland Wonder 主题：旅游广告宣传 | 满分：10分 原文批改 (点击高亮处查看建议) 听取点评 Qinghai Lake: An Amazing Highland Wonder Do you love quiet lakes and amazing wildlife? Then visit Qinghai Lake! Located in Qinghai Province, the northwestern of China, the Qinghai Lake is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the largest salt lake in China, covering 4,340 square kilometres. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can photograph wildlife, visit islands, ride a bike or horse. Qinghai Lake is more beautiful in summer. If you visit in July, you can see many beautiful birds and fields of blooming rape flowers. Walk along the lake and enjoy the clear blue water stretching to the sky—every view is a wonderful surprise. Come to Qinghai Lake and make your dream come true! 最终得分 (10分制) 9.0 优秀 (Excellent) 维度打分 内容完整度 4.0 / 4 语言表达 3.2 / 4 逻辑结构 1.8 / 2 ✨ 亮点闪烁 • 词汇丰富：使用了 photograph, blooming, stretching 等生动词汇。 • 句式多样：结合了疑问句、祈使句和条件状语从句。 • 感染力强：结尾有力，符合广告宣传的语境。 📝 内容完整度 (4/4) 文章涵盖了地理位置、基本概况（最大咸水湖）、旅游活动及最佳旅游季节，信息非常全面，完美契合广告主题。 🔤 语言表达 (3.2/4) 整体表达流畅，意境优美。但在方位词的使用（northwestern vs northwest）和专有名词冠词的使用上存在小失误。 🏗️ 逻辑结构 (1.8/2) 结构清晰，从引人入胜的提问开始，到具体介绍，最后以号召行动结束。段落衔接自然，逻辑性强。 👩‍🏫 老师点评与建议 总评：这是一篇非常出色的旅游广告作文。你生动地描述了青海湖的壮丽景色和丰富活动，语言优美且富有感染力。你对词汇的选择（如 rape flowers, stretching to the sky）让读者仿佛身临其境。 成长建议： 方位词精准使用：注意 northwest (名词/副词) 与 northwestern (形容词) 的区别。 冠词习惯：积累专有名词（如湖泊、山脉、河流）前冠词的使用规律。 地道表达积累：可以尝试使用更多修辞手法，如拟人或比喻，让广告词更具诱惑力。 WritingMaster AI 实时英语作文批改与提升系统 清空内容 立即批阅 输入您的作文 0 单词 智能批改反馈 综合评估 - GRADE 内容丰富性 0% 语言准确性 0% 结构逻辑性 0% 💡 提升建议 ✨ 表达升级参考 $null