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写作话题8 尊老爱幼,懂得感恩
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一、词汇积累
感恩
的原
因及
践行
途径 【原因】traditional virtues 传统美德 the love from one's family 来自家人的
爱 feel grateful for others' effort 对他人的付出心怀感激 realize the value
of gratitude 认识到感恩的价值 appreciate the care from the elders 感激长辈
的关怀 give me good advice 为我提供好的建议 parents' endless support 父
母无尽的支持 teach me many helpful skills 教我很多有用的技能 receive
encouragement in difficulties 在困难中获得鼓励 selfless love and endless
effort 无私的爱与不懈的努力 put children's needs above one's own 把孩子
的需求置于自己之上 set a good example by working hard and being kind
以勤奋善良树立好榜样
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感恩
的原
因及
践行
途径 【践行途径】respect the old and care for the young 尊老爱幼 show respect
for the elderly 尊重长辈 offer to help 主动提供帮助 offer emotional
support 提供情感支持 have heart-to-heart talks 进行贴心的交谈 listen to
their stories patiently 耐心倾听他们的故事 share burdens with parents 为父
母分担重担 live up to sb.'s expectations 不辜负某人的期望
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感恩
他人
的经
历及
感悟 【事件与反馈】help with housework/chores 帮忙做家务 wash clothes 洗衣服
mop the floor 拖地 clean the kitchen 打扫厨房 take out the trash 倒垃圾
prepare a surprise gift 准备惊喜礼物 decorate a card with photos 用照片装
饰卡片 write down sincere words 写下肺腑之言 collect memories 收集回忆
cook a meal for one's parents 为父母做一顿饭 spend hours preparing 花数
小时准备 cook one's parents' favorite dish 做父母最喜欢的菜 smile
happily/be moved to tears 开心微笑/感动落泪 praise the dish 称赞菜肴
【感悟】develop a sense of responsibility 培养责任感 understand the
meaning of giving 理解付出的意义 feel the warmth of caring for each
other 感受相互关爱的温暖 small actions make a big difference 小行动起到
大作用
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二、佳句迁移
维度1 感恩的原因及践行途径
佳句示范 迁移运用
1.感恩的对象·开篇 I'm sure that you all
have your own memories about the happiness of
the last three years, and the people whom you want
to thank for it. (I'm sure that...结构作为开场白更
容易引起共鸣;whom引导定语从句) 1.我相信我们都有想要表达感激
之情的人。
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I'm sure that we all have the people to whom we want to show our gratitude.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
2.感恩的原因·主体 She always talks to me
in French to help me practice.(always加强语气,强
调主语的付出;动词不定式结构表目的) 2.他们总是在那里为我提供支持
和鼓励。
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They are always there to
provide me with support and
encouragement.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
3.践行途径·结尾 Mario Green and Mary
Brown from Riverside High School give up several
hours each week to help others. (give up在这里引
申为“牺牲;腾出”之意,表明句中人物是自愿付出时
间) 3.我们可以每周抽出几个小时与
父母进行贴心的交谈。
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We can give up several hours each week to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents.
维度2 感恩他人的经历及感悟
佳句示范 迁移运用
4.引出经历·开篇 Have you ever felt deeply
thankful for someone's help? 4.你曾经为父母准备过特别的东西吗?
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Have you ever prepared something
special for your parents?
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佳句示范 迁移运用
5.事件·主体 When my parents
came home, they were happy to find that I
could cook and tidy up now. (when引导时
间状语从句;“sb.+be+adj.+to do sth.”结构表
现人物对于做某事的感受) 5.当妈妈回来时,她很高兴收到这个礼
物,并发现我长大了,而且学会了
感恩。
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6.表达感谢·结尾 外研九下 I give the yellow
rose to my parents for teaching me that
love is about trust. 6.我衷心感谢妈妈在过去所做的一切。
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______________________________
When my mom came back, she was
happy to receive the gift, and find
that I had grown up and learned to
be thankful.
I give my sincere thanks to my mom for what she did in the past.
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孝亲敬长,点滴践行 “孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德,家中的老
人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。你校英语广播站正开展“孝敬长辈,从点滴做起”的好点子征集
活动。请你推荐一至两个切实可行的点子并讲述理由,号召更多的人孝敬长辈、传承美
德。要求:
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右。
参考词汇:care for the old 关爱老人;traditional virtue 传统美德
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1 审题
主题 文体 人称 时态
孝亲敬长的建议 应用文 第一人称 一般现在时
2 列纲
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3 升级
Hello, everyone. Caring for the old is a cherished traditional virtue in Chinese
culture. The old in the family especially need care. ① Here are two practical ways
I'd like to share.
First, we can read books to them. ②This allows us to spend quality time
together. It also brings them joy and happiness. ③ Second, we should teach them
new skills. ④Learning these things helps them feel less lonely and stay happy. It
also shows we care about their needs.
初步成文
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These small acts of kindness make a big difference. Remember, everyone will
grow old someday, so let's take action to look after the old well.
Thank you.
①用methods升级词汇
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Here are two practical methods I'd like to share.
②用not only...but also...合并两个句子
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This not only allows us to spend quality time together, but also brings them joy
and happiness.
③用such as引出例子,扩写句子
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Second, we should teach them new skills, such as using a smartphone and making
video calls.
优化升级
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④用in a good mood短语升级词汇
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Learning these things helps them feel less lonely and stay in a good mood. It also
shows we care about their needs.
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4 成篇
Hello, everyone. Caring for the old is a cherished traditional virtue in Chinese
culture. The old in the family especially need care. ①Here are two practical
methods I'd like to share.
First, we can read books to them. ②This not only allows us to spend quality
time together, but also brings them joy and happiness. ③Second, we should teach
them new skills, such as using a smartphone and making video calls. ④Learning
these things helps them feel less lonely and stay in a good mood. It also shows we
care about their needs.
These small acts of kindness make a big difference. Remember, everyone will
grow old someday, so let's take action to look after the old well.
Thank you.
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Writing 1 感恩的原因及践行途径
假如你是李涛,你们学校英语社团正在开展以“感恩”为主题的征文活动。请你认真
阅读以下通知,并按要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。#1
实战演练
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Notice
Dear students,
Fathers play a very important role in our life. Today is Father's Day. How
will you thank him? Please write a short passage about your plan.
Here are some questions to help you.
●What do you want to say to him?
●What are you going to do for him?
●Why are you going to do that?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Club
参考词汇:cook a meal, make a gift, take a walk with him, delicious, special, ...#1.1.1
实战演练
要求:
1.短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Today is Father's Day.____
实战演练
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Today is Father's Day.I want to show my love for Dad in special ways.
First, I'll cook a meal for him. Though he's always busy, he never fails to
make delicious food for me—now it's my turn to give him a break. Next, I'll make
a unique gift by hand, something I know he'll treasure. Finally, I'll take an evening
walk with him, sharing funny stories to make him smile.
These small acts carry my big love. Most of all, I want to look into his eyes
and say, “Dad, I love you!”
实战演练
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Writing 2感恩他人的经历及感悟
母爱,是生命中最温暖的港湾。母亲节
就要到了,学校要举办“寸草春晖 感恩母爱”
英语征文主题活动,请根据思维导图提示,
以“Three Acts for My Mother”为题写一篇
英语短文。
要求:
1.文中须包含思维导图所有信息;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
Three Acts for My Mother
实战演练
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Three Acts for My Mother
As Mother's Day approaches, I've prepared three special ways to express my
love for my mother.
First, I'll cook a simple but tasty meal for her. Since she cooks for us every
day, I want to give her a break. Second, I'll make a thank-you card, writing down
all my appreciation for her years of love and care. Lastly, I'll give her a big hug—
sometimes actions speak louder than words.
Preparing these surprises fills me with joy. I hope they'll make my mom feel
loved and happy on her special day!
实战演练
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谢谢观看
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