Unit 1 Music 书面表达10篇（单元话题：音乐）-2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期单元重难点易错题精练（沪教版五四学制）

Unit 1 Music 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 音乐 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。) 音乐，如同无形的画笔，在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时，音乐如阳光洒满心田；在忧伤时，它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴，更是心灵的慰藉，陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节，在寂静中回响，在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类，以及你喜欢它的原因。 文章需要包含以下内容： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．以 “My Favorite Song” 为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 介绍你最喜欢的歌曲是什么； 2. 描述喜欢这首歌的原因（如旋律、歌词、歌手等方面）； 3. 不少于 60 词。 My favorite song ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Please write a passage on “My favourite music piece” in at least 60 words. You are supposed to include： (1)What is your favourite music piece? (2)When and where do you usually listen to it? (3)Why do you like it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite song”. (以“我最喜欢的歌”为话题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What is your favourite song? 2. What kind of song is it? 3. Why do you like the song best? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐（或歌）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What music type is your favourite music/song? 2. Why do you like it? (At least two reasons.) 3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示，给广播站写一封推荐信，推荐你最喜欢的一首歌曲。 字数要求：不少于60 词。 Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考) : （1）Which song would you like to recommend？ （2）What kind of music is it？ （3）Why do you want to recommend the song？ （注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．以“Music and Communication in My Life”为题，写一篇短文，描述音乐和交流在你生活中的作用，以及你遇到的相关经历，词数60词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华，最近你收到了朋友David的来信，他在信中说自己对中国的流行音乐很感兴趣，想让你给他介绍你最喜欢的一首歌。请你给David写一封80词左右的回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to ask you something about Chinese pop music because I’m really interested in it. Please tell me about your favorite Chinese song, the singer of the song, the reason why you like it and how you feel when you listen to it. Could you please write back soon? Yours, David 要求： 1. 针对David的问题，从歌曲、歌手、原因、感受四个方面给出回复; 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Music 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 音乐 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。) 音乐，如同无形的画笔，在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时，音乐如阳光洒满心田；在忧伤时，它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴，更是心灵的慰藉，陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节，在寂静中回响，在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类，以及你喜欢它的原因。 文章需要包含以下内容： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best. Its lively rhythms and meaningful lyrics always make me happy. For example, when I listen to songs about friendship, I feel warm inside. There are two reasons why I love it. First, pop music is easy to sing along with, so I can enjoy it anywhere. Second, it helps me relax after studying. When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. Pop music colors my life with joy and comfort. This is why it’s my favorite! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据要点进行写作，注意条理清晰，语法正确，可以适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的音乐类型是流行音乐； 第二步，介绍喜欢流行音乐的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②calm me down让我平静下来 ③color my life为生活添彩 [高分句型] When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. (when引导时间状语从句) 2．以 “My Favorite Song” 为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 介绍你最喜欢的歌曲是什么； 2. 描述喜欢这首歌的原因（如旋律、歌词、歌手等方面）； 3. 不少于 60 词。 My favorite song ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Song My favorite song is “You Are My Sunshine”. I love this song for several reasons. First of all, the melody is extremely gentle and pleasant. Every time I listen to it, I feel like I’m bathed in warm sunshine, which makes me relaxed and comfortable. Secondly, the lyrics are very touching. They convey a deep sense of love and gratitude. Whenever I’m feeling down, the words “You are my sunshine, my only sunshine. You make me happy when skies are gray.” can always cheer me up. The singer’s voice is also very sweet, which adds more charm to the song. I often listen to this song before going to bed, and it helps me have a good night’s sleep. In a word, “You Are My Sunshine” is more than just a song to me; it’s a source of comfort and strength in my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，提出自己喜欢的歌曲的名字； 第二步，介绍喜欢这首歌的原因； 第三步，总结与情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ① for several reasons出于很多原因 ② first of all首先 ③ cheer sb up使某人振奋起来 [高分句型] Every time I listen to it, I feel like I’m bathed in warm sunshine, which makes me relaxed and comfortable.（非限制性定语从句） 3．Please write a passage on “My favourite music piece” in at least 60 words. You are supposed to include： (1)What is your favourite music piece? (2)When and where do you usually listen to it? (3)Why do you like it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite music piece My favourite music piece is Ludwig van Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata. I usually listen to it in the evening while relaxing in my room or during a quiet walk in the park. The smoothing and sad melody of it helps me relax and think about my day. I love it because it brings up deep emotions and has a calming effect on my mind. The beautiful melody allows me to enter a world of calm and peace, making it the perfect background music for moments of relaxation and thinking. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍最喜欢的音乐作品是什么； 第二步，介绍通常在什么时候及哪里听这首音乐； 第三步，表达喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①think about思考 ②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ③relaxation放松 [高分句型] I love it because it brings up deep emotions and has a calming effect on my mind. (because引导原因状语从句) 4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite song”. (以“我最喜欢的歌”为话题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What is your favourite song? 2. What kind of song is it? 3. Why do you like the song best? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 My Favourite Song My favourite song is My Heart Will Go On. It is a classic English ballad. It is a soft and touching song. The melody is beautiful and full of deep emotions. I like this song for several reasons. First, the story behind the song is so moving. It is from the movie Titanic, which tells a tragic but romantic love story. Whenever I listen to it, the touching scenes in the movie come to my mind. Second, Céline Dion’s voice is amazing. Her singing makes the song even more attractive. This song always cheers me up and makes me feel the power of love. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，直接点明自己最喜欢的歌曲，并对歌曲的类型进行简单介绍； 第二步，详细阐述喜欢这首歌的原因； 第三步，总结这首歌对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 ②be full of 充满 [高分句型] ①It is from the movie Titanic, which tells a tragic but romantic love story. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②Whenever I listen to it, the touching scenes in the movie come to my mind. (whenever引导时间状语从句) 5．Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐（或歌）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What music type is your favourite music/song? 2. Why do you like it? (At least two reasons.) 3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                              My Favourite Music My favourite music is pop music. I like it because it is relaxing and meaningful. First, the melodies are cheerful, and they make me feel happy. Second, the lyrics often tell stories that I can relate to. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. It helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment. Pop music is my favourite because it brings joy to my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：题目给出了三个要点，必须写出所给内容，可以适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲的类型； 第二步，说明喜欢它的原因（至少两个）； 第三步，描述听音乐时的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①relaxing令人放松的 ②meaningful有意义的 ③cheerful愉快的 [高分句型] When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. （时间状语从句） 6．学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示，给广播站写一封推荐信，推荐你最喜欢的一首歌曲。 字数要求：不少于60 词。 Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考) : （1）Which song would you like to recommend？ （2）What kind of music is it？ （3）Why do you want to recommend the song？ （注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I would like to recommend a song called “Count on Me” by Bruno Mars. It has a cheerful melody and heartwarming lyrics about friendship and support. I recommend this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. When I first heard it, I was feeling lonely, but the song instantly made me smile and think of my best friend. I believe playing this song will spread positive energy and encourage everyone to cherish their friendships. I’m sure everybody will enjoy this song. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从推荐哪一首歌曲、是一首什么样的歌曲以及推荐这首歌的原因等方面介绍具体详情。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth想要做某事 ②think of想起…… ③each other彼此 ④feel lonely感到孤独 [高分句型] ①I recommend this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. (状语从句和宾语从句) ②I believe playing this song will spread positive energy and encourage everyone to cherish their friendships. (宾语从句) 7．以“Music and Communication in My Life”为题，写一篇短文，描述音乐和交流在你生活中的作用，以及你遇到的相关经历，词数60词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Music and Communication in My Life Music and communication are both important in my life. Music cheers me up when I’m sad. Soft music makes me relaxed, and energetic music makes me excited. Communication helps me share my feelings. I often talk with my friends about music. Once, I recommended a song to my friend, and we had a great conversation about its meaning. Through music and communication, I can express myself and get closer to others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求描述音乐和交流的作用以及相关经历。可叙述音乐如何改变心情，以及沟通是如何帮助分享感受的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，指出音乐和沟通在个人生活中的角色； 第二步，具体阐述音乐如何根据不同的情境调整情绪——无论是使人放松还是让人兴奋； 第三步，进一步说明通过沟通与朋友分享音乐的经历，以及这如何帮助加深彼此之间的关系。最后总结音乐和沟通对个人生活的积极影响。 [亮点词汇] ①cheer sb up让某人振作起来 ②make sb relaxed使某人放松 ③energetic music充满活力的音乐 ④share my feelings分享我的感受 ⑤recommend a song推荐一首歌 [高分句型] ①Music cheers me up when I’m sad.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Once, I recommended a song to my friend, and we had a great conversation about its meaning. （并列句） ③Through music and communication, I can express myself and get closer to others. （介词短语作为方式状语） 8．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Music Makes Me Happy I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Every time I listen to music, I forget all my worries and unhappiness. It has endless charm and is the most beautiful language in the world. When I feel sad or stressed, music always helps me feel better. It makes me happy and brings joy to my life. I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己对音乐的感受，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍音乐如何使自己开心； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to music听音乐 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. (时间状语从句) ②I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. (原因状语从句) 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是李华，最近你收到了朋友David的来信，他在信中说自己对中国的流行音乐很感兴趣，想让你给他介绍你最喜欢的一首歌。请你给David写一封80词左右的回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to ask you something about Chinese pop music because I’m really interested in it. Please tell me about your favorite Chinese song, the singer of the song, the reason why you like it and how you feel when you listen to it. Could you please write back soon? Yours, David 要求： 1. 针对David的问题，从歌曲、歌手、原因、感受四个方面给出回复; 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear David, I’m glad to hear you’re interested in Chinese pop music. My favorite song is “Qing Hua Ci” by Jay Chou. It’s a beautiful Chinese-style song that combines modern music with traditional poetic lyrics. I like it because the melody is soothing and the lyrics paint vivid pictures of classic Chinese scenery. Whenever I listen to it, I feel relaxed and inspired, as if I’m traveling through ancient China. I hope you’ll enjoy it too! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括歌曲、歌手、喜欢的原因以及听歌时的感受。考生需确保不遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I’m glad to hear you’re interested in Chinese pop music.”表达得知朋友对中国流行音乐感兴趣的高兴心情，并引出要介绍的歌曲； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从歌曲（“Qing Hua Ci”）、歌手（Jay Chou）、原因（melody is soothing and the lyrics paint vivid pictures of classic Chinese scenery）以及感受（feel relaxed and inspired）四个方面详细介绍了这首歌曲； 第三步，书写结语。通过“I hope you’ll enjoy it too!”表达希望朋友也能喜欢这首歌的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①combine...with...将……与……结合 ②soothing舒缓的 ③paint vivid pictures of生动描绘……的画面 [高分句型] ①It’s a beautiful Chinese-style song that combines modern music with traditional poetic lyrics.（“that”引导的定语从句） ②Whenever I listen to it, I feel relaxed and inspired, as if I’m traveling through ancient China.（“Whenever”引导的时间状语从句） 10．音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，校报正在进行有关音乐方面的征文稿，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。 melody n. 旋律 build up confidence建立自信 purify one’s soul净化心灵 内容包括： ●What kind of music do you like? ●One experience where music helped you. ●Why do you like music? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody. Last month, I felt extremely nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：围绕音乐类型（轻音乐）、个人经历（考试前减压）、喜爱原因（建立自信/净化心灵）展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步：说明喜爱的音乐类型及原因； 第二步：描述音乐帮助的经历（考试前听歌放松）； 第三步：总结喜爱音乐的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②build up建立 ③listen to听 [高分句型] ①When I listened to a piece of soft music, I slowly became relaxed and calm.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Listening to music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.（not only...but also...并列结构） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $