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写作突破册
中考英语
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写作话题5 自我认识与自我提升
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一、词汇积累
个人成
长变化
与个人
优势 【性格】optimistic乐观的 humorous幽默的 quiet and shy文静且害羞 more
outgoing than before比从前更外向 be strict with/be hard on oneself严于律
己 be+(表示性格的)形容词/短语 拥有某种性格
【品质】generous and selfless 慷慨无私的 modest谦虚的 creative富有创造
力的 hard-working勤奋的 kind-hearted and helpful 善良且乐于助人的
responsible and independent有责任心且独立的
【特长】be talented in music有音乐天赋 be good at sports擅长运动 stand
out in running 跑步表现突出 be excellent in math在数学方面非常优秀
【提升方法】 insist on reading坚持阅读 expand one's horizons 开阔眼界
stay away from bad habits远离陋习 get into the habit of getting up early
养成早起的习惯
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自我反
思与自
我管理 【问题与不足】be weak in problem-solving在问题解决方面薄弱 have
difficulty/trouble with time management在时间管理上有困难 lack
confidence in communication对交际缺乏信心 have a bad habit of playing
computer games all day 有整天玩电脑游戏的坏习惯
【管理方法】make a plan/schedule 制订计划/时间表 practice daily/regularly
每天/定期练习 manage time effectively 有效管理时间 stay positive 保持积
极乐观
如何成
为新时
代青年 【做法】develop critical and creative thinking 培养批判性与创造性思维
keep lifelong learning 坚持终身学习 take part in community service 参与
社区服务 promote cultural exchanges 促进文化交流 promote all-round
development 促进全面发展 make a difference to society 对社会有影响
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职业
规划 have a dream of being a teacher梦想成为教师 learn professional skills 学
习专业技能
work hard towards one's goal 为目标努力奋斗 hope to make a difference
in education希望在教育领域有所作为
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二、佳句迁移
维度1 个人成长变化与个人优势
佳句示范 迁移运用
1.回顾过去·开篇 I used to be
really shy and took up singing to deal with my
shyness.(used to do sth.过去常常做某事) 1.我过去非常孤独,于是开始参加俱
乐部来应对我的孤独。
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I used to be really lonely and
started joining clubs to deal with
my loneliness.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
2.展现变化·主体 As I got better, I
dared to sing in front of my class, and then
for the whole school.(as引导时间状语从句,体
现变化的逐步发生) 2.随着我变得更自信,我敢于在学校
礼堂表演。
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3.展望未来·结尾 You really
require a lot of talent and hard work to
succeed. Only a very small number of people
make it to the top. 3.学习新技能需要时间,但任何人通
过每日练习都能成功。
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As I became more confident, I
dared to perform in the school
hall.
Learning a new skill takes time,
but anyone can make it with
daily practice.
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维度2 自我反思与自我管理
佳句示范 迁移运用
4.自我认识·开篇 I realize that my
greatest strength is staying calm under
pressure. It helps me solve problems
effectively. 4.我意识到我最好的学习习惯是制订每周计
划。它帮助我有效地平衡各学科。
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I realize that my best study habit is
making a weekly plan. It helps me balance
subjects effectively.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
5.自我反思·主体 There is always
plenty of housework to do, but we
simply do not help our parents do it.
(there be结构) 5.学生们总是有大量的学习任务要完成,但他
们往往不能有效地管理他们的时间。
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6.自我管理·结尾 You'll make mistakes
along the way, but the key is to learn
from your mistakes and never give
up. 6.有时候你在学习上可能会遇到困难,但关键
是要制订一个有规律的时间表,永不放弃。
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There are always plenty of study tasks to
finish, but students often fail to manage
their time effectively.
You may have trouble learning sometimes,
but the key is to make a regular schedule
and never give up.
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维度3 如何成为新时代青年
佳句示范 迁移运用
7.引入·开篇 Today I see a
room full of talented young adults who are
full of hope for the future. You've all grown
up so much and I'm so proud of you.
(who引导定语从句) 7.为祖国发展贡献力量的青年对祖国的
成就感到自豪。
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Young people who contribute to their nation's development are proud of its achievements.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
8.做法建议·主体 You have to get a
good education and keep your eye on your
goal. 8.要想成为一个优秀的青少年,你应该
密切关注你的成长和变化。
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9.升华·结尾 As you set out on
your new journey, you shouldn't forget
where you came from. The future is yours.
(where引导宾语从句,补充细节) 9.作为青少年,我们必须开始探索自身
优势能在何处为国家做贡献。
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To become an outstanding teenager,
you should keep your eye on your
growth and change.
As teenagers, we must set out to
explore where our strengths can
contribute to the country.
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维度4 职业规划
佳句示范 迁移运用
10.职业规划·开篇 Everyone has
dreams. But you'd better think about what you
should do to make your dreams come true.
(had better do sth.使语气委婉; what引导宾语
从句,补充细节) 10.人人都有职业目标,但你最好规
划需要学习什么来实现它们。
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Everyone has career goals, but
you'd better plan what you need
to learn to achieve them.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
11.做法建议·主体 If you're very
interested in something, you usually want to be
good at it. You'll keep on practising and you'll
be successful.(if引导条件状语从句,逻辑连贯) 11.若想从事理想职业,你应学习相
关技能。通过不断自我提升,你将
实现职业目标。
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If you want to pursue your ideal career, you should learn relevant skills. By keeping on improving yourself, you'll achieve your career goal.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
12.升华·结尾 There are so many good
choices. It's hard to choose just one. The main
thing is to know yourself and to choose the
right path for you. (The main thing is to...可
与It's important to...结构交替使用,避免重复,
使句式富于变化) 12.在我看来,关键在于相信你自己
并在面对挑战时保持积极乐观。
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In my opinion, the main thing is to believe in yourself and to stay positive when facing challenges.
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21世纪青年的核心技能 要想成就一番事业,实现梦想,必须要
有丰富的知识和过硬的本领。很多同学从小就开始学习画画、唱歌、跳舞、或是某项体
育运动……通过勤学苦练,已经掌握了一项相当了得的本领。在诸多本领中,你认为作
为21世纪的青少年,哪几种本领是至关重要的?为什么?请以“Core skills in the 21st
century”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:
1.写出至少两个核心技能;
2.阐述选择每个核心技能的原因。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2.词数100左右,可适当发挥。
Core skills in the 21st century
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1 审题
主题 文体 人称 时态
21世纪青年的核心技能 议论文 第一、三人称 一般现在时
2 列纲
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3 升级
Core skills in the 21st century
①In the 21st century, two core skills are important for teenagers: digital skills
and communication skills.
Digital skills are necessary because we live in a digital age. We use digital
devices like computers and smartphones every day. With good digital skills, we can
search for information, study online and communicate with others more effectively.
② We can take online courses to learn new knowledge.
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Communication skills also matter a lot. We need to express our ideas clearly
and listen to others. ③ Good communication can help us build better relationships
with people around us.. .It enables us to work together smoothly and solve problems
easily.
④Mastering digital and communication skills can help us succeed in the modern
world.#1.2
①用of great importance升级词汇
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In the 21st century, two core skills are important for teenagers: digital skills and
communication skills.
②添加for example进行衔接过渡
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We can take online courses to learn new knowledge.
③添加in group work or daily life突出良好沟通技能的适用场景
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Good communication can help us build better relationships with people around us.
④添加总结归纳过渡语
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Mastering digital and communication skills can help us succeed in the modern world.
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4 成篇
Core skills in the 21st century
①In the 21st century, two core skills are of great importance for teenagers:
digital skills and communication skills.
Digital skills are necessary because we live in a digital age. We use digital
devices like computers and smartphones every day. With good digital skills, we can
search for information, study online and communicate with others more effectively.
②For example, we can take online courses to learn new knowledge.
Communication skills also matter a lot. We need to express our ideas clearly
and listen to others. ③In group work or daily life, good communication can help us
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build better relationships with people around us. It enables us to work together
smoothly and solve problems easily.
④In conclusion, mastering digital and communication skills can help us succeed
in the modern world.#1.2
Writing 1 个人成长变化与个人优势
初中三年,你发现自己不论在学习还是生活上都变得越来越独立,越来越成熟,这
和老师及父母对你的帮助是分不开的。请你根据下面的表格内容和写作要求,以“I've
become more independent now”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的老师和父母是如何帮
助你变得独立的。
Teachers teach me different learning methods;
...
Parents ask me to do the housework;
...
Your opinion ...
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写作要求:
1.短文必须包括提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
I've become more independent now
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I've become more independent now
Since I started middle school, I have become more independent both in my
studies and in my personal life.
My teachers have taught me different learning methods to help me do well in
my classes. They encourage me not only to develop a good habit of learning but
also to do more sports. At home, my parents usually ask me to do some housework
when I am free. What's more, they give me more freedom to make choices and join
in social activities.
Thanks to my teachers and parents, I can do more things by myself and
become more confident now.
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Writing 2 自我反思与自我管理
自我反思与评价是培养学生英语自主学习和终身学习能力的有效方式。假如你叫李
平,是一名九年级的学生。请结合下面的英语学习自我评价表,用英语写一篇短文,对
你的英语学习情况进行反思和评价。#1
Self-assessment(自我评价)
How much do you enjoy English lessons?
How well can you use the language and cultural knowledge?
How well can you answer questions in English classes?
How well can you use thinking skills and learning strategies
(策略)?
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How are you satisfied with your performance in group
activities?
How are you going to improve your English learning?
写作要求:
1.介绍你英语学习中做得较好的和不足的方面;#1.1.1.1
2.提出自我改进意见并说明理由;
3.文中必须包含上表提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
4.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
5.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I'm Li Ping. This is my self-assessment report on English learning.____
续表
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I'm Li Ping. This is my self-assessment report on English learning.English is my
favourite subject. I enjoy English lessons very much. I often read English books and
watch English movies, which helps me understand different cultures better and use
the language more freely. And I answer questions actively in English classes.
However, I still have some weaknesses. I've learned some useful strategies, such
as making vocabulary mind maps, but I rarely apply critical thinking skills in
English learning. And in group activities, I'm not active enough. I'm often too shy
to share my ideas with others.
To improve my English, I plan to practice speaking English more. I'll join an
English club to get more chances to talk with others. This will help me overcome
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my shyness and improve my oral English. Also, I'll try to be more active in group
activities. By doing these, I'm sure I can make great progress in my English
learning.
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Writing 3 如何成为新时代青年
作为新时代青年中的一员,未来属于我们,希望寄予我们,奋斗的青春更美丽。请
以“How to Be a Better Self”为题,谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含下图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
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How to Be a Better Self
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How to Be a Better Self
As a teenager,I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to lead a healthy life. I will eat more fruit and
vegetables, take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What's more, I should
learn to be a wise learner to take in more useful knowledge. Besides, it is necessary
to keep a good relationship with family and friends. I'd like to have more
communication with them to avoid misunderstandings. Last but not least, I'll also do
what I can to help my parents shoulder the burden of life to create a peaceful
family environment while developing my life skills as well.
By doing these, I will make myself better and better.
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Writing 4 职业规划
职业无贵贱之分,术业有专攻,唯以坚持,方成就不凡。你未来想从事什么工作?
如何实现?请你根据下面的写作要求,以“My favorite job”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右。
My favorite job
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My favorite job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to become a doctor. I believe that
saving lives is one of the most meaningful things about this career in the world.
To achieve this goal, I will study hard, especially in science subjects like biology
and chemistry. I also plan to volunteer in hospitals to gain practical experience.
Most importantly, I will never give up, no matter how challenging the journey may
be.
In my opinion, every job has its own value—what truly counts is hard work.
With love and hard work, I hope to help people and do something meaningful in
the future.
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