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英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、投稿:Our Stage, Our Story
(重庆南开中学2026届高三质检五·2026年1月)你校英文报“Behind the Scenes”栏目现向全校征集稿件。请你写一篇短文,分享一次你参与校园文艺活动的经历,内容包括:
1.节目或表演简介;2.你的贡献;3.收获与感悟。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Our Stage, Our Story
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段简介节目(要点1);第二段阐述自己的贡献(要点2);第三段写收获和感悟(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Our Stage, Our Story
The spotlight never found me. During the school anniversary gala, “A Century of Echoes,” I was tasked with the real-time operation of seven bookshelves on wheels, which were designed to transform dynamically into a time corridor accompanied by the music.
Each rotation of the bookshelves was met with a harsh screech during rehearsals. I wrestled with every axle for three nights until their motion became as smooth and silent as a whisper.
As thunderous applause swelled, a harmony echoed for all silent foundations. The greatest teamwork, I realized while standing unseen in the shadows of the stage that night, is to clear the path so another's radiance can fill the stage, just as those shelves moved with purpose through the music. (121 words)
【中文翻译】
我们的舞台,我们的故事
聚光灯从未照亮过我。校庆晚会《百年回响》中,我负责七座活动书架的搬运。演出时,书架需随音乐“绽放”为时光长廊。
排练时,书架转动总发出刺耳声响。我用三个夜晚调试每个轮轴,终于让旋转滑如流水、寂然无声。
掌声如潮,其中也有为所有无声基石响起的和声。那夜当我默默伫立于舞台的阴影之中时,我意识到,最伟大的团队合作,是为他人的华彩扫清道路,让其光芒充盈整个舞台——正如那些书架带着坚定的意志,穿梭于音乐之中。
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为分享参与校园文艺活动的经历,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
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本文亮点
(1)The spotlight never found me运用无灵主语结构,意为“聚光灯从未照亮我”
(2)was tasked with被分配任务
(3)wrestled with全力对付
(4)As thunderous applause swelled运用无灵主语结构,意为“当掌声雷动充盈整个舞台的时候”
二、发言稿:手写信件:数字时代的必需品?
(浙江省台州市2025-2026学年高三英语上学期期末自编模拟英语试题)假定你是李华,你将参加学校最近一期英语沙龙的研讨“Handwritten Letters: Necessary in the Digital Age?”。请你结合事例用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.你的观点;2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
Thank you.
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.写作思路:主体部分三段论。第一段表明观点(要点1);第二段结合实例说明理由(要点2);第三段总结。
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Handwritten letters, I believe, are essential in the digital age.
While digital communication prioritizes efficiency and speed, thereby reinforcing instant replies and rapid emotional responses, it also increasingly distances us from immersive emotional experience that requires time and presence. The handwritten letter, by contrast, follows the opposite logic. For instance, the experience of rereading a childhood friend's letter last week held me in its quiet power: the visible edits, the faint scent of ink, together with the words "Be well in this and every moment" washed over me with a solemn warmth. No instant text, however swift, could ever carry such a charge.
To conclude, through focused writing, unique handwriting, and tangible form, handwritten letters bring emotions full circle that digital communication often fails to accomplish. (126 words)
Thank you.
【中文翻译】
亲爱的同学们:
我认为,手写信件是数字时代的必需品。
数字通讯以效率养成了我们“秒回”的习惯,却也让我们远离了需要时间沉浸的完整情感交流。手写信则恰恰相反——上周,我重读一封儿时朋友的来信,纸上的涂改痕迹、淡淡墨香,以及那句“祝你好,在每一个此刻”,以一种温暖而郑重的力量击中了我。这是任何即时消息都无法给予的体验。
总之,手写信通过专注的书写、个性的字迹和可触碰的实体,关键在于它实现了数字沟通难以完成的情感闭环。
谢谢!
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为发言稿;
(2)因文体是发言稿,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为表明自己对手写信还是发短信的观点并举实例说明理由,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时和一般过去时。
02
本文亮点
(1)prioritizes efficiency and speed优先考虑效率和速度
(2)increasingly distances us from不断使我们和...隔离
(3) by contrast相比较
(4)held me in its quiet power以其静默的力量,令我深陷其中
(5)washed over me with a solemn warmth以一种温暖而郑重的力量深深影响到我
(6)carry such a charge字面意思为“负荷如此的电量”,引申为“蕴含如此震撼心灵的情感能量”
(7)To conclude总之
(8) bring emotions full circle带来情感闭环
(9)fails to无法做某事
三、建议信:AI进校园
(重庆市2026年高三第一次联合诊断检测英语试题·康德一诊)假定你是李华,在一所国际学校上学,你校网站正在征集“AI进校园”活动方案,请你给网站写一封建议信,内容包括:1.活动的意义;2.具体一项建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段阐述活动的意义(要点1);第二段提出具体建议(要点2);第三段表达期望。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our school. Given the website’s call for ideas for the “AI on Campus” project, I believe that the essential purpose of the event is to integrate cutting-edge technology directly into the campus environment, thereby bridging the gap between technological innovation and real-world educational practice.
Accordingly, I recommend introducing an "AI-Empowered Book Search and Management Terminal" in our school’s library. Beyond supporting conventional searches by title or author, the device is equipped with this "language brain" technology, making it possible to locate the exact shelf position of the book instantly. Furthermore, it can automatically analyze borrowing data and periodically push trending book recommendations to the school's official social media account.
I hope my advice helps. (112 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的编辑:
我是我校学生李华。得知网站征集“AI进校园”活动方案,我认为该活动的核心意义在于将前沿技术直接引入校园,真切展现科技服务现实的真实场景。
为此,我建议:在校图书馆引入一台“AI智能图书检索与管理终端”。该设备不仅支持传统的书名、作者检索,更能通过这种“语言大脑”技术实时展示书籍的精确架位。此外,它还可以自动分析借阅数据,定期生成热门书单推送给学校公众号。
希望我的建议有所帮助。
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为建议信;
(2)文本开头已给出,李华身份已交代;
(3)因文本主体部分是阐述活动意义并提出一项具体建议,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)Given the website’s call for ideas ... 鉴于,考虑到
(2) integrate ... into ...把...融入到...
(3)thereby bridging the gap between结果状语,因此架起...之间的桥梁
(4)Accordingly因此
(5)AI-Empowered人工智能赋能的
(6)is equipped with装备有...
(7)making it possible to结果状语,使得...成为可能
(8)Furthermore此外
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