内容正文:
Unit7 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“难忘的一天”主题,写一篇日记式分享稿,记录难忘的经历及收获,号召同学珍惜特殊体验,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“经历与感受”相关核心词汇(如memorable、experience、discover、precious等)及短语;
2.能熟练运用“I went to...last... ” “From this experience, I learnt that...”等句型描述过去经历与感悟,用倡议句式号召行动;
3.能按“经历过程→个人收获→发出号召”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“难忘的一天”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:叙事类记叙文(日记体),记录难忘经历并分享感悟;
2.人称:第一人称(描述个人经历与感受);
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“难忘经历的时间地点、具体过程、收获与感悟”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,时态以一般过去时为主,行文连贯。
思路点拨
1.开头:点明难忘经历的时间、地点及核心事件;
2.中间:描述经历的具体过程,包括所见、所做、所感;
3.结尾:分享从经历中获得的启示或收获,号召同学珍惜特殊体验。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:经历过程
基础句式:Last [time], I went to...with... We...and... It was...
示例:Last Saturday, I went to a farm with my classmates. We picked strawberries, watered vegetables and listened to the farmer’s stories. It was tiring but really interesting.
第二段:个人收获
基础句式:From this experience, I learnt that... I also realized that...
示例:From this experience, I learnt that farming is not easy. I also realized that every grain comes from hard work. It made me more grateful for the food we have every day.
第三段:发出号召
基础句式:Let’s cherish every special day! You will...if you...
示例:Let’s cherish every special day and take part in more meaningful activities! You will gain unexpected experiences and grow a lot if you open your heart to new things.
范文
A Day to Remember
Last Friday, our class went on a school trip to a wastewater treatment plant. I was curious about how dirty water becomes clean, so I paid close attention to every step. We saw special screens remove large waste and machines kill germs. The workers explained the process patiently, and I even asked some questions.
From this experience, I discovered that getting clean water is not as easy as I thought. It taught me to save water in daily life and respect workers who protect our environment. I felt proud to learn such useful knowledge outside the classroom.
Let’s embrace more school trips and outdoor experiences! They not only make our days memorable but also help us learn things we can’t get from books. Cherish every chance to grow!
范文中文翻译
难忘的一天
上周五,我们班去了污水处理厂参加学校旅行。我很好奇脏水如何变干净,所以密切关注着每一个步骤。我们看到特殊的滤网清除大块垃圾,机器杀死细菌。工人们耐心地讲解流程,我甚至还问了一些问题。
从这次经历中,我发现获得干净的水并不像我想象的那么容易。它教会我在日常生活中节约用水,尊重保护我们环境的工人。能在课堂外学到这么实用的知识,我感到很自豪。
让我们拥抱更多的学校旅行和户外体验吧!它们不仅让我们的日子难忘,还能帮助我们学到书本上学不到的东西。珍惜每一个成长的机会!
素材积累
核心短语
school trip 学校旅行
pay close attention to 密切关注
wastewater treatment plant 污水处理厂
remove waste 清除垃圾
kill germs 杀死细菌
daily life 日常生活
be curious about 对……好奇
unexpected experience 意外的经历
cherish the chance 珍惜机会
meaningful activity 有意义的活动
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
I went to...with...last weekend.
I went to a science museum with my family last weekend.
We did...and saw...there.
We watched robot shows and tried interactive games there.
From this experience, I learnt that...
From this experience, I learnt that teamwork is very important.
Let’s take part in...to...
Let’s take part in more outdoor activities to broaden our horizons.
好句集锦
1.Every memorable day leaves a precious lesson that helps us grow.
2.It’s not the place but the experience and people that make a day special.
3.Cherish every moment, for each special day is a gift to treasure.
谚语
1.Every grain comes from hard work.(谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦)
2.Experience is the best teacher.(经验是最好的老师)
学生写作填空练习版
A Day to Remember
Last [time], I went to _______ with my _______. We _______, _______ and _______. The experience was _______ and unforgettable.
From this experience, I learnt that _______. I also realized that _______. It changed my view on _______ and made me more _______.
Let’s cherish every special day! Let’s _______ more meaningful activities and _______ from new experiences. Every day can be memorable if we用心感受 it!
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