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人教英语八下Unit2 写作专项
Stay Healthy(保持健康)
写作目标
结合本单元“保持健康”主题,针对健康/意外问题给出建议,达成以下目标:
1. 能正确使用本单元“健康问题”相关核心词汇(如flu、fall down、X-ray等)及短语;
2. 能熟练运用情态动词should/shouldn’t(给出建议)、“It’s+形容词+for sb. to do sth.”(说明重要性)等本单元重点句型;
3. 能按“描述问题→给出建议→表达祝愿”的逻辑完成写作,结合好句/谚语升华“健康的重要性”主题。
题目解析
1. 体裁:建议类说明文,需针对具体健康/意外问题提供合理建议;
2. 人称:第三人称(针对他人问题)+第一人称(表达个人建议);
3. 核心要求
· 内容:覆盖“问题描述、对应建议、健康重要性+祝愿”3个要点;
· 字数:80词左右,用情态动词should/shouldn’t组织建议,用连词(and、then)提升连贯性。
思路点拨
1. 引入话题:点明他人遇到的不同健康/意外问题,快速切入主题;
2. 展开建议:分别针对每个问题,用should/shouldn’t给出具体、合理的建议;
3. 总结升华:结合好句/谚语说明保持健康的重要性,表达对对方康复的祝愿。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:引入话题+描述问题(约25词)
写作目的:点明他人的健康/意外问题
基础句式:Recently, ... had different problems. ... had ... and didn’t feel well. ... fell down when ...
示例:Recently, Jack and Tom had different problems. Jack had the flu and didn’t feel well. Tom fell down when he was running.
第二段:给出对应建议(约35词)
写作目的:用should/shouldn’t分别针对问题提建议
基础句式:I think ... should ... and ... He shouldn’t ... Then, ... should ... He shouldn’t ...
示例:I think Jack should go to a doctor and take some medicine. He shouldn’t go out or be too tired. Then, Tom should get an X-ray and lie down to rest. He shouldn’t exercise more or go to school.
第三段:总结+祝愿(约20词)
写作目的:结合好句/谚语说明健康重要性,表达祝愿
基础句式:As the saying goes, “...”. It’s important for us to ... I hope ... can be better soon.
示例:As the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” It’s important for us to keep healthy. I hope Jack and Tom can be better soon.
范文
英文
Stay Healthy
Recently, Jack and Tom had different problems. Jack had the flu and didn’t feel well. Tom fell down when he was running.
I think Jack should go to a doctor and take some warm medicine. He shouldn’t go out in the cold wind or stay up late. Then, Tom should get an X-ray first and lie down to rest at home. He shouldn’t do any sports or walk too much these days.
As the saying goes, “Health is the foundation of happiness.” It’s important for us to take care of our bodies. I hope Jack and Tom can feel better and get back to their daily life soon.
中文翻译
保持健康
最近,杰克和汤姆遇到了不同的问题。杰克得了流感,感觉不太舒服。汤姆跑步的时候摔倒了。
我认为杰克应该去看医生并吃些温性药物,他不应该在冷风里出门或者熬夜。然后,汤姆应该先拍个X光片,在家躺着休息,这些天他不应该做任何运动或者走太多路。
正如谚语所说:“健康是幸福的基础。”照顾好我们的身体很重要。我希望杰克和汤姆能快点好起来,回到日常的生活中。
素材积累
核心短语
have the flu — 得流感
fall down — 摔倒
go to a doctor — 看医生
take some medicine — 吃些药
get an X-ray — 拍X光片
lie down to rest — 躺着休息
keep healthy — 保持健康
take care of one’s body — 照顾好身体
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
... had ... (健康问题)
Lily had a stomachache and couldn’t eat anything.
... should ... (建议)
You should drink more hot water when you have a cold.
... shouldn’t ... (建议)
We shouldn’t eat too much junk food.
It’s important for us to ...
It’s important for us to do exercise every day.
好句集锦
1. Small health problems today may become big troubles tomorrow.(今天的小健康问题,可能会变成明天的大麻烦。)
2. Taking good care of our bodies is the best way to enjoy life.(照顾好身体,是享受生活的最佳方式。)
3. A healthy body helps us keep a positive mind.(健康的身体能帮我们保持积极的心态。)
谚语
1. Health is wealth.(健康是财富。)
2. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.(一天一苹果,医生远离我。)
3. Health is the foundation of happiness.(健康是幸福的基础。)
学生写作填空练习版
Stay Healthy
Recently, _______(如Jack and Tom) had different problems. _______(如Jack) had _______(如the flu) and didn’t feel well. _______(如Tom) fell down when _______(如he was running).
I think _______(如Jack) should _______(如go to a doctor) and _______(如take some medicine). He shouldn’t _______(如go out in the cold) or _______(如stay up late). Then, _______(如Tom) should _______(如get an X-ray) and _______(如lie down to rest). He shouldn’t _______(如do sports) or _______(如go to school).
As the saying goes, “_______(如Health is wealth).” It’s important for us to _______(如keep healthy). I hope _______(如Jack and Tom) can be better soon.
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