2026年中考英语书面表达：假期经历类写作通关宝典

中考英语书面表达：假期经历类写作通关宝典 序言 每个单元教材写作题，都可能成为中考书面表达的母题。坚持每周学习范文、积累好词佳句，才能写出考场佳作。 本周为大家推荐“快乐的假期”类的高分作文。我们一起学习并尝试写出“结构完整、条理清晰、逻辑严密、过渡自然、内容充实、富有创意”的范文吧。 原题呈现 Think of an unforgettable holiday experience. Use ideas below to write a holiday story.想象一次难忘的假期经历，用下面的想法写一个假期故事。 · · When did it happen? · Where were you? · · What did you do? · How did you feel? · · What did you learn? ·… 审题指导 ①主题：描述假期经历 ②文体：记叙文 When did it happen? ③人称：第一人称·Where were you? · ④时态：一般过去时为主· What did you do? ⑤要点：描述假期经历发生 How did you feel? 的时间、地点、活动、感受和收获What did you learn? ... 高分作文 水上乐园大冒险 The holiday time passed in a flash. Instead of staying at home, my mother and I went to Sanya.亮点赏析 Before leaving, I made a detailed travel plan. Visiting Atlantis Water Park topped my list. I'd been dreaming of it for ages. As soon as I stepped into the park, the air was filled with the joyful laughter of children.①I immediately set my eyes on the most exciting ride—— the water slide. After waiting in a long line, it was my turn. When I slid down, a mix of excitement and fear welled up inside me.② In that short moment, my heart was beating very fast like a drum.②“welled up”将内心的情绪比作泉水一样涌现出来，形象地表现出兴奋和恐惧交织； ③运用“not only… but also…”的并列结构，强调了这次旅行的双重意义。 ①“As soon as…”引导时间状语从句，生动地展现了作者刚进入水上乐园时的情景； What a special holiday I had！It not only brought me a great deal of fun but also taught me to try bravely.③ 名师点评 本文是一篇回忆暑期三亚之旅的记叙文，以清晰的行程安排与惊险刺激的游玩场景勾勒，将作者在亚特兰蒂斯水公园的游玩经历生动呈现，兼具趣味性与感染力，易引发读者对夏日欢乐度假时光的共鸣。 此外，文中使用了准确且贴切的表达，如“the most exciting”鲜活展现了水滑梯的刺激，“my heart was beating very fast like a drum”形象地传达了滑水过程中的刺激与恐惧。让读者能直观感知游玩项目的特点，生动地呈现了旅行中的精彩瞬间。 参考译文 假期转瞬即逝。我和妈妈没有待在家里，而是去了三亚。 出发前，我制定了详细的旅行计划。参观亚特兰蒂斯水上乐园是我最想做的事。我一直梦想着去那里。一踏进公园，空气中就充满了孩子们欢快的笑声。我立刻把目光投向了最刺激的游乐项目————水滑梯。排着长长的队伍等待后，轮到我了。当我滑下去时，兴奋与恐惧交织在一起涌上心头。在那短暂的一瞬间，我的心跳得像鼓一样快。 我度过了一个多么特别的假期啊！它不仅给我带来了许多乐趣，还教会了我要勇敢尝试。 佳句积累 开头句 1. The most unforgettable holiday so far took place when I was 13.迄今为止，最难忘的一次假期发生在我13岁那年。 2. It was during the winter holiday that I set off on a journey to a place I'd dreamed of.寒假期间，我踏上了前往一个我一直梦想之地的旅程。 3. There was a holiday that stands out in my memory like a bright star. It happened during the last summer vacation, and I still remember every detail vividly。有一段假期在我的记忆中犹如一颗璀璨的星辰般闪耀着。那是在我上一次暑假期间发生的，至今我仍能清晰地回忆起每一个细节。 中间句 4. I went to Sanya, a place famous for its beautiful beaches and clear blue waters. I spent my days swimming in the sea, building sandcastles on the shore, and enjoying the warm sunshine.我去了三亚，一个以美丽的海滩和清澈湛蓝的海水而闻名的地方。我每天都在海里游泳，在岸边堆沙堡，享受温暖的阳光。 5. During the holiday, I also had the chance to try some local food. The food was so delicious that I couldn't stop eating.假期里，我还有机会品尝了一些当地美食。食物非常美味，我吃得停不下来。 6. I hiked up a mountain, and the scenery along the way was breathtaking. Along the way, I encountered rare birds and beautiful wildflowers.我徒步登山，沿途的风景令人惊叹。一路上，我遇到了珍稀鸟类和美丽的野花。 结尾句 7. As I look back on that holiday, I realize that it wasn't just about the places I visited. It was about the new ways of seeing things I gained.当我回顾那个假期时，我意识到重要的不仅仅是我去过的地方和做过的事情，更是我获得的看待事物的新方式。 8. This unforgettable holiday taught me that the world is full of surprises. I'm already looking forward to my next adventure.这次难忘的假期让我明白，世界充满了惊喜。我已经在期待下一次冒险了。 9. That holiday left me with memories that will last a lifetime and lessons that will guide me in the days to come.那个假期给我留下了一生难忘的回忆和未来日子里指引我的教训。 单词速记 slide n. 滑梯 顺着光滑(s联想“滑”的感觉)的轨道，轻轻溜(li)动到终点(de)，这就是滑梯 (slide) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $