福建省厦门第二中学2025-2026学年高一上学期概要写作复习 讲义

该高中英语讲义以“总-分-总”结构框架系统构建概要写作知识体系，通过段落对应关系表梳理“总起-分述-总结”逻辑脉络，结合要点提示（如转折词、代词还原）和改写技巧（信息整合、同义转换）呈现关键方法，突出概要写作的重难点分布与内在联系。 复习讲义的亮点在于基于质检真题的精准方法指导，如通过“代词还原”（将“you”明确为“不爱读书的人”）和“同义转换”（“bring joy”改为“make life full of pleasure”）培养语言能力与思维品质。提供的范文和分层要点解析，帮助基础薄弱学生掌握技巧，优秀学生深化理解，为教师实施精准教学和学生自主复习提供有力支持。

厦门二中2025-2026高一第一学期概要写作复习（质检真题重温） 20260127 高一上质检概要写作指导 结构类型：总-分-总（思考阅读的重要性和好处→具体好处→总结＋建议） 段落对应关系： 总起：第1段（即使不爱读书，也要思考阅读的重要性和好处） 分述：第2-4段（具体好处） 总结：第5段（总结＋建议） The importance of reading is obvious. If you're not a big fan of books, that's OK! You're not alone!But before you shut down books and reading all together take time to learn more about the importance of reading and all the amazing benefits that come with it. 要点Tip 1：转折后是要点（but） 要点Tip2：要点句里有代词要还原（you指谁？you指前文提到的 not a big fan of book） 重点句：...before you shut down books and reading all together, take time to learn more about the importance of reading and all the amazing benefits that come with it. 代词还原：...before you who is not a big fan of books shut down books and reading all together, take time to learn more about the importance of reading and all the amazing benefits that come with it. 改写：Even if you dislike reading books, you still should learn about its importance and benefits. 改写Tip：信息整合（not a big fan,shut down books and reading all together->dislike reading)， 同义转换（祈使句表建议->should表建议），代词替代（of reading->its,that come with it->its） Reading can help improve your vocabulary. It increases exposure（接触）to new words and makes it easier for words to stay. Saying new words out loud helps you better recall them and pick them up,making these new words part of your own active vocabulary. 要点Tip 1：段首总起句为核心要点 要点Tip2：重复的词是要点（new words） 重点句：Reading can help improve your vocabulary. 次要点：exposure（接触）to new words, saying new words out loud helps, making these new words your own vocabulary. 改写：Reading is helpful to increase your vocabulary by learning new words effectively. 改写Tip：词性转化（help->helpful)，同义替换（improve->increase)，信息整合（exposure to new words,saying new words out loud helps, making these new words your own vocabulary->learning new words)，次要点用介词（by）带出来 Reading allows for creative thinking. If you were an explorer, you would learn about the world through direct experience. Sadly, you can't all take to the high road and disappear into the sunset. But You can discover new worlds through rending books. Rending a book uses the imagination and this in tum develops your creativity, which allows you to dream and think in ways that you would have never been able to before. 要点Tip 1：段首总起句为核心要点 要点Tip2：转折后是要点（but） 要点Tip3：与论点相关是要点（develop your creativity 与 creative thinking相关） 要点Tip4：多句要点句，思考句间逻辑关系，用恰当连接词连接（because） 重点句：Reading allows for creative thinking...But you can discover new worlds through reading books. Reading a book uses the imagination and this in turn develops your creativity... 改写：Reading can develop your creative thinking because when reading books you use your imagination to explore new worlds. 改写Tip：同义替换（allow→＞develop)，用逻辑词重组信息 Reading brings joy and happiness to your life. You don't read because you have to. You read because you have fun doing it, a reminder that books are meant to be enjoyed. Reading brings you joyous experience, whether you are opening a new book or rereading an old favorite. It's easy to get lost in a world with interesting characters,tense（紧张的）situations,and beautiful settings. 要点Tip 1：段首总起句为核心要点 重点句：Reading brings joy and happiness to your life. 改写：Reading makes your life full of pleasure. 改写Tip：同义替代（bring...to your life-> make you life full of, joy and happiness--> pleasure） It's safe to say that reading can change your life for the better. If you think that you hate reading books,then perhaps you just have yet to find the type for your own personal style-but keep trying, and keep searching for what's right for you. Reading is one of the most powerful things in the world, offering you new chances to learn,grow and be inspired! 要点Tip1：转折后是要点（but） 要点Tip2：建议是要点（祈使句是建议） 重点句：...but keep trying, and keep searching for what's right for you. 改写：You are advised to find out the books to your taste. 改写Tip：同义替换（祈使句建议→＞be advised to do 建议，search for->find out, what's right for you--＞books to your taste) Possible version: Even if you dislike reading books, you still should learn about its importance and benefits.(2分）First,reading is helpful to increase your vocabulary by learning new words effectively(3分）.Besides，reading can develop your creative thinking because when reading books you use your imagination to explore new worlds(3分）.Additionally,reading makes your life full of pleasure(2 分）. Therefore,You are advised to find out the books to your taste(2分）.(67词） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $