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读后续写・外貌描写词汇
一、核心词汇:
1. 头发(hair)
名词:moustache(小胡子)、beard(胡须)
形容词:rough(粗糙的)、shoulder-length(齐肩的)、thick(浓密的)、long(长的)、curly(卷曲的)、short(短的)、blonde(金色的)、chestnut(红棕色的)
动词:wear(留着、穿着)、grow(生长、留着)、tie(扎、系)、part(分缝)
2. 面部(face)
名词:forehead(额头)、chin(下巴)、eyebrow(眉毛)、face、nose(鼻子)
形容词:oval(椭圆形的)、wrinkled(布满皱纹的)、weather-worn/weather-beaten(饱经风霜的)、pleasant(和善的)、adorable(可爱的)、handsome(英俊的)、girlish(少女感的)
特殊表达:baby fat(婴儿肥)、double chin(双下巴)、high forehead(高额头)、strongly defined chin(轮廓分明的下巴)、pointed beard(尖尖的胡须)、arched eyebrows(弯弯的眉毛)
3. 眼睛(eyes)
形容词:deep-set(深陷的)、deep(深邃的)、brilliant(明亮的)、blue(蓝色的)、black(黑色的)
短语:deep-set black eyes(深陷的黑色眼睛)、deep blue eyes(深邃的蓝色眼睛)、brilliant blue eyes(明亮的蓝色眼睛)
4. 皮肤与牙齿(skin & teeth)
形容词:brown(棕色的)、white(洁白的)、sun-tanned(晒黑的)
短语:brown skin(棕色皮肤)、white teeth(洁白的牙齿)、brilliant teeth(明亮的牙齿)
二、高频短语与固定搭配
头发相关:rough hair(乱蓬蓬的头发)、shoulder-length hair(齐肩发)、thick long hair(浓密的长发)、wearing curls(留着卷发)、parted in the middle(中分)、tied in two lovely ponytails(扎着两个可爱的马尾辫)
面部相关:an oval face(椭圆形的脸)、a wrinkled face(布满皱纹的脸)、a high forehead(高高的额头)、arched eyebrows(迷人的弯眉)、a small moustache(小八字胡)、a pointed beard(尖尖的胡须)、a double chin(双下巴)、a strongly defined chin(轮廓分明的下巴)、weather-worn/weather-beaten face(饱经风霜的脸)
眼睛相关:deep-set black eyes(深陷的黑色眼睛)、deep/brilliant blue eyes(深邃 / 明亮的蓝色眼睛)、eyes lit up with hope(眼中燃起希望)
整体搭配:youthful appearance(年轻的模样)、girlish appearance(少女感十足的模样)
三、经典句型模板(可直接套用)
1. 基础描述句型(主系表 / 主谓宾结构)
主语 + have/has + 外貌特征
例:He has rough hair and a small moustache.
他头发乱蓬蓬的,留着小八字胡。
主语 + be + 形容词 + with + 外貌特征
例:She is a beautiful lady with thick long hair.
她是一个留着浓密长发的美丽女士。
主语 + wear (s) + 发型 / 服饰
例:Shirley is a middle-aged woman who wears shoulder-length hair.
Shirley 是一位留着齐肩发的中年女子。
2. 高级句型(定语从句 /with 复合结构)
定语从句:
The person who came to see you yesterday had brown skin, bright eyes, and brilliant teeth.
昨天来见你的人,皮肤是棕色的,眼睛明亮,牙齿洁白。
with 复合结构:
The old man slowly walked towards me, with a smile on his weather-worn face.
那个老人缓缓走向我,饱经风霜的脸上挂着笑容。
谓语结构:
“Thank you,” she said in a choked voice, a smile appearing on her weather-worn face.
“谢谢你。” 她哽咽着说,饱经风霜的脸上露出了微笑。
3. 神态 + 外貌结合句型
As soon as she saw me approaching, her deep-set black eyes lit up with hope.
她一看到我走近,深陷的黑色眼睛就燃起来了希望。
He gazed at the people around him with a look of pride and superiority, his deep blue eyes showing no warmth.
他带着骄傲和优越感凝视着周围的人,深邃的蓝色眼睛里没有一丝暖意。
四、段落仿写范例(可模仿结构与表达)
例 1:男性外貌描写
He was a tall, handsome man, with thick black hair and deep blue eyes. With his sharp nose and strong chin, he exuded an innate elegance and nobility. He carried himself and spoke with confidence and arrogance, as if he were standing above the crowd. Although his appearance was stunning, his cool expression made him seem a little difficult to get close to.
例 2:女性外貌描写
She is a tall, slim girl, with short blonde hair and brilliant blue eyes. With her white teeth and soft smile, she shows an innate warmth and kindness. When she speaks, her voice is gentle but clear, and her eyes shine like stars. She likes wearing a light blue dress and a pair of white shoes, which makes her look fresh and elegant.
五、读后续写应用技巧
微情节结合:外貌描写要服务于情节,比如 “饱经风霜的脸” 暗示人物经历坎坷,“眼中燃起希望” 推动 “善意帮助” 的情节发展。
细节放大:不用面面俱到,聚焦 1-2 个核心特征(如眼睛、笑容、头发),搭配神态描写,让人物更鲜活。
词汇升级:避免重复简单词汇,用 “weather-beaten” 替代 “tired”,“brilliant” 替代 “bright”,提升文采。
句式多变:短句描述特征,长句(定语从句 /with 结构)串联情节,让段落节奏更流畅。
五、拓展翻译题。
1.那个穿着破烂衣衫、体格瘦小的老人,用深陷的黑色眼睛凝视着远方,仿佛在回忆逝去的岁月。
2. 她留着齐肩的金色卷发,身材匀称,穿着一件带金边的蓝色天鹅绒礼服,整个人散发着与生俱来的优雅。
3. 正是因为常年的户外劳作,这个又高又壮的男人有着饱经风霜的脸庞和粗糙的双手。(强调句型)
4. 戴着高顶窄边黑色帽子的中年男人,大腹便便,敞着衬衫,慢慢走向站在门口的瘦小女孩。(非谓语结构)
5.当那个骨瘦如柴、穿着简陋的男孩递过一束野花时,他眼中的光芒让女孩冰冷的脸庞露出了微笑。(时间状语从句)
参考答案:
1. The old man, who was shabbily dressed and thinly-built, stared into the distance with his deep-set black eyes, as if recalling the days gone by.
2. She has shoulder-length curly blonde hair and a perfectly proportioned figure. Dressed in a blue velvet dress with gold-colored lace, she exudes an innate elegance.
3. It was due to years of outdoor work that the tall and strong man had a weather-beaten face and rough hands.
4. The middle-aged man wearing a black hat with a high crown and a narrow brim, fat-bellied and with his shirt unbuttoned, slowly walked towards the skinny little girl standing at the door.
5. When the skinny and poorly dressed boy handed over a bunch of wild flowers, the light in his eyes made a smile appear on the girl’s cold face.
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