2025全国I卷应用文和读后续写范文与拓展训练 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦应用文写作与读后续写核心题型，依据高考评价体系明确应用文“理由具体充分”、读后续写“情节连贯与情感真实”的考查要求，通过范文对比与考点权重梳理，构建“审题-构思-表达”的完整答题体系。 课件亮点在于“真题情境+句型建模+素养提升”的备考路径，如读后续写提炼情绪描写句型，结合“兄弟和解”主题训练换位思考能力，培养思维品质与语言能力。特设情景微训练，帮助学生掌握细节描写与主题升华技巧，教师可依托此课件实现考点精准突破，助力学生高效冲刺高考。

应用文和读后续写 范文与拓展 2025年新高考I卷 第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)       假定你是李华，你班英语报要增设一个栏目，外教Jenny提出Fun at  my school和Guess who I am两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封信，内容如下: 1.你的选择；2.说明理由 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. ________________________________________________ 第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)       假定你是李华，你班英语报要增设一个栏目，外教Jenny提出Fun at  my school和Guess who I am两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封信，内容如下: 1.你的选择； 2.说明理由 必须二选一，不能模棱两可或两个都选。 选择哪个栏目更合理？ 通常选择理由更充分、更容易展开的那个。选择理由需具体、有说服力： 避免只说“很有趣”或“很好”，要结合栏目的特点和你认为的价值（如对写作能力的帮助、对班级氛围的促进、内容的可操作性等）来阐述。 学会选择的李华 一、推荐“Guess who I am” Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.As for the theme of the column,  I prefer “Guess who I am ” . Here are my reasons. Firstly, this theme is familiar to everyone, ensuring them to participate and contribute. Moreover, it provides a chance for us teenagers to explore our unique personalities, thus building our self-recognition. Lastly, it fosters a strong sense of connection within our class as we learn more about one another. I’m confident this column will be a huge success. Looking forward to your reply!                                                                            Yours                                                                           Li Hua Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. After thinking carefully about both ideas, I would like to choose "Fun at my school" as the new column. The reason why I prefer "Fun at my school" is that it allows students to share interesting stories or events happening on campus. These could include funny moments in class, exciting activities during breaks, and even unique traditions of our school. Such a column will not only make the newspaper more lively and engaging, but also give students a chance to express their creativity and show what makes our school special. I believe this column will bring more joy and laughter to our newspaper while helping students practice their English writing skills. I am really looking forward to seeing it come to life! Yours                                                                           Li Hua 推荐“Fun at my school” 兄弟和解 在一次家庭聚会中与兄弟产生嫌隙，之后通过一番思想斗争决定主动登门道歉的故事，诠释了承担责任与宽容的可贵品质。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.       There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: my brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.    It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.     A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned.   Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues, and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.       There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on预料；指望: my brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire精力旺盛的人 / 动物；活力四射的小家伙. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out进展顺利；成功 just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue强行解决问题；强求. 背景：“我” 和妻子初夏举办新家聚会，妻子准备零食，“我” 打理后院，为孩子预留玩耍空间。 突发状况：弟弟带 50 磅的狗托比赴约，“我” 因担心狗撞倒小孩，要求托比待在户外；晚饭后下雨，众人进屋，弟弟不愿带湿狗驾车回家，最终尴尬离场。     A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted分开；分手；告别. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned推理/推论.   Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience良心；良知 kept bothering困扰；烦扰 me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes换位思考；设身处地为他人着想. He was facing health issues, and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant（持续的；经常的；形影不离的） companion, the one who kept him going. I realized it was me who was at fault. ___________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. ___________________________________________________________________________________ 后续发展：“我” 发短信邀请弟弟未果，两个月后在良心谴责下，意识到弟弟的处境（健康问题 + 丧妻之痛，托比是唯一陪伴），决定主动弥补。 4. 主题 亲情至上：家庭关系比规则、面子更珍贵。 换位思考：理解他人处境是化解矛盾的关键。 道歉的力量：主动认错能修复破碎的情感纽带。 陪伴的意义：困境中，陪伴（无论是人与人还是人与动物）是重要的精神支撑。 5. 冲突 表层冲突：“我” 为聚会秩序禁止托比进屋，与弟弟希望托比得到妥善安置的需求产生矛盾。 深层冲突：“我” 的固执与自我中心，与弟弟丧妻后对情感陪伴的迫切需求之间的冲突。 6. 情绪 “我” 的情绪：初期（坚定、自信）→ 弟弟离场后（不以为意）→ 两个月后（良心不安、愧疚、焦虑）→ 主动和解时（紧张、期待）→ 和解后（释然、感激）。 弟弟的情绪：赴约时（期待）→ 被要求托比待户外（无奈）→ 下雨后（不满）→ 尴尬离场（委屈、失望）→ 重逢时（惊讶、犹豫）→ 和解后（感动、释然）。 P1: I realized it was me who was at fault. 我意识到是我错了。 句1（衔接句 - 愧疚觉醒）：A wave of guilt washed over me when I thought about my brother’s loneliness after his wife passed away. I felt very sorry because I had refused to let Toby come indoors at the gathering. 当我想到弟弟在妻子去世后的孤独时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我为自己在聚会时拒绝让托比进屋而感到非常抱歉。 句 2（情绪反应）：I bit my lip, a sign of my growing unease, and I paced up and down restlessly. I felt guilty and worried, realizing how thoughtless I had been about his feelings and Toby’s role as his only companion. 我咬着嘴唇，这是我越来越不安的迹象，我不安地来回踱步。我感到愧疚又担忧，意识到自己对他的感受以及托比作为他唯一陪伴者的重要性是多么轻率。 句 3（心理活动）：My heart raced with panic as I thought about his health problems and how lonely he must be without his wife. I wondered if I should call him first to say sorry or wait for him to contact me. 当我想到他的健康问题，以及没有妻子陪伴的他是多么孤独时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。我想知道我是否应该先打电话向他道歉，还是等他主动联系我。 句 4（情绪转换）：I took a deep breath to calm myself down, trying to push away the bad thoughts. Finally, I decided to take action, knowing that family relationships were too precious to let my stubbornness stand in the way. 我深吸一口气让自己平静下来，试图驱散不好的想法。最后，我决定采取行动，因为我知道家庭关系太宝贵了，不能让我的固执阻碍我。 句 5（呼应句 - 准备行动）：At the same time, my wife made some biscuits and I dedcided to visit my brother. 同时，我的妻子做好了一些饼干，我决定去看望我的弟弟。 P2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟的家门口。 句 6（衔接句 - 见面反应）： My heart pounded nervously as I knocked on the wooden door, not sure what his reaction would be.When he opened the door, his face showed surprise. I could see the unhappiness in his eyes mixed with a little hope. I smiled nervously at him and held out the plate of biscuits. 我紧张地敲响木门，心里怦怦直跳，不确定他会有什么反应。当他打开门时，他的脸上露出惊讶的神情。我能看到他眼中的不快中夹杂着一丝希望。我紧张地对他笑了笑，递出了那盘饼干。 句 7（道歉场景）：I apologized sincerely, telling him how sorry I was for not letting Toby come inside and making him leave the gathering unhappy. He stood there quietly and listened to me carefully. 我真诚地道歉，告诉他我很抱歉不让托比进屋，还让他不高兴地离开了聚会。他静静地站在那里，认真地听着我的话。 句 8（情感回应）：Toby ran over happily and wagged his tail around us, as if welcoming me and hoping for our reconciliation. The uncomfortable feeling between us started to fade away. 托比高兴地跑过来，在我们身边摇着尾巴，仿佛在欢迎我，也盼着我们和好。我们之间的不适感开始渐渐消散。 句 9（解决冲突句 - 和解达成）：My brother nodded slowly and forgave me, tears coming to his eyes. We hugged each other tightly, all the unhappiness gone. The close relationship between us was back again.弟弟缓缓点头，原谅了我，眼里泛起了泪水。我们紧紧拥抱在一起，所有的不快都烟消云散了。我们之间亲密的关系又回来了。 句 10（主题升华句 - 价值感悟）：As we sat together eating biscuits and watching Toby play, I realized that family love is stronger than any misunderstanding, and being considerate of others can fix even the broken bonds. 当我们坐在一起吃饼干，看着托比玩耍时，我意识到家庭的爱比任何误会都更强大，体谅他人甚至能修复破碎的情感纽带。 P1: I realized it was me who was at fault. 我意识到是我错了。A wave of guilt washed over me when I thought about my brother’s loneliness after his wife passed away. I felt very sorry because I had refused to let Toby come indoors at the gathering.I bit my lip, a sign of my growing unease, and I paced up and down restlessly. I felt guilty and worried, realizing how thoughtless I had been about his feelings and Toby’s role as his only companion.My heart raced with panic as I thought about his health problems and how lonely he must be without his wife. I wondered if I should call him first to say sorry or wait for him to contact me.I took a deep breath to calm myself down, trying to push away the bad thoughts. Finally, I decided to take action, knowing that family relationships were too precious to let my stubbornness stand in the way.At the same time, my wife made some biscuits and I dedcided to visit my brother. P2：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.My heart pounded nervously as I knocked on the wooden door, not sure what his reaction would be.When he opened the door, his face showed surprise. I could see the unhappiness in his eyes mixed with a little hope. I smiled nervously at him and held out the plate of biscuits.I apologized sincerely, telling him how sorry I was for not letting Toby come inside and making him leave the gathering unhappy. He stood there quietly and listened to me carefully.Toby ran over happily and wagged his tail around us, as if welcoming me and hoping for our reconciliation. The uncomfortable feeling between us started to fade away.My brother nodded slowly and forgave me, tears coming to his eyes. We hugged each other tightly, all the unhappiness gone. The close relationship between us was back again.As we sat together eating biscuits and watching Toby play, I realized that family love is stronger than any misunderstanding, and being considerate of others can fix even the broken bonds. 简单版 Paragraph 1: I realized it was me who was at fault.句1（衔接句 - 愧疚觉醒）A wave of guilt washed over me when I thought about my brother's loneliness. I bit my lip and paced up and down restlessly. My heart raced with panic as I realized how thoughtless I had been.Toby was his only companion after losing his wife. I took a deep breath to calm myself down. I knew family relationships were too precious to lose. 句 5（呼应句 - 准备行动）Finally, I decided to visit him. My wife smiled and packed a basket of biscuits she had baked. 当我想到哥哥的孤独时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我咬着嘴唇，不安地来回踱步。当我意识到自己是多么轻率时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。Toby是他失去妻子后唯一的陪伴。我深吸一口气让自己平静下来。我知道家庭关系太珍贵了，不能失去。最后，我决定去看他。我妻子微笑着打包了一篮她烤的饼干。 Paragraph 2: With the cookies my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.句6-7（衔接句-见面反应 ）My heart pounded nervously as I knocked. When he opened the door, his face showed surprise. I could see unhappiness mixed with hope in his eyes. I held out the cookies and apologized sincerely. "句 7（道歉场景）I'm sorry for not letting Toby inside," I said. He listened quietly. 句8（情绪反应）Then Toby ran over, wagging his tail happily around us. The uncomfortable feeling between us started to fade. 句 9（解决冲突句 - 和解达成）My brother nodded slowly and forgave me, tears in his eyes. We hugged tightly. 句 10（主题升华句 - 价值感悟）As we sat eating cookies and watching Toby play, I realized that family love is stronger than any misunderstanding. 我紧张地敲门时，心在怔怔直跳。当他打开门时，他的脸上露出惊讶。我能看到他眼中的不快中夹杂着希望。我递出饼干，真诚地道歉。“我很抱歉没让Toby进屋，”我说。他静静地听着。然后Toby跑了过来，在我们身边开心地摇着尾巴。我们之间的不适感开始消退。哥哥慢慢点头原谅了我，眼中含着泪水。我们紧紧拥抱。当我们坐着吃饼干、看Toby玩耶时，我意识到家庭的爱比任何误会都更强大。 拓展与延伸 句型结构：A wave of + 情感名词 + washed over + 人称代词 + when + 时间状语从句 情感词：guilt（愧疚）/ sadness（悲伤）/ anxiety（焦虑）/ fear（恐惧）/ regret（后悔） 仿写： 当我意识到自己的错误时，一股羞愧感涌上心头。 A wave of __________ washed over me when I realized my mistake. 当我看到她失望的眼神时，一股悲伤涌上心头。 A wave of __________ washed over me when I saw her disappointed eyes. 当我听到坏消息时，一股恐惧感涌上心头。 A wave of __________ washed over me when I heard the bad news. sadness sadness fear 句型结构： My heart + raced/pounded + with + 情感名词 + as + 原因状语从句 动词：raced（狂跳）/ pounded（怦怦跳）/ sank（下沉） 情感词：panic（恐慌）/ excitement（兴奋）/ nervousness（紧张）/ fear（恐惧） 仿写： 当我走上舞台时，我的心因紧张而狂跳。 My heart __________ with __________ as I walked onto the stage. 当我看到考试成绩时，我的心因兴奋而狂跳。 My heart __________ with __________ as I saw my exam results. 当我听到奇怪的声音时，我的心因恐惧而狂跳。 My heart __________ with __________ as I heard the strange noise. raced nervousness pounded excitement pounded fear 类型二：焦虑动作描写 句型结构：I bit my lip and + 动作短语 + 副词 动作：paced up and down（来回踱步）/ wrung my hands（绞手）/ tapped my foot（跺脚） 副词：restlessly（不安地）/ nervously（紧张地）/ anxiously（焦虑地） 模仿练习： 我咬着嘴唇，紧张地绞着双手。 I bit my lip and __________ my hands __________. 我咬着嘴唇，焦虑地敲打着桌子。 I bit my lip and __________ the table __________. 我咬着嘴唇，不安地看着时钟。 I bit my lip and __________ at the clock __________. wrung nervously anxiously restlessly watched tapped Part 2: 情绪转换句型 句型结构： I took a deep breath + to + 目的 calm myself down（让自己平静）/ gather my courage（鼓起勇气）/ clear my mind（理清思绪）/ compose myself（镇定下来） 模仿练习： 我深吸一口气来鼓起勇气。 I took a deep breath to __________ my __________. 我深吸一口气来理清思绪。 I took a deep breath to __________ my __________. 我深吸一口气来控制情绪。 I took a deep breath to __________ my __________. 完成句子（填空） 1.当我看到她失望的表情时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。 •__________ of guilt __________ over me when I saw her disappointed face. 2.当我意识到自己的错误时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。 •My heart __________ with panic as I __________ my mistake. 3.我咬着嘴唇，紧张地来回踱步。 •I __________ my lip and __________ up and down nervously. 4.我深吸一口气让自己平静下来。 •I __________ a deep breath to __________ myself down. 5.我知道友谊太珍贵了，不能失去。 •I knew __________ was too __________ to lose. 6.我紧张地敲门时，心在怦怦直跳。 •My heart __________ nervously as I __________. 7.我能看到他眼中的愤怒中夹杂着失望。 •I could see anger __________ with ___________________ in his eyes. A wave washed raced/pounded realized bit paced took calm friendship precious pounded / knocked pounded knocked mixed disappointment 8.我递出礼物，真诚地道歉。 •I __________ out the gift and __________ sincerely. 9."请原谅我，"我低声说。 •"Please __________ me," I __________. 10.我们之间的紧张感开始消失。 •The __________ feeling between us started to __________. 11.她温柔地微笑并接受了我的道歉，脸上带着宽慰。 •She smiled __________ and __________ my apology, relief on her face. 12.当我们拥抱时，我意识到宽恕比愤怒更有力量。 •As we __________, I realized that __________ is stronger than anger. handed apologized pardon whispered tension faded gently accepted hugged forgiving 情景微训练 情境1：与朋友和解 你不小心在聚会上说出了朋友的秘密，导致你们产生了矛盾。现在你决定去道歉。 要求： •使用"A wave of guilt washed over me"开头 •包含至少一个动作描写句型/包含至少一个对话/以主题升华句结尾 A wave of guilt washed over me when I thought about revealing Sarah's secret. I bit my lip and paced up and down restlessly. Finally, I took a deep breath to calm myself down and knocked on her door. My heart pounded nervously as she opened it. I could see hurt mixed with hope in her eyes. "I'm so sorry for what I did," I whispered, holding out her favorite flowers. She listened quietly, then nodded slowly. As we hugged, I realized that true friendship can survive mistakes if we're brave enough to apologize. 当我想到泄露了Sarah的秘密时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我咬着嘴唇，不安地来回踱步。最后，我深吸一口气让自己平静下来，敲响了她的门。当她开门时，我的心紧张地怦怦直跳。我能看到她眼中的伤痛中夹杂着希望。"我为我所做的事感到非常抱歉，"我低声说，递出她最喜欢的花。她静静地听着，然后慢慢点头。当我们拥抱时，我意识到如果我们有勇气道歉，真正的友谊可以经受住错误的考验。 情境2：考试失利后的反思 你因为粗心大意在重要考试中失利，父母虽然没有责备你，但你能看出他们的失望。 要求： 使用"My heart raced with..."描写情绪 使用"I could see...in their eyes"描写观察 使用"I took a deep breath to..."描写调节 以"I realized that..."升华 情境2 参考范文： My heart raced with panic as I looked at my exam results. I could see disappointment mixed with concern in my parents' eyes, though they said nothing. The uncomfortable feeling in the room was unbearable. I bit my lip and took a deep breath to calm myself down. "I'm sorry for being so careless," I said quietly. My father nodded slowly and put his hand on my shoulder. "We know you tried," he said gently. As we sat together, I realized that family love means supporting each other through failures, not just celebrating successes. 当我看着考试成绩时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。我能看到父母眼中的失望中夹杂着担忧，尽管他们什么也没说。房间里令人不安的气氛让人难以忍受。我咬着嘴唇，深吸一口气让自己平静下来。"我很抱歉这么粗心，"我轻声说。父亲慢慢点头，把手放在我的肩上。"我们知道你努力了，"他温柔地说。当我们坐在一起时，我意识到家庭的爱意味着在失败时互相支持，而不仅仅是庆祝成功。 段落改写 将下面这段平淡的叙述改写得更生动，使用至少3个所学句型： 原文： I felt bad when I remembered what I said to her. I was nervous. I went to her house. I said sorry. She forgave me. I was happy. 改写要求： 使用情绪描写句型 使用动作描写句型 使用对话 使用升华句 A wave of guilt washed over me when I remembered what I had said to her. I bit my lip and paced up and down restlessly. My heart pounded nervously as I knocked on her door. When she opened it, I could see hurt mixed with confusion in her eyes. I held out a small gift and apologized sincerely. "I'm so sorry for my thoughtless words," I whispered. She listened quietly, then nodded slowly and forgave me, tears in her eyes. We hugged tightly. As we sat talking, I realized that true friendship is strong enough to survive our mistakes. 当我想起对她说的话时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我咬着嘴唇，不安地来回踱步。当我敲她的门时，我的心紧张地怦怦直跳。当她开门时，我能看到她眼中的伤痛中夹杂着困惑。我递出一份小礼物，真诚地道歉。"我为我轻率的话感到非常抱歉，"我低声说。她静静地听着，然后慢慢点头原谅了我，眼中含着泪水。我们紧紧拥抱。当我们坐着聊天时，我意识到真正的友谊足够强大，可以经受住我们的错误。 改写版本： $