2026届高考英语读后续写考前冲刺（动作描写、情绪情感心理描写、主旨升华）清单

高中英语读后续写考前冲刺 动作描写、情绪情感心理描写、主旨升华 第一部分 读后续写动作描写 1. 三连动作链:Sb.+ did A, did B and did C.. 【例句】1.She woke up, slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door.她醒了,溜下床,踮着脚走到门口。 2.John pressed his finger against his lips, pointed to the cat, and shook his head gently.约翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指着猫咪，轻轻摇了摇头。 3.He lost his balance, staggered back against the rail and fell over.他失去了平衡,往后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。 仿写 他抱着迷路的小猫，轻拍它发抖的身子，四处走动找它的主人。 _____________________________________________________________________ 我深吸一口气，站起身，坚定地走上舞台。 _____________________________________________________________________ 他伸出双手，把我拥入怀中，轻轻拍了拍我的后背。 _____________________________________________________________________ 我被石头绊倒，踉跄几步，伸手扶住了墙壁。 _____________________________________________________________________ 答案 He held the lost cat, patted its shivering body, and walked around to find its owner. I took a deep breath, rose to my feet and stepped onto the stage firmly. He held out his hands, pulled me into his arms and patted me gently on the back. I tripped over a stone, staggered a few steps and held out my hand to support the wall. 2. Doing sth, sb did sth现在分词短语作伴随或时间状语，强调主动行为 【例句】Hugging the birthday gift tightly, my sister ran to the door to greet her best friend.紧紧抱着生日礼物，妹妹跑向门口迎接她最好的朋友。 They ran in bare feet, laughing and teasing.他们光着脚跑着,笑着闹着。 仿写 深吸一口气，我设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。 _____________________________________________________________________ Tom felt so helpless and couldn’t help crying.(改写) _____________________________________________________________________ 答案 Taking a deep breath, I managed to find an empty seat as far away form them as possible. Feeling so helpless, Tom couldn’t help crying. 常用动作 gave sb a (big/warm/affectionate)hug/embrace拥抱 threw oneself into one’s arms 投入某人怀抱 reached out/extended/held out one’s hands伸出手 one's hand rested on one's shoulder手搭在肩膀上 Patted sb on the shoulder/back拍拍某人的肩膀 rose/got to one’s feet 站起来 shake-shook one's head 摇头 nodded one's head 点头 walked/stepped onto the stage 走上舞台 apologized to sb./ made an a apology to sb.道歉 show sb’s gratitude/ thanks to sb.表达感谢 漂亮地说 在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。 （一）对话标签＋语气（tone） ①in a/an+形容词+tone 例句： “You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly/soft/gentle/mild tone.用温柔的语气说 “I would love to.” said Emily in a pleasant tone. （二）对话标签＋嗓音（voice） in a/an+形容词+voice 例句： “I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low/soft voice. “I don't know what you mean,” said Fran in a quivering/trembling voice. （三）对话标签＋介词短语/副词 （1）介词短语 in: in surprise /shock /sorrow /horror /anger with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution /care /patience /certainty 例句： “We’re not in trouble!” I shouted with joy. “I hate you !”she screamed in anger. （2）副词 firmly /excitedly /seriously /sincerely /slowly /regretfully /bitterly/ affectionately 例句： “It isn’t fair !”he exclaimed angrily. “You are my hero!”Kylie said affectionately充满深情地. 仿写 他深吸一口气，坚定地站起来，一步步走上舞台。 _____________________________________________________________________ 看到我失落的样子，她轻声安慰，给了我一个大大的拥抱。 _____________________________________________________________________ 答案： He took a deep breath, rose to his feet firmly and stepped onto the stage step by step. Seeing me depressed, she comforted me in a soft voice and gave me a big hug. 第二部分 读后续写情绪情感心理描写 1. To one's +情绪名词，主句。 （入门级） To my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 情绪名词： 正态度：amazement, delight, joy, satisfaction, excitement. 负态度：annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame羞耻，sorrow悲伤。 中性态度：puzzlement迷惑，regret后悔，relief欣慰，surprise/ amazement 惊讶 升级1: 加强情绪的语气 令我非常吃惊的是 Much/ Greatly to my surprise, ....... 升级2: to the +情绪名词+ of sb 令他父母感到吃惊的是 To the surprise of his parents, ...... 让她高兴的是，她亲手做的蛋糕在比赛中获得了一等奖。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2. 主语从句+表语从句 What...... was that...... 让我惊讶的是Tom居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。 What surprised(动词) me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 表动词的情绪请感类 高兴类：delight，please，excite，cheer，amuse，satisfy 生气类：annoy，upset 惊讶类：surprise，astonish，shock，amaze 害怕类：frighten，scare，terrify 失望类：depress，disappoint，discourage 让她高兴的是，她亲手做的蛋糕在比赛中获得了一等奖。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3. 情绪adj.1 and 情绪adj.2, sb did sth (前置形容词短语作伴随状语) 并列的形容词前置作伴随状语，后边多用逗号 【例句】疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。 Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family. 仿写1: 感到沮丧，挫败，汤姆在考试失败后独自坐在教室里。 _________________________________________________________________ 仿写2: 既生气又失望，男孩把坏掉的玩具扔到了沙发上。 _________________________________________________________________ 答案 Frustrated and defeated, Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam. Angry and disappointed, the boy threw his broken toy onto the sofa. 4. 情感拟人化 “a wave of/ a sense of+情绪名词+固定动词wash over/ take hold of+sb” A wave of sorrow washed over me as I heard the bad news. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news. 描述心情的名词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow/grief 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 guilt/remorse 愧疚/悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕/恐慌 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 动词 seize catch (caught过去式) strike (struck 过去式) surround take hold of wash over come over         +sb. 得知我赢得比赛的那一刻，一阵狂喜笼罩了我。 _____________________________________________________________________ 意识到自己伤害了朋友，一阵深深的愧疚攫住了我。 _____________________________________________________________________ 感受到陌生人的善意，满满的感激之情笼罩了我。 _____________________________________________________________________ 答案 A wave of joy took hold of me the moment I knew I won the competition. A deep sense of guilt seized me the moment I realized I had hurt my friend. A strong sense of appreciation took hold of me when I felt the kindness of the stranger. 第三部分 读后续写万能句式升华 1. 强调句型 人与自然（破坏植物；伤害动物；环境污染） It was from the experience that sb. realized we should live in harmony with nature. 人与社会（朋友间矛盾；亲人间情感；陌生人/老师帮助） It was from the experience that sb. realized a small act of kindness could make a great difference. 人与自我（实现梦想；敢于冒险；内心障碍） It was from the experience that sb. realized the great significance of perseverance/ confidence. 2. It occurred to/dawned on/hit/ struck/ sb. that+从句 It作形式主语，该句型表示“突然想到……” It occurred to/dawned on/hit/ struck/ me that we should live in harmony with nature. It occurred to/dawned on/hit/ struck/ me that a small act of kindness could make a great difference. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $