2026届高考英语一轮复习之读后续写语言描写，动作描写，环境描写，心理描写，语言描写 清单

该高中英语高考复习知识清单聚焦读后续写专题，系统涵盖评分标准、写作步骤、动作情绪心理环境描写语料、主题升华素材及真题实例，构建从基础规范到高阶应用的完整备考体系。 清单采用分类分级呈现知识，如动作描写按“头脸手眼”等部位细分，情绪描写分喜悦悲伤等类型，主题升华素材按希望坚持等主题归类，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。特设评分档次解析和真题情境示例，如环境描写标注“十二月冰冷早晨”等场景，助力学生精准积累，教师可据此优化复习策略，提升备考效率。

读后续写 续写基本内容 一、续写的评分标准 1. 本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。 2. 评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为： （1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。 （2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 （3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3. 评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 4. 评分时还应注意: （1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分； （2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受； （3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。 档次 得分 评分标准 第七档 22-25 —创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高: —使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解: —自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。 第六档 18-21 —创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高: —使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解: —比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。 第五档 15-17 —创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关: —使用恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解: —使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。 第四档 11-14 —创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关: —使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解: —尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。 第三档 6-10 —内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节: —所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解: —未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。 第二档 1--5 —内容和逻辑上有较多问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节: —所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解: —几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。 第一档 0 —未作答:所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判:所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。 二、读后续写的3个特点： （1）原文材料350 词以内，要求续写的文章150-200 词左右 （2）续写两个自然段，每段开头语已经给出； （3）所给原文阅读材料以富有情节的记叙文为主，话题贴近生活，内容为问题解决. 读后续写三步骤： 浅层信息获取：5W1H 5W：when where who why what 1H：how Read：深度解读语篇 理解情节和情感 分析人物性格特点 深层文本解读 明确故事主题 品味写作风格和语言 结合所给两段句首 Think:推测情节发展，构思写作框架 原文呼应+正能量结局 动作描写 情感描写 Write:生动编写故事 心理描写 （穿插描写） 语言运用 环境描写 续写内容设计 一、动作描写语料（动作+五官） 描写与“头”有关的动作 1. Jack lowered his head in shame. Jacke羞愧地低下了头。 2. They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。 3. She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。 4. Frightened, Tom trembled from head to toe. 太害怕了，汤姆浑身颤抖。 描写与“脸”有关的动作 1. Her face flushed with embarrassment. 她窘得满脸通红。 2. His face turned pale with fright. 他吓得面色惨白。 3. A bright smile appeared on his face when I gave him the present. 当我给他礼物时，他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 4. With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, he hugged his mother tightly. 感激的眼泪顺着脸颊淌下，他紧紧地拥抱他的妈妈。 描写与“眼睛”有关的动作 1. Hearing the good news, her eyes lit up with excitement. 听到这个好消息，她的眼睛兴奋地发亮。 2. Tears blurred my eyes. 泪水模糊了我的双眼。 3. Jane glared at her husband crossly and flushed with anger. Jane怒视着她的丈夫，脸气得通红。 4. I felt like everyone was staring at me, making me nervous. 我觉得每个人都在盯着我看，让我很紧张。 5. She glanced at her watch and went for work hurriedly. 她看了一眼表就匆忙去上班了。 描写与“嘴”有关的动作 1. I froze with terror, too scared to speak a word. 我吓呆了，一句话都说不出来。 2. “Help!” someone yelled in the river. “救命！”有人在河里喊道。 3. “Where are we going?” he asked in a whisper. “我们要去哪里?”他低声问道。 4. At the sight of the dark figure, they let out a cry. 一看到那个黑影，他们大声叫了起来。 5. “I shouldn’t have quarreled with Tom.” Jane talked to herself. “我不该和Tom吵架的。” Jane自言自语。 6. The little boy admitted his mistake. 这个小男孩承认了他的错误。 7. sb. tell/say tearfully 某人含泪说。 描写与“手”有关的动作 1. “Thanks,” Dad said and put his arm around my shoulders. “谢谢。”爸爸说着搂着我的肩膀。 2. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly. 离得越近，她越使劲地挥动那件黄色上衣。 3. The man reached into his pocket and placed four coins in her hand. 那人把手伸进口袋，掏出4个硬币放在她手里。 4. He patted my head, saying “You did a good job.” 他拍拍我的头说:“你做得很好。” 描写与“腿”有关的动作 1. He paced up and down in the bedroom. 他在卧室里来回踱步。 2. She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 她悄悄地下了床，踮着脚走到窗前。 3. The man dashed/rushed for the exit, and escaped with great panic. 那人冲向出口，惊慌失措地逃走了 4. He jumped into the water and tried to save the little girl. 他跳进水里，试图救那个小女孩 描写与“心”有关的动作 1. At the sight of the wolf, her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs. 一看见狼，她的心狂跳，撞击着她的肋骨。 2. Her heart was brimming over with happiness. 她的心中充满了幸福。 3. My heart began to race and my mind went blank. 我的心开始狂跳，脑子一片空白。 4. On this cold night, the pair of gloves not only warmed my hands, but also melted my heart. 在这个寒冷的夜晚，这副手套不仅温暖了我的双手，也融化了我的心。 二、情绪描写语料 情绪描写 ①喜悦 名词：delight joy happiness amusement(可笑，愉悦) 形容词：delighted cheerful merry amused 动词：smile laugh giggle（咯咯笑）chuckle(低声轻笑) grin（露齿笑）smirk(洋洋得意的笑) hum(哼)小曲 短语：burst into laughter(突然大笑) clap one’s hands(拍手) eyes twinkle.(两眼发光) jump up and cheer(跃起欢呼) dance/jump for joy 高兴地跳起来 ②悲伤 名词：sadness sorrow misery（痛苦）regret depression disappoint desperation（绝望）frustration（挫折） 形容词：upset disappointed heartbroken frustrated（受挫的） depressed（沮丧的）low-spirited desperate regretful 动词：cry weep(哭泣) sob(抽泣) choke（哽咽） sigh（叹气） frown（皱眉） 短语：hold back tears抑制住眼泪 eyes are wet with tears眼含泪水 in low spirits情绪低落 sigh with disappointment失望的叹气 ③愤怒 名词：anger rage(暴怒) madness(疯狂） fury(狂怒) 形容词：angry enraged mad furious annoyed irritated（恼怒的） 短语：glare at 怒视 flush with anger气得脸通红 face twists with rage 脸因为愤怒而扭曲 ④恐惧 名词：fright terror horror panic 形容词：scared frighted terrified horrified 短语：one’s mind goes blank(脑子一片空白) legs tremble(双腿发抖) hold one’s breath 屏住呼吸 one’s throat tightens.(哽咽） his face turn pale(脸色苍白) one’s heart beats/pounds violently.(心脏剧烈跳动). ⑤满意： 名词：content satisfaction 形容词：content satisfied pleased ⑥惊讶 名词：surprise shock amazement astonishment（震惊） 形容词：surprised shocked amazed astonished open-mouthed dumbstruck（惊得目瞪口呆的） 短语：freeze（froze） on the spot 当场僵住 one’s mouth hangs open 张大嘴 widen one’s eyes 瞪大眼睛 ⑦感动： 动词：touch move 形容词：touched moved tearful 短语：tears stream down（流下眼泪） bow to sb.(鞠躬) ⑧焦虑 名词：concern anxiety agitation(忧虑) 形容词：concerned(担忧的) anxious(焦虑的) agitated(焦虑不安的) restless（坐立不安的）nervous（紧张的） 动词：shake（战栗/颤抖） tremble（颤抖/哆嗦） 短语：walk back and forth（来来回回、踱步) feel my heart beating wildly 感觉心跳加速； ⑨尴尬： 形容词：embarrassed awkward shamed 短语：flush with embarrassment 窘红了脸； drop my head in shame 羞愧地低下了头； feel my face burning 脸上滚烫； want the floor to swallow me up 想找个地缝钻进去 ⑩感恩、感激 名词：gratitude appreciation（感激） 形容词：grateful thankful appreciative（感激的） 短语：tears of gratitude flowing down 流下感激的泪水 三、心理描写语料 （1）表达“愧疚” 1.I could feel my face turning beet red as I realized my mistake.当我意识到我的错误时，我能感觉到我满脸通红。beet red：（窘得）满脸通红 2.Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly embarrassed and could feel my heart thumping wildly, my face burning badly.站在教室，我越发尴尬，能听见心跳加速的声音，脸烧得厉害。 3.So ashamed was I that I could feel the blood rush to my face. 我如此羞愧以至于感觉到血液涌上脸颊。 （2）表达“后悔” 1.She was struck dead with regret, heart beating painfully and banging against her ribs.她后悔得要死，心脏痛苦地跳动着，砰砰地撞在肋骨上。 2.A tiny part of me was haunted by a pang of remorse. 我身体的部分被一阵悔恨所困扰。 haunt/hɔːnt/：v.长期不断地缠扰（某人）；a pang of一阵突然的痛苦 （3）表达“感动” 1.1.I dissolved into tears of gratitude. 我开始感激地哭起来。 dissolve/dɪˈzɑːlv/：禁不住（笑起来或哭起来等） 2.With tears streaming down her face, he ran to mum’s warm hug, and said thank to her. 他泪流满面，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，对她说了声谢谢。 3.Touched immensely, we failed to utter a single word, tears blurring our eyes. 感动无比，我们一句话也说不出来，泪水模糊了双眼。 utter/ˈʌtər：v.出声；说；blur/blɜːr/：v.（使）变得模糊不清 4.After hearing the explanation, Bernard was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude.听到这个解释后，伯纳德激动万分，感激万分。 be overwhelmed with：充满……情绪 （4）表达“悲伤” 1.I tried to fight back tears. 我努力忍住眼泪。 fight back此处是遏制（泪水）的意思 2.She burst into tears and ran out of the room. 她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。 burst into tears=burst out crying 突然哭起来 3.They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。   glum/ɡlʌm/：adj.忧郁的 4.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 （5）表达“喜乐激动” 1.She was feeling on top of the world. 她感到自己是世界上最幸福的人。 on the top of the world 极度幸福；非常开心，欣喜若狂 2.I would be wild with joy if it was true. 我会欣喜若狂的，如果这是真的话。 be wild with joy 欣喜若狂 3.Hearing the news, he jumped up and down with excitement. 一听到这个消息，他激动得上窜下跳。 jump/bounce up and down 跳上跳下 4.I couldn’t help but grin from ear to ear. 我忍不住开心地咧嘴大笑。 5.The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 shine like a diamond 像钻石一样闪闪发光 四、环境描写语料 【花】 1. The flowers were gently swaying in the breeze. 花儿在微风中轻轻摇曳。 2. The mountain path is lined with wildflowers and butterflies, creating a colorful and vibrant atmosphere. 山路两旁开满野花，蝴蝶翩翩起舞，营造出一种缤纷多彩的氛围。 3. The wildflower field is a riot of colors, with a profusion of tiny flowers creating a tapestry of beauty. 野花田是色彩缤纷的，一片繁茂的小花构成了美丽的图案。 【鸟】 1. Birds were chattering/ twittering/ chirping somewhere. 鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。 2. With its melodic song and bright yellow feathers, the canary was a symbol of joy and happiness. 金丝雀以其美妙的歌声和鲜黄色的羽毛成为了快乐和幸福的象征。 【树、树叶】 1. The leaves had almost all fallen off, creating a sea of fiery colors that crunched beneath our feet. 几乎所有的叶子都掉下来了，在我们的脚下形成一片火红色的海洋。我们踩上去发出嘎吱嘎吱的声响。 2. As the wind blows, we can hear the leaves rustling in the trees. 随着风的吹拂,我们可以听到树沙沙作响。 【山川河流】 1. With its gentle murmur and soothing rhythm, the babbling brook is a calming presence. 小溪潺潺作响，节奏舒缓，是令人平静的存在。 2. The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface. 湖水深蓝，阳光在风平浪静的湖面上熠熠生辉。 3. The peaceful landscape is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. 绵延起伏的青山上散落着牛羊，这幅祥和宁静的景象真让人赏心悦目。 4. The path is winding and we saw mountains towering over the green valleys and cliffs that seemed endless. 小路蜿蜒曲折,我们看到高山耸立在绿色的山谷和悬崖上，似乎没有尽头。 【阳光】（可搭配正面情绪，营造温馨和谐氛围，传递希望） 1. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下，那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤。 2. The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs. 阳光的甜蜜充满我的肺。 3.When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 当我拉开窗帘，阳光倾泻入。 4. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine. 一缕阳光，全世界绽放。 5.The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas. 日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。 6.As the sun sets behind the mountains, the sky is painted with hues of orange and pink. 夕阳西下，山峦云霞染上了橙色和粉红色的色彩。 【蓝天白云】（可搭配正面情绪，营造温馨和谐氛围） 01.The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering（飘舞; 振翅）larks（云雀）. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。  注释：be dotted with意为“星星般点缀着…” . a butterfly fluttering its wings. …一只拍动着翅膀的蝴蝶。 The paper fluttered to the floor. 纸飘落到地板上。 02.White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean. 朵朵白云飘在蓝天中，就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。   03. I was immediately stunned by the azure (蔚蓝色的) sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting (飘；漂流) around. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。  04. Colorful flowers were blooming beneath the blue sky, and the sunshine reflected on the lake, making it shine like diamonds. 蔚蓝色的天空下，百花盛开，阳光洒在湖面上如同铺上了一颗颗闪耀的钻石。 【徐徐微风】（可搭配正面情绪，营造温馨和谐氛围） 1. The summer breeze gently moved through the leaves with a sighing sound. 夏日的微风轻轻地吹过树叶，发出叹息的声音。（此句用于描写低落的情绪） 2. The gentle breeze(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness. 微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。 3. The wind brushed our faces while the moon, hidden in the clouds, revealed itself. 风吹拂着我们的脸，躲在云里的月亮探出身来。 五、激励谚语 1.Whatever you do,do it a hundred percent. 无论你做什么，都要全力以赴。 2.Quitter never win,and winners never quit. 退缩者永无胜利，胜利者永不退缩。 3.Young dreams should not stop at heart,but should be put into action. 年少有梦，不应止于心动，而应付诸行动。 4.Fate,like you palm prints,no matter how tortuous,is always in your own hands. 命运就如同你的掌纹，无论多曲折，始终掌握在自己手中。 5.Where there is light,we go forward together. 在光明之处，我们共赴前方。 6.Sunlight still prevails above the clouds while a storm is raging below. 纵使狂风暴雨，云层之上依然阳光明媚。 7.Cross through the stars and the moon to meet your better self. 跨过星河，迈过月亮，去迎接更好的自己。 8.You are the master of your own destiny. 命运掌握在自己手里。 9.With confident,all things are within the realms of possibility. 拥有信心，一切皆有可能。 10.Behind every successful person is sweat that you can’t see. 每一个成功者的背后都流着你看不见的汗水。 11.May everything you strive for have good results. 愿你为之奋斗的一切都有好结果。 12.May you be faithful to yourself,live earnestly,and laugh freely. 愿你忠于自己，认真生活，放肆大笑。 13.Shape tools make good work. 工欲善其事必先利其器。 14.Don’t go through life.Grow through life. 别只是生活，要在生活中成长。 15.Difficult circumstance serve as a textbook of life for people. 困难的处境是人们生活的教科书。 读后续写主题升华素材积累 读后续写素材积累：（一）充满希望 1. Never give up no matter what happens, no matter how hopeless.1.无论发生什么，无论多么绝望，都不要放弃。 2. Every cloud has a silver lining. There is always light at the end of the tunnel. Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope.2.黑暗中总有一线光明。 隧道尽头总有光明。 某个地方的某个人会点亮一盏希望之灯。 3. Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there was always someone to help us out and there was always hope waiting for us.3.生活会不期而遇，但总有人帮助我们，总有希望在等着我们。 读后续写素材积累：（二）追求梦想 1. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.1.只要你有梦想，就去追求它，不要轻易放弃。 你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实现的。 2. As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible—there's no end to where our dreams can take us.2.只要我们敢于梦想，不让困难阻碍我们，一切皆有可能——我们的梦想能带我们去的地方永无止境。 3. It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.3.追求梦想永远不会太晚。 只要你抓住每一个机会，充分利用它，你就有机会实现你的梦想。 读后续写素材积累：（三）活到老学到老 1. It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.1.学习永远不会太晚。 每个人都有权接受更多的挑战，做出更多的尝试。 2. It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dream.2.追求梦想永远不会太晚。 只要你抓住每一个机会，充分利用它，你就有机会实现你的梦想。 读后续写素材积累：（四）成功没有捷径 1. There is no elevator to success, only stairs.1.通往成功没有电梯，只有楼梯。 2. There is no such thing as free lunch.2.没有免费的午餐。 3. That is a ladder that can't be climbed with your hands in your pockets.3.那是一个双手插在口袋里爬不上去的梯子。 4. Be the flower that blooms, and butterflies will come.4.做那朵盛开的花，蝴蝶就会来。 5. Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.5.当准备遇到机会时会发生运气。 6. All that you do, do with your might; things done by halves are never done right.6.你所做的一切，都要尽力而为；半途而废的事永远做不好。 读后续写素材积累：（五）坚持 1. Life is tough, but you can be tougher.1.生活很艰难，但你可以更坚强。 2. What doesn't kill you makes you a fighter.2.打不死你的东西会让你成为斗士。 3. There are no shortcuts to any place worth going.3.任何值得去的地方都没有捷径。 4. As a saying goes, every coin has two sides. Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case should you give up. God is fair to everyone.4.俗话说，每一枚硬币都有两面。充分发挥你的实力，就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下您都不应放弃。上帝对每个人都是公平的。 5. The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal in the end.5.通往成功的道路并不平坦。 它充满了挑战和困难。 我们应该勇敢地面对他们。 只要我们不放弃希望，全力以赴克服一切困难，我们一定会最终实现我们的目标。 读后续写素材积累：（六）生活 1. Life is full of twists and turns, ups and downs, peaks and valleys.1.人生充满曲折，起起落落，高峰和低谷。 2. Life consists not in holding good cards, but in playing well those you hold.2. 人生不在于拿好牌，而在于打好手中的牌。 3. Life is a fruitful and rewarding journey.3. 人生是一段硕果累累的旅程。 读后续写素材积累：（七）积极乐观 1. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.1.生活充满了微笑和泪水。 只有接受他们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。 2. Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is to hold a positive attitude.2.对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。 我们无法改变我们的过去； 我们无法改变事实。但是，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。 3. The positive thinker sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible.3. 积极的思考者看到无形的，感受无形的，实现不可能的。 4. You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.4.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以随时选择如何回应。 5. The more you feed your mind with positive thoughts, the more you can attract great things into your life.5. 你越是用积极的想法来充实你的头脑，你就越能把美好的事物吸引到你的生活中。 读后续写素材积累：（八）勇敢面对挫折 1. Neither should we try to escape from difficulties nor should we be defeated by them. As the saying goes, what does not kill you makes you stronger.1.我们既不应该逃避困难，也不应该被困难打败。俗话说，杀不死你的，只会让你更强大。 2. As Hemingway put it, a man can be destroyed but not defeated.2.正如海明威所说，一个人可以被摧毁，但不能被打败。 3. It is bravery that makes a man go forward. It is kindness that makes the world go around.3.是勇敢使一个人前行。是善良让世界运转。 4. Sometimes, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness.4.有时候，一个小小的关怀，就有可能融化人的寂寞。 5. One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver.5.一个简单的善举对施者和受者都是一种祝福。 读后续写素材积累：（九）帮助 1. Having heard what the Messenger shared, the folks came to understand that it was kindness that kept the fire burning even brighter than before.1.听了使者的分享，人们才明白，是善良让火比以前更旺。 2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.2.从那天起，每次遇到需要帮助的人，我都会主动伸出援手，希望能把墨西哥家人对我的善意传递下去。 3. From then on, I would try my best to help others like the stranger I met. Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.3.从那时起，我会尽我所能像我遇到的陌生人一样帮助别人。只有这样，未来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。 4. It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.4.我突然意识到，一瞬间的善意对另一个人来说意义重大，一个简单的行为就能让世界变得更美好。 5. Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.5.无论贫富，都应该乐于为社会做点事。因此，我们可以了解到，给予是幸福的源泉。 6. Tears welling up in his eyes, he knew that it was Meridith's kindness and support that helped him pull through and he should face difficulties bravely in the future.6.泪水在眼眶里打转，他知道是梅瑞狄斯的善意和支持帮助他度过了难关，以后应该勇敢面对困难。 读后续写素材积累：（十）自信 1. Never underestimate your power to change yourself.1.永远不要低估你改变自己的力量。 2. Though roses are the most beautiful, not everyone can have the chance to be a rose and Mimosas are also beautiful in their unique way.2. 玫瑰虽然最美，但不是每个人都有机会成为玫瑰，含羞草也有自己独特的美丽。 3. Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.3. 其实，每个人都有天赋。找到它时要勇敢，也要努力。你最终可以创造奇迹。 4. I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.4. 当我终于意识到真正的自信来源时，我微笑了。现在，我为自己的长相感到自豪，也更快乐了，因为我意识到是你的个性决定了你的真实身份。 读后续写素材积累：（十一）友爱善良 1. Kindness/Love makes the world go around. 1. 爱让世界运转。 2. Empathy is what defines us as human.2. 同理心将我们定义为人类。 3. He knew that with love and kindness from the world, he could go further.3. 他知道，有了这个世界的爱和善意，他可以走得更远。 4. Maybe it's always the act of kindness from strangers that makes us throw out our daggers and fright and pull us closer.4.也许总是陌生人的善意让我们扔掉匕首和害怕，并把我们拉得更近了。 读后续写素材积累：（十二）亲情 1.My father's love is like the sunshine, which brings me firmness and enthusiasm so that my will is strengthened.1.父亲的爱就像阳光，带给我坚定和热情，使我的意志更加坚定。 2. Mother's love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible.2.母爱是让一个正常人做不可能的事的燃料。 3. Only then did it dawn on me that we should never take love for granted.3.直到那时我才明白，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。 4. Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.4.家庭是波涛汹涌的生命海洋中的救生衣。 5. Family is a unique gift that needs to be appreciated and treasured.5.家庭是一份独特的礼物，需要被欣赏和珍惜。 6. Our loved ones help us survive the tough time in our lives with their support and encourage us to reach higher heights in our life. Never let go of our loved ones.6.我们所爱的人在他们的支持下帮助我们度过生活中的艰难时期，并鼓励我们在生活中达到更高的高度。永远不要放弃我们所爱的人。 读后续写素材积累：（十三）友情 1. Friendship is like the light of fireflies. The darker it is, the brighter the light will be.1.友谊就像萤火虫的光。越暗，光就会越亮。 2. Make friends with people who build you up rather than tear you down. Spend time with people who inspire you to reach for new heights.2.与建立你而不是摧毁你的人交朋友。花时间与激励你达到新高度的人在一起。 3. Isn't it a delight to have friends come from afar?3.有远道而来的朋友不亦乐乎吗？ 4. There is no shame in accepting your mistake or forgiving each other. We should be kind and humble. We should try to stay together as a family and not break away from it over the petty arguments.4.接受自己的错误或互相原谅并不羞耻。我们应该善良和谦虚。我们应该像一家人一样努力在一起，不要因为琐碎的争论而脱离它。 更多 【希望】Where there is a life ,there is a hope.生命不息，希望长在。 【追梦】No matter how hard it is ,I will pursue my dream.不管有多难，我都会追求我的梦想。 【分享】The only way to multiply happiness is to divide it.增加幸福的唯一方法就是分享幸福。 【给予】The real happiness of this world is not to take but to give.这个世界真正的幸福不是索取而是给予。 【自信】Embrace every possibility in your life and believe in yourself.把握住你生命中的一切可能，相信自己。 【善行】A minor action could make wonders!一个小行为就能创造奇迹！ 【远离手机】With a cellphone, we can do a lot. But without a cellphone, a lot more are waiting to be explored.有了手机，我们可以做很多事情。 但是没有手机，很多还有更多等待探索 【远离网络】A journey in mind is better than the moments online.思想的旅程胜过网上的时刻。 【快乐的一天】What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience. 多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。 【保持冷静】It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。 【尊老】We should take care of our old parents in the best way no matter how they behave.无论他们的行为如何，我们都应该以最好的方式照顾我们的老父母。 【平等】Everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or she was.每个人都应该被平等对待，无论他或她多么特别。 【友谊】The light of the setting sun shone on the boys, witnessing the start of a new friendship.夕阳的余晖洒在孩子们的身上，见证了一段新友谊的开始。 【尊敬自然】I hope all climbers can respect and cherish nature in the future.我希望所有登山者在未来都能尊重和珍惜自然。 【感谢母亲】I am forever grateful to my mother, who have made me what I am today.我永远感谢我的母亲，是她让我成为了今天的我。 【感谢父母】I am so grateful to my parents for what they did for me.我非常感谢我的父母为我所做的一切。 【诚实】Never before in my life had I so firmly believed honesty is the best policy. 在我的一生中，我从未如此坚定地相信诚实是最好的策略。 【老师的鼓励】I knew that all this was due to the encouragement from my teacher, which helped me find the confidence to succeed.我知道这一切都归功于老师的鼓励，让我找到了成功的信心。 【同理心】Try to put ourselves in her shoes and learn to show concern for her.试着设身处地为她着想，学会关心她。 【帮助】A difference can be made by an individual who is willing to take the opportunity to help others, even if it means sacrificing something of their own.一个愿意抓住机会帮助他人的人可以有所作为，即使这意味着牺牲自己的一些东西。 【帮助】When we give a helping hand to those who need our assistance, the world will be a better place to live in. 【保持冷静】If we stay calm when facing difficulty, we are more able to find the solution!如果我们在面对困难时保持冷静，我们就更有能力找到解决方案！ 【过程比结果重要】It was the efforts in the process rather than the results that mattered.重要的是过。 真题 一、成长篇有关的环境描写： 1.On a freezing morning of December（十二月的一个冰冷的早上）, two police officers were patrolling the streets. 2.It was poorly lit,narrow and damp（又狭窄又潮湿）. 3.Walking along the narrow brick sidewalk（沿着狭窄的砖砌人行道走）, Aram took a deep breath. 4.The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee（空气弥漫着柠檬，烤面包和咖啡的香气）, coming from Rossi's Italian Bakery. 5.A faded wooden sign（一块褪色的木头招牌）over the door read "Rossi's Bakery." 6.Rossi's Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start.（他开始的地方）. 7.It was a large white Victorian home.As we approached the large front porch,wind bells played a calming tune while trees and blossoms welcomed us.（风铃发出平静的曲调，花和树在欢迎我们）. 8.Below the bridge, the treetops formed an ocean of green waves（形成一片绿色海浪） that threatened to devour me. 9.Silence penetrated the room.(沉默穿透房间) 10. And now, staring at the yellow candles on my birthday cake(蛋糕上的黄蜡烛), I only have one wish. 11.That day,laughter filled the whole house.(笑声充满整个房间). 二、成长篇有关的人物描写： 1.Growing up, I wanted to be just like my mom.(长大后，我想成为我妈妈的样子). Kind and caring, she always seemed to make people comfortable in her presence. 2.I looked down to see a little girl with a deep cut on her forehead(在她额头上有一道深伤疤) beaming up at me.  三、成长篇有关的情绪描写： 1、成长篇有关的孤独描写： I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. 2、成长篇有关的伤心描写： (1).我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。 I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. (2).看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。 Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying. (3).就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过。 Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me. (4).把它放回去，我慢慢地骑车去学校，痛苦得麻木了。 Putting it back, I rode slowly on to school, numb with misery. (5).悲伤沉重地悬在空中。Sadness hang heavily in the air. (6).After drinking a little, Karie plodded(重步走)down the hall,lost in thought(陷入沉思). How could she tell the class she hadn’t earned the prize after all? (7). She couldn’t help sobbing(忍不住哭泣) , tears rolling down like a broken string of beads.(一串断线的珠子) .  (8). Hearing this , Karie couldn't hide her feelings any longer (再也不能隐藏她的情绪) and burst into tears.  (9). "That's it?" Aram said, his heart sinking.（他的心沉下去了） (10). A wave of disappointment struck him（失望如潮水般涌向他）.  (11). Sadness overwhelmed him（悲伤淹没了他） so suddenly that he couldn't think of a word to say.  (12). Seeing Jayce was mad at God for making him that way,the poor mother felt it a huge dagger to her heart.（一把巨大的匕首刺向她的心脏） (13). What made her more sorrowful（让她更加伤心的是） was that she didn’t know what to do at that point and how to provide answers to her son’s questions which she could never find out herself. (14). Behind stood Lewis, whose face was flooded with tears.（他泪流满面）. 15. I sat in silence, too upset to make a conversation.（太伤心了，无法说话） (16). What a terrible life they had had before they moved here! My heart sank.（我的心沉了下去） (17). Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him.（他感到一阵悲伤） (18). Seeing my father in so much pain（看到我爸爸陷入痛苦中） was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. (19). Salty tears ran down his cheeks（咸咸的眼泪从脸颊流下来）, and his stomach hurt.    3、成长篇有关的高兴描写： (1). Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box. (2). Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile.（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑） (3). Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her.（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头） (4). Hearing this, Aram jumped up in happiness（开心地跳起来）, with his eyes sparkling like shining stars.（眼睛像星星一样闪烁） (5). Seeing his role model in flesh, Jayce was too thrilled to say a single word（开心到说不出话来） but stand here with his mouth open wide. (6). Our time together brought her great joy and fun（给她带来开心和乐趣） and she also made my day.    (7). When laughter was totally submerged by loud cheering and applause（笑声被喧闹的欢呼声和掌声淹没）, I pulled myself up in front of an amazing birthday cake. (8). Noticing the kid’ eyes danced with joy and sweetness（欢欣雀跃）, I was held totally in the power of a burst of content .  (9). I nodded slightly, and my daughter’s frowning face slowly broke into a smile（露出了笑容）.  (10). Looking around the room filled with my friends,  I couldn't help but smile.(忍不住微笑).   4、成长篇有关的惭愧描写： (1). She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame. (被内疚和羞愧淹没).  (2). Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands. (3). A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. (4). But while I was out having fun with my “friends," inside I was full of conflict, unhappiness and regret.(充满矛盾，不悦和后悔).  (5). Hearing their talk on the phone,I hung my head shamefully(羞愧得低下头来) with tears running down my face.  5、成长篇有关的绝望描写： 我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。 “My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me. 6、成长篇有关的嘲笑描写： 他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！” They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!” 7、成长篇有关的尴尬描写： (1). 尴尬把我完全包围了。 Embarrassment enveloped me totally. (2).On hearing this, Bob became embarrassed, twisting and rubbing his hands (扭动揉搓他的手) over and over again seemingly to get warm in this freezing December.  (3). Standing frozen as ice, never had I thought about being trapped in such a dilemma that I was flooded with overwhelming awkwardness and panic (我感到无比的尴尬和恐慌).  (4). After taking a deep breath, I started running, with my cape billowing and my embarrassment vanishing away in the wind(我的尴尬消散在风中).  8、成长篇有关的紧张描写： (1). Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed .(她的手指交叉着) (2). She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum.(她的心跳得像打鼓一样).  (3). Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office,  she finally gathered courage and plodded in. (4). Her jaws clenched（咬紧了牙关）, like she was holding her words between her teeth as they struggled to get out.  (5). Whenever he was near the tiny hole around the corner, my heart missed a beat.（我的心漏了半拍） (6). Then came the moment, and with butterflies in his stomach（非常紧张）, he made his way to the platform.  (7). A little nervous as he felt（他感到有点紧张）, his grandmother’s words seemed to echo inside his head and words just flooded out of his mouth.  9、成长篇有关的惊讶描写： Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）. 10、成长篇有关的希望描写： Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）. 11、成长篇有关的害怕描写：  I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .   12、成长篇有关的感激描写： I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes. 四、成长篇有关的动作描写 1、成长篇有关的犯错的描写： (1). Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket(把手表塞进口袋). So I did.  (2). Karie stuffed the test paper into backpack(把试卷塞进背包里)and explained that she was just too excited.    2、成长篇有关的修辞的描写： (1). The door opened and out came a very thin woman(一个很瘦的女人走出来).  (2). Coming in front of his eyes(走在他眼前) was a undernourished boy, beaming from ear to ear while working busily with flour at hand.  (3). Due to their young age, Jayce was encouraged that he was just like an angel with one wing folded(像一块翅膀折叠起来的天使) to prepare for something. (4). The white lie burst just like bubbles (像泡泡一样破碎)that day. (5). The missing arm is like an invisible challenge(想一个隐藏的挑战), reminding us that we should make more efforts if we want to achieve anything (6). Time really flies(时间飞逝) when you are absorbed in something interesting.  (7). Memories flooded back.(记忆如潮水一样涌来) (8). The December morning breeze brushed my long, black hair (抚摸我黑黑的长发) as I stepped towards the doors of Hagenberg High.  (9). My English was poor, and I was alone, like a lost little kid(像一个迷路的小孩).  3、成长篇有关的教育与成长的描写： (1). “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left. (2). “What was done was done,” thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).”   (3). 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys. (4).我不该如此匆忙的方式试图融入，也不该把母亲身后的手表偷走。I shouldn’t have tried to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother. (5). 放学后，我会诚实地告诉妈妈，我偷了手表是为了给那些不是我真正朋友的朋友留下好印象。After school, I would tell my mother honestly that I had stolen the watch out to impress friends who turned out not to be my true friends. (6). After saying that with her face flushed red(满脸通红), she handed the paper and the prize to the teacher. (7). With those words, he stroke her curlys affectionately.(深情地抚摸着她的卷发). (8). Torn between the honor and conscience(在荣誉和良知之间摇摆不定) , she had a restless night, tossing and turning on bed.  (9). The poor little boy got spellbound(被迷住了),watching dunk after dunk.He saw Trashaun as a tough role model(当做一个坚强的榜样) who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life.  (10). We often take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude(那些值得我们感恩的事情我们经常当作理所当然). (11). Regardless of how much good she thought she might be able to do with the money, Catchy decided that the only realistic choice left to her was to return it to its owner(留给她最现实的选择是把它还给主人). (12). Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue(诚实是一种美德). (13). But when the time came, I got up on stage and faced one of my greatest fears-and discovered I could do more than I ever gave myself credit for(我比我自己认为能做的做得更多).  (14). I found a new person inside me, a much more daring, outgoing person who had been hidden all along(一个隐藏已久的更勇敢和外向的人), just waiting for the opportunity to appear. (15).  Bravery was the most significant quality (勇敢是最重要的品质) that I wanted her to possess.  (16). I plucked up my courage and took my first step(鼓起勇气迈出第一步) onto the suspension bridge, then another, I inched forward, all the way holding on tight to the handrail.  (17). I’m a straight A student, confident and popular(有信心又受欢迎), but that’s not what I was a year ago.  (18).To my surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology(对我微笑，向我道歉) for ignoring my loneliness as well as my difficulty with English communication. (19). Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends(向我的妈妈和朋友表示感谢),bowing to them several times.   (20). Then he patted Jayce’s head, “But I think this is the perfect way God made me. With five fingers, we also made it in lots of things just now. The missing arm is like a wing folded by an angel. Only when you're tough will you see the wing(只有你足够坚强才能看见翅膀)!"    五、成长篇话题结尾的主题升华句 1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。 I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words. 2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。 It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience. 然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。 3. However, from then on I promised that this broken watch would always remind me to be patient until truth emerged itself. 4. As Alan watched into the Bob’s eyes, he saw the genuine comradeship glistening with little soft snowflakes (和小小的柔软的雪花一起闪烁)falling down from the sky, white and pure.  5. Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).” 6. It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到）  “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.” 7. Outside the bakery, the birds perching on the top of the branches chirruped happily（栖息在树枝顶端的鸟儿欢快地叽叽喳喳）, as if celebrating their achievement. 8. Many years have passed, looking at the sign “Aram and Rossi's Bakery” hanging outside their shop（挂在他们店外的招牌）, he was full of appreciation about this place where he got his start as a real baker. 9. Rows of people lined every corner of the bakery’s again（面包店的每个角落再次排满了人）, and the faded wood sign shined again with a new name “Aram and Rossi's Bakery” . 10. She confirmed the l4-year-old would be a superhero one day, so would her son, who was unfolding his hidden wing(展开他的翅膀)! 11. It was Mom who taught me(是妈妈教会我) we should never take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude.  12. Thought it was a tough year that I struggle a lot with my identity, it was that day that I realize I can be a hero that kid’s needed(我可以做一个孩子们需要的英雄). 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $