内容正文:
题型01 书面表达15篇 (成都专用)
【题型知识点细目表】
题号
难度
知识点
1
适中
文体活动,意见/建议
2
适中
合作与交流
3
适中
自我保护,安全守则,意见/建议
4
较难
学习策略,应用文
5
较难
应用文,青少年问题
6
适中
记叙文,计划,青少年问题
7
较难
应用文,愿望
8
较难
议论文,意见/建议
9
较难
社区,应用文,意见/建议
10
适中
中华文化,应用文,传统工艺
11
适中
发明与创造,应用文
12
较难
说明文,传统工艺
13
适中
交通方式,应用文
14
适中
健康饮食
15
适中
健康与运动,意见/建议
【中考真题】
1.英语课将围绕“你最喜欢的科学探究场所”开展讨论,以下图表为你所在小组针对本校八年级学生的调查结果。请根据图表信息写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述及评析;
2.你的选择及原因。
注意:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开展科学探究do scientific exploration
Hello, everyone.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. Today, we are talking about our favorite places for scientific exploration. In our survey, 62% of students in Grade 8 choose our school. It’s because our school has many good labs and tools. 18% like to go to universities. They can learn from professors. 14% choose other places, maybe museums or science centers. Only 6% do exploration at home. I think it’s a little dangerous without help.
For me, I like doing scientific exploration at school best. It’s safe and we can work with our classmates and teachers. We can learn a lot together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容完成写作,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍调查结果,并进行评析;
第三步,介绍自己的选择以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from从……学习
②a little有点
[高分句型]
①It’s because our school has many good labs and tools. (because引导的表语从句)
②I think it’s a little dangerous without help. (宾语从句)
2. 你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
Be a Good Team Member
There is an old saying in China, “Unity is strength.” It tells people the importance of teamwork. By discussing with members in the team, we can come up with the better ideas. But how to be a good team member? Here are some tips for you.
First, communicate more with each other. There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates. We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Second, work together on projects. When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. Finally, trust your teammates.
All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s work together to build a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍团队合作的重要性;
第二步,细节介绍如何成为一名好团队成员的方法;
第三步,总结。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with提出
②each other彼此
③plays an important role发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
①When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high.(时间状语从句)
②There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates.(同位语从句)
【热点话题练习】
3.你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意:
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词);
2. 须全面反映图文信息;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数80左右。
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【答案】例文:
Stay Safe Online
With the wide of spread of the of the Internet, we have easy access to almost everything we want to know. Meanwhile, there are also hidden dangers that we can’t see through. Then what should we do to stay safe online?
First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give away your personal information like name or address. Second, don’t click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss. Third, never see strangers you meet online. Finally, always be polite in the virtual world. Try not to be a target for a cyberbully.
Only when we obey the rules above ca we build a healthy and harmonious online world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出我们面对的网络安全问题。
第二步,对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议。
第三步,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①with the wide of spread of随着……广泛传播
②first of all首先
③give away泄露
④click on点击
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, there are also hidden dangers that we can’t see through. (that引导定语从句)
②Then what should we do to stay safe online? (动词不定式表目的)
4.假设你是初三学生滕飞,你的英国笔友 Peter 想知道你从初一到现在关于英语学习方面发生的一些变化。请你根据图片提示给他回电子邮件,介绍你在英语学习方式和爱好方面的变化,产生变化的原因,并谈谈这些变化带来的影响。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
2. 词数 80 左右。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
You asked about my English learning changes. Here they are.
I was shy before and rarely spoke English. I only did exercises, and my test scores were low, about 30 points. Now, I join the English corner weekly. Besides watching English movies, I also read English books and newspapers.
My teacher said, “Use it or lose it.” I realized I must practice using English. These changes helped me a lot. I’m more confident now, and my latest test score reached 140 points.
Best regards,
Teng Fei
(词数统计:88词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:电子邮件;
②时态:一般过去时与一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,并突出重点,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应来信,引出主题;
第二步,对比描述过去(害羞、只做练习、分数低)和现在(参加英语角、看电影、读书报)的变化;
第三步,说明变化的原因(老师的教诲和自身领悟);
第四步,阐述变化带来的积极影响(自信、口语、成绩);
第五步,礼貌结束。
[亮点词汇]
①English learning changes英语学习变化
②test scores考试成绩
③English corner英语角
④realized意识到
⑤more confident更有信心
[高分句型]
①My teacher said, “Use it or lose it.” (直接引语)
②I realized I must practice using English. (省略that的宾语从句)
③These changes helped me a lot. (一般过去时陈述结果)
5.班主任准备给大家开设一堂有关校园霸凌的班会课,请你以“Together Fighting School Bullying”为题写一份发言稿,来谈谈你的想法和建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 须全面反映图文信息并做适当补充;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】
Together Fighting School Bullying
Dear teachers and classmates,
School bullying, like hitting or bad words, hurts us all. We must stop it together. If you see bullying, be brave and report it. Do not just watch. Be kind to everyone, especially those who feel alone. A small act of kindness helps a lot. If you are bullied, please talk to someone you trust — a teacher, parent, or friend.
Let’s make our school a safe and warm place. Say no to bullying and care for each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,并突出重点,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明校园霸凌的危害与形式;
第二步,从目击者、同学、受害者三个角度提出具体行动建议;
第三步,发出呼吁,倡导共建安全友善的校园环境。
[亮点词汇]
①feel alone感到孤独
②care for each other互相关心
[高分句型]
①If you see bullying, be brave and report it. (if引导的条件状语从句,祈使句)
②Be kind to everyone, especially those who feel alone. (祈使句,who引导的定语从句)
③Say no to bullying and care for each other. (and连接的并列祈使句)
6.进入九年级后你在生活或学习上遇到了一些困难,你是如何处理这些问题的?你今后打算怎么办?请根据表格的信息写一篇短文。
注意:1. 词数:90~110词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括表格中所列内容,并对每一小点进行适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名等相关信息。
Problems
past
much free time
less homework…
now
be not allowed to do...
Solutions
ask...for help
study by...
relax by…
Plans
will try one’s best…
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine. In the past, I had plenty of free time and less homework. But now, I face heavy study pressure. I am not allowed to play mobile games or spend too much time on hobbies. To solve these problems, I asked my teachers for help and made study plans. I also relax by listening to music or doing sports. In the future, I will try my best to improve my study methods so that I can balance work and rest. I will also join a study group to learn from my classmates. I believe I will overcome all difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时;
③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用开头句引出变化;
第二步:详细介绍过去和现在面对的问题;
第三步:介绍自己的解决方法和计划。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of大量
②ask...for help向……寻求帮助
③try my best to尽我最大的努力
[高分句型]
①In the future, I will try my best to improve my study methods so that I can balance work and rest.(so that引导目的状语从句)
②I believe I will overcome all difficulties.(宾语从句)
7.你校英语报就“梦想”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“My Dream”为题投稿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
My dream is to become a teacher, because I love children. If I become a teacher, I will teach them a lot of knowledge. In order to make my dream come true, I will study harder than before and read a lot of books to get more knowledge at school. I will do more exercise to build myself up in my free time. Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I will realize my dream one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你的梦想是什么,为什么以及怎样实现。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②in order to do sth为了做某事
③realize one’s dream实现梦想
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①If I become a teacher, I will teach them a lot of knowledge. (If引导条件状语从句)
②I believe I will realize my dream one day. (宾语从句)
8.你校英文杂志New Magazine针对在当前社会,我们更应该“求人”还是“求己”这一现象,征稿同学们对此的看法。部分同学就此展开了激烈的讨论。请以此话题写一篇短文,向杂志社投稿,谈谈你的看法。
要求:
1. 简述该情况;
2. 陈述图表中不同观点及理由;
3. 表述你的观点及两点理由(须与图中不同)。
注意:
1. 需全面反映图表信息,但不能完全照抄;
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名;
3. 词数:100左右。
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【答案】范文
Recently, a heated discussion has been held in our school magazine regarding whether it is better to rely on ourselves or ask others for help when facing problems.
Some students, the “Pros”, think it’s better to handle issues independently. They believe this builds character and self-confidence. However, the “Cons” argue that seeking help is wiser, as others may offer valuable advice and support we haven’t thought of.
In my opinion, while self-reliance is important, we shouldn’t hesitate to seek help when needed. Firstly, asking for help can save time and effort. Secondly, it can enhance our relationships with others. Therefore, we should balance self-reliance and seeking help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍讨论情况以及正反两方的观点和理由;
第二步,介绍自己的看法和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①rely on依赖
②seeking help寻求帮助
③hesitate犹豫
[高分句型]
However, the “Cons” argue that seeking help is wiser, as others may offer valuable advice and support we haven’t thought of.(宾语从句和原因状语从句)
9.假如你叫陈阳,你校正在举办“共建友好社区,人人有责”的主题活动。请你根据以下图文信息,为学校英语电视台撰写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1. 演讲稿应包含所有图文信息;
2. 演讲稿内不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数:80词左右。
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【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone! I’m Chen Yang. Today I’ll talk about building a friendly community. It matters because the community is our home and shows how we treat each other. It’s everyone’s duty to play a part in it.
Here’re some ways: care for the old, look after the young, do volunteer work like cleaning the garden, and smile at neighbors to help those in need.
Let’s join hands to build our friendly community! Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包含所有提示要点,可适当补充细节,使文章内容充实;行文时多使用第一、二人称,适当运用短语和多样句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开场介绍主题,说明共建友好社区的重要性及人人有责的核心态度;
第二步,列举共建社区的具体行动方式(关爱老幼、志愿活动、邻里互助);
第三步,发出行动呼吁,收尾演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①care for the old关爱老人
②look after the young照顾年轻人
[高分句型]
①It’s everyone’s duty to play a part in it. (it作形式主语)
②It matters because the community is our home and shows how we treat each other. (because引导的原因状语从句、how引导的宾语从句)
10.假如你是李华,你的笔友Tina对中国文化十分感兴趣,她想了解更多的中国传统艺术。请你根据以下内容,给她写一封信,介绍一种你最喜欢的艺术形式。
注意:1. 信件须包含全部信息;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数90左右。开头结尾已写出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tina,
I’m so glad you’re interested in Chinese traditional art.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tina,
I’m so glad you’re interested in Chinese traditional art. My favorite is paper-cutting. It has a long history of over 1,500 years. People use scissors to cut paper into different patterns like flowers, animals and lucky characters. Paper-cutting carries good meanings, such as wishing for happiness and harvest. During festivals, we put them on windows or doors to add joy. I love it because it’s simple but creative. Every time I make a paper-cut, I feel proud of our traditional culture. If you have a chance, you can try it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要使用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,即介绍一种最喜欢的中国传统艺术形式。例文围绕“剪纸艺术”展开,没有遗漏关键信息,同时适当添加了细节,如剪纸的历史、制作方式、寓意以及作者的个人感受,突出了写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。例文开头“I’m so glad you’re interested in Chinese traditional art. My favorite is paper-cutting.”直接回应了Tina对中国传统艺术的兴趣,并引出了作者最喜欢的艺术形式——剪纸,为后文的详细介绍做了铺垫。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。例文从剪纸的历史、制作方式、寓意以及应用场景等多个方面进行了详细介绍;
第三步,书写结语。例文结尾“If you have a chance, you can try it too!”表达了作者希望Tina有机会也能尝试剪纸的愿望,与开头相呼应,使整封信件结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①has a long history of有……的历史
②cut...into...把……剪成……
③such as例如
④be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①It has a long history of over 1,500 years.(“has a long history of+时间”句型,用于强调某事物或文化的悠久历史。)
②People use scissors to cut paper into different patterns like flowers, animals and lucky characters.(“use...to do...”句型,用于描述人们使用某种工具或方法进行某项活动)
11.学校科技节即将来临,你将介绍你的发明——智能勺子“iSpoon”。请根据下图写一篇发言稿。
要求:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数:80词左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my invention — the iSpoon Sensor. It is 15 cm long, silver in color, and made of strong steel. There is a small sensor at its front.
This smart spoon has three functions. It tests food temperature to keep you safe. It also reminds you to eat healthily through a light system. What’s more, it can be folded easily.
I think the iSpoon is very useful and creative. It helps people eat more safely and healthily. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇发言稿,为应用文。
②时态:一般现在时。
③提示:需包含外形材料、功能和评价。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候并介绍发明;
第二步,描述外形和材料;
第三步,说明功能;
第四步,给出个人评价并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①smart spoon智能勺子
②food temperature食物温度
③light system灯光系统
④creative有创意的
[高分句型]
I think the iSpoon is very useful and creative.(宾语从句)
12.蜀绣 (Shu Embroidery) 是中国传统手工艺品 (handicraft) 的杰出代表,起源于四川成都地区并闻名世界。请根据以下图示及提示,写一篇短文介绍蜀绣,并谈谈你的感受或想法。
注意:
1). 文章须包含图示所有内容;
2). 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3). 词数80左右。
【答案】例文:
Shu Embroidery is one of the most famous traditional handicrafts in China. It originated in Chengdu, Sichuan and has a long history of more than 2,000 years. Shu Embroidery is mainly made of silk and thread. It is not only beautiful but also useful. It can be used in daily life, such as making clothes and scarves. It is also a good choice for decoration or gifts. What’s more, it stands for good wishes and happiness. I think Shu Embroidery is amazing. It shows the wisdom of Chinese people. We should try our best to protect this traditional art.
【解析】12.根据“silk, thread (线)”可知,此处指的是制作蜀绣的材料。故填Material:。
13.根据“good wishes; happiness”可知,此处指的是蜀绣象征的寓意。故填Meaning:。
14.[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不得遗漏,可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题。介绍蜀绣的地位、发源地及悠久历史;
第二步:详细描述。结合图示要点,说明其制作材料、功能以及象征意义;
第三步:总结全文。表达对蜀绣的赞美、自豪感或保护传统文化的决心。
[亮点词汇]
① traditional传统的
②be made of由……制成
③stand for代表
④originated in起源于
⑤wisdom智慧
[高分句型]
① It is not only beautiful but also useful. (not only...but also...连接并列表语)
②I think Shu Embroidery is amazing. (宾语从句)
13.随着社会的发展,我们的公共交通方式发生了很大变化。假设你校的英语角将举办以How public transportation has changed为主题的英语演讲活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿,描述你所了解的变化以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
写作要求:1. 须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 条理清晰,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;
3. 不少于80词。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to share with you how public transportation has changed.
In the past, traveling in the city mainly depended on buses and taxis. But now, subways and shared bikes have become very popular. They are faster and greener. Meanwhile, people used to go between cities by bus or ordinary train, but now high-speed trains have made trips more convenient.
These changes save us time, protect the environment, and improve our lives. Let’s make good use of them and enjoy a better life. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍公共交通发生的变化,可适当增加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整,无单词及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,表达很高兴分享关于公共交通的变化;
第二步,具体描述过去与现在城市交通方式的变化;
第三步,介绍这些变化带来的影响并号召大家充分利用这些公共交通。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依靠
②used to过去常常
③make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, people used to go between cities by bus or ordinary train, but now high-speed trains have made trips more convenient. (并列句)
②I’m glad to share with you about how public transportation has changed. (宾语从句)
14.假如你是某项关于学生饮食习惯调查的组织者之一。请根据以下图示和调查数据完成调查报告,并结合实际生活,谈谈你自己的选择。
要求:
1. 请先填写提示中的空格(每空一词);
2. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 可适当增加细节,使文章更加充实;
4. 80-100词
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】【小题1】
(1)fast (2)outside 【小题2】
例文
Last week, the school English club conducted a survey on students’ eating habits. The topic is “How do you eat when you’re at home alone?” Here are the results.
According to the survey results, about 65% students choose to order fast food. They enjoy fast food and snacks, such as hamburgers, potato chips, etc. About 25% students eat out, and 10% students cook at home.
As for me, I prefer to cook at home. Try to minimize the intake of fast food and snacks, and cook healthy food by yourself. First, it is healthier because I can control the ingredients. Second, it is more economical. Finally, cooking is a fun activity which can help me relax.
【解析】【小题1】(1)根据图示“外卖”可知,这里是“点外卖”,fast food“快餐,外卖”;(2)根据图中两人就餐情况可知,此处指“出去吃饭”,用go outside表示。故填(1)fast ;(2)outside。
【小题2】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍调查报告的时间,发起者和主题;
第二步,介绍调查结果;
第三步,谈自己的选择。
[亮点词汇]
① as for me对我来说
② prefer to宁愿
③ help me relax帮助我放松
[高分句型]
① First, it is healthier because I can control the ingredients. (because引导原因状语从句)
② Finally, cooking is a fun activity which can help me relax. (动名词作主语,which引导定语从句)
15.随着国家“体重管理年”三年行动计划的启动,“体重管理”成为社交平台上的热词。目前,学校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight为题的讨论。请用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.控制健康体重对青少年成长的重要意义;
2.分享你在体重管理过程中的经历和感悟;
3.介绍学校组织的与体重管理相关的特色活动 (至少2项);
4.针对科学管理体重,提出2条实用的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;3.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national “Weight Management Year” plan, “weight management” has become a hot topic on social media. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national “Weight Management Year” plan, “weight management” has become a hot topic on social media.
Controlling a healthy weight is crucial for teenagers’ growth. It boosts energy and reduces disease risks. Last year, I was overweight and often tired, so I started jogging daily and eating more veggies. Gradually, I felt fitter and more confident. Our school holds fun activities: a monthly “Healthy Recipe” contest and weekly fitness challenges like rope-skipping races. To manage weight well, first, plan balanced meals—less junk food, more fruits. Second, stay active, like walking to school.
Let’s keep fit and thrive!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,需涵盖控制健康体重对青少年成长意义、个人体重管理经历感悟、学校相关特色活动、科学管理体重建议,不能遗漏信息,要使内容充实连贯,符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入主题并阐述意义:以国家“体重管理年”计划引出“体重管理”话题,说明控制健康体重对青少年成长的重要性;
第二步,讲述个人经历感悟:回忆自身超重、疲惫的过往,描述通过日常慢跑、多吃蔬菜改善健康状况,收获自信的过程;
第三步,介绍学校活动与给出建议:列举学校每月“健康食谱”竞赛、每周跳绳比赛等特色活动;从合理规划饮食、保持日常活动两方面,提出科学管理体重的实用建议,最后呼吁大家保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
① be crucial for 对……至关重要
② balanced meals 均衡膳食
③ keep fit 保持健康
[高分句型]
① Last year, I was overweight and often tired, so I started jogging daily and eating more veggies. (so表因果关系)
② To manage weight well, first, plan balanced meals—less junk food, more fruits.(动词不定式作目的状语)
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$题型01书面表达15篇(成都专用)
【题型知识点细目表】
题
难度
知识点
号
适中
文体活动意见建议
适中
合作与交流
适中
自我保护,安全守测,意见/建议
较难
学习策略应用文
较难
应用文青少年问题
适中
记叙文计划青少年问题
较难
应用文,愿望
较摊
议论文意见/建议
较难
社区应用文意见建议
适中
中华文化应用文传统江艺
适中
发明与创造应用敢
较难
说明文传统工艺
适中
交通方式应用文
适中
健康饮食
适中
健康与运动意见建议
【中考真题】
1.英语课将围绕“你最喜欢的科学探究场所”开展讨论,以下图表为你所在小组针对本校八年级学生
的调查结果。请根据图表信息写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述及评析;
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2.你的选择及原因。
62%
18%
6%
在本校
在家
在大学
其它
注意:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开展科学探究do scientific exploration
Hello,everyone.
2.你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以Be a Good Team Member'”为题投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
Importance
Better ideas
Good ideas
双积
Ways
Ending
注意:
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1.词数80左右:
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
【热点话题练习】
3.你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Stay Safe Online'”为题投稿。
Stay Safe Online
why
How
028
131
www.?.com
Meet me?
@☒No
X
26,H0.
注意:
1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格(一空一词);
2.须全面反映图文信息;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
4.词数80左右。
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4.假设你是初三学生滕飞,你的英国笔友Peter想知道你从初一到现在关于英语学习方面发生的一
些变化。请你根据图片提示给他回电子邮件,介绍你在英语学习方式和爱好方面的变化,产生变化的原因,
并谈谈这些变化带来的影响。
Changes
Reasons
English corner
界
Influence
4可
sh
9
要求:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
2.词数80左右。
5.班主任准备给大家开设一堂有关校园霸凌的班会课,请你以Together Fighting School Bullying”为
题写一份发言稿,来谈谈你的想法和建议。
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What is bullying?
Together
Fighting
School
Why do we have to stop bullying?
Bullying
Ourselves
How to stop bullying?
The student who was bullied
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.须全面反映图文信息并做适当补充;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
6.进入九年级后你在生活或学习上遇到了一些困难,你是如何处理这些问题的?你今后打算怎么办?
请根据表格的信息写一篇短文。
注意:1.词数:90-110词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括表格中所列内容,并对每一小点进行适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名等相关信息。
much free time
past
Problems
less homework.
now
be not allowed to do.
ask...for help
Solutions
study by...
relax by...
Plans
will try one's best...
My
life
has
changed a lot
since
the
beginning of Grade
Nine.
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7.你校英语报就“梦想”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“My Dream”为题投稿。
My Dream
What
Why
How
2
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
8.你校英文杂志New Magazine针对在当前社会,我们更应该“求人”还是“求己”这一现象,征稿同
学们对此的看法。部分同学就此展开了激烈的讨论。请以此话题写一篇短文,向杂志社投稿,谈谈你的看
法。
I think dealing with
I think asking others
problems on our own
for help is better than
is better than asking
dealing with problems
others for help.
on our own.
Pros(正方)
Cons(反方)
要求:
1.简述该情况:
2.陈述图表中不同观点及理由;
3.表述你的观点及两点理由(须与图中不同)。
注意:
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1.需全面反映图表信息,但不能完全照抄;
2.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名;
3.词数:100左右。
9.假如你叫陈阳,你校正在举办“共建友好社区,人人有责”的主题活动。请你根据以下图文信息,
为学校英语电视台撰写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1.演讲稿应包含所有图文信息;
2.演讲稿内不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数:80词左右。
1.Reasons
1
1.…
2.
2.Ways
2
FRIENDLY
COMMUNITY
③
3.Appeals(呼吁)
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l0.假如你是李华,你的笔友Tia对中国文化十分感兴趣,她想了解更多的中国传统艺术。请你根
据以下内容,给她写一封信,介绍一种你最喜欢的艺术形式。
My favorite
traditional art form
history
materials
meaning
feelings
注意:1.信件须包含全部信息;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数90左右。开头结尾已写出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tina,
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese traditional art.
Yours,
LiHua
11.学校科技节即将来临,你将介绍你的发明一智能勺子“iSpoor”。请根据下图写一篇发言稿。
sensor
(传感器)
iSpoon
iSpoon
不
外形及材料:
功能(function):
评价:(两点)
长度
测试温度
15cm
-颜色
提醒饮食健康
材料(钢)
可以折叠
特别之处
要求:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数:80词左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
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l2.蜀绣(Shu Embroidery)是中国传统手工艺品handicraf)的杰出代表,起源于四川成都地区并闻
名世界。请根据以下图示及提示,写一篇短文介绍蜀绣,并谈谈你的感受或想法。
①
silk,thread(线)
Function:
daily use(clothes,scarf);
decoration(装饰)or gift
Birthplace:
Chengdu,Sichuan
②
good wishes;
History:
happiness
more than 2,000 years
注意:
).文章须包含图示所有内容;
2).文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3).词数80左右。
13.随着社会的发展,我们的公共交通方式发生了很大变化。假设你校的英语角将举办以How public
transportation has changed为主题的英语演讲活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿,描述你所了解的变化
以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
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In the past
Now
In the city
oo
高雨
bus
taxi
subway
shared bike
2i00
Between
cities
train
bus
high-speed train
写作要求:1.须包含提示中的所有内容,
可适当增加细节;
2.条理清晰,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;
3.不少于80词。
14.假如你是某项关于学生饮食习惯调查的组织者之一。请根据以下图示和调查数据完成调查报告,
并结合实际生活,谈谈你自己的选择。
Students'eating habits
About the survey
About yourselr
Time:last week
Results:
Your choice:
Starter:
70%
the school English
60%
50%
club
40%
Topic:
30%
How do you eat
20%
Reasons:
when you're Aat
10%
11.…
0%
home alone?
2.…
13.
order (1)
eat
cook at
food
home
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