摘要:
该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦应用文写作中的求助信专题,依据高考评价体系梳理了写作目的明确、具体困难陈述、语气委婉真诚三大考查维度,结合2013全国卷I、2016全国卷II等真题分析考点权重,归纳向朋友或老师求助等常考情境,构建“目的-内容-感谢”三段式答题框架。
课件亮点在于“模板应用+真题情境+素养提升”的备考策略,如以给Tom写信求助为例,解析分述困难的逻辑表达(to begin with...)和礼貌用语(appreciate, sincerely),培养语言能力和思维品质。提供“问题分述模板”和“高频词汇库”,助力学生规范写作,教师可通过真题任务精准教学,提升复习效率。
内容正文:
A letter of asking for help
求助信
Elara
Elara
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意。通常包括三部分内容:
1. 表明写信目的,请求帮助。
2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。
Elara
Elara
第一段:自我介绍+背景介绍+写作目的
I am Li Hua,president of the Students’ Union.I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour as I meet with some problems. (背景介绍+写作目的)
/ˈbɒðə(r)/v.(使)烦恼,打扰,n.麻烦,
I have some difficulties in doing ,which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.(背景介绍+写作目的)
/ˈfeɪvə(r)/支持;喜爱;帮忙
Elara
第二段:具体求助内容(困难)
1. 总述问题:I am encountering/facing three problems in , which are as follows. /ɪnˈkaʊntə(r)/v.遭遇;偶遇
2.分述问题 /ˌʌpˈset/adj.不高兴的,心烦意乱的;
To begin with, I have a lot of trouble in ______. What’s more, I’m very upset/worried that __________. Last but not least, my biggest headache/problem is ________.
3.请求帮助+寻求建议:
I’m stuck and wondering if you could give me some practical advice as I know (you’ve organized similar activities./you have rich experience in sth/doing sth.)
adj.卡住的 被困住v.粘,贴(过去式)
Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
Elara
第三段:表达感谢+期待回复
/sɪnˈsɪəli/ 由衷地,真诚地
I sincerely hope you can give me some useful advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.
/əˈpriːʃieɪt/v.欣赏;感谢
I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful advice .I am looking forward to your early reply.
Elara
求助信模板
Dear __________,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Three./How's everything going?I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour as I meet with some problems.
I am encountering some problems in ______, which bothers me a lot. To begin with, I have a lot of trouble in ______. What’s more, I’m very upset that __________. Last but not least, my biggest headache/problem is ________. Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
I sincerely hope you can give me some useful advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Elara
假如你是李华,你升入高中以后遇到了一些问题,请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信,向他寻求帮助,希望他可以给你一些建议。内容包括:
1.不能适应新的环境
2.如何结交新的朋友
3.学习英语有一些困难
Elara
假定你是英语戏剧社社长李华,社团将于下周末演出英语剧Snow White。请给你的外教Chris 写一封邮件,请他给予指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 指导内容;2.约定时间、地点。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Elara
How's everything going? I’m Li Hua, president of the English Drama Club. I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour as our club meets with some problems before performing Snow White next weekend.
Though we are all familiar with its plot, we still have difficulty in preparing for the English play for lack of experience. Therefore we are in urgent need of your professional guidance. Firstly, could you please help polish the lines? Additionally, it couldn't be better if you could offer some suggestions to make it more appealing.
I sincerely hope you can give us guidance. Could we meet at the school drama room this Saturday morning at 10 am? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Elara
向朋友求助
【2016年全国新课标卷II】请朋友提供摄影参赛作品
【2013年全国卷Ⅰ】请外国朋友在飞机场接我叔叔
【2015年全国卷I】约稿信
【 2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结
向陌生人(组织机构)或老师求助
【2011年全国新课标卷】 暑期课程遇困难求助辅导中心
【2013年高考重庆卷】拯救江豚
Practice 【2016年全国新课标卷I】请外教修改申请书和个人简历
Elara
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