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必修3北师大版
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写作专版
【版满分模板】给外国朋友写邮件邀请参
加学校中学生文化艺术节
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·北师大版必修3
满分范文
Dear [Friend's Name],
I am writing to invite you to attend our school's Middle School Students'Cultural Festival.We would
like to invite you to join in our colorful cultural festival next month.Warmly welcome you to come to
our school and enjoy the wonderful activities of the cultural festival.
There will be many interesting activities,such as dragon dance,paper-cutting exhibition and Chinese
painting show.You can watch traditional folk music performances and even take part in the calligraphy
competition.The cultural festival is a good chance to experience Chinese culture,and we have prepared
a talent show with various programs.
I am sure you will have a good time and learn a lot about Chinese culture here.We sincerely hope you
can come and look forward to your reply.It will be more exciting if you can join us.I believe you will
enjoy yourself in the cultural festival.
Best wishes,
[Your Name]
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(邀请目的):
开篇用I am writing to invite you to.直接点明邮件目的:
核心句型:Warmly welcome you to.表达热情邀请:
明确活动名称:Middle School Students'Cultural Festival,信息完整。
第二段(活动详情):
用There will be..You can watch./take part in..多角度介绍活动:
具体活动举例:dragon dance/paper--cutting exhibition/Chinese painting show展现中国文化特
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色:
强调文化价值:a good chance to experience Chinese culture提升邀请意义。
第三段(期待回应):
用I am sure you will.表达信心;
礼貌请求回复:look forward to your reply符合邮件礼仪:
情感强化:It will be more exciting if you can join us增强说服力。
满分范文模板
Dear 1.
(Friend's Name),
I am writing to invite you to attend our school's 2.
We would like to invite you to
join in our 3.
cultural festival next month.Warmly welcome you to come to our school and
enjoy the wonderful activities of the cultural festival.
There will be many interesting activities,such as 4.
(activity 1),5.
(activity 2)
and 6.
(activity 3).You can watch 7.
_(performance type)and even take
part in the 8.
(competition type).The cultural festival is a good chance to experience 9.
culture,and we have prepared a talent show with various programs.
I am sure you will have a good time and learn a lot about 10.
culture here.We sincerely
hope you can come and look forward to your reply.It will be more exciting if you can join us.I believe
you will enjoy yourself in the cultural festival.
Best wishes,
11.
(Your Name)
【模板填写指南】
1.朋友姓名(如:David/Emily)
2.活动正式名称(如:Middle School Students'Cultural Festival)
3.活动形容词(如:colorful/exciting/annual)
4.特色活动1(如:dragon dance/Chinese opera)
5.特色活动2(如:paper-cutting exhibition/calligraphy show)
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6.特色活动3(如:traditional music performance/folk dance)
7.表演类型(如:traditional folk music/Chinese martial arts)
8.比赛类型(如:calligraphy competition/Chinese painting contest)
9.文化类型(如:Chinese/local/traditional)
10.文化类型(与9一致)
11.你的姓名(如:LiHua/Zhang Wei)
填写示例:
1.Tom 2.Annual Art Festival 3.wonderful 4.Chinese opera
5.calligraphy show 6.folk dance 7.traditional music
8.painting competition 9.Chinese 10.Chinese 11.Li Ming
高分亮点总结
结构亮点:三段式(邀请目的→活动详情→期待回应),逻辑清晰符合邮件规范
词汇亮点:使用精准动词(attend/join/take part in)和文化专有名词(dragon dance/calligraphy)
句型亮点:多样化邀请表达(I am writing to..We would like to..Warmly welcome..)
情感亮点:多次强调活动价值(good chance to experience/have a good time/enjoy yourself)
礼仪亮点:正式开头(Dear..)与礼貌结尾(Best wishes)完整
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
称呼规范:必须使用Dear [Name]开头,姓名首字母大写
活动描述:用such as列举3项代表性活动,避免超过5项
文化词汇:准确使用中国文化专有名词(paper-.cutting/calligraphy/dragon dance)
情感表达:至少使用2处情感强化句(如:It will be more exciting..I believe you will..)
结尾提醒:必须包含look forward to your reply请求确认
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