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环境问题调查报告
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【满分范文】撰写当地环境问题调查报告
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Recently we have done a survey about the environmental problems in our town.After careful investiga-
tion we found there are several serious problems that need to be solved.
First of all there is water pollution.The river near our town is badly polluted.There is much rubbish in
it and the water has turned black.Then air pollution is getting worse because more and more cars are on
the road,which makes the air quality drop.Besides,we can see litter everywhere in the streets and parks,
and green areas decrease because many trees have been cut down.
What causes these problems?Some factories pour waste water into the river without treatment,which
leads to water pollution.People often throw plastic bags everywhere,and they are hard to decompose,
causing plastic pollution.The increasing number of cars results in more car exhaust,making air pollution
worse.Also,improper waste disposal and cutting down trees are important reasons too.
To solve these problems,we should take action immediately.We should protect our environment by
planting more trees and reducing the use of plastic bags.It's important to recycle waste paper and bot-
tles to save resources.If we take public transport instead of driving cars,air pollution will be reduced.
The government should make stricter environmental policies to stop factories from pouring waste water
without treatment.We also need to set up more recycling bins in public places.
Protecting the environment is our duty.Everyone should take action to save our environment.Let's work
together to make our hometown clean and beautiful again.Only by taking good care of the environment
can we have a healthy life.
【满分范文结构解析】
调查报告结构:
开篇说明调查目的:Recently we have done a survey about..,
问题描述:First of al.Then..Besides.清晰罗列环境问题
原因分析:What causes these problems?引出原因分析
解决方案:To solve these problems..提出具体措施
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环境问题调查报告
呼吁行动:Protecting the environment is our duty..强化主题
问题描述技巧:
使用具体现象:water has turned black/litter everywhere
数据化表达:more and more cars/green areas decrease
原因分析技巧:
明确责任主体:factories/people/government
因果连接词:which leads to/causing/results in
解决方案亮点:
分层建议:个人行动(planting trees)+政府政策(stricter policies)
条件句运用:fwe,will be reduced
满分范文模板
Recently we have done a survey about the environmental problems in our town.After careful investiga-
tion we found there are several serious problems that need to be solved.
First of all there is1.(问题一:e.g,water pollution).The2.-(问题一相关事物:e.g,river near
our town)is badly polluted..There is3._(问题一具体表现:e.g,much rubbish in it)and the4.(问
题一相关事物:e.g,water)has tured5._(问题一结果:e.g,black).Then6.一(问题二:eg,air
pollution)is getting worse because7._(问题二原因简述:e.g,more and more cars are on the road,
which makes8.一(问题二结果:eg,the air quality drop).Besides,.we can see9.一_(问题三:e.g,
litter everywhere in the streets and parks),and 10.(:e.g.,green areas decrease)because 11.
(问题四原因简述:e.g,many trees have been cut down)
What causes these problems?Some12.一(原因主体一:e.g,factories))l3.一(具体行为一:e.g
pour waste water into the river without treatment),which leads to 14.(-:e.g.,water pollution).
People often15.(具体行为二:eg,throw plastic bags everywhere)),and they are 16.-(事物特性:
e.g,hard to decompose),causing17.(间题三相关:e.g,plastic pollution).The increasing number
of18.一(原因主体二:e.g,cars)results in19.一(具体影响:e.g,more car exhaust),making20.
(问题二:e.g,air pollution)worse.Also,21.一(原因三:e.g,improper waste disposal)and22.
(原因四:e.g,cutting down trees))are important reasons too.
To solve these problems,we should take action immediately.We should protect our environment by 23.
(措施一:eg,planting more trees))and24.(措施二:e.g,reducing the use of plastic bags).It's
important to25._(措施三:e.g,recycle waste paper and bottles)to save resources.Ifwe26.一(措
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施四:e.g,take public transport instead of driving cars),27.一(问题二:e.g,air pollution)will be
reduced.The 28.(:e.g.government)should make stricter environmental policies to stop 29.
_(原因主体一行为:e.g,factories from pouring waste water without treatment).We also need to30,
_(错施五:e.g,set up more recycling bins in public places)
Protecting the environment is our duty.Everyone should take action to save our environment.Let's work
together to make our 31.(:e.g.,hometown clean and beautiful again).Only by taking good care
of the environment can we have a32._(成果:e.g,healthy life)).
【模板填写指南】
1.主要环境问题1(如:water pollution/air pollution)
2.受影响的具体事物(如:local river/air quality)
3.问题具体表现(如:industrial waste/plastic bags)
4.受影响的核心元素(如:water/soil)
5.污染结果(如:black/undrinkable)
6.主要环境问题2(如:plastic pollution/deforestation)
7.问题原因简述(如:increased car usage/poor waste management)
8.导致的结果(如:health issues/loss of biodiversity)
9.问题3具体现象(如:litter in parks/noise pollution)
l0.问题4核心表现(如:reduced green spaces/endangered species)
1l.问题4直接原因(如:urban development./illegal hunting)
l2.污染源主体(如:factories/residents)
13.具体污染行为(如:dumping waste/using pesticides)
14.导致的污染类型(需与1一致)
15.日常污染行为(如:littering/overusing plastic)
16.污染物特性(如:non-biodegradable/toxic)
17.产生的污染类型(需与6或9相关)
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l8.污染源主体2(如:vehicles/tourists)
l9.具体污染物(如:exhaust fumes/single-use items)
20.加刷的污染问题(需与6一致)
21.系统性原因(如:lack of recycling/industrial emissions)
22.生态破坏行为(如:illegal logging/overfishing)
23.个人行动1(如:using reusable bags/saving water)
24.个人行动2(如:turning off lights/biking to work)
25.资源循环措施(如:sorting garbage/composting)
26.替代方案(如:using renewable energy/buying local)
27.预期改善的环境问题(需与6或14一致)
28.责任机构(如:local authorities/environmental department)
29.需禁止的具体行为(需与13或15相关)
30.基础设施建议(如:building solar panels/creating parks)
31.环境目标(如:sustainable city./carbon neutral)
32.最终受益(如:better health/ecological balance)
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:问题→原因→解决方案的递进结构,符合调查报告规范
术语准确:pollution/decompose/recycle等环境主题词汇运用精准
衔接自然:First of all/Then/Besides/What causes../To solve.等过渡词丰富
解决方案具体:包含个人行动(reduce/recycle)和政府措施(policies)
呼吁有力:Let's work together/Only by..can we.等句式增强感染力
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环境问题调查报告
写作小贴士·环境报告要点
问题具体化:避免泛泛而谈,用black water/car exhaust等具体现象
数据支撑:适当加入70%increase/506 reduction等数据提升可信度
解决方案分层:区分个人/社区/政府不同层面的责任
时态统一:调查报告主要使用一般现在时和情态动词(should/can)
术语准确:区分pollution(污染)/conservation(保护)/sustainability(可持续)
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