话题 4 分享喜爱的体育项目及益处-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板必修第二册（译林版）

必修2译林版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 寒假专版 【E版满分模板】分享喜爱的体育项目及益 处 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林版必修2 满分范文 Hello,everyone.My name is Li Ming.I want to share my favorite sport and its benefits with you. My favorite sport is basketball.I often play it with my friends after school.Sometimes we also take part in school basketball matches. Playing basketball is good for my health.It makes me strong and active.Every time I play,I feel full of energy.Also,basketball teaches us teamwork.We need to work together to win the game.When we pass the ball and help each other,we learn how important friendship is. I love playing basketball.It not only improves my fitness but also brings me happiness.I will keep playing it and enjoy the fun it brings. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（引入主题）： 开篇用HelIo,everyone自然开场，符合分享场景： 核心句型：My name is.I want to share.,直接点明写作目的： 使用benefits点出文章核心，为下文铺垫。 第二段（运动介绍）： 明确点出最喜爱的运动：Mly favorite sport is basketball; 用I often play./Sometimes we.展示参与频率和活动： 动词短语take part in体现课外参与度。 第三段（益处分析)： 分层次说明益处：good for health和teaches teamwork; 健康益处具体化：strong/active/full of energy: 团队合作描写生动：pass the ball/help each other: 1 必修2译林版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 情感升华：learn how important friendship is。 第四段（总结升华)： 用I love playing..强化情感； 双重益处总结：not only.but also.…结构； 结尾承诺：I will keep playing..体现坚持态度。 满分范文模板 My Favorite Sport and Its Benefits Hello,everyone.My name is 1. I want to share my favorite sport and its benefits with you. My favorite sport is 2. I often play it with my 3. Sometimes we also take part in 5. Playing 6. is good for my health.It makes me 7. and 8. Every time I play,I feel 9. Also,10. teaches us 11. We need to 12. to13. When we 14. we learn how important 15. 公 I love playing 16. It not only 17. but also 18. I will keep playing it and enjoy the fun it brings. 【模板填写指南】 1. 你的姓名（如：LiMing/Zhang Hua) 2.最喜爱的运动名称（如：basketball/swimming) 3.一起运动的人（如：friends/classmates) 4.运动时间/地点（如：after school/on weekends) 5.参与的活动/比赛（如：school matches/community games) 6.运动名称（与2一致） 7.健康益处1（如：tong/healthy) 必修2译林版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 8.健康益处2（如：active./energetic) 9.运动时的感受（如：happy/excited) 10.运动名称（与2一致) 1l.运动带来的品质（如：teamwork/perseverance) l2.具体做法（如：practice hard/cooperate well) 13.目标（如：win the game./improve skills) 14.团队行为（如：help each other/pass the ball) 15.运动带来的品质（如：friendship/sportsmanship) 16.运动名称（与2一致) 17.益处1（如：improves my health/makes me happy) l8.益处2（如：teaches me skills/brings me joy) 填写示例： 1.Li Ming 2.swimming 3.family 4.on weekends 5.swimming competitions 6.swimming 7.healthy 8.relaxed 9.peaceful 10.swimming 11.discipline 12.follow the coach 13.improve technique 14.encourage each other 15.perseverance 16.swimming 17.builds endurance 18.reduces stress 高分亮点总结 结构清晰：四段式结构（引入→运动介绍→益处分析→总结），逻辑分明 词汇丰富：使用具体运动词汇(basketbal/matches)和情感词汇(happiness/energy) 句型多样：包含简单句、并列句(and/also)和复合句(When we.) 益处分层：分健康益处(strong/.active)和社交益处(teamwork/friendship) 情感真实：结尾用I love..,”和'enjoy the fun”表达真实情感 3 必修2译林版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作小贴士·避坑+提分 运动名称：首字母不大写（错误：Basketball→正确：basketball) 动词搭配：play+运动（无冠词），如play basketball(非play the basketball) 益处描写：每个益处补充具体细节（如”makes me strong'”而非”good for health”) 时态统一：描述习惯用一般现在时(play/feel),避免混用进行时 情感表达：结尾用I love/enjoy'比I like'”更有感染力