话题 6 介绍濒危物种并呼吁保护_E-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板必修第三册（译林版）

必修3译林版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作专版 【E版满分范文】介绍濒危物种并呼吁保护 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林版必修3 满分范文 Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about endangered species and why we should protect them.One famous example is the giant panda The giant panda is one of the most famous endangered species.It hasunique black and white fur and feeds mainly on bamboo.They live in the mountain areas of China,which is their natural habitat.However, these lovely animals are in danger now. Due to human activities such as deforestation,pandas are losing their living space.Some are also hunted illegally.Their living conditions are getting worse,and they face extinction.We must do something to help them We should take action to protect pandas before it istoo late.It is important to set up morenaturereserves to provide safe homes for them.As students,we canraise awareness about wildlife protection and encourage everyone to make a difference.Let's worktogether to save pandas from extinction andkeep the ecological balance for future generations. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（引入话题）： 开篇用Hello,everyone.直接点题； 核心句型：Today I want to talk about..and why.明确写作目的： 用One famous example is..自然过渡到具体物种。 第二段（物种描述）： 使用one of the most famous endangered species强调物种地位； 特征描写：unique black and white fur/feeds mainly on bamboo准确生动： 栖息地描述：live in the mountain areas of China明确具体。 第三段（威胁分析）： 用Due to human activities such as.,分析原因： 必修3译林版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 并列结构：are losing.,/are also hunted.全面展示威胁： 严重后果：face extinction强调紧迫性。 第四段（呼吁行动）： 行动建议：set up more nature reserves具体可行： 学生角色：raise awareness/encourage everyone体现参与感； 结尾升华：keep the ecological balance强调保护意义。 满分范文模板（濒危物种保护） Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about endangered species and why we should protect them.One famous example is 1.一. 2.is one of the most famous endangered species.It has 3.and feeds mainly on 4..They live in 5.,which is their natural habitat.However,these lovely animals are in danger now. Due to human activities such as 6.,7.-are losing their living space.Some are also 8..Their living conditions are getting worse,and they face extinction.We must do something to help them We should take action to protect 9.before it is too late.It is important to 10.-to provide safe homes for them.As students,we can 11.and encourage everyone to make a difference.Let's work together to save 12.from extinction and keep the ecological balance for future generations. 【模板填写指南】 1.濒危物种名称（如：giant panda/South China tiger) 2.濒危物种名称（与1一致） 3.物种特征（如：unique black and white fur/beautiful stripes) 4.主要食物（如：bamboo/small animals) 5.栖息地（如：the mountain areas of China/African grasslands) 6.主要威胁（如：deforestation/pollution) 7.濒危物种名称（与1一致） 必修3译林版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 8.其他威胁（如：hunted illegally/climate change) 9.濒危物种名称（与1一致） l0.保护措施（如：set up more nature reserves/strengthen laws) Il.学生行动（如：raise awareness about wildlife protection/join volunteer programs) 12.濒危物种名称（与1一致） 填写示例： 1.giant panda 2.giant panda 3.unique black and white fur 4.bamboo 5.the mountain areas of China 6.deforestation 7.pandas 8.hunted illegally 9.pandas 10.set up more nature reserves 11.raise awareness about wildlife protection 12.pandas 高分亮点总结 结构亮点：四段式（引入→描述→问题→行动），逻辑严密，符合议论文要求： 词汇亮点：使用精准术语(endangered species/deforestation/extinction/ecological balance): 句型亮点：多样化句式（定语从句/原因状语/并列结构/呼吁句型）： 内容亮点：从现象到原因再到解决方案，论证完整有深度： 情感亮点：结尾呼吁(Let's work together..)增强感染力。 写作小贴士·避坑+提分 物种选择：选择熟悉物种确保信息准确，避免虚构数据： 数据真实：使用真实栖息地/食物信息（如：pandas eat bamboo,not meat): 威胁描述：具体说明人类活动（如：deforestation for farming,.not just"human activities'”): 措施可行：建议可操作方案（如：join WWF programs,not just”protect animals”): 术语准确：正确使用生态术语(endangered species vs.extinct species), 3