话题 1 撰写敬佩的励志人物短文并附事例-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板必修第二册（沪外版）

必修2沪教版（上外版） 【励志人物专版】 满分范文及模板 励志人物 【满分范文】撰写敬佩的励志人物短文并附 事例 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·沪教版必修2 满分范文 Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce my inspirational hero,Madam Curie.She was agreat scientist who set an example for people all over the world. Madam Curie was thin but had a strong spirit.She often wore a simple coat and a pair of glasses,looking serious and determined.Her eyes showed her perseverance and ambition for science. Madam Curie was hard-working and persistent.She faced many challenges in her scientific research.She worked hard in the lab for many years,even under difficult conditions.She never gave up when meeting difficulties.Finally,she discovered radium and made great contributions to science.Her courage and spirit of never giving up inspire me a lot. Madam Curie is my role model.I want to learn from her perseverance and hard-working attitude.I will face challenges bravely and never give up on my goals. 满分范文模板 My Inspirational Hero Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce my inspirational hero,1.He/She was a great 2.who set an example for people all over the world. 3.was 4.but had a strong spirit.He/She often wore 5.and looked 6..His/Her eyes showed his/her 7.and ambition for 8. 9.was 10..He/She faced many challenges in his/her 11..He/She worked hard 12.-for many years,even under 13..He/She never gave up when meeting difficulties.Finally,he/she 14.and 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【励志人物专版】 满分范文及模板 made great contributions to 15..His/Her 16.inspires me a lot. 17.-is myrole model.I want to learn from his/her 18..I will 19.andnever give up on my goals. 【模板填写指南】 1.人物名字（如：Madam Curie/Thomas Edison) 2.身份（如：scientist/writer/leader) 3.填写人物名字（与1一致） 4.身材描述（如：thin/tall/strong) 5.穿着描述（如：a simple coat and a pair of glasses./casual clothes) 6.外貌形容词（如：serious and determined/kind and warm) 7.品质（如：perseverance/kindness/wisdom) 8.领域（如：science/at/public service) 9.填写人物名字（与1一致） l0.性格形容词（如：hard-working/brave/persistent) ll.事业领域（如：scientific research/creative work) 12.工作场景（如：in the lab/in the study) l3.困难条件（如：difficult conditions/poor environment) 14.主要成就（如：discovered radium/wrote great works) 15.贡献领域（如：science/society/humanity) 16.核心品质（如：courage/spirit of never giving up) 17.填写人物名字（与1一致） l8.学习品质（如：perseverance/hard-working attitude) l9.行动计划（如：face challenges bravely/work hard) 2 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【励志人物专版】 满分范文及模板 填写示例： 1.Madam Curie 2.scientist 3.Madam Curie 4.thin 5.a simple coat and a pair of glasses 6.serious and determined 7.perseverance 8.science 9.Madam Curie 10.hard-working 11.scientific research 12.in the lab 13.difficult conditions 14.discovered radium 15.science 16.courage 17.Madam Curie 18.perseverance 19.face challenges bravely 高分亮点总结 结构亮点：四段式结构（引入→外貌描写一成就事例一→感悟），逻辑清晰递进 词汇亮点：使用精准形容词(persistent/determined)和学术词汇(scientific research/contributions) 事例亮点：具体科研事例(discovered radium)展现人物特质，避免空泛描述 情感升华：结尾段明确学习目标和行动方向，体现励志主题 时态统一：全程使用一般过去时描述人物生平，现在时表达个人感悟 写作小贴士·避坑指南 事例选择：选择1-2个典型事例即可，避免堆砌无关细节 时态切换：人物生平用过去时，现存影响/个人感悟用现在时 称谓规范：首次提及时用全名(Madam Curie),后续可用she/he 品质呼应：外貌描写(serious)需与内在品质(perseverance)形成关联 避免主观：用具体事例代替空泛评价（不说”she was great'”,而说”discovered radium”) 3