Unit 6 Mountains and rivers 写作学案- 2025-2026学年沪教版五四制英语七年级上册

Unit 6 Mountains and rivers 写作学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Mountains and rivers”为核心话题，围绕“山水奇观、户外休闲、自然影响、山水宣传”展开，核心聚焦“用英语写山水明信片、介绍名山大川、分享户外休闲经历、制作自然宣传手册”，运用同级比较（(not) as ... as ...）和不定代词（both/neither/all/none） 等语法知识，搭配自然、旅行相关核心词汇与应用类、说明类句型，提升七年级学生的应用写作生动性和说明类写作准确性。常见写作角度包括：① 给朋友写山水旅行明信片；② 介绍中国一处著名山川；③ 分享徒步、露营等户外休闲经历；④ 为山水景点制作宣传手册。所有内容严格贴合课本话题、词汇与语法要求，适配七年级英语写作水平，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “给朋友写一张山水旅行明信片”。请根据课本“Lesson 6: Mountains and rivers”中“Amazing scenery”相关内容，写一张明信片，包括旅行地点、景色描述、感受及邀请，运用同级比较或不定代词，词数70-90左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Dear Lucy, How’s everything going? I’m writing to you from the foot of Mount Huangshan—one of the most beautiful mountains in China! The mountains here are not as high as Mount Qomolangma, but they are more magical with strange rocks and floating clouds. Both the sunrises and sunsets are breathtaking. I walked through pine forests and saw clear streams. None of the scenery I’ve seen before is as charming as this. I wish you were here with me. Come and visit soon—we’ll hike together and enjoy the amazing views! Yours, Li Hua 【译文】 亲爱的露西： 一切都好吗？我正在黄山脚下给你写信——它是中国最美的山脉之一！ 这里的山不像珠穆朗玛峰那么高，但奇形怪状的岩石和漂浮的云雾让它更具魔力。日出和日落都令人惊叹。我穿过松树林，看到了清澈的溪流。我以前见过的景色都没有这么迷人。 真希望你能和我一起在这里。快来拜访吧——我们一起徒步，欣赏这绝美的风景！ 你的朋友：李华 亮点词块 1.foot of Mount Huangshan 黄山脚下 2.strange rocks and floating clouds 奇形怪状的岩石和漂浮的云雾 3.breathtaking 令人惊叹的 4.pine forests 松树林 5.clear streams 清澈的溪流 6.charming 迷人的 7.hike together 一起徒步 8.amazing views 绝美的风景 高分句子 1.The mountains here are not as high as Mount Qomolangma, but they are more magical with strange rocks and floating clouds.（用同级比较“not as ... as ...”对比山脉高度，贴合单元语法重点，突出景色特色） 2.Both the sunrises and sunsets are breathtaking.（用不定代词“both”指代日出和日落，语法应用准确，表达简洁） 3.None of the scenery I’ve seen before is as charming as this.（用不定代词“none”和同级比较强调景色独特，升华感受，逻辑完整） 【拓展1】 介绍中国一处著名河流（如黄河、长江），包括河流概况、特点及对城市的影响，运用单元相关句型，词数不少于60。 A Famous River in China: The Yellow River ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展1范文】 A Famous River in China: The Yellow River The Yellow River, known as the “Mother River of China”, is one of the longest rivers in the country. It is not as long as the Yangtze River, but it has shaped Chinese culture for thousands of years. Both ancient and modern cities along its banks have benefited from it—It provides water for farming and transportation. None of the rivers in China carries as much historical meaning as it. When I visited the Hukou Waterfalls, I was shocked by its powerful flow. The Yellow River is not just a river; it’s a symbol of Chinese civilization. We should protect it and cherish its water. 【拓展1译文】 中国的著名河流：黄河 黄河，被誉为“中国的母亲河”，是中国最长的河流之一。 它不像长江那么长，但数千年来一直塑造着中国文化。沿河的古今城市都受益于它——它为农业和交通提供水源。中国没有哪条河承载着如此深厚的历史意义。当我参观壶口瀑布时，被它磅礴的水流震撼到了。 黄河不仅仅是一条河，更是中华文明的象征。我们应该保护它，珍惜它的水资源。 【拓展2】 你的外国笔友Peter想体验中国的户外休闲活动，向你求助推荐，给她写一封简短邮件，推荐2-3种相关活动，运用单元相关句型，词数60左右，开头已给出。 Dear Peter, You said you want to try outdoor activities in China. I’d like to share some great suggestions with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Dear Peter, You said you want to try outdoor activities in China. I’d like to share some great suggestions with you. First, hiking in Sheshan National Forest Park—its trails are not as difficult as those in high mountains, so it’s perfect for beginners. Second, ice fishing on frozen rivers in winter is fun. Both activities let you enjoy fresh air. None of these experiences is boring! Come soon, and I’ll be your guide. You’ll fall in love with China’s nature! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展2译文】 亲爱的彼得： 你说你想在中国尝试户外活动，我想给你分享一些很棒的建议。 首先，去佘山国家森林公园徒步——那里的小径不像高山上的那么难走，非常适合初学者。其次，冬天在冰冻的河面上冰钓很有趣。这两项活动都能让你享受新鲜空气，没有一项体验是无聊的！ 快来吧，我会做你的向导。你一定会爱上中国的自然风光！ 你的朋友：李华 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.山水与旅行相关（单元重点） · 山川河流：Mount Huangshan 黄山；Mount Qomolangma 珠穆朗玛峰；the Yellow River 黄河；the Yangtze River 长江；Hukou Waterfalls 壶口瀑布；pine forest 松树林；clear stream 清澈溪流；strange rocks 奇形怪状的岩石；floating clouds 漂浮的云雾 · 户外活动：hiking 徒步；ice fishing 冰钓；camping 露营；mountain biking 山地自行车；enjoy the view 欣赏风景；walk through 穿过；visit scenic spots 参观景点 · 相关表达：breathtaking 令人惊叹的；charming 迷人的；magical 神奇的；powerful flow 磅礴的水流；historical meaning 历史意义；natural scenery 自然风光；beginner 初学者 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 同级比较（(not) as ... as ...）： · 肯定式：as + 形容词/副词原级 + as，例：The stream is as clear as a mirror.（溪流像镜子一样清澈） · 否定式：not as/so + 形容词/副词原级 + as，例：This mountain is not as high as that one.（这座山不如那座山高） · 不定代词（both/neither/all/none）： · both（两者都）：Both the lake and the mountain are beautiful.（湖和山都很美） · neither（两者都不）：Neither of the two rivers is in the north.（这两条河都不在北方） · all（三者及以上都）：All the students enjoyed the hiking trip.（所有学生都喜欢这次徒步旅行） · none（三者及以上都不）：None of the scenery is boring.（没有一处景色是无聊的） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：but 但是；and 并且；so 因此；first 首先；second 其次；both...and... 既……又……；none of 没有一个 · 常用短语：foot of the mountain 山脚下；floating clouds 漂浮的云雾；clear stream 清澈溪流；historical meaning 历史意义；benefit from 受益于；provide water for 为……提供水源；fall in love with 爱上 二、实用句型积累 1.写山水明信片（贴合单元核心） · I’m writing to you from...—one of the most beautiful...in China! 我正在……给你写信——它是中国最美的……之一！，例：I’m writing to you from the banks of the Yangtze River—one of the most famous rivers in China!（我正在长江岸边给你写信——它是中国最著名的河流之一） · ...are not as...as..., but they are more... ……不像……那么……，但它们更……，例：The lakes here are not as big as the sea, but they are more peaceful.（这里的湖不像海那么大，但它们更宁静） · Come and visit soon—we’ll...together! 快来拜访吧——我们一起……！，例：Come and visit soon—we’ll camp by the lake together!（快来拜访吧——我们一起在湖边露营！） 1. 介绍名山大川（贴合单元主题） · [River/Mountain name], known as..., is one of the...in China. ……被称为……，是中国最……之一，例：West Lake, known as the “Pearl of the East”, is one of the most charming lakes in China.（西湖被称为“东方明珠”，是中国最迷人的湖泊之一） · Both...and...have benefited from it. ……和……都受益于它，例：Both farmers and fishermen have benefited from the river.（农民和渔民都受益于这条河） · None of the...is as...as it. 没有哪条……像它一样……，例：None of the lakes in China is as romantic as West Lake.（中国没有哪条湖像西湖一样浪漫） 1. 分享户外经历（贴合单元内涵） · Last [time], I went...and saw... 上次，我去……并看到了……，例：Last weekend, I went hiking in the mountains and saw beautiful waterfalls.（上周末，我去山里徒步，看到了美丽的瀑布） · The...is not as...as..., so it’s perfect for... ……不像……那么……，所以非常适合……，例：The trail is not as steep as expected, so it’s perfect for families.（这条小径不像预想的那么陡，所以非常适合家庭出行） · I was shocked by...and felt... 我被……震撼到，并且感到……，例：I was shocked by the mountain’s beauty and felt close to nature.（我被这座山的美景震撼到，感到与自然紧密相连） 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What famous mountains or rivers have you visited?；How is the Yellow River different from the Yangtze River?；What outdoor activities do you like to do in mountains?；Is Mount Huangshan as high as Mount Qomolangma?；Which scenic spot do you recommend for hiking? · 回答句型：I have visited Mount Huangshan and the Yellow River.；The Yellow River is not as long as the Yangtze River, but it has more historical meaning.；I like hiking and camping in mountains.；No, it isn’t. Mount Qomolangma is much higher.；I recommend Sheshan National Forest Park—it’s suitable for beginners. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $