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冀教英语七下Unit6 作文
Chinese kites — How to Make a Dragon Kite
一、写作题目
Chinese kites — How to Make a Dragon Kite
二、写作目标
1. 紧扣教材Unit6“Chinese kites”核心任务,完成一篇结构完整、步骤清晰的手工制作说明文。
2. 复用教材核心词汇句型,语言难度匹配初一下水平。
3. 熟练运用反身代词(Unit6核心语法)和First/Next/Then/Finally等连接词,清晰呈现制作步骤。
4. 词数控制在70-100词,完整涵盖引入主题、制作材料、步骤说明、个人感受四大模块。
5. 语言简洁、逻辑清晰,符合说明文的表达要求。
三、教材范文结构拆解
模块
教材范文原句
功能解析
内容拓展
引入主题
Kites are a traditional form of art in China.
点明风筝的文化背景,引出制作主题
Kites are traditional Chinese art. Last week, our school had a kite festival, and I made a dragon kite myself.
制作材料
We got different materials: special paper, a string, bamboo sticks, scissors, and glue.
列出制作所需材料,为步骤做铺垫
First, I got my materials: special red paper, bamboo sticks, strong string, scissors, glue, and a marker.
步骤说明
First, we got different materials... Finally, we drew beautiful patterns.
用连接词清晰呈现制作步骤,是写作核心
First, I tied the bamboo sticks into a dragon frame. Next, I glued the paper onto the frame. Then, I connected the string to the frame. Finally, I drew scales and eyes on the dragon with a marker.
个人感受
We had so much fun. We won a special award.
表达制作后的感受与成果,升华主题
The dragon kite looked amazing. I flew it at the festival and won a prize. Making it myself was really fun and rewarding!
四、写作分析
1. 时态运用
· 一般过去时:描述制作风筝的过程(如I tied the bamboo sticks),符合叙事逻辑。
· 一般现在时:介绍风筝的背景(如Kites are traditional Chinese art),贴合客观事实陈述。
2. 核心语法运用
· 反身代词(Unit6核心):如myself,强调“亲自制作”,贴合教材语法点。
· 连接词:First/Next/Then/Finally,清晰衔接步骤,使逻辑更连贯。
3. 结构思路
引入主题→制作材料→步骤说明→个人感受,逻辑清晰,步骤分明,80-100词内可完整呈现。
五、写作模板
模块
句式模板
教材来源
引入主题
Kites are traditional Chinese art. Last week, I made a [kite shape] kite myself.
教材原句改编
制作材料
First, I got my materials: [list materials].
教材材料句拓展
步骤说明
First, I [step 1]. Next, I [step 2]. Then, I [step 3]. Finally, I [step 4].
教材步骤句整合
个人感受
The kite looked [adj]. I flew it and [result]. Making it myself was really fun!
教材感受句拓展
六、范文(中英对照版·98词)
英文范文
Kites are traditional Chinese art. Last week, our school had a kite festival, and I made a dragon kite myself.
First, I got my materials: special red paper, bamboo sticks, strong string, scissors, glue, and a marker. First, I tied the bamboo sticks into a dragon frame. Next, I glued the red paper onto the frame to make the dragon’s body. Then, I connected the string to the frame. Finally, I drew scales and sharp eyes on the dragon with the marker. The kite looked amazing. I flew it at the festival and won a small prize. Making it myself was really fun and rewarding!
中文翻译
风筝是中国传统艺术。上周我们学校举办了风筝节,我亲自做了一个龙形风筝。
首先,我准备好材料:特制的红纸、竹篾、结实的线、剪刀、胶水和马克笔。第一步,我把竹篾扎成龙的骨架。接着,我把红纸粘在骨架上做成龙身。然后,我把线系在骨架上。最后,我用马克笔在龙身上画出鳞片和锐利的眼睛。风筝看起来棒极了。我在节日上放飞它,还得了一个小奖。自己动手制作的过程真的很有趣,也很有成就感!
七、核心素材
1. 好词
· 材料类:special paper, bamboo sticks, string, scissors, glue, marker
· 动作类:tie, glue, connect, draw, cut, fly
· 连接词:First, Next, Then, Finally
· 感受类:fun, rewarding, amazing, proud
2. 佳句
· Kites are traditional Chinese art. Last week, I made a dragon kite myself.
· First, I got my materials: special red paper, bamboo sticks, strong string, scissors, glue, and a marker.
· First, I tied the bamboo sticks into a dragon frame. Next, I glued the red paper onto the frame.
· Making it myself was really fun and rewarding!
3. 谚语
· One of my rules is: never try to do anything. Just do it.
· Practice makes perfect.
八、拓展练习(制作纸鸢,中英对照)
英文范文
Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese craft. Last weekend, I made a paper-cut flower myself.
First, I got a square red paper, scissors, and a pencil. First, I folded the paper into a small triangle. Next, I drew half a flower pattern on the folded paper. Then, I cut along the pattern with scissors. Finally, I unfolded the paper to see a beautiful flower. I put it on my window. Making it myself was easy and fun. I felt proud of my work!
中文翻译
剪纸是中国传统手工艺。上周末,我亲自做了一个剪纸花朵。
首先,我准备了一张方形红纸、剪刀和铅笔。第一步,我把纸折成小三角形。接着,我在折好的纸上画了半朵花的图案。然后,我用剪刀沿着图案剪下来。最后,我把纸展开,就看到一朵漂亮的花。我把它贴在窗户上。自己动手制作既简单又有趣,我为自己的作品感到骄傲!
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