Unit 3 The world of science（单元应用文写作精练）英语外研版必修第三册

Unit 3 The world of science 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：一次科学实验（科技发展与科学精神） 写作框架： 第一段 总体介绍实验的目的。 第二段 介绍实验所需材料和实验过程。 第三段 汇报实验结果，以及实验收获。 写作词汇短语： 实验核心 目的: aim, purpose, goal 器材: apparatus, equipment, materials, tools 步骤: steps, procedure, process, method 数据: data, result, finding, record 现象: phenomenon, change, reaction 结论: conclusion, summary 操作动词 准备: prepare, set up, get ready 操作: add, pour, mix, heat, cool, stir, connect, place 测量: measure, weigh, count, check 观察: observe, watch, notice, monitor 记录: record, write down, note, take down 分析: analyze, compare, conclude 逻辑连接 顺序: first(ly), second(ly), next, then, after that, finally 同时: at the same time, meanwhile 结果: therefore, thus, as a result, so 总结: in conclusion, to conclude, in summary 写作句型： 【实验目的】 1直接说明式 （1）The aim/purpose of this experiment is to find out whether... (本实验的目的是查明是否...) （2）This experiment was designed/carried out with the purpose of discovering... (本实验旨在发现...) （3）We did this experiment to test the effect of... on... (我们做这个实验是为了测试...对...的影响) 2.问题引导式 （1）The question we wanted to answer was: “What happens when...?” (我们想回答的问题是：“当...时会发生什么？”) （2）Our research question was how... affects... (我们的研究问题是...如何影响...) 【实验材料】 1.清单列举式 （1）The following materials were used/apparatus was needed: a..., a..., and some... (使用了以下材料/需要以下器材：一个...，一个...，和一些...) （2）To conduct this experiment, we prepared: ... (为了进行本实验，我们准备了：...) 2.分类说明式 （1）Equipment: ... (设备：...) （2）Materials: ... (材料：...) 【实验步骤（核心）】 通用公式：[顺序词]， we [过去式动词] ... （1）First/Firstly, we set up the equipment by... (首先，我们通过...安装设备。) （2）Then/Next, we added ... to ... (然后/接着，我们将...加入...) （3）After that, we heated the mixture for 5 minutes. (之后，我们将混合物加热了5分钟。) （4）Meanwhile/At the same time, we recorded the temperature every minute. (同时，我们每分钟记录一次温度。) （5）Finally, we observed the results and wrote down our findings. (最后，我们观察结果并记录下发现。) 【实验结果】 1.客观描述现象 （1）We observed/found that ... changed color/became solid/produced bubbles. (我们观察到/发现...改变了颜色/变成了固体/产生了气泡。) （2）It was clear that ... reacted quickly/slowly with ... (很明显，...与...反应迅速/缓慢。) （3）The data showed a clear increase/decrease in ... (数据显示...有明显增加/减少。) 2.呈现具体数据 （1）The temperature rose from 20°C to 100°C. (温度从20°C上升到100°C。) （2）After 10 minutes, the weight had decreased by 2 grams. (10分钟后，重量减少了2克。) 【实验结论】 1.总结发现 （1）In conclusion, this experiment demonstrates/proves that ... (总之，本实验证明...) （2）From the results, we can conclude that ... (从结果中，我们可以得出结论...) （3）Therefore, our hypothesis was correct/incorrect. (因此，我们的假设是正确/错误的。) 2.联系理论与现实 （1）This supports the scientific theory that ... (这支持了...的科学理论。) （2）The experiment tells us that ... is important in our daily life because... (这个实验告诉我们...在日常生活中很重要，因为...) 写作模板： The purpose of our experiment was to ______ (实验目的，如：observe the reaction between vinegar and baking soda). We prepared ______ (主要器材，如：a glass, vinegar, baking soda, a spoon). The procedure was simple. First, ______ (第一步操作). Then, ______ (第二步操作). After that, we observed what happened. Soon, we saw that ______ (描述主要现象，如：lots of bubbles quickly appeared and rose in the glass). This showed that ______ (基于现象得出的直接结论). In conclusion, ______ (总结性结论，呼应目的). Through this experiment, we learned ______ (个人感悟或科学启示). （2024·全国甲卷·高考真题）英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （原创）请根据以下表格信息，以 China’s Strides in Space Exploration 为题，写一篇英文发言稿。 早期阶段 起步较晚，基础相对薄弱。 重大里程碑 2003年，首次载人航天（manned spaceflight）成功。 嫦娥系列任务（Chang’e missions）实现月球探测。 天宫空间站（Tiangong Space Station）建成。 祝融号火星车（Zhurong rover）登陆火星。 意义总结 体现了科技创新和国家实力，激发了年轻一代对科学的兴趣，为人类太空探索做出贡献。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。 China’s Strides in Space Exploration Fellow students, look up at the sky! China’s journey into space is a story of turning ambition into reality. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（25-26高一上·湖南·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你校上周举行了主题是“太空”的年度“科学节”活动，持续一周。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.具体活动； 3.活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Science Festival goes off with a bang! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26高一上·江苏·阶段练习）你是光明中学学生会的一名成员，下周你们将举办科学知识技能大赛，请写一份通知鼓励学生踊跃报名。注意: 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.不得透露相关个人信息 3.开头和结尾已经为你写出，不计入总词数。 Notice ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26高一上·安徽·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的学校上周成功举办了一场主题为 “我最喜欢的科学家” 活动。 请你用英文给校报写一篇报道介绍此次活动。内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26高一上·西安·阶段练习）假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.作品要求； 3.投稿方式及截止时间。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Contributions Wanted ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高一上·河北·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班同学打算于本周日一起参观中国科学技术馆( China Science and Technology Museum)。请用英语给班里的新来的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他到时一同前往，内容包括： 1. 参观时间、目的； 2. 主要活动； 3. 其他事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world of science 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：一次科学实验（科技发展与科学精神） 写作框架： 第一段 总体介绍实验的目的。 第二段 介绍实验所需材料和实验过程。 第三段 汇报实验结果，以及实验收获。 写作词汇短语： 实验核心 目的: aim, purpose, goal 器材: apparatus, equipment, materials, tools 步骤: steps, procedure, process, method 数据: data, result, finding, record 现象: phenomenon, change, reaction 结论: conclusion, summary 操作动词 准备: prepare, set up, get ready 操作: add, pour, mix, heat, cool, stir, connect, place 测量: measure, weigh, count, check 观察: observe, watch, notice, monitor 记录: record, write down, note, take down 分析: analyze, compare, conclude 逻辑连接 顺序: first(ly), second(ly), next, then, after that, finally 同时: at the same time, meanwhile 结果: therefore, thus, as a result, so 总结: in conclusion, to conclude, in summary 写作句型： 【实验目的】 1直接说明式 （1）The aim/purpose of this experiment is to find out whether... (本实验的目的是查明是否...) （2）This experiment was designed/carried out with the purpose of discovering... (本实验旨在发现...) （3）We did this experiment to test the effect of... on... (我们做这个实验是为了测试...对...的影响) 2.问题引导式 （1）The question we wanted to answer was: “What happens when...?” (我们想回答的问题是：“当...时会发生什么？”) （2）Our research question was how... affects... (我们的研究问题是...如何影响...) 【实验材料】 1.清单列举式 （1）The following materials were used/apparatus was needed: a..., a..., and some... (使用了以下材料/需要以下器材：一个...，一个...，和一些...) （2）To conduct this experiment, we prepared: ... (为了进行本实验，我们准备了：...) 2.分类说明式 （1）Equipment: ... (设备：...) （2）Materials: ... (材料：...) 【实验步骤（核心）】 通用公式：[顺序词]， we [过去式动词] ... （1）First/Firstly, we set up the equipment by... (首先，我们通过...安装设备。) （2）Then/Next, we added ... to ... (然后/接着，我们将...加入...) （3）After that, we heated the mixture for 5 minutes. (之后，我们将混合物加热了5分钟。) （4）Meanwhile/At the same time, we recorded the temperature every minute. (同时，我们每分钟记录一次温度。) （5）Finally, we observed the results and wrote down our findings. (最后，我们观察结果并记录下发现。) 【实验结果】 1.客观描述现象 （1）We observed/found that ... changed color/became solid/produced bubbles. (我们观察到/发现...改变了颜色/变成了固体/产生了气泡。) （2）It was clear that ... reacted quickly/slowly with ... (很明显，...与...反应迅速/缓慢。) （3）The data showed a clear increase/decrease in ... (数据显示...有明显增加/减少。) 2.呈现具体数据 （1）The temperature rose from 20°C to 100°C. (温度从20°C上升到100°C。) （2）After 10 minutes, the weight had decreased by 2 grams. (10分钟后，重量减少了2克。) 【实验结论】 1.总结发现 （1）In conclusion, this experiment demonstrates/proves that ... (总之，本实验证明...) （2）From the results, we can conclude that ... (从结果中，我们可以得出结论...) （3）Therefore, our hypothesis was correct/incorrect. (因此，我们的假设是正确/错误的。) 2.联系理论与现实 （1）This supports the scientific theory that ... (这支持了...的科学理论。) （2）The experiment tells us that ... is important in our daily life because... (这个实验告诉我们...在日常生活中很重要，因为...) 写作模板： The purpose of our experiment was to ______ (实验目的，如：observe the reaction between vinegar and baking soda). We prepared ______ (主要器材，如：a glass, vinegar, baking soda, a spoon). The procedure was simple. First, ______ (第一步操作). Then, ______ (第二步操作). After that, we observed what happened. Soon, we saw that ______ (描述主要现象，如：lots of bubbles quickly appeared and rose in the glass). This showed that ______ (基于现象得出的直接结论). In conclusion, ______ (总结性结论，呼应目的). Through this experiment, we learned ______ (个人感悟或科学启示). （2024·全国甲卷·高考真题）英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling. Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility. In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness. 解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 1.词汇激活 提供：offer→provide 极大地：dramatically→tremendously 减少：reduce→decrease 总之：in short→in a nutshell 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. 拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility. 【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句) （原创）请根据以下表格信息，以 China’s Strides in Space Exploration 为题，写一篇英文发言稿。 早期阶段 起步较晚，基础相对薄弱。 重大里程碑 2003年，首次载人航天（manned spaceflight）成功。 嫦娥系列任务（Chang’e missions）实现月球探测。 天宫空间站（Tiangong Space Station）建成。 祝融号火星车（Zhurong rover）登陆火星。 意义总结 体现了科技创新和国家实力，激发了年轻一代对科学的兴趣，为人类太空探索做出贡献。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。 China’s Strides in Space Exploration Fellow students, look up at the sky! China’s journey into space is a story of turning ambition into reality. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 China’s Strides in Space Exploration Fellow students, look up at the sky! China’s journey into space is a story of turning ambition into reality. Starting later than some countries, we built our space program from a relatively weak foundation. However, through determined effort, we have achieved remarkable milestones. In 2003, China successfully launched its first manned spaceflight, sending a national hero into orbit. Following that, the Chang’e missions have explored the moon in great detail. More recently, the Tiangong Space Station was completed, and the Zhurong rover landed on Mars, marking our first steps on another planet. These incredible achievements showcase China’s growing technological strength and innovative spirit. More importantly, they inspire young people like us to dream big and study science. China is now proudly contributing to humanity’s shared journey of exploring the final frontier. 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文（发言稿）。要求考生根据表格信息，以“中国航天发展”为主题撰写一篇简短的英文发言稿，介绍发展历程、主要成就及其意义。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 旅程：journey → voyage / path 雄心：ambition → aspiration / dream 现实：reality → actuality / achievement 相对薄弱：relatively weak → had a modest start / was less developed 里程碑：milestones → landmarks / major achievements 发射：launched → sent up / propelled 详细地：in great detail → thoroughly / extensively 标志着：marking → signifying / representing 展示：showcase → demonstrate / display 创新精神：innovative spirit → creativity and drive 贡献：contributing → playing a part / adding to 共同旅程：shared journey → collective effort 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Starting later than some countries, we built our space program from a relatively weak foundation. 拓展句： Although China started its space program later than some nations and from a relatively weak foundation, we have managed to build it into a world-leading endeavor. （运用了“Although”引导的让步状语从句，将背景与后续成就形成对比，突出成就的来之不易，逻辑更紧密。） 原句： These incredible achievements showcase China’s growing technological strength and innovative spirit. 拓展句： What these incredible achievements truly showcase is not only China’s growing technological strength but also its relentless innovative spirit. （运用了“What”引导的主语从句，强调了“展示”的内容，使句子的表达重点更突出，语气更强。） 【点睛】 [高分句型1] China’s journey into space is a story of turning ambition into reality. （此句运用了“a story of...”的比喻性表达，将航天发展历程生动地描述为一个“将雄心变为现实的故事”，开篇点题，形象且富有感染力，是发言稿出色的开头方式。） [高分句型2] More recently, the Tiangong Space Station was completed, and the Zhurong rover landed on Mars, marking our first steps on another planet. （此句运用了“marking...”现在分词短语作结果状语。它简洁地将“天宫建成”和“祝融号登陆火星”这两个具体成就与其象征意义——“迈出星际探索第一步”连接起来，一句话同时陈述事实与点明意义，信息密度高，逻辑流畅。) 1．（25-26高一上·湖南·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你校上周举行了主题是“太空”的年度“科学节”活动，持续一周。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.具体活动； 3.活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Science Festival goes off with a bang! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Science Festival goes off with a bang! Our annual school Science Festival finished on Friday and once again it was amazing fun. To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year’s theme was “Space”. On Monday afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets. In Thursday’s Science Workshop, students tried different experiments with great interest. On Friday afternoon, every class decorated their classroom and designed activities according to the theme of space. The festival attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year’s Science Festival. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，介绍上周举行的主题是“太空”的年度“科学节”活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 结束：completed→ finished 令人惊讶的：surprising→ amazing 感兴趣：have an interest →take an interest 期待：expect→ look forward to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our annual school Science Festival finished on Friday and once again it was amazing fun. 拓展句：Our annual school Science Festival finished on Friday, which was amazing fun once again. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year’s theme was “Space”.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） [高分句型2] On Monday afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets. （运用了由whether连接的宾语从句作介词about的宾语） [高分句型3] The festival attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year’s Science Festival.（运用了由and连接的并列句） 2．（25-26高一上·江苏·阶段练习）你是光明中学学生会的一名成员，下周你们将举办科学知识技能大赛，请写一份通知鼓励学生踊跃报名。注意: 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.不得透露相关个人信息 3.开头和结尾已经为你写出，不计入总词数。 Notice ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Notice In order to increase students’ interest in technology innovation and have a chance to approach the top scientists around the world, the Student Union is proud to announce that a Scientific Knowledge and Skills Competition is going to be held next week! By participating in our well-organized activities，you will harvest a lot．To begin with，you can develop good scientific skills and make a lot of friends here．What's more，not only can you acquire much scientific knowledge but also you can improve your ability．So join us. There is no doubt that it's a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity and we are looking forward to your attendance! Student Union 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份通知鼓励学生踊跃报名参加科学知识技能大赛。 【解析】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 介绍举办科技大赛的原因； 2. 讲述大赛的益处； 3. 要求学生参加。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） have a chance to do sth；be proud to do，participant in，to begin with，what’s more，acquire，there is no doubt that，look forward to，attendance 第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句） 1.In order to increase students’ interest in technology innovation and have a chance to approach the top scientists around the world, the Student Union is proud to announce that a Scientific Knowledge and Skills Competition is going to be held next week! 2.By participating in our well-organized activities，you will harvest a lot． 3.To begin with，you can develop good scientific skills and make a lot of friends here． 4.What's more，not only can you acquire many scientific knowledge but also you can improve your ability． 5.There is no doubt that it's a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity and we are looking forward to your attendance! 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：to begin with 2.表并列补充关系：What’s more 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型1] In order to increase students’ interest in technology innovation and have a chance to approach the top scientists around the world, the Student Union is proud to announce that a Scientific Knowledge and Skills Competition is going to be held next week!（使用了不定式作目的状语，宾语从句等） [高分句型2] What's more，not only can you acquire many scientific knowledge but also you can improve your ability．（使用了部分倒装） [高分句型3] There is no doubt that it's a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity and we are looking forward to your attendance! （使用了固定句型：There is no doubt that...） 3．（25-26高一上·安徽·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的学校上周成功举办了一场主题为 “我最喜欢的科学家” 活动。 请你用英文给校报写一篇报道介绍此次活动。内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Last week, an impressive activity themed on My Favorite Scientist was successfully launched on our campus, which exceedingly brightened up students’ school days.     Aimed at stimulating students’ interest in science, a speech contest was held on Wednesday night followed by an enlightening lecture on Thursday. Professor Li from Zhejiang University was invited to deliver a lecture on several prominent scientists at home and abroad like TuYouyou and Einstein. The activity turned out to be a great success. Not only did it enable us to further understand the qualities of scientists but also it greatly inspired us to be a better self. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为校报写一篇关于“我最喜欢的科学家”主题活动的报道。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 举办：launch → hold 激发：stimulate → inspire 成功：success → triumph 启发：enlighten → inspire 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：An activity was held last week. It was themed on “My Favorite Scientist”. 拓展句：Last week, an activity themed on “My Favorite Scientist” was successfully held. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Last week, an impressive activity themed on “My Favorite Scientist” was successfully launched on our campus, which exceedingly brightened up students’ school days. (运用了非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Not only did it enable us to further understand the qualities of scientists, but also it greatly inspired us to be a better self. (运用了部分倒装结构) 4．（25-26高一上·西安·阶段练习）假定你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。你校学生会正在向全体学生征集以“中国科学家精神”(The Spirit of Chinese Scientists)为主题的短视频。请你用英文拟一则征稿启事，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.作品要求； 3.投稿方式及截止时间。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Contributions Wanted ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Contributions Wanted Aiming to carry forward the spirit of Chinese scientists and demonstrate the power of moral examples, the Student Union is collecting short videos with the theme of"The Spirit of Chinese Scientists". The video is supposed to be original, positive and to the point, including scientists' major experiences, achievements and the spirit they show on the road to success. As a consequence, if you admire a scientist for the above-mentioned aspects, feel free to submit your excellent work to student-union @163.com before May 20h. What deserves your special attention is that your work should be limited to 3 minutes. Your active participation is highly anticipated! The Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会名义撰写一篇关于“中国科学家精神”主题短视频的征稿启事。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 弘扬：carry forward → promote 展示：demonstrate → showcase 提交：submit → send 原创的：original → creative 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The Student Union is collecting short videos. The theme is "The Spirit of Chinese Scientists". 拓展句：The Student Union is collecting short videos themed on "The Spirit of Chinese Scientists". 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Aiming to carry forward the spirit of Chinese scientists and demonstrate the power of moral examples, the Student Union is collecting short videos with the theme of "The Spirit of Chinese Scientists". (运用了现在分词作目的状语) [高分句型2] What deserves your special attention is that your work should be limited to 3 minutes. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) 5．（25-26高一上·河北·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班同学打算于本周日一起参观中国科学技术馆( China Science and Technology Museum)。请用英语给班里的新来的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他到时一同前往，内容包括： 1. 参观时间、目的； 2. 主要活动； 3. 其他事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, To enrich our life, broaden our horizons and arouse our interest in science and technology, our school will organize a visit to China Science and Technology Museum this Sunday. So I’d like to invite you to join me. At the museum, apart from watching the exhibits, we can attend a lecture and watch movies with special effects. More importantly, we can conduct some experiments appealing to us. Every one of us will be welcome to take part in it. If you accept my offer, I have confidence that we will have a great time. Yours Li Hua 【分析】 这是一篇提纲类写作。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你班同学打算于本周日一起参观中国科学技术馆( China Science and Technology Museum)。请用英语给班里的新来的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他到时一同前往，内容包括：1. 参观时间、目的；2. 主要活动；3. 其他事项。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：China Science and Technology Museum (中国科学技术馆)；organize a visit (组织参观)；apart from (除了)；attend lecture (参加讲座)；special effects (特效)；conduct some experiments(做实验)；appeal to (吸引)；take part in(参加)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如At the museum, apart from watching the exhibits, we can attend lecture and watch movies with special effects.非谓语动词的运用；If you accept my offer, I have confidence that we will have a great time.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $