Unit 3 介绍一位杰出人物及其贡献-2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语满分范文及模板（北师大版）

九年级全一册北师大版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作专版 【卫版满分范文】介绍一位杰出人物及其贡 献 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·北师大版九年级全一册 满分范文 Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce an outstanding person to you.He is Yuan Longping,known as the”Father of Hybrid Rice”. Yuan Longping had a thin face and kind eyes.He was of medium height and always looked gentle. Yuan Longping was very determined and persistent.He devoted all his life to developing hybrid rice. He worked hard even in his old age and never gave up. Yuan Longping made great contributions to the world.He developed hybrid rice,which helped feed millions of people.He is a great pioneer and a role model for all of us. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（人物引入）： 开篇用Hello,everyone自然引出话题： 核心句型：introduce an outstanding person+known as称号，简洁有力： 直接点明人物身份：”Father of Hybrid Rice”,突出专业性。 第二段（外貌描写）： 用had./was.描述外貌特征，词汇精准(thin face/kind eyes/medium height): 结尾always looked gentle展现人物气质，避免单纯外貌描写。 第三段（品质与付出）： 品质形容词：determined and persistent体现人物核心特质： 用devoted all his life to强调奉献精神，worked hard even in his old age突出坚持： 专业术语：developing hybrid rice准确表述贡献领域。 第四段（贡献与评价）： 九年级全一册北师大版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 made great contributions总结性短语，helped feed millions量化影响； 双重评价：a great pioneer+a role model,升华主题； 结尾for all of us引发读者共鸣，增强感染力。 满分范文模板（介绍杰出人物） Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce an outstanding person to you.He/She is 1. known as the 2. 3 had a 4. face and 5. eyes.He/She was of 6. height and always looked 7. 8. was very 9. and 10. He/She devoted all his/her life to developing 11. He/She worked hard even in his/her old age and never gave up. 12. made great contributions to the world.He/She developed 13. which helped 14. He/She is a great 15. and a 16. for all of us. 【模板填写指南】 1.人物姓名（如：Yuan Longping/Marie Curie) 2.人物称号（如：Father of Hybrid Rice/Queen of Physics) 3.人物姓名（与1一致) 4.面部特征（如：thin/round/square) 5.眼睛特征（如：kind/bright/sharp) 6.身高描述（如：nedium/tall/short) 7.气质评价（如：gentle/confident/serious) 8.人物姓名（与1一致) 9.品质形容词l(如：determined/brave/creative) l0.品质形容词2（如：persistent/patient/wise) 2 九年级全一册北师大版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 ll.专业领域（如：hybrid rice/radioactivity/computer science) 12.人物姓名（与1一致) l3.具体成就（如：hybrid rice/the theory ofrelativity) 14.成就影响（如：feed millions/change how we communicate) 15.身份评价1（如：pioneer/genius./innovator) 16.身份评价2（如：role model/hero/inspiration) 填写示例： 1.Marie Curie 2.Queen of Physics 3.Marie Curie 4.serious 5.intelligent 6.medium 7.focused 8.Marie Curie 9.brilliant 10.dedicated 11.radioactivity 12.Marie Curie 13.radium 14.advance medical science 15.scientist 16.inspiration 高分亮点总结 结构清晰：四段式（引入→外貌→品质→贡献），逻辑递进，符合人物介绍类写作规范 术语精准：正确使用专业术语(hybrid rice/pioneer),体现学科素养 评价升华：结尾用双重评价(pioneer+role model),提升思想深度 数据支撑：'feed millions”量化贡献，增强说服力 时态统一：全程使用一般过去时（描述生平）与一般现在时（评价贡献），时态严谨 写作小贴士·人物描写要点 称号前置：首段用'known as..”突出人物最著名称号 外貌传神：选择1-2个最具辨识度的外貌特征（如爱因斯坦的头发） 品质具象化：用具体行为支撑品质描述（如”worked12 hours daily”) 贡献量化：尽量用数据说明影响范围（如benefited2 billion people'”) 3 九年级全一册北师大版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 避免主观：用客观事实替代个人观点（如'awarded Nobel Prize”替代'I think he is great') 时态区分：生平事迹用过去时，永恒贡献/评价用现在时