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初二下册沪教牛津版
【写作专版】记叙一次参加社区活动的经历
写作专版
记叙一次参加社区活动的经历
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·沪教牛津版初二下册
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Last Saturday.I took part in a volunteer work at our community center.It was a clean-up day organized
by the neighborhood,and I was excited to join in.
In the morning,we gathered at the community center and divided into groups.My friend Lily and I were
in the same team,and we decided to help clean up the park near our community.We picked up trash,
swept the paths,and watered the beautiful flowers in the garden.During the activity,we also handed out
leaflets about environmental protection to the neighbors.An old grandpa thanked us with a warm smile
when we helped him clean his front yard,which made us feel very happy.
Although we were tired after the activity,we felt proud of what we had done.The park looked clean
and tidy,and the fresh air made everyone feel comfortable.Through this community activity,I realized
the importance of teamwork and protecting our environment.It was a meaningful experience,and I will
never forget this warm memory.I want to participate in more such volunteer work in the future.
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Last 1.,I took part in a volunteer work at our 2..It was a 3.organized by the 4.,and I was
excited to join in.
In the morning,we gathered at the 5.and divided into groups.My friend 6.and I were in the same
team,and we decided to help 7..We 8.and 9..During the activity,we also 10..An old 11.
-thanked us with a warm smile when we helped him/her 12.,which made us feel very happy.
Although we were tired after the activity,we felt proud of what we had done.The 13.looked 14.
-and the 15.made everyone feel comfortable.Through this community activity,I realized the
importance of 16.and 17..It was a meaningful experience,and I will never forget this warm
memory.I want to participate in more such volunteer work in the future.
初二下册沪教牛津版
【写作专版】记叙一次参加社区活动的经历
【模板填写指南】
L.星期几:Saturday,.Sunday
2.地点:community center,school
3.活动名称:clean-up day,,charity sale
4.组织者:neighborhood,school
5.地点:community center,.park
6.朋友的名字:Liy,Tom
7.具体任务:clean up the park,visit the elderly
&.动作l:picked up trash,.swept the paths
9.动作2:watered the flowers,cleaned the rooms
l0.附加任务:handed out leaflets,.sang songs
ll.人物:grandpa,grandma
l2.具体帮助:clean his front yard,.carry things
13.场景:park,room
l4.状态:clean and tidy,.warm and bright
I5.感受:fresh air,happy atmosphere
I6.收获l:teamwork,helping others
l7.收获2:protecting our environment,caring for others
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