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七下北师大版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【卫版满分模板】介绍社区或校园规则,倡
导文明行为
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·北师大版七下
满分范文
Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about our community rules and civilized behavior.Rules help us
live in order,and civilized behavior makes our community better.
In our community,there are many important rules.For example,there is a rule:no parking in front of
the building.We should also follow the rule of keeping quiet in public places like the community garden
No littering is another important rule-we must keep our community clean.
We should not only follow the rules but also promote civilized behavior.It's important to be polite to
our neighbors.We should save water and electricity to protect our environment.Let's wait in line when
using public facilities and take care of the plants and flowers in the community.
In our community,if everyone obeys the rules and behaves politely,we will live more comfortably.Let's
all follow the rules and advocate civilized behavior to make our community a safe and beautiful place to
live
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(引入主题):
开篇用Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about.直接点明主题:
核心观点:Rules help us live in order和civilized behavior makes our community better,清晰
阐述规则和文明行为的重要性。
第二段(规则列举):
使用For example,,there is a rule:.引出具体规则;
列举三类典型规则:no parking,keeping quiet,.no littering,覆盖交通、噪音和环境卫生:
用we must keep our community clean强调规则目的。
第三段(文明行为):
七下北师大版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
过渡句We should not only.but also.自然衔接:
提出四项文明行为:be polite,save resources,wait in line,take care of plants;
使用It's important to.,Ve should.,Let's.多样化表达建议。
第四段(呼吁行动:
用条件句if everyone..wewill..说明遵守规则的好处:
结尾呼吁Let's all follow.and advocate.强化主题:
目标描述safe and beautiful place情感共鸣强烈。
满分范文模板(社区规则)
Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about our community rules and civilized behavior.Rules help us
live in order,and civilized behavior makes our community better.
In our community,there are many important rules.For example,there is a rule:1..We should also
follow the rule of 2..3.is another important rule-we must keep our community clean.
We should not only follow the rules but also promote civilized behavior.It's important to 4..We
should 5..Let's 6.and 7..
In our community,if everyone obeys the rules and behaves politely,we will live more comfortably.Let's
all follow the rules and advocate civilized behavior to make our community a safe and beautiful place to
live.
【模板填写指南】
1.具体规则1(如:no parking in front of the building)
2.具体规则2(如:keeping quiet in public places)
3.具体规则3(如:No littering)
4.文明行为1(如:be polite to our neighbors)
5.文明行为2(如:save water and electricity)
6.文明行为3(如:wait in line when using public facilities)
7.文明行为4(如:take care of the plants and flowers)
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七下北师大版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
填写示例:
1.no parking on the sidewalk 2.returning books on time
3.No smoking in elevators 4.greet security guards
5.turn off lights when leaving 6.clean up after using shared spaces
7.report broken facilities promptly
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:四段式布局(引入→规则→行为→呼吁),逻辑递进严密
实用表达:使用should,nust,let's等情态动词,语气恰当有力
连接自然:for example,not only.but also,and等连接词增强连贯性
细节具体:规则描述包含地点(in front of the building/public places)和行为主体(we/everyone)
情感升华:结尾safe and beautiful place提升立意高度
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
规则表述:用There is a rule:.或We should/mlst.保持句式统
行为建议:使用t's important to..+动词原形结构更地道
避免绝对:用should代替must显得更礼貌(紧急规则除外)
细节加分:每个规则/行为后补充执行地点(如in the library)或原因(如to save energy)
时态统一:全篇使用一般现在时,保持时态一致性
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