内容正文:
初一下册译林牛津版
【写作专版】
E版满分范文及模板
写作专版
【卫版满分模板】写邮件邀请朋友参加生日
派对
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林牛津版初一下册
满分范文
Dear [Friend's Name],
I'm writing to invite you to my birthday party at my home next Sunday.It will start from 5 p.m.to 8 p.m.
and I hope you can join in my birthday celebration.
At the party,we will sing songs,dance andplay interesting games.There will be a big birthday cake,and
we can take photos together.My parents will prepare some delicious food for us,so we will have fun and
enjoy ourselves.
I hope you can come and have fun with us.Please let me know if you can come to my party.I'm looking
forward to seeing you at my birthday party!
Best wishes,
[Your Name]
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(邀请信息):
开篇用Dear[Friend's Name]符合邮件格式:
核心句型:T'm writing to invite you to.直接点明写作目的:
清晰交代时间地点:at my home next Sunday/from 5 p.n.to8p.n.o
第二段(活动描述):
用wewill..列举三项活动(sing/dance/play games),动词选择恰当:
细节补充:birthday cake/take photos/delicious food丰富内容;
结尾have fun and enjoy ourselves增强感染力。
第三段(期待回复):
礼貌表达期待:I hope you can come/looking forward to seeing you:
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初一下册译林牛津版
【写作专版】
E版满分范文及模板
实用请求:Please let me know if...便于对方安排:
标准结尾:Best wishes符合邮件格式。
满分范文模板(邀请邮件)
Dear 1.(Friend's Name),
I'm writing to invite you to my birthday party at my home next Sunday.It will start from 2.(start
time)to 3.(end time)and I hope you can join in my birthday celebration.
At the party,we will 4.(activity 1),5.(activity 2)and 6.(activity 3).There will be a big
birthday cake,and we can take photos together.My parents will prepare some delicious food for us,so
we will have fun and enjoy ourselves.
I hope you can come and have fun with us.Please let me know if you can come to my party.I'm looking
forward to seeing you at my birthday party!
Best wishes,
7.(Your Name)
【模板填写指南】
1.朋友姓名(如:Tom/Lucy)
2.开始时间(如:3p.m./4:30p.m.)
3.结束时间(如:6pm./8p.m.)
4.活动1(如:sing songs/watch movies)
5.活动2(如:play games/dance)
6.活动3(如:share stories/eat cake)
7.你的姓名(如:Li Ming/Wang Fang)
填写示例:
1.Tom 2.4 p.m.3.7 p.m.4.play games
5.watch movies 6.eat cake 7.Li Ming
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初一下册译林牛津版
【写作专版】
E版满分范文及模板
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:三段式(邀请→活动→期待),符合邮件写作规范:
实用句型:I'm writing to./There will be../I'n looking forward to.:
细节丰富:具体活动描述(sing/dance/play games).和物品(cake/food):
礼貌得体:Please let me know../Best wishes体现良好礼仪;
时态准确:全程使用将来时和一般现在时,符合邀请函特点。
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
时间格式:使用p.m.而非pn,时间范围用from...to.;
活动描述:用and连接三项活动,保持结构平衡:
食物表达:delicious food比nice food更地道:
结尾双关:have fun with us既指'玩得开心”又指?和我们一起”:
格式规范:注意邮件开头结尾格式,段落间空行。
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