Unit 5 描述某一时刻人们正在进行的活动-2025-2026学年七年级下册英语满分范文及模板（北师大版）

七年级下册北师大版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 寒假专版 【卫版满分范文】描述某一时刻人们正在进 行的活动 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·北师大版七年级下册 满分范文 It is 8 o'clock in the evening now.My family are all at home,and everyone is doing different things happily Look!My father is reading books quietly on the sofa.He likes reading very much.My mother is cooking dinner busily in the kitchen.She is making delicious food for us.While my mother is cooking,my little sister is listening to music in her room.She is singing loudly with the music.I am doing my homework carefully at my desk. At this moment,my grandparents are in the garden.They are watering flowers happily.The flowers look very beautiful.Right now,we are all busy but happy.What a lovely evening! 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（场景设定）： 开篇用Itis...now明确时间点； 使用y family are all at home建立场景： everyone is doing different things happily总起全文。 第二段（家庭成员活动）： 用Look!引导细节描写： 动词结构：is reading/is cooking/is listening/is singing/am doing准确使用现在进行时： 副词运用：quietly/busily/loudly/carefully丰富动作细节。 第三段（结尾升华）： At this moment自然过渡到祖父母活动： They are watering flowers happily保持时态一致； 结尾What a lovely evening!情感升华。 七年级下册北师大版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 满分范文模板 It is 1.in the evening now.My family are all at home,and everyone is doing different things happily. Look!My father is 2.quietly on the sofa.He likes 3.very much.My mother is 4.busily in the kitchen.She is making delicious food for us.While my mother is cooking,my little sister is 5.in her room.She is 6.with the music.I am 7.carefully at my desk. At this moment,my grandparents are in the garden.They are 8.-happily.The flowers look very beautiful.Right now,we are all busy but happy.What a lovely evening! 【模板填写指南】 1.具体时间（如：7：30/8：15） 2.父亲的活动（如：reading books/watching TV) 3.父亲的爱好（如：reading/sports) 4.母亲的活动（如：cooking dinner/washing dishes) 5.妹妹的活动（如：listening to music./drawing pictures) 6.伴随动作（如：singing/dancing) 7.自己的活动（如：doing homework/cleaning the room) 8.祖父母的活动（如：watering flowers/talking) 填写示例： 1.7:30 2.reading books 3.reading 4.cooking dinner 5.listening to music 6.singing 7.doing homework 8.watering flowers 高分亮点总结 时态精准：全文统一使用现在进行时描述当前活动 逻辑清晰：按”总起→分述→总结”结构展开 2 七年级下册北师大版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 细节丰富：每个动作搭配副词修饰(quietly/busily等) 过渡自然：使用Look/At this moment等过渡词 情感升华：结尾What a lovely evening!表达情感 写作小贴士·避坑+提分 时态一致：全文保持现在进行时(be+V-ing) 时间状语：开头必须包含具体时间点（如at7:30) 副词运用：每个动作搭配1个副词(carefully/happily等) 过渡词：使用Look/hile/At this moment衔接段落 情感表达：结尾用感叹句抒发感受(What a..) 3