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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【E版满分模板】谈论喜爱的影视节目及理
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写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·仁爱版初一下册
满分范文
Hello,everyone.My name is Li Ming.Today,I want to talk about my favorite TV program.My favorite
TV program is Tom and Jerry.It is a funny cartoon.
I love Tom and Jerry because it is very funny.The characters are lovely and the dialogue is great.
It always makes me laugh,especially when Tom tries to catch Jerry but fails.The plot is interesting
too,and I never get bored watching it.
I often watch Tom and Jerry with my little brother on weekends.We enjoy it very much.This cartoon
is not only funny but also relaxing.I can forget all my worries when watching it.
I like my favorite TV program very much.It brings me a lot of happiness.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(节目介绍):
开篇用HeIIo,everyone自然引入话题;
核心句型:My favorite TV program is../It is a..直接点明节目名称和类型;
使用具体节目名Tom and Jerry和类型funny cartoon使内容具体化。
第二段(喜爱理由):
用because引出原因,词汇(funny/lovely/great)准确描述节目特点:
具体场景Tom tries to catch Jerry but fails生动举例;
连接词to0自然衔接多个理由,避免简单句堆砌。
第三段(观看体验):
用often watch..with…描述观看习惯,体现生活场景;
not only..but also.,高级结构突出节目双重优点;
情感表达forget all my worries展示节目带来的心理益处。
初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
第四段(总结感受):
简洁重申喜爱程度ike.。very much;
结尾brings me a lot of happiness自然升华主题。
满分范文模板(谈论喜爱的影视节目)
Hello,everyone.My name is 1..Today,I want to talk about my favorite TV program.My favorite
TV program is 2..It is a 3..
I love 4.because it is very 5..The 6.are 7.and the 8.is 9..It always makes me 10.
-especially when 11.-The 12.is 13.too,and I never get bored watching it.
I often watch 14.with 15.on weekends.We enjoy it very much.This 16.is not only 17.
but also 18..I can 19.when watching it.
I like my favorite TV program very much.It brings me a lot of 20..
【模板填写指南】
l.你的姓名(如:Li Ming/Wang Fang)
2.节目名称(如:Tom and Jerry/Running Man)
3.节目类型(如:funny cartoon/exciting sports program)
4.填写节目名称(与2一致)
5.喜爱原因l(如:funny/educational/exciting)
.节目元素1(如:characters/hosts/stories)
7.描述元素1(如:lovely/knowledgeable/moving)
8.节目元素2(如:dialogue/content/games)
9.描述元素2(如:great/useful/interesting)
10.观看感受(如:laugh/learn/excited)
lL.具体场景(如:Tom tries to catch Jerry/the athletes compete)
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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
l2.节目元素3(如:plot/topics/competition)
l3.描述元素3(如:interesting/meaningful/intense)
14.填写节目名称(与2一致)
l5.一起观看的人(如:my family/my friends)
16.填写节目类型(与3一致)
l7.优点1(如:funny/educational)
l8.优点2(如:relaxing/inspiring)
19.个人收获(如:forget worries./learn new things)
20.总结感受(如:happiness/joy/knowledge)
填写示例:
1.Zhang Wei 2.Animal World 3.educational program 4.Animal World
5.interesting 6.stories 7.moving 8.content 9.useful
10.learn 11.they show animal families 12.topics 13.meaningful
14.Animal World 15.my parents 16.program 17.educational
18.relaxing 19.learn about nature 20.knowledge
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:四段式(介绍→理由→体验→总结),符合初中写作要求
词汇丰富:使用精准形容词(funny/lovely/relaxing)和节目术语(plot/dialogue)
句型多样:运用because从句、not only...but also..等高级结构
细节生动:具体场景描述(Tom tries to catch Jerry)增强感染力
情感真实:结尾brings me happiness自然表达个人感受
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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
写作小贴士·影视节目描写
名称规范:节目名用斜体(Tom and Jerry)或引号(Running Man'”)
原因具体:避免只说"interesting”,要说明why(如:funny characters)
时态统一:描述常规观看习惯用一般现在时(I often watch..)
连接词:使用because/especially/too使段落更连贯
情感升华:结尾用brings me.,总结节目带来的积极影响
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