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初一下册译林牛津版
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寒假专版
【E版满分模板】谈论日常交往中的礼貌礼
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写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林牛津版初一下册
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Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about polite manners in daily communication.Good manners are
very important in our life.They help us get on well with others.
There are many polite behaviors we should learn.For example,we should say"hello"to our teachers
when we meet them at school.When someone helps us,it's polite to say"thank you".If we make a
mistake,we should say"sorry"to others.We should also wait in line when we buy tickets or take the
bus.And we should give seats to the elderly on the bus.Before we come into the teacher's office,we
should knock at the door first.Speaking politely is also a good habit.
In our daily,we should be friendly,respectful,helpful,kind and patient.My classmate Lucy is
always friendly.She often shares her books with me.We should be respectful to our parents and teachers.
Tom is polite.He always greets his neighbors in the morning.
Different场景have different礼仪要求.In the library,,we should keep quiet and not talk loudly..In
public places,we should offer help to others and wait for our turn.At the dinner table,we should learn
table manners.
Good manners make us get on well with others.I always try to be polite to everyone around me.Let's
all learn to be polite and make our life better.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(核心观点):
开篇点题Talking About Polite Manners明确主题;
核心论点:Good manners are very important...help us get on well with others,简洁有力:
第二段(具体行为):
使用For example引出多个日常礼仪实例(say hello//thank you/sorry);
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涵盖不同场景:at school/.on the bus/in the office,内容全面;
行为动词准确:wait in line/give seats/.knock at the door;
第三段(品质体现):
列举核心品质:friendly/respectful/helpful/.kind/patient;
用同学实例Lucy shares books/Tom greets neighbors增强说服力;
第四段(场景礼仪):
过渡句Different场景have different礼仪要求自然衔接;
分场景说明:library/public places/dinner table,逻辑清晰;
第五段(总结呼吁):
重申重要性Good manners make us get on well with others;
结尾呼吁Let'sall learn to be polite情感真挚。
满分范文模板
Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about polite manners in daily communication.Good manners are
very important in our life.They help us get on well with others.
There are many polite behaviors we should learn.For example,we should say"hello"to our 1.(
象:teachers,.parents)when we meet them2._(地点:at school,,at home).When someone helps us,.
it's polite to say"thank you".If we make a mistake,we should say "sorry"to others.We should also
wait in line when we3.(场景:buy tickets,.take the bus)).And we should give seats to the4._(对
象:elderly,disabled)on the bus.Before we come into the5._(地点:teacher's office,others'room),
we should knock at the door first.Speaking politely is also a good habit.
In our daily交往,we should be6.(品质:friendly,respectful),7._(品质:helpful,,kind)and8,
(品质:patient,.honest).My classmate9._(同学名字:Lucy,Tom)is always 10._(品质:friendly,
polite).He/She often 11.(:shares books,helps others)with me.We should be respectful to our
12._(对象:parents,.teachers).13._(同学名字:Tom,Mary)is polite..He/She always greets his/her
14,_(对象:neighbors,classmates))in the morning.
Different场景have different礼仪要求.n the 15,_(地点:library,classroom),we should keep quiet
and not talk loudly.In public places,we should offer help to others and wait for our turn.At the 16.
(地点:dinner table,meeting),we should learn17._(礼仪:table manners,meeting etiquette).
Good manners make us get on well with others.I always try to be polite to everyone around me.Let's
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all learn to be polite and make our life better.
【模板填写指南】
L.问候对象(如:teachers/parents/neighbors)
2.相遇地点(如:at school/at home/in the park)
3.排队场景(如:buy tickets/take the bus/get lunch)
4.让座对象(如:elderly/disabled/pregnant women)
5.进入场所(如:teacher's office/others'room/meeting room)
6.核心品质1(如:friendly/respectful/polite)
7.核心品质2(如:helpful/kind/considerate)
8.核心品质3(如:patient/honest/thoughtful)
9.同学姓名(如:Lucy/Tom/David)
10.同学品质(如:friendly/polite/helpful)
ll.具体行为(如:shares books/.helps me/listens to me)
l2.尊敬对象(如:parents/teachers/elders)
13.同学姓名(如:Tom/Mary/小ack)
14.问候对象(如:neighbors/classmates/friends)
l5.安静场所(如:library/.classroom/hospital)
16.礼仪场所(如:dinner table/meeting/ceremony)
I7.礼仪类型(如:table manners/meeting etiquette/public manners)
填写示例:
1.teachers 2.at school 3.take the bus 4.elderly 5.teacher's office
6.friendly 7.helpful 8.patient 9.Lucy 10.friendly
11.shares books 12.teachers 13.Tom 14.neighbors
15.library 16.dinner table 17.table manners
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高分亮点总结
场景覆盖全面:涵盖学校/公交/办公室/图书馆/餐桌等多场景礼仪
实例具体生动:用Lucy/Tom等同学实例增强说服力
礼仪行为精准:准确使用say hello/thank you/sorry/knock at door等核心表达
品质分类清晰:将礼貌礼仪分解为friendly/respectful/helpful等具体品质
过渡自然流畅:用Different场景have different礼仪要求等过渡句衔接段落
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
动词精准化:用具体行为动词(knock/give/wait)替代抽象表达
场景多样化:至少包含3种不同生活场景的礼仪要求
品质具体化:避免宽泛描述,用具体行为体现品质(如shares books体现friendly)
人称,一致性:保持we/I/He/She等人称使用一致
礼仪术语:准确使用table manners/public etiquette等专业表达
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