内容正文:
初一上册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【E版满分模板】播报天气状况(今日天
气明日预报/活动建议)
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·仁爱版初一上册
满分范文
Hello,everyone.Welcome to the weather report.Let's take a look at today's weather and the forecast for
tomorrow.
It's sunny today.The sun is shining brightly in the sky.The temperature is 25C.It's warm and
comfortable.On such a sunny day,you can go out for a walk or have a picnic with your family.
According to the weather report,it will be cloudy tomorrow.The high temperature will be around 22C
and the low temperature will be 15C.It will be a bit cool,so you'd better wear a jacket when going
out
What's the weather like in your area?Remember to pay attention to the weather report and arrange your
activities accordingly.That's all for today's weather report.Thank you for listening.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(开场白):
使用标准问候语Iello,everyone.Velcome to...建立专业感;
核心结构:Let's take a look at..自然引出天气主题:
明确时间范围:today's weather and the forecast for tomorrow。
第二段(今日天气):
天气描述四要素完整:It'ssny(天气状况)+The sun is shining brightly(现象)+25C(温
度)+warm and comfortable(体感):
活动建议:On such a.day,you can..句式实用,给出合理建议(walk/picnic)。
第三段(明日预报):
预报标志语:According to the weather report增强可信度;
温度范围:high.around22℃/1ow.15℃专业表达;
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初一上册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
温馨提示:you'd better wear..体现关怀,符合天气预报场景。
第四段(结尾):
互动提问:What's the weather like in your area?增加参与感;
实用提醒:Remember to.arrange your activities强化报告价值:
标准结束语:That'sall.Thank you for listening.完整收尾。
满分范文模板(天气播报)
Hello,everyone.Welcome to the weather report.Let's take a look at today's weather and the forecast for
tomorrow.
It'sl,(今天天气:sunny,rainy,cloudy)today.The2.-(天气现象:sun is shining brightly,rain is
falling,clouds are floating)in the sky.The temperature is3.(今天温度:数字+C).It's4.(感
受:warm and comfortable,cool and refreshing,hot and dry).On such a5._(今天天气)day,you can
6.一(话动建议:go out for a walk,stay at home and read,.play sports outside)with your family
According to the weather report,.it will be7.(明天天气:cloudy,sunny,.rainy)tomorrow.The high
temperature will be around8.一(明天高温:数字+C)and the low temperature will be9.一(明天低
温:数字+C).It will be10.一(明天感受:a bit cool,.very warm,quite cold),so you'd better11.
(明天a建议:wear a jacket,.take an umbrella,drink more water))when going out.
What's the weather like in your area?Remember to pay attention to the weather report and arrange your
activities accordingly.That's all for today's weather report.Thank you for listening.
【模板填写指南】
1.今日天气形容词(如:sunny/rainy/cloudy)
2.对应天气现象(如:sun is shining brightly/rain is falling)
3.今日具体温度(如:25C18℃)
4.今日体感描述(如:warm and comfortable/cool and refreshing)
5.重复今日天气形容词(与1一致)
6.今日活动建议(如:go for a walk/stay at home)
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初一上册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
7.明日天气形容词(如:cloudy/sunny/rainy)
8.明日最高温度(如:22C/30℃)
9.明日最低温度(如:15℃/20℃)
10.明日体感预测(如:a bit cool/very warm)
l1.明日出行建议(如:wear a jacket/take an umbrella)
填写示例:
1.rainy 2.rain is falling 3.18C 4.cool and refreshing
5.rainy
6.stay at home and read 7.sunny 8.28C
9.20℃
10.very warm 11.drink more water
高分亮点总结
结构亮点:四段式(开场→今日→明日→结尾),逻辑清晰完整
词汇亮点:精准使用天气术语(sunny/cloudy/temperature forecast)
句型亮点:多样化表达(It's./The..is..you can.you'd better.)
温度表达:正确使用C符号和温度范围(high/low temperature)
场景适配:专业开场/结束语+实用建议,符合天气预报功能
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
温度规范:℃符号紧跟数字(如25℃),不加空格
时态区分:今日天气用一般现在时,明日预报用wll将来时
建议匹配:活动建议需匹配天气(如rainy-→stay indoors)
体感词汇:wam/cool/cold需与温度值逻辑一致
专业表达:使用forecast/report等术语增强专业性