内容正文:
初一上册沪教牛津版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【E版满分模板】自我介绍(姓名、年龄及
兴趣爱好)
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·沪教牛津版初一上册
满分范文
Hello,everyone!My name is Lucy.I am twelve years old.
I have many hobbies.I like playing the piano,and I practice it every day.I also enjoy reading books.
My favorite books are storybooks.I am interested in drawing pictures,too.I usually draw pictures on
weekends.Sometimes I listen to music when I finish my homework.
I am happy to share my hobbies with you.Thank you!
满分范文模板
Hello,everyone!My name is 1.
I am 2.
years old.
I have many hobbies.I like 3.
andI4.
every day.I also enjoy 5.
My favorite 6.
are 7.
I am interested in 8.
too.I usually 9.
on weekends.Sometimes I 10.
when I finish my homework.
I am happy to share my hobbies with you.Thank you!
【模板填写指南】
1.
你的姓名(如:Lucy/Tom)
2.你的年龄(如:twelve/thirteen)
3.主要爱好(如:playing the piano/reading books)
初一上册沪教牛津版
【寒假专版】
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4.日常活动(如:practice it/read them)
5.其他爱好(如:drawing pictures/swimming)
6.喜爱的事物类别(如:books/sports)
7.具体喜爱的事物(如:storybooks/basketball)
8.感兴趣的领域(如:nusic/science)
9.周末活动(如:draw pictures/play football)
10.空闲时间活动(如:listen to music/watch movies)
填写示例:
1.Lucy 2.twelve 3.playing the piano 4.practice it
5.reading books 6.books 7.storybooks 8.drawing pictures
9.draw pictures
10.listen to music
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:三段式结构(问候→兴趣爱好→结尾致谢),逻辑分明
词汇丰富:使用多种爱好表达(like/enjoy/interested in)
细节具体:包含日常频率(every day/weekends)和场景(when I finish homework)
句式多样:简单句与复合句结合(I like.andI./Sometimes I.when..)
礼貌得体:开头问候语和结尾致谢完整
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
年龄表达:使用Iam+数字+years old'结构(如:I am twelve years old)
爱好表达:交替使用不同动词(like/enjoy/am interested in)避免重复
时间状语:添加频率副词(usually/sometimes/every day)使内容更丰富
细节补充:为每个爱好添加具体细节(如:My favorite books are storybooks)
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初一上册沪教牛津版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
大小写规范:专有名词首字母大写(如:Lcy),句首字母大写
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