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【U5:讲述一个有趣的故事】
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【D版好词好句】讲述一个有趣的故事
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一、好词积累
故事要素
时间&地点:one sunny morning一个晴朗的早晨;last weekend上周末;in the park在公
园里;at the zoo在动物园;on the farm在农场;during the summer holiday暑假期间
人物&身份:a little boy一个小男孩;an old man一位老人;a clever monkey一只聪明的
猴子;a funny cat一只滑稽的猫:my neighbor我的邻居;the shopkeeper店主
事件&动作:happen发生;find发现;run after追赶;pick up捡起;help sb.out帮助某
人摆脱困境;make a mistake犯错误;laugh loudly大声笑;surprise sb,使某人惊讶
情绪与感受
形容词:exciting令人兴奋的:funny有趣的;surprising令人惊讶的;happy开心的:amused
被逗乐的:embarrassed尴尬的:worried担心的:relaxed放松的
动词短语:feel happy感到开心;can't help laughing忍不住笑;get surprised感到惊讶;be
afraid of害怕;be excited about对..感到兴奋
连接词与过渡词
时间顺序:First.首先.;Then..然后.;Next.接下来.…;Finally..最后;Suddenly.…
突然At first.…起初.After that.在那之后…
逻辑关系:because因为;so所以:but但是;and和;however然而;as a result结果
二、经典好句
1.故事开头(时间+地点+事件引入)
1.1 Last Sunday morning,I went to the park with my family and something funny happened.
1.2 One day,a little boy named Tom found a lost dog on his way to school.
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1.3 During the summer holiday,my cousin and I visited my grandparents'farm.We had an exciting
experience there.
2.故事发展(动作+情绪)
2.1 Suddenly,the cat jumped onto the table and ate the fish.My mom was surprised,but we all
laughed.
2.2 First,we tried to catch the monkey,but it ran very fast.Then,it took my hat and climbed up the
tree!
2.3 The old man couldn't find his key.My brother helped him look for it,and finally we found it
under a stone.
3.故事结尾(感受+总结)
3.1 It was the funniest day I had ever had.I will never forget that experience.
3.2 Although we were tired,we felt very happy.Sometimes,small things can bring us great joy.
3.3 In the end,the dog found its owner,and we all felt relaxed.What an interesting story!
A Funny Day in the Park
Last Sunday,my friends and I decided to have a picnic in the park.
First,we spread a big blanket under a tall tree and put all the food on it.Tom brought sandwiches,Lily
prepared fresh fruits,and I brought a big bottle of orange juice.We laughed loudly while sharing the
food.Then,we decided to play hide-and-seek.I closed my eyes and counted to 20.When I opened my
eyes,everyone was gone!I looked around carefully.Suddenly,I heard a soft snore behind a bush.I
walked over quietly and found Lily had fallen asleep there!I shouted excitedly,"I found you,Lily!"She
woke up with a start and looked embarrassed.
After that,we played fly a kite.Tom ran fast with the kite in his hand,but the kite got stuck in the tree.
Luckily,a kind uncle helped us get it down.Finally,we sat on the grass and talked about the day
It was the funniest day I had ever had!We laughed so hard that our tummies hurt.Although we were
tired,we felt very happy.What an interesting story to tell!
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【U5:讲述一个有趣的故事】
写作好词好句
A Funny Day in-(place,e.g.the park,the zoo,the farm)
-(time,e.g.Last Sunday,One day,During the summer vacation),my friends and I decided to(event,
e.g.have a picnic,play hide-and-seek,fly a kite)in(place).
First,we(action,e.g.spread a big blanket,played games,prepared food).(friend's name)brought
-(food/thing,e.g.sandwiches,a kite,fresh fruits),andI brought(food/thing,e.g.orange juice,a ball,
snacks).We(action,e.g.laughed loudly,talked happily,shared the food)while(doing something,
e.g.eating,playing,walking around).Then,we decided to(event,e.g.play hide-and-seek,fly a
kite,feed animals).I(action,e.g.closed my eyes and counted,ran fast with the kite,took out bread).
Suddenly,(surprising event,e.g.a little dog took a sandwich,the kite got stuck in the tree,Lily
fell asleep behind a rock).I-(action,e.g.shouted excitedly,looked around,walked over quietly)and
-(result,e.g.found Lily,asked for help,laughed hard).
After that,we(event,e.g.played fly a kite,went to see animals,had more food).(friend's name)
-(action,e.g.ran fast,tried to catch a butterfly,shared his/her snacks),but-(problem,e.g.the kite got
stuck,he/she fell down,it started to rain).Luckily,(solution,e.g.a kind uncle helped,we laughed
it off,we had umbrellas).Finally,we(action,e.g.sat on the grass,went home,took photos)and
-(action,e.g.talked about the day,ate ice cream,shared stories).
It wasthe(feeling adj.,e.g.funniest,most exciting,happiest)day I hadever had!We(feeling action,
e.g.laughed so hard that our tummies hurt,felt so excitedwe jumped up).Although we were(feeling
adj.,e.g.tired,hungry,wet),we felt very(feeling adj,e.g.happy,lucky,warm).What a(n)(feeling
adj.,e.g.interesting,amazing,unforgettable)story to tell!
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