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初一上册沪外版
【写作专版】
D版好词好句
写作专版
【D版好词好句】介绍一次尝试新事物的经
历
写作提分攻略·沪外版初一上册(暖色系版)
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
尝试相关
动词&短语:y doing sth.尝试做某事:have a try试一试:give it a go试一试:make an
attempt尝试:take a risk冒险;face challenges面对挑战:overcome difficulties克服困难;
pick up学会(技能等):learn...from scratch从零开始学习
名词&短语:new experience新体验:first time第一次;challenge挑战:difficulty困难;
success成功;failure失败;courage勇气;confidence信心;skil技能
感受与情绪
积极类:excited兴奋的;happy开心的;proud自豪的;satisfied满意的:confident自信
的:interested感兴趣的;surprised惊讶的
消极类:nervous紧张的:worried担心的:afraid害怕的:upset沮丧的;discouraged气
馁的
结果与收获
动词&短语:succeed in doing sth.成功做某事:manage to do sth.设法做成某事;achieve
a goal实现目标;gain experience获得经验;improve oneself提升自己;build up confidence
建立自信
名词&短语:great achievement巨大成就;valuable experience宝贵经验:good result好
结果;sense of success成就感;new skill新技能
二、经典好句
1.引出尝试经历
1.1 Last summer holiday,I tried swimming for the first time,and it was a memorable experience.
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1.2 I will never forget the day when I decided to learn how to ride a bike.It was really challenging
but exciting.
1.3 Two months ago,I made an attempt to cook dinner for my family.At first,I was very nervous.
2.描述尝试过程与感受
2.1 When I stood by the swimming pool,I felt a little afraid because I didn't know how to swim at all.
2.2 At the beginning,riding a bike was so hard for me.I fell off the bike several times and felt upset.
2.3 While cooking,I forgot to put salt in the dish,so it tasted a little strange.I was worried that my
family wouldn't like it.
3.结果与收获
3.1 After practicing for a week,I finally succeeded in swimming acrossthe small pool.I felt so proud
of myself.
3.2 Although I failed many times,I didn't give up.Now I can ride a bike very well and I often go
cycling with my friends.
3.3 To my surprise,my parents said the dinner was delicious.That day,I not only learned to cook
but also built up my confidence.
4.综合描述(过程+感受+收获)
4.1 Trying to speak English in front of the whole class was a big challenge for me.At first,I was too
nervous to say a word.But with the teacher's encouragement,I took a deep breath and started
speaking.In the end,everyone clapped for me.From this experience,I learned that we should be
brave to try new things.
My First Attempt at Cooking
Last summer,I was curious about cooking,so I decided to try making a cake with my mom's help.It
was my first attempt at baking,and I felt both excited and nervous.
At first,I was so nervous that my hands were shaking while measuring the flour,but I took a deep
breath and started following the recipe.Although I failed many times-once I forgot to add sugar,and
another time the cake burned in the oven-I didn't give up and kept practicing.During the process,I
felt frustrated and wanted to quit,but my mom encouraged me to keep going.She said,"Making an
attempt is already brave;don't be afraid of failure."
After trying hard for three days,I finally baked a delicious cake with pink frosting.When my family
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tasted it and praised me,I felt so proud of myself.This new experience taught me that as long as I step
out of my comfort zone and overcome difficulties,nothing is impossible.Trying new things not only
makes me happier but also helps me build more confidence.I will always remember this lesson from
my first cooking adventure.
My First Attempt at(activity,e.g.cooking,riding a bike,public speaking)
-(Time,e.g.Last summer,This term),I was-(feeling,e.g.curious about,interested in)(activity),
so I decided to try(specific action,e.g.making a cake,learning to ride a bike,giving a speech)with
-(person's help,e.g.my mom's help,my friend's help).It was my first attempt at(activity),and I
felt both(positive feeling,e.g.excited,thrilled)and(negative feeling,e.g.nervous,scared).
At first,I was so(negative feeling,e.g.nervous,scared)that_(specific action showing the feeling,
e.g.my hands were shaking,my voice was trembling),but I took a deep breath and started(action,
e.g.following the recipe,practicing the steps).Although I failed many times-once I(first failure,
e.g.forgot to add sugar,fell off the bike),and another time(second failure,e.g.the cake burned,I
couldn't balance)-I didn't give up and kept practicing.During the process,I felt(negative feeling,
e.g.frustrated,embarrassed)and wanted to quit,but_(person,e.g.my mom,my friend)encouraged
me to keep going.He/She said,"(encouraging words,e.g.Making an attempt is already brave;don't
be afraid of failure,Keep trying and you will succeed)."
After trying hard for(time,e.g.three days,a week),I finally(result,e.g.baked a delicious cake,
learned to ride a bike,gave a successful speech).When-(people,e.g.my family,my classmates)
-(reaction,e.g.tasted it and praised me,clapped for me),I felt so(positive feeling,e.g.proud of
myself,happy).Thisnew experience taught me that as long asI step out ofmy comfort zone and overcome
difficulties,nothing is impossible.Trying new things not only makes me happier but also helps me build
more confidence.I will always remember this lesson from my first_(activity)adventure.
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